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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

love it hope you post more  soon great story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: loveLambLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

Lovely story! I hope there are a few more chapters to come! x

Reviewer: bam21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

Oh I like this story, it's sad but so cute. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

looking forward to more

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

No! I wanted the conversation. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

great chapter!! looking forward to more..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

There is always hope ;)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

That's a sad way to bring in the New Year.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

aww poor sad e

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

lol for Esme smacking him upside the head.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

:)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

LOVEIT, Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

CAN'T GET ENOUGH. UPDATE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

okay.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

Yep he wants to take ownership of the baby no thoughts of her mother. Oh well this is a good thing. Bella may want nothing to do with him after what he did.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

yep this will happen sooner or later.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

Poor Edward. He'll get it right eventually.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

looking forward t more 

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

I sure hope he wasn't incinuating that that precious baby girl is 'a mistake'. :-/

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

good boy he better lisen to his mom or she will twist his nipple off lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

his moms going to kick his ass

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

Flove this!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

:)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

All right that is the Edward we all know and love!!!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

Lol the last bit was soooooo funny when Edwards mom and his aunt Esme are beating him up for his dumb mistake lol

Reviewer: JR Durham Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

wow. wow. wow. i'm totally hooked and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

Mom's always know.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

More more more :)

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

It's gotta be hard for any man to have something like that thrown at them so unexpectedly. I would like to say that I'd immediately man up & face my responsibilities. But that's the mother in me Im sure. Lol. I couldn't imagine how weird & scary it would be to face this sort of thing with a virtual stranger.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

Great chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

WOW, ya think!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

Stupid Edward!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

oooh  he certainly got a big shock huh?   

Reviewer: Twilighter17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

Edward needs to get his head out of his ass.  Yeah it was a shock but he needs to shake it off and go to Bella.  She's not Lauren.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

Poor stupid Edward, he blew it. Now he needs to get his head out of his ass and fix it.
Great chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

looking forward ot more 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

I started reading the story and really enjoyed it so far. I am excited to read more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

Yep he is really smart. She is an editor of a major newspaper, she does not need his money. So she is not Lauren.  Walked away and made her effort worthless.

 

As always you have me at this point. Don't forget the others.. Mr Cullen & me.lol

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

love it can't wait for more great writing .

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

He is in shock that is expected but he better pull out of it quick and not be a dick.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

Suprise Suprise Suprise

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

he screwed up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

please tell me the mistake was letting her get away

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

sounds great

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

Any other surprises??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

:)

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

This is your second story I've put on my favs, I LOVE your writing style. You draw someone into your stories in a short amount of time I also like the length of each chapter.
Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Kuavara Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

Talk about a cliffy!!!

I'm excited to read more.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

knew you would regret running out E

Reviewer: SmergTheDinosaur Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

I'm hooked :)

Can't wait to read more!

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

looking forward to mre 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

Ahhhhhhhhhh!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

WAITING FOR MORE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

Oh Edward, how could you?  Write fast, I NEED to know what happens next!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

Oh Eddie....such a pussy move

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

OK, already falling in love with this story! lol, Cheri

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

Nooooo....come back Edward!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

I am hoping for more edward & bella too!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Love it!  And the banner is so beautiful!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

And #5 is hopefully not as bad as that one!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

GREAT SO FAR CAN'T WAIT MORE

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

IT'S GOOD REALLY GOOD BUT PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE MR AND MRS CULLEN. LONGER CHAPTERS WOULD BE NICE.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MRS CULLEN!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

:)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

Hmm where to go

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Good beginnings

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

hmmm sounds like they both have interesting back stories.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Interesting start.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

Where to go from here...

Hmmm...

Can't wait to see!

Reviewer: banned2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Thank God for an EPOV!!  My favorite.  Will definitely be following this!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

Dpn't say goodbye.  Don't say goodbye.  You can do this Edward. 

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