Date: 16 Nov 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Sweet story.. thanks i really enjoyed it
Date: 15 Nov 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Thank you for sharing, I loved it ! it is a really sweet story ...
Date: 03 Sep 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
merci
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
This was the sweetest little story. I don't know how I hadn't read it before.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
WOW! Awesome little story I think you needed a tissue warning in the last chapter though ;D
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold
Emmett man of few words.
Date: 26 Feb 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her
Elizabeth hehehehe
Date: 11 May 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Wonderful!
Date: 11 May 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
I enjoyed the mature way they handled their relationship.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Sweet Story. Thanks for writing. Shows the possiblities when forgiveness can occur.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
What a great HEA!!! I of course loved this story!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Awwwww. The girls are adorable.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
That was a amazing story. So real and heartfelt.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Poor Bella I know her pain. She did great though Edward was still in one piece.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
Oh she's starting maternity leave early. I couldn't of done that I was planning on working until my due date. I would of gone crazy waiting at home for her to come.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
Everything is coming along so well.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On
Yeah! I'm glad that Bella isn't going to have to do anything on her own. Babies are tough and it will be good for them to be able to lean on each other.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting
I'm glad that he got what he needed from his father.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night
It's nice that they are so comfortable with each other.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?
I'm glad she seems alright with giving the baby Edwards last name. Because really she doesn't have to, just because he's the father the hospital will put whatever she wants on the birth certificate. The father has no say. Plus it would be a little weird for the baby to have her deceased husbands name.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress
I was hoping he had bought the dress. It played such a big role in the realization that he wanted his daughter in his life.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning
I just melted. That was amazing to see Edward so invested. There is no way that Bella is going to be able to stop herself from falling for him. It was also really nice of Bella to invited Edwards family to her baby shower.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?
Poor Bella. They were hardly married at all before he died. And most of that time he was away, so sad.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do
That seemed a little to easy. But I guess him remembering her street name was pretty convincing. I'm sure the rest isn't going to be that way though.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step
I love hearing about food cravings. Some people's stories crack me up. I never had anything to weird. I ate a lot of Wendy's cheese fries thought.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort
It seems promising. Edward had to of earned points. Any guy that willing wants to go to a parenting class obviously is serious about being a father. (Should of been my first clue that my ex-husband wasn't father material when he didn't see the need to go. My mom's a midwife and he said that anything we needed to know we could find out from her. Asshole lol)
Date: 02 Mar 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!
Oh now they finally meet face to face again. I hope Edward doesn't screw it up again. It is really sweet how protective he is to not only the baby but Bella as well.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold
Hopefully.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her
I'm really glad to see that he really is a good guy. I'm glad he told his mother.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
At least he realized the mistake. Hopefully he is man enough to correct it. It's also really sweet how much he already loves his daughter.
i meant to mention it before but with everything else going on I forgot. So you killed off Jasper huh.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down
Surely Bella won't hold today agains him. Sure she should be mad, but really that is one hell of a shock. Evan with a possible conception date of the night they were together Edward doesn't know for sure she wasn't with someone else. Most guys would of demanded a DNA test before they would even entertain the idea of the baby being his. Edward accepted it right away but was shocked.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?
Has it been 6 months or longer? I lost count.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?
Asshole.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile
So they seems perfect together. But they are drunk. And Bella is in such a bad place. To lose your husband like that is the worst thing ever.
so will this be a one night stand with consequences?
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
Very intriguing. God I've made a lot more then 5 mistakes. It's nice to see that he can admit it. Lol
Date: 18 Feb 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Beautiful story!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Wonderful!!!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
aww fantastic epilogue glad they got a happy ending.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
aww fantastic story and perfect ending.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
awww beautifull chapter so emotional.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
fab chapter its getting closer.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
aww that was so sweet,fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Moving On
wow that was one hot kiss!fab chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 - A Lunchtime Meeting
hes changed alot bless him for the better.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17 - A Bump in the Night
aww bless her lol.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 - What's in a Name?
fab chapter glad their getting along.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 15 - The Red Dress
aww that was so emotional fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 - A New Life, A New Beginning
awww fab chapter beautifull moment.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Where Do We Go From Here?
awww bless.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Opening Up is Hard to Do
aww glad it went well.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 - One Small Step
fingers crossed it goes well.fab chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Storming the Fort
hope he has.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Found You!
yey he found her.fab chapter.start grovelling edward
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Static Hold
hope there is.fab chapter.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - All I Want for Christmas is Her
go edward just bella gives him a chance.fab chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Lost
fab chapter hope he fixes it soon
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The World Comes Crashing Down
he needs to fix it.fab chapter wow wasn't expecting that.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Can You Show Me What I'm Looking For?
ooo wonder whats up with bella.fab chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2013 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Why Do I Do the Things I Do?
fab chapter hope they find each other again.
Date: 04 Jan 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Just Smile
fab chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2013 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Beginning
fab chapter poor edward.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
I loved it! I hope you had a Merry Christmas. Thanks!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Wonderful, thank you!!! lol, Cheri
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
And an epi for Christmas Thank You!
Merry Christmas!!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
LOVED it but you already knew that :-)
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Great ending to a great story.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
thank you for this wonderful story....It was very interesting, I couldn't wait to see what happen next...............thanks for the journey...Edward & Bella got there HEA
Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
awwwwe, those little ankle-biters sound like the best reason in the world for a contant headacha. isnt love amazing? lol
Date: 24 Dec 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
I love the story...good work!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Loved it Thanks so much
Date: 24 Dec 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
They have been in love from the first night.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Thank you for hours of wonderful reading. I loved your interpretation of my favourite characters. I really hope you will consider a sequel
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Life doesn't get much better than this. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
Perfect! Great job...thanks!!! I hope you feel better soon!
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
:) loved this
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
:)
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
great ending to their story.
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Epilogue: My Girls
Loved it :)
Date: 24 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Love is a Many Splendid Thing
awww sweet ending.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Ohhh what a beautiful way to be welcomed into the world.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
They don't love each other but through maturity they will love their daughter.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Loved it :)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
She is here ;) They are a family
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
things are going so great
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Awwwwe now they need to admit their love and make another one :-) JS
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
Almost more :-)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
yey baby is here
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
yey for kissing
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Love it! Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
I can't wait for baby and it sounds like she is coming. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Love it. Such a sweet chapter.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
Yaaayyyy.........baby's here ;-)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 - D-day
as I read this chapter CNN is showing the service for the horrible shootings in new york tears are pouring im so sad but this chapter made me smile thank u
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Thin Ice
looking forward to mroe
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
Ahhhhh! Loving it! lol, Cheri
Date: 15 Dec 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
Loved it :)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
Awww e is so cool. I like his mom.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Moving Day
They tots more feelings to admit to :-)