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Reviewer: lmc123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Sweet story.. thanks i really enjoyed it

Reviewer: marcelina15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Thank you for sharing, I loved it ! it is a really sweet story ... 

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

merci

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

This was the sweetest little story.  I don't know how I hadn't read it before.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

WOW! Awesome little story I think you needed a tissue warning in the last chapter though ;D

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

Emmett man of few words.

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

Elizabeth hehehehe

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Wonderful!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

I enjoyed the mature way they handled their relationship.

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Sweet Story.  Thanks for writing. Shows the possiblities when forgiveness can occur.

Reviewer: Sandalyn05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

What a great HEA!!!  I of course loved this story!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Awwwww. The girls are adorable.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

That was a amazing story. So real and heartfelt. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Poor Bella I know her pain. She did great though Edward was still in one piece. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

Oh she's starting maternity leave early. I couldn't of done that I was planning on working until my due date. I would of gone crazy waiting at home for her to come.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Everything is coming along so well.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

Yeah! I'm glad that Bella isn't going to have to do anything on her own. Babies are tough and it will be good for them to be able to lean on each other.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

I'm glad that he got what he needed from his father. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

It's nice that they are so comfortable with each other. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

I'm glad she seems alright with giving the baby Edwards last name. Because really she doesn't have to, just because he's the father the hospital will put whatever she wants on the birth certificate. The father has no say. Plus it would be a little weird for the baby to have her deceased husbands name. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

I was hoping he had bought the dress. It played such a big role in the realization that he wanted his daughter in his life. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

I just melted. That was amazing to see Edward so invested. There is no way that Bella is going to be able to stop herself from falling for him. It was also really nice of Bella to invited Edwards family to her baby shower.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

Poor Bella. They were hardly married at all before he died. And most of that time he was away, so sad.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

That seemed a little to easy. But I guess him remembering her street name was pretty convincing. I'm sure the rest isn't going to be that way though. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

I love hearing about food cravings. Some people's stories crack me up. I never had anything to weird. I ate a lot of Wendy's cheese fries thought. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

It seems promising. Edward had to of earned points. Any guy that willing wants to go to a parenting class obviously is serious about being a father. (Should of been my first clue that my ex-husband wasn't father material when he didn't see the need to go. My mom's a midwife and he said that anything we needed to know we could find out from her. Asshole lol)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

Oh now they finally meet face to face again. I hope Edward doesn't screw it up again. It is really sweet how protective he is to not only the baby but Bella as well.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

Hopefully. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

I'm really glad to see that he really is a good guy. I'm glad he told his mother.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

At least he realized the mistake. Hopefully he is man enough to correct it. It's also really sweet how much he already loves his daughter.

i meant to mention it before but with everything else going on I forgot. So you killed off Jasper huh. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

Surely Bella won't hold today agains him. Sure she should be mad, but really that is one hell of a shock. Evan with a possible conception date of the night they were together Edward doesn't know for sure she wasn't with someone else. Most guys would of demanded a DNA test before they would even entertain the idea of the baby being his. Edward accepted it right away but was shocked.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

Has it been 6 months or longer? I lost count. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

Asshole.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

So they seems perfect together. But they are drunk. And Bella is in such a bad place. To lose your husband like that is the worst thing ever.

so will this be a one night stand with consequences?

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

Very intriguing. God I've made a lot more then 5 mistakes. It's nice to see that he can admit it. Lol

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Beautiful story!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Wonderful!!!!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

aww fantastic epilogue glad they got a happy ending.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

aww fantastic story and perfect ending.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

awww beautifull chapter so emotional.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

fab chapter its getting closer.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

aww that was so sweet,fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On

wow that was one hot kiss!fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting

hes changed alot bless him for the better.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night

aww bless her lol.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?

fab chapter glad their getting along.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress

aww that was so emotional fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning

awww fab chapter beautifull moment.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?

awww bless.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do

aww glad it went well.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step

fingers crossed it goes well.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort

hope he has.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!

yey he found her.fab chapter.start grovelling edward

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold

hope there is.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her

go edward just bella gives him a chance.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost

fab chapter hope he fixes it soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down

he needs to fix it.fab chapter wow wasn't expecting that.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?

ooo wonder whats up with bella.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?

fab chapter hope they find each other again.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

fab chapter 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning

fab chapter poor edward.

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

I loved it!  I hope you had a Merry Christmas.  Thanks!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Wonderful, thank you!!!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

And an epi for Christmas Thank You!
Merry Christmas!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

LOVED it but you already knew that :-)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Great ending to a great story.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

thank you for this wonderful story....It was very interesting, I couldn't wait to see what happen next...............thanks for the journey...Edward & Bella got there HEA

Reviewer: E-Hart360 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

awwwwe, those little ankle-biters sound like the best reason in the world for a contant headacha. isnt love amazing? lol

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

I love the story...good work!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Loved it Thanks so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

They have been in love from the first night.

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Thank you for hours of wonderful reading. I loved your interpretation of my favourite characters. I really hope you will consider a sequel

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Life doesn't get much better than this. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

Perfect! Great job...thanks!!! I hope you feel better soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

:) loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

great ending to their story.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing

awww sweet ending.

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Ohhh what a beautiful way to be welcomed into the world.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

They don't love each other but through maturity they will love their daughter.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Loved it :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

She is here ;)  They are a family

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

things are going so great

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Awwwwe now they need to admit their love and make another one :-) JS

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

Almost more :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

yey  baby is here

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

yey for kissing

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Love it! Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

I can't wait for baby and it sounds like she is coming. Great job....thanks!!!

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Love it. Such a sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

Yaaayyyy.........baby's here ;-)

Reviewer: sarasue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day

as I read this chapter CNN is showing the service for the horrible shootings in new york tears are pouring im so sad but this chapter made me smile thank u

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Ahhhhh!  Loving it!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Loved it :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

Awww e is so cool. I like his mom.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day

They tots more feelings to admit to :-)

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