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Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:41 PM Title: Eternity

That was a sad ending, but Sookie's life was never filled with hearts and rainbows so I suppose it's fitting. Good addition of Jason killing himself in front of Thomas. I hope you do write a screenplay, my hope is that you never stop writing no matter what it is. And I believe your mother is well intended but mistaken whatever you write is not a waste of time. I think you writing these FanFic stories are a wonderful way for you to exorcise your demons. My lasting want and hope for you is you find peace and happiness (whenever and wherever you can). You are magnificent! And it truly is a pleasure knowing you, and I don't want this to be a good-bye, I expect to hear from you often.

XoXo



Author's Response:

It was a sad ending, did you think it was any good? No I don't suppose ti was. Actually I wished that he had killed Thomas while he was at it, lol. I appreciate that very much. Thank you I hope I find peace too, but I doubt I  will because I'm so fucked in the head. Aww, shucks thanks. And I too hope you will stay in touch, and of course there will be another story coming any day now. If you want to chat sometime today at the coffeeshop that would be cool. My next story will be different than this one, two straight guys this time, or maybe just Eric. Who knows right?

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:27 PM Title: Eternity

I liked the story, wish there were more chapters..But the end is the end..and again your a great writer..I really enjoyed your story ,u put a lot if time into it.So I'll be waiting for the next story u write..I also like the walking dead I watch it all the time it's on..ttyl ....

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:09 PM Title: Eternity

I think any writing you do each day can help your future career.  My husband works with a lot of writers.  One guy in particular used to work in a steel mill back east.  He would write at night, in his freezing cold basement, until his fingers were too cold to move.  He had a drawer full of rejection letters.  Finally, he got noticed and is now an award winning, published, science fiction writer who writes for video games as his day job.  We were on his boat over the summer with another writer (my husband is not a writer) and they were talking about how important it is to write anything each day.  They both said they had volumes of work that would never be read by anyone.  You are so talented and have brought so much happiness by sharing work:) 



Author's Response:

That is my hope.  What an intersting tale... I certainly hope that I get discovered someday. Thank you I try to spread my dark heart for all of yours enjoyment lol. I have loved having you along for the ride, thanks.

Reviewer: olleyberry2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:24 PM Title: Eternity

What a great story you are a very talented writer and Im sure whatever you work on in the future will be wonderful.



Author's Response:

Why thank you! I appreciate that very much!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:48 AM Title: The Descion

Brilliant! Having Sookie spy on Anborn & Eric so she knew their true feelings!! I'm always happy for another chapter but I would not have been upset if this was the end. This has been a wonderful trip to take w/ you, lots of twists and turns and you never lost me once. Looking forward to the end. 

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 2:11 AM Title: The Descion

Wow... Very good chapter ..I liked her decision to have them both.But i think Anborn is pretty mad ,hope that they can work it out.. Now a hurricane is on its way..Just can't wait till the next chapter ...

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: The Descion

I think it fits perfectly to pick them both.  I am always so sad when you are close to finishing a story...I end up checking my email way too much to see if you've written a new story:) don't take too long...



Author's Response:

I do too. I'm glad someone agrees with me. She just didn't have a strong connection to either of them, she desires them both. I'm going to try to strectch the story out at least a few more chapters more.

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 9:29 PM Title: The Begining

Real good chapter...Can't wait till the next one , hate to hear its almost the end..This is such a great story,your such a good writer..

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 7:10 PM Title: The Wolf And The Man In Black

I told you STOP doubting yourself, this was a good chapter! Hearing the hurt (alright really reading) in Eric's voice when he retorts to Sookie about her not caring about his feelings was painful. Gabriel being comforting well as comforting as he can be when your the scary Angel of Death (LOL). Keep up Anborn and his honesty its really working and knowing more about his past and his true feeling is key. I would have reviewed earlier but I was chatting w/ this very lovely girl in a coffee shop. XoXo

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:32 PM Title: The Mist

Sweet Baby Jesus that chapter ended with a BANG! Anborn trying to date Sookie, Eric showing up, the mist, what can I say except you really know how to pack a punch! My favorite line: "Whatever Anborn, it's par for the course when you're a sex slave", I can't decide if she said it in a self-depricating way or to make him feel better but not too better. Again the mist, how he is violating he is litterly inside her completly, where did that come from?!

Reviewer: olleyberry2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: The Mist

I love your story it is so unique and intetesting.



