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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

awww  E is falling for her already.  too sweet

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love it!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

Brilliant!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

one happy little family now

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23

So sweet. I love it! Sounds like Edward checked in on his girls before he went to bed. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

These two are so stubborn!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 23

awww so sweet!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awwwwe!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Bella will keep Lainie during the summer holidays.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

Lainie is a really pretty girl.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18


Edward played sports, Bella is a good cook too.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

But Bella did not lose hope.
Good chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: erin81swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 22

I must say that I am enjoying this story and even though you are rock star with updating I still want more.  Keep it going.  You have me hooked.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

!!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

they are so cute

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 21

he would like to give her more than his blaket lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

And the second night a camp out with Edward!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love it - it won't be long now before they act on their feelings, huh? Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

I love it.. love it, love it, love it...

E/k

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

looking forward to more

Reviewer: Muddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

reading few of your stories at the mo, they are great esp this one. I just wish they would be a bit quicker about acting on their feelings! I'm impatient! lol :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

Imagine that (he he)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

If only :-)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

he has her right where he wants her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella wants him to eat her peach lol

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

Selfish Edward would rather keep her near him than to give in to how he really feels about Bella 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 20

Ahhghhhh! Way tyo go Edward!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Act on it, ACT ON IT!!!!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

Right...  nope (popping the p)  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Think I am in love with Lanie!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 20

I am glad she told him what is going on. Lainie is going to be so happy! I hope this helps Bella and Edward along too. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

I feel so bad for Bella....

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 18

I love it!!! Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

First of all I am glad that Bella is becoming healthy again. I can't wait for these two to decide that there can be more between them. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very muddy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

the first kiss :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

yeah they have it bad....

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

Really Edward he's in denial lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

little does she know!!

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella already in love with Edward and doesn't want to see that she does because she thinks that be more than just friends 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

love these two they are so silly to fight it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

Right

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 16

Good but the best way to keep it is to marry!
Thank you.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love this girl.
Thank you.

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 16

Or so Edward thinks 

hes already falling for Bella and doesn't even know it or the fact that Bella feels the same for him and want to be more than friends

Reviewer: E-Hart360 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 16


  1. love  it
  1. can't get enough
  1. DON'T want to get enough
  1. your stories are addictive

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

He is still telling himself that!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

She knows the way to that mans heart lol

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

How cute there almost acting like a family and don't even know it yet 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

Lanie is in heaven

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

don't leave my hanging! 

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Oh sweet - and he's getting someone to also make sure that Lanie gets home in time - not waiting on the side for her father to pick her up.

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 9

Uh oh - she's gonna get the riot act from him now.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14

Love the multiple postings.  So hard to wait for the next chapter.  Loving this story and Olderward!  Mellow Edward, its not like she's 16!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh I'm pretty sure he's looking at ya Bella!

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm - wonder what's the deal with the mommy!

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Uh Oh - better watch out Edward!

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Uhm I'd say single dad!

Reviewer: Della291 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Blessings and curses generally come in the same size packages - wonder which one this will be.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

MmHmm

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh yea

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

yeah right... you know better than that Edward hehe

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Two Drs. now ;)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

Friend is a good start!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

Edward offers him a job for him and Lainie.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

Esme will help Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

keep her close ;)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

Is it going to take care of her?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8

It should invite him to lunch.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

Good chapter!
Lainie poor, she wants a mom.
Thank you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

good plan E.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

ah esme arrives.  Glad e is taking care of her though

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: Ski Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

I've read most of your stories. You are one of my favorite author. This story is especially good and it helps that it's updated daily.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

she is his angle to

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

he is such a good guy

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

loved it

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!

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