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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella has horrible parents.  At least Edward wants her around. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

I am still having a hard time figuring out what in the world is Charles Swan's problem! People like that, controlling and abusive, are not worth knowing, I'm thinking! Looking forward to the trp to Oregon!

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

It must be incredible to experience sex without being able to see...the senses being heightened without visual cues..or maybe that's crap, dunno! But sex with Edward has to be a plus anyhoo~

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love seeing your post please post soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love thsi story, will you be able to update soon?

Keep the beautiful job of writing



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I will be updating soon. I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 21

Things are getting kindof serious, especially since he's asked her to drive him to Oregon. I suppose it was inevitable that they would become intimate. I just hope this doesn't end badly for either of them!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Edward and Bella are in for an interesting ride

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

And, he didn't ask if she was protected! Not very responsible of either of them!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19

Just a sense that some things are about to come to a head!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

Renee is just trying to assuage her guilty conscience, seems to me! Still feel like there's something off about Phil, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

Either Phillip doesn't like Renee's adult daughter, or he's a perv. Nither of these things is very good, so I really hope I'm totally wrong!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 16

Now that Bella is with her mom, it would be just her luck for them to be moving away!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

I was surprised that Charlie let Bella go with mother so easily!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

What an asshole for a father!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

It seems pretty obvious that her parents are splitting up. Can't   wait for her dad's reaction to her skipping school and taking Edward fishing, since I'm sure that's what she's doing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wonder what Bella's parents are fighting about, to make Charlie throw things and all? Not to mention what mischief Bella is up to with Edward's phone?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2016 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

A pleasant surprise that he finally shared a little of his history with her! Their fathers do sound a lot alike.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

The more I learn about Bella's parents, the less I like them! This is a portrait of a disfunctional family , if I ever saw one!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

They both think this is good idea, which only shows how young they are! There is bound to be problems with lying to both sets of parents about this dating thing. Of course, with her parents, it kind of serves them right, especially her dad! I just want to smack him the way he treats Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't blame Bella for being confused and sad at Edward's attitude. He kind of has mood swings, enough that she can't figure him out! Who has shown up at the house to see Bella, I wonder?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

I wonder how long Bella will be able to keep up this subtrefuge about where she is spending her free time?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

So that's why he told her he had to go to work, he's playing at this club! I don't think much of James as a date, by the way. He obviously has the hots for Victoria and can't compete with her Russian boyfriend!

Reviewer: Juss kiyah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

I am so in love with this story! I can't wait for the next chapters!! I do have a question though maybe it could be a theory? But I want to know, will Bella get pregnant in this story!?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! The prologue will give you a nice hint ;)

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

I feel sorry for Bella her parents only care about themselves. They have no clue what's up with her

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Bella certainly has a lot to deal with

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

I think they are cute together, but I can't believe they haven't thought of birth control. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! More on the birth control issue next chapter.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so glad you're continuing this story, I love it! I love sexy fun time^_^

Does Phil really hate Bella for being the 18 year old of his girlfriend's first husband or is he just trying not to touch his girlfriend's 18 year old daughter. Either way, I wonder when this is going to blow up in their faces. Sneaking around with your older boyfriend is fun (been there done that) but the lying & sneaking around does get noticed. (I know from experience, getting caught sucks & I was only 16 at the time. Luckily it worked out.) please update again soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! You will find out more about Phil and his reaction in later chapters. I plan on updating soon-ish.

Reviewer: AngeliqueMasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Is the person who caused the accident Phil?  If so, that should be an interesting meeting.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! More information will be revealed in the next few chapters.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

thank you for the updates....well done..we get to know a little more about Edward



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Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 21

Was so excited to see your new chapters last night



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



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Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 19

:) 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think he was going to ask her to go to Port Angeles  with him, until she told him about her date!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

The more I read about her father, the more I want to strangle him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

Silly girl for tearing up her last check! I really don't like Charlie Swan, he's a bully as well as just plain abusive!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

Typical  ornery teens with nothing better to do than get into trouble! Too bad Bella is the one left behind to bear the brunt of Edward's anger!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm thinking I don't much care for her parents, wanting her to follow them and not her own path. Doesn't sound like the girl has a very happy life.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2016 1:34 AM Title: Prologue

If I had to hazard a guess, I would say Miss Bella is pregnant, and her parents are not going to be pleased!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think Phillip doesn't really want Bella around. She should just move in with Edward.  It's the only place she is happy. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Who would want to live with Charlie?  Anyone would be happier away from his control. 

