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Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: beautifuldreamer30 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2021 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

Loved it! 

Reviewer: sandys4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 18

Can't wait to read more of this story! Loved the first two chapters!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

Sad chapter. I can't wait for the next. Please don't take so long.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow that was an intense chapter. Poor Bella.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2013 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm worried about her and Riley being together.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter... so much going on for her, :( Poor Bella.  Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm glad your back. I loved the final conversation with her father. It was much needed. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: clancy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

I shouldn't have read this in public.....I can't stop my tears and people are staring :(

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

Boys are so stupid. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11

As horrible as it seems its the right thing to do and their very mature to realize that. I think they were becoming dangerously co dependent on each other. This break is only going to make them stronger eventually. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

I'm so glad. Date rape cases are so unpredictable. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

Edward is a very complicated person. I don't blame him for reacting the way he did. I hope that he can let his pain go. 

 

I'm glad Bella yelled at Edward for how he treated her. I'm glad he knows how it made her feel. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh these poor kids. I lost my first baby at 17 weeks it's horrible. I didn't have a D&C I should of but I needed to let it happen itself I could let someone else take my baby. I know irrational but I was 21, scared and grieving. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ah yes. My mom was the 'cool' mom and also a nurse so my mom also had to deal with my friends pregnancy scares. Come to think about it that around the same time my mom let slips that there were condoms in her bedside table and no questions would be asked if some went missing. She told us she wished we would wait but wanted us to be safe. We went to Catholic School So we had no sex Ed class.  It was nice to have a parent we could be honest with. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh I was completely floored. I never saw that coming. And I'm sorry but there is something creepy about a college guy that sniffs around high school girls. When I was 16 there was a 21 year old guy that hung out with us all the time and I always was unsettled by it. 

 

I believe Alice. The bruises along are a sign. Maybe she started out okay with it but changed her mind, there is nothing wrong with that. I wonder if Edward knows more. Guys usually stick together and Edward seems to concerned for Alice to think she's lying. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

As well as a first time goes it was really sweet and as perfect as it can be. But Edward climbing into her room to hold her as absolutely amazing. It proves how much he really cares and loves her. Most guys wouldn't of given a shit. They got what they wanted. So was that how your first time was or how you wished it to be. 

 

I went to catholic school and had all kinds of catholic guilt likely so did my boyfriend. We got engaged at graduation and waited until senior week to lose our virginities. Let's just say that Disney World really is a magical place. Lol



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Definitely how I WISHED it would have been! :-) My first time was dreadful!!!! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh. I think he can wait longer then her if he has half a mind to. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

See I never had that kind of fun in HS. My mom was a detox nurse at the time and my uncle was a big time cop. So I was scared shitless to even go to those parties. Even though I did have a drinking party at 16. But I didn't even try a drop. Lol now college different story all together. Lol still I never did anything until I was 21. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2

This chapter just made me realize that some guys never change. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

HERE! A little late but really isn't that just about right for high school. Lol

 

I graduated HS in 1998 so I am right there with you. 

Reviewer: giacullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

Awesome story, and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

This story is so great!
I love it, really.
I am saddened by what happened in the life of Edward and Bella, everything was so confusing in their mentes.Bella is strong to get through everything, but this Edward sunk into trouble, he clearly loves, but is acting like a teenager (ops ! They are teenagers). then, Riley will fight for Bella, and, Edward? update please? Kisses.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Charlie is a hypocrite! Speaking of his daughter and cheating on his wife.
Edward was an idiot, but he's a teenager, so I understand.
Bella went through so many things, good that she and her mother talked.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Bella, is in the middle of a situation as difficult, losing his best friend, ficsndo foot to another ...
And now I see more difficulties lie vir.Bella be pregnant? OMG!!

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

They are sweet, Edward is trying to be all adult, but he is still so young!
I feel that they are separating, it's sad ...
But I know you will make everything better.
Kisses.

Reviewer: tracip Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

Oh my!  This is getting good. I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Reviewer: FlightlessBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

I like where this is going. Fully on board. Bring on the messy High School Hijinks!

Reviewer: FlightlessBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

High school gossip and hijinks, there is nothing like it. What fun and trauma all at once. 

Reviewer: FlightlessBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

So thrilled this story is over here at TWCS posted as it was originally intended in all it's wonderfulness. I was gripped by the vivid characterizations from the start. 

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

came to add it over here so I could read it without the editing :) Excited for more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 12: Junior Year

It's so sad how their relationship has failed. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 10

Justice!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

How sad. 

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 8

ANOTHERRRRR UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! x

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 5

want more please!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

He was really great with her.  I'm nervous about the upcoming angst!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm excited for the drama.

Reviewer: gracefish21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

soo good

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Excited for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

Fun chapter.

Reviewer: msmiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

Definitely here!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Sophomore Year

It was a good first chapter. I'm interested in the characters and want to see where it is going to go.

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