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Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

Not very nice of Bella to avoid saying hi in the bank.  Of course I realize she's worried about more gossip being spread about her, but really he's been the only nice person outside of Angela that she's met.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

Charlie is an ass.  Sweet that Bella took lunch to Edward.  Mike needs a swift kick to the gonies.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

 

Teaser:

“You’re a beautiful person.”

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! So excited to read on!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Yay! Loving this!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

I want more no more retreats until this story is finished. He's so sweet when is he going to ask to touch her face so he can get a feel for what she looks like? Is he gonna do that cuz I think that would be the beginning of her really seeing she's falling for him

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! You have to wait and see. He just might do it.

 

Preview:

“You’re a beautiful person.”

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6

OH MY GOD! EDWARD! !!! :-D

Hey, I found your story just today and I read all the chapters in one go. Now I'm hooked to it! Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

 

Chapter 7 preview:

“Oh…um…I’ll meet you outside.” She said standing up. “I have to use the ladies room.”

“Okay.” He shrugged. “I’ll see you outside.”

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

love it so far and cant wait to read more to see where this is going. Hope you can update again soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying this. There is more to come soon.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

I knew it!

I think James only asked Bella to make Victoria jealous



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! 

You are absolutely right

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh this should be good!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

so excited to see whats to come!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 

 

Chapter 7 preview:

“Oh…um…I’ll meet you outside.” She said standing up. “I have to use the ladies room.”

“Okay.” He shrugged. “I’ll see you outside.”

Reviewer: Kaylani Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 6

Uhh, James is such a ... but I'm glad Bella sees right through him.
By the way, how old is Edward exactly? Is he in his late twentys, like Bella assumed?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Bella will find out his age soon.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

MORE PLEASE!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

James seems like bad news

Reviewer: Kaylani Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

A date with James??? But she don't even like him ... and poor Edward, he seemed disappointed too ;)
Thanks for the great story, I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

The date with James will be more helpful than harmful to her relationship with Edward.

 

Reviewer: rachelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

ok, so I suck at reviewing, but I love this, I need more!!! please?!? *puppy dog eyes*



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

There will be more soon

Reviewer: chelleb Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait to find out Edwards story. Especially how he supports himself. Hope he's not a trust fund baby. They suck 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

You will find out how he supports himself very soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)



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Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Letsplay2daynmay Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:07 AM Title: Prologue

This fic. has a lot of potential, and im really enjoying it so far. Im just wondering how often you update. 



Author's Response:

I don't have a specific update schedule. I update whenever I'm finished with a chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am reading but have not really formed an opinion yet. Thanks for updating. I am looking forward to reading this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

I plan on updating vey soon and I hope you like what I have in store.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

Good for Bella, refusing to play along with the others. And thank God she can defend herself against Mike's advances. Let's hope Edward can chill out enough to believe she has been left behind. Liking the story so far! 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm thinking that poor Edward had a VERY long walk to the store and back.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:00 PM Title: Prologue

I think they are so sweet together!

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting. Would love to read more. Her parents act like some people I know. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't think I will like Charlie

Author's Response:

You're going to see a lot more of him being like this. He is a difficult man.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Prologue

He should go with her to her parents

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



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Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: totallyrobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 5:36 PM Title: Prologue

I look forward to seeing where you go with this story :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Prologue

:)

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