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

Renee is just trying to assauge her guilty feelings~I'm sure of it. I wouldn't go back if I were Bella. Psycho might do something physical the next time, or force her to stay. No way.

Reviewer: BBYGRL Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 2:05 AM Title: Prologue

I red this a few years ago glad to see that it's been updated!!

Had to go back & re-read it though cause like I said it's been a few years since I last red it & I couldn't remember what it was about!! 

Will you be finishing it this time? Or will there be long gaps?

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

Just finished the last chapter this has been a great read can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 18

loving this 

Reviewer: WB Crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

I think that Phil isn't so alright with Bella staying there

Reviewer: piyali Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 14

:-0 Oh no! How will she meet Edward now?

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh boy if he calls Mrs. Newton in the morning he's gonna mget even madder when he finds Bella got fired weeks ago. 

I loved that kiss they shared & it's about damn time too. They've been dancing around each other for awhile now.

Hey can there Edward POV, I'd like to know his thoughts on the make out session they had. 

Also when do we find out in the Swan house hold that fateful night? Where us Renee? Is she with a boyfriend or something or why does she keep defending her husband? So many questions I would love an answer to yet I'm sure it will only lead to more questions. 

Next chapter please ^_^

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

What is Charlie's problem?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie's probably mad at her mom cuz she most likely left him for another man and who would blame her...........He's a dick

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 13

Renee is having an affair?
Oooh what is Bella's surprise?

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

"For being my only true friend and for caring."...So true! With her parents divorcing, she'll need him even more.  Charlie is going to have to back off-he can't punish Bella for her mother's issues.

 

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

I think Renee is going to be leaving Charlie for another man. I can't think of what Bella's surprise could be. She's taking him on a guided tour of something but idk what. I hope she's not in too much trouble with Charlie when she gets back home. You know, she's 18, she could just move out of her parent's house. It would be a bit weird, till they finally became a couple, but she could move in with Edward. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

Charlie is such an overbearing ass! I wouldn't be shocked if Rene had an affair. Or, gasp, wanted to make her own decisions about her own damn life! I'm afraid of Charlie learning that B hasn't worked at Newtons for a while. I'm looking forward to B's surprise! 

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love it can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Why do I have the feeling that Bella isn't Charlie's daughter and that Renee cheated on him with someone. Also what was up with Edward when he was talking about his past he said something about that if he had followed his dreams that she..... did he date someone before hand and that something bad happened to her like she died!??? hmmmmm questions!!!!!!!!!!! Btw do you have an updating schedule cause you've been gone for a while and though I do love getting updates from you I'd love to get them sooner but it's your schedule so I'll get what I can take!!!!!!! =D Update soon and let's ge tto the bottom of the mystery of Renee and Charlie and the mystery of Edward's past!!!!!!!!!!! =D



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

I don't have an update schedule but I am planning on updating more often. Maybe once every week.

Everything will be revealed soon. :)

Reviewer: msbull Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

Please let bella tell charlie to go to hell and i bet renee is having an affair

Reviewer: kara02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great story so far, i'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

love it

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

:-) Quite a serious chapter. I'm glad Edward is opening up. But it was so hard to see him go silent when Bella mentioned about college. :-( He is already in love with her but he isn't saying it because of him being blind. :-(

Reviewer: hughug Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

I like that Edward is opening up a little.  To see him let her in even though he pushed her away is nice to see.  I hope that he can help Bella realise that she has the strength to stand up for herself to her family.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

I loved it. They both need a friend. What is up with her mom? Obviously she knows Bella isn't working.

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad to see Edward finally open up at least a little. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 11

*sigh* I love that he's opening up to her. I'm gonna love it when they make love. I imagine it as being really sweet, soft & slow; beautiful. 

Next chapter please. 

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

I really want to know how he lost his sight and if it can be reversed some how. In todays world most anything can be done... So is there something that can be done and he doesn't want it for whatever reason or no? Also who is the she he mentioned in his story

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love this!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

I wonder what happened with his past gf????hmmmmmmmm interesting back story.....

