Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Not very nice of Bella to avoid saying hi in the bank. Of course I realize she's worried about more gossip being spread about her, but really he's been the only nice person outside of Angela that she's met.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Charlie is an ass. Sweet that Bella took lunch to Edward. Mike needs a swift kick to the gonies.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
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Teaser:
“You’re a beautiful person.”
Date: 14 Jan 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! So excited to read on!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yay! Loving this!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
I want more no more retreats until this story is finished. He's so sweet when is he going to ask to touch her face so he can get a feel for what she looks like? Is he gonna do that cuz I think that would be the beginning of her really seeing she's falling for him
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Thanks for reviewing! You have to wait and see. He just might do it.
Preview:
“You’re a beautiful person.”
Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
OH MY GOD! EDWARD! !!! :-D
Hey, I found your story just today and I read all the chapters in one go. Now I'm hooked to it! Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
Chapter 7 preview:
“Oh…um…I’ll meet you outside.” She said standing up. “I have to use the ladies room.”
“Okay.” He shrugged. “I’ll see you outside.”
Date: 01 Jan 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
love it so far and cant wait to read more to see where this is going. Hope you can update again soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying this. There is more to come soon.
Date: 30 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
I knew it!
I think James only asked Bella to make Victoria jealous
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Thanks for reviewing!
You are absolutely right
Date: 30 Dec 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh this should be good!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
so excited to see whats to come!
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Thanks for reviewing!
Chapter 7 preview:
“Oh…um…I’ll meet you outside.” She said standing up. “I have to use the ladies room.”
“Okay.” He shrugged. “I’ll see you outside.”
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 6
Uhh, James is such a ... but I'm glad Bella sees right through him.
By the way, how old is Edward exactly? Is he in his late twentys, like Bella assumed?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Bella will find out his age soon.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
James seems like bad news
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
A date with James??? But she don't even like him ... and poor Edward, he seemed disappointed too ;)
Thanks for the great story, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
The date with James will be more helpful than harmful to her relationship with Edward.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
ok, so I suck at reviewing, but I love this, I need more!!! please?!? *puppy dog eyes*
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
There will be more soon
Date: 25 Dec 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to find out Edwards story. Especially how he supports himself. Hope he's not a trust fund baby. They suck
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Thanks for reviewing!
You will find out how he supports himself very soon
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
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Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:07 AM Title: Prologue
This fic. has a lot of potential, and im really enjoying it so far. Im just wondering how often you update.
Author's Response:
I don't have a specific update schedule. I update whenever I'm finished with a chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am reading but have not really formed an opinion yet. Thanks for updating. I am looking forward to reading this.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
I plan on updating vey soon and I hope you like what I have in store.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good for Bella, refusing to play along with the others. And thank God she can defend herself against Mike's advances. Let's hope Edward can chill out enough to believe she has been left behind. Liking the story so far!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm thinking that poor Edward had a VERY long walk to the store and back.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:00 PM Title: Prologue
I think they are so sweet together!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Would love to read more. Her parents act like some people I know.
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't think I will like Charlie
Author's Response:
You're going to see a lot more of him being like this. He is a difficult man.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Prologue
He should go with her to her parents
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Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
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Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:36 PM Title: Prologue
I look forward to seeing where you go with this story :)