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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

Bound to be some bumps in the road or they wouldn't be human I guess!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

The progress on Edward's house is kind of exciting, and I'll bet they can hardly wait to finish. My money is on Edward asking Bella to move in with him when it's done!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 30

When the hired help goes to that much effort to do something nice for the boss, you know that he's a good one and they are a great crew! Sure choked up Edward especially that Bella pitched in with the guys to help!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella is just kidding herself if she doesn't agree with Jasper's assessment of Edward's reasons for asking her input!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

I figured Bella would be helpful when it came to the financial side of Edward's business. He's actually got quite the small operation going on there, something to be proud of!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

There should be a lot of fun conversation over dinner tonight!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

Not to be nauseating or anything, but they are just so cute together!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

I admire a woman who knows exactly what she wants, and a man who can deliver it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm really liking the sound of Edward's house, and when Bella teared up at the news of the attic being a play space for future children, I had to 'awww'! Now, pardon me while I go into voyeur mode!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

This ought to be very interesting, and I can't wait to see what's next on the agenda!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Looks like Edward finally realized Bella was serious! Plus, I loved when he shot down Tanya just as soon as she yelled at Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Stubborn little things, aren't they?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

The bets are off, now that they are seeing each other. It's funny that most of the town knew how they felt before they did!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

That taco meatloaf does sound pretty tasty, by the way! I'm thinking this is a good start to a relationship!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

Looks to me like Edward is definitely on Charlie's good side, what with saving his daughter from possible harm! Shocked Bella a bit too it seems, approving her seeing her rescuer!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 17

Stupid interruption! Now I'm looking forward to future developments between Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

Will wonders never cease, Edward opened up a bit about his feelings and got a really good response from Bella! Silly man, he could have just been honest from the beginning, and saved all the misunderstandings!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looks like Edward saved the day, or rather the night! That could have been a real bad situation for Bella, by herself with a predator on her boat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

What in the world is Edward's problem, poor self-esteem? He better listen to his buddy, Emmett, before he loses out altogether!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

I wish we knew what his trouble was, also! A note about Bella's customers thinking it was cute to say things like that, some guys never completely grow out of that silliness!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

Aha! Some of the puzzling things seem about to be explained!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

That went really well, and much better than Bella was afraid it would! It won't hurt to have her dad pick up the few utilities, either, since he'll get a boat to go fishing in!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Actually, I think living on a boat sounds kind of neat! I bet it would be fun, at least for a while!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

Looks like good buddy Jake may have solved Bella's housing problems!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

Something tells me Bella is getting the completely wrong signal from Edward's actions!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 7

Irina must have done that on purpose! Good thing Edward was there to keep Bella from hitting the floor!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 6

The rhythms of the store are sure familiar and bring back a lot of good memories. Bella seems to be fitting right in and getting along with pretty much everyone.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 5

Emmett is pretty nice, giving Bella tips on how to get along with all the crew. Now that she and Edward have met, I look forward to seeing if he felt the zing when their hands touched!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds to me as if Bella is picking up the ins and outs of the hardware store without too much difficulty.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

I worked in a hardware store for six years after retiring, and eight years in another when I was in my twenties. This all sounds quite familiar.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

It may not be what she wanted but it beats no job at all! Hope she doesn't have a problem with the other employees!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

The hardware crew doesn't sound too promising, so far!

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 3:08 AM Title: Epilogue

what a good story! loved the characters and the plot

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 9:02 PM Title: Epilogue

So sad that was the end but it was still absolutely awesome! Its a shame about Carlisle but I'm so glad they had more kids! I love the other names but randy? ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 125

OK she mentioned formula isn't she going to breast feed?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 124

Where is Bree?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 123

I love the name of their daughter and their cat ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 117

That was great! I'm glad that Phil is on his way though ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 116

Wow not surprised by Edwards reaction but I loved Bella's rant at Heidi ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 113

I don't know but I had a feeling an accident was due and her being pregnant I'm just so glad he will be able to get back to work and the guy's did everything right at the site ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 103

Super cool lemon but I thought Emmet was 34?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 102

You read my mind again! ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 101

Wow poor Phil! I think he should just get rid of Renee and keep in touch with Bella ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 99

I loved the honeymoon registry I didn't know that could happen ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 96

I'm so glad Bella put her foot down ;) to many stories have her character be more of a doormat ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 95

Awesome!!!!!! Is she going on birth control now?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 91

Wow how mature is Edward with his thoughts! I hope there's more from him about this ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 90

Omg! I thought she was on birth control!! How could you do that to them!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 89

It's like you read my mind!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 88

I love epov and I really hope you write some more ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 83

Wow that's a lot to this at her and I did realise she had been there for a year! ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 80

I'm so glad about how Bella and Bree are able to get more work to help them out I thought Eleazar was going to give Bella  the work he did before Tanya left ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 79

That ring idea is awesome I've never heard of that before. ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 76

Omg! After what Gerry said to Bella I thought he was saying goodbye but not the next day! And I'm so glad Bree isn't a threat to them ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 72

Wow what an awful story but how come she did go into foster care if she was a minor when it happened?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 70

I had a feeling that she was homeless  by her comments on the houseboat ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 64

Wow excellent info in this chapter. How come they have different surnames though if Jasper's dad is Eleazar's brother?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 62

Thanks so much for letting us know how old Edward was ;) I thought he was older ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 61

Super cool! BTW I thought Paul and Jared couldn't work on a Monday?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 53

wow! what total chaos!;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

i love these personalities;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

wow i think that was the stortest beginning to end angst ive ever read! ;D

Reviewer: Apl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15

fun story

 

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:35 PM Title: Epilogue

Nice story! So glad that Carlisle and Edward were able to resolve their differences. It made for a much nicer and fulfilling story and helped to soften the blow at the end.
Too cute!
Thx! :)

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 102

renee is a evil bitch how could she say such hurtful horrible things to her own daughter

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2013 1:42 AM Title: Epilogue

Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:21 AM Title: Epilogue

great story. thanks for writing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2013 12:04 PM Title: Epilogue

I have loved this story so much. Thank you for all your hard work. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 7:19 AM Title: Epilogue

That was the best real life story i have read it is like i knew these two and loved then like family. thanks so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 130

he is so sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 129

the best feeling in the world

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 128

give her drugs lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 127

about time lol i took my time to

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 126

good things are happening

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:21 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 130

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 129

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 128

:)

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 127

:)

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Date: 31 Mar 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 126

:)

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 125

Those practical gifts are awesome. My mom gives us a family membership to the zoo every year. It'z my fav because it doesn't mess the house lol. It is nice to read a story where they worry about money and real life issues. :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 125

Charlie is such a softy. He just doesn't want everyone to know it. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 125

I want there family to be mine

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 124

That is what family is all about.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 123

perfect name and I love the kitten

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 122

Sounds like fun to me lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 121

so exciting

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 120

a baby girl /i love babys

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 125

I so want some pie after reading these chapters!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 123

Aww, sweet! Great name too! (I was a little worried when you said it was going to be something original...lol)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 125

:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 124

:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 123

:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 122

:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 121

:)

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Date: 27 Mar 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 120

:)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 125

Great Chapters, can not wait for more.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 118

LOL I remember thinking the same thing about the wipe warmer and then the first early cold morning I changed my daughters diaper and felt how cold they were I realized the need :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 119

things are looking great it helps that he was in great shape before the accident

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 118

she is good

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