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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 78

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 77

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 76

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 75

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Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 76

Poor Jasper. What a sad chapter.

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 75

Yikes!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 74

That is what family is all about what a great day

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 73

things are coming together nicly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 72

poor girl 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 71

they are both good people

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 74

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 73

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 72

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 71

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Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 70

Love this story!  Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 70

She may be a good friend, but you have only known her a short while pleae don't move her in your house, take her to the boathouse

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 70

Unfortunately there are quite a few homeless young people. Bella will help Bree without making her feel bad about herself.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 70

Poor Girl Bella will help maybe she will be the new tenet on the boat??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 69

She heals well what does Charlie want

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 68

Why was Irina being such a bitch to Alice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 67

That is a good friend

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 66

Edward getting down to bussness.  Poor Jasper but I am glad Alice is coming to be with him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 70

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 69

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 68

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 67

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 66

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Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 62

Go Charlie!!!!!!!!!  I think he has given Carlisle a lot to think about and its all good things.  Bella is lucky to have a father like that!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 65

They are just so right

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 64

Alice loves Jasper and needs to get back with him and show him the love

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Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 63

It is amazing how much power your parents have over you even when you are an adult.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 62

He is not a bad guy just wanted more for his son but could not see what he had already done for himself.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 61

What is Bree's sad story I hope she is not in trouble.  Rose is getting comfortable with the gang???

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 62

You tell him, Charlie!

Reviewer: lain67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 65

I really am enjoying this story , thank goodness I have it on this site cause FF is stuffing up today 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 65

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 64

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 63

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 62

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 61

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 62

Love Charlie!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 53

Dam Jasper

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 49

More gifts! Lucky girl!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 48

Setting for 16. Smart girl!

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 60

I'm sure Alice and Jasper will work thing out.  Things are going real good for Bella and Edward right now...I hope they stay that way.  Keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 60

Life is good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 59

this life

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 58

sounds like fun

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 57

I feel bad for Jasper

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 56

Maria realy messed with there lives

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 60

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 59

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 58

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 56

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 55

Bella has won the good Dr. over

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 54

Edward is lucky her arm is hurt or he would be missing his balls it is a good thing she loves him and she knows he loves her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 53

Maria had his phone when Jasper thought he lost it she is an evil bitch.  Poor Jasper he is going to hate himself for hurting Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 52

exciting

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 51

things are coming together

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 50

Fun time breading it it lol

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 49

She thought that was her gift

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 48

The kitchen is compleate now other than the table

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 47

Tanya is such a bitch so glad Bella told her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2013 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 46

Maria is not very smart

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 55

I just read the whole story this evening. I really enjoy the short chapters as well as the story itself. It is a nice change to read about regular people rather than the uber rich. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 53

BAD, Jasper!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 55

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 46

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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 48

Gotta love Charlie.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 47

I so want Tanya and Bella to throw down... lol.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 46

Alice is a feisty little thing, isn't she? lol

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 45

Awwwwe

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 42

Surprise Esme :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 44

Carlisle is kind of being a dick

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 43

she is open and honest 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 42

Did his dad know who she was or is it that he had the girls cant do anything attitude??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 41

sad he was going without her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 41

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Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 40

I love this stor' You need to hurry for the next chapter

Reviewer: detsinbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 40

I love ur story and can't wait until u update

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 40

loved all the update, can not wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

Ha ha

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 40

I hope that everthing is okay with Jasper. Great Chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

Jasper is going to be so happy Alice is back

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 39

Alice is going to rip Maria's hair out

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 38

Eleazar gave his blessing that was nice.

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 37

Charlie is wise

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 12 Jan 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 36

I hope all of her hard work will pay off. Thanks for all the chapters today - it was a real treat.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

she is moving in with him! Yay!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 34

Hell yes

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

They are working as a team, great story and loved the chapters

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