Reviewer: Ren68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderfully written so far and can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yaaay! Thanks for the update! :-)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 10

MORE EDWARD PLZ! UPDATE VERY SOON PLZ! THANK YOU!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

yay no james good!!!!!!!!!! definitly want more edward and bella and im picking up from the proloug that edward and bella procede to a physical relationship and that he obviously gets her pregnant well at least i think that's what happens. update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

James is gay. Edward wants to date Bella but doesn't think she'd go for it. Bella wants to be with Edward but does realize it yet. 

Im looking forward to next chapter & hope it comes soon.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 10

Bella's parents are douchebags!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

He's gay isn't he, that's what he ment by "I'm better than I thought" huh? I think he said Victoria's dad was a banker right? I don't think there would be a problem with dating her. Dating a guy though, that's a different story. 

When is Edward going to reappear? Maybe he'll save her from herassment by Mike. Maybe Mike gets his ass beat by Edward & he can't say anything 'cause Mike would never live down getting his ass beat by a "blind man." I'm just guessing but I hope you hope you post again soon. 

Read you later. 

Reviewer: Kaylani Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

I have to admit I don't like his proposal, but I assume it's necessary for Bella so that she can build her relationship with Edward without her parents come to know. It's a little immature but I think it's mutually the easy way out.
Especially if James is really not straight. And I hope this is the beginning for a lot of progress between Bella and Edward.

Looking forward to your next update. :)

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

James! hahahha! That was a surprise.
I don't believe James at all. I think he is lying. If it's not Victoria, it's no one but Bella. I'm pretty sure Victoria and him are friends with benefits. He wants Bella.

Reviewer: Create3333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ooh! Ooh! Is he in love with Dmitri? 

I miss Edward. Looking forward to this story moving along! Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

is it demitri that james is dating?

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

ohohohoh Dimitri yay Jamesis gay !!!!!!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

so james is gay and wants to use Bella as his beard they are just 2 poor kids with bullies for parents

 

Hugs xxx

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE IT!

Reviewer: Nands Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 9

James is sooooooo GAY.

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 10:18 AM Title: Prologue

Bella is sort of clueless. Hope she'll figure out her feelings soon. Hmm wonder who the young man visiting her is. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I JSUT FOUND IT TODAY AND IT'S SO FRICKIN AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE LET IT BE EDWARD AT THE DOOR OR JASPER THAT WOULD HELP BUT PLEASE LET IT BE EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kaylani Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh my, Bella is so clueless and Edward is so very careful with his hints, obviously too careful, because Bella don't get them. But I can see why he is that way he is, they have a lot of baggage and I assume his greatest fear is to slow her down and be a burden for her.
I think Bella shattered all his hopes with her flippant and thoughtless comments and Edward's just hiding behind his harsh tone und bitter words. They have both hurt each other without intention.
But anyway she needs to sort out her feelings, and I hope the guy downstairs is Jasper to help her with that.

Thanks for the new chapter :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the new chapter. I wonder who is at the door? Jasper, I hope. I don't think Renee would call Edward "charming".

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

Is it Edward? Or... I guess it must be him. Jasper must have put some brain in him for acting mad at Bella.
Great chapter. waiting for the next update. :-)

Reviewer: kara02 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story so far! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

:)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

I think it's Em, Jasper wouldn't just show up. Either was it's cuz Edward misses her

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

So, if he had done what he wanted, instead of his family's wishes, he would still have his sight? OMG, that is so very sad!

Is Bella's father having an affair?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Edward's story will be revealed soon.

As for Bella's father, you will just have to wait and see.

 

Teaser:

“You make your own food?” she asked tentatively. She didn’t want to ask something that would offend him she just wanted to know how it was possible for him to prepare anything for himself when he couldn’t see.

“Yeah.”

“How?” she asked. “If you don’t mind me asking.”

Reviewer: kara02 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great story so far! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

Teaser:

“You make your own food?” she asked tentatively. She didn’t want to ask something that would offend him she just wanted to know how it was possible for him to prepare anything for himself when he couldn’t see.

“Yeah.”

“How?” she asked. “If you don’t mind me asking.”

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 7

Can't wait to find out what happened with Edward and his family. Hope you can update again soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I plan on updating by next Monday.

 

Teaser:

“You make your own food?” she asked tentatively. She didn’t want to ask something that would offend him she just wanted to know how it was possible for him to prepare anything for himself when he couldn’t see.

“Yeah.”

“How?” she asked. “If you don’t mind me asking.”

Reviewer: piyali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Teaser:

“You’re a beautiful person.”

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm digging this story.  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like it.

 

Teaser:

“You’re a beautiful person.”

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