Author's Response:

Why thank you! It's always nice to hear from a new reader.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 6:23 AM Title: The Mist

It really sounds like Anabour has a definate supperiority complex about every girl being totally attracted to him due to his look obviously!! He obviously wants Sookie to care for him as well!! He seems to take offense when anyone doesn't!! This was really revealling when Sookie is dazzeled by him like 99% of other women are!! He obiously despises that she cares so much for Eric, but not him this seem to drive him bonkers!!! However, he really, really wants her to like him as much as she does Eric!! What different abilities Anabour has even scares Eric obviouslly this is something Eric tries to inform her of!! Sookie does realize the danger she is playing with ;I am certian!! It is very intriging seeing as she is beginnning to develope her own powrers from her hand in starting the fire.  I most definatly want to here more about both of their abilities.

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:24 AM Title: "I Think of You When I Listen To This"

This was a very interesting chapter....

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 12:45 AM Title: The Mist

I love the way you combine the beautiful/ugly and violent/sweet parts of personalities and situations.  It brings a realism to your stories that I appreciate.  

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:21 PM Title: The Begining

I loved Colm he was different from the rest and I think he could be a good friend to Sookie but I don't think the Trio wants her to have a friend. The third person would be interesting but I love knowing what's going on in Sookie's head. 

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: "I Think of You When I Listen To This"

Okay this is going to start a whole lot of trouble. Sookie is so stupid but she should be she's a sheltered seventeen year old girl. I like where this is going chaos is a good thing, if only we could dip into Eric's head and know what he is thinking while Sookie and Anborn are on their date. Anborn seems to care for her but I believe he only cares for her because she's not falling all over him (which he admitted) but the interesting part is what if Sookie starts to fall for him: will he be happy or will his love turn to hate? Only you know. At this point I am unsure how much Eric is inlove Sookie is it genuine (albiet twisted) love or the same love Anborn has for Sookie. Oh in my sick mind Jason is spending time with Thomas whether Thomas is agreeing to the time I don't know.



Author's Response:

Yep it sure it! Yeah true. I think you might be right, he's incrediably hot and it irritates him that she doesn't want him. That's very interesting! I think Eric's love is geniue, but who knows right? Fucking hilarious, I can just picture that, sometimes I wish this story was in third person, I've been wondering what Colm is up to and what that little bitch Jason is up to.



Author's Response:

Yep it sure it! Yeah true. I think you might be right, he's incrediably hot and it irritates him that she doesn't want him. That's very interesting! I think Eric's love is geniue, but who knows right? Fucking hilarious, I can just picture that, sometimes I wish this story was in third person, I've been wondering what Colm is up to and what that little bitch Jason is up to.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 3:03 AM Title: Lou

This was a very interesting chapter in revealing that she is a direct relation to satan & her hair color infact did come from him. It was also refreshing to know that he does care very much for his grandaughter very much & is not going to rape her!!! It was interesting in seeing his very conflicted views of her rape, which included his argument with her father! Very interesting was the reasoning of her father in not stopping it is that her father see's  her destiny tie up with her kidnapper, which has only been allowable by her father due to her destiny being tie up to them. hmmmmmmm very interesting!!! She is obviously a very precious comody amongst the fallen angel's!!! Can't wait for next chapter!! I am definatly impatiently waiting for next updated chapter!!!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:11 PM Title: Lou

Your are beautiful. I wanted to just leave that but your words move me to type. The fabric of this story is wonderous, this may sound dumb but it makes me think of historical fiction. Reading this was also like a palet cleanser it was so refreshing that someone seemed to interested in what is best for Sookie, yes he could have saved her but hasn't because he feels there is meaning to her suffering. Personally I never once hit the impression you enjoyed Sookie being raped I think in this story it was a neccesary evil. You keep writing how you feel and we'll keep reading. And you thank your reader but the readers are only as inspired by whom they read. XoXo



Author's Response:

This review is so touching. That's so nice to hear. Interesting... why do think that is? I found it refreshing too actually. I was very surprised at this Satan, he's the third rendering of him I've done. I'm not sure exactly but I think he mostly didn't save her because he's not allowed to, you know angel pacts and all that but I like your idea of why much better. That's awesome to hear that becasue I think a lot people think i do enjoy it. I think it is too. You're beatfiul too and hearing from you as devotedly as you do is so wonderful, I doubt I could finish this tale without you. Very true I suppose but I'm grateful to you and them just the same. Thanks again. Hey I have a crazy idea, would you ever want to chat in this coffee house chat room on this site?

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:20 AM Title: His Hand Trembled

Thanks for ur kind work of not pity me due to my Muscular Dystrophy because of being wheelchair boundl. I am generally a happy independent person. I've been in resturant , & other public places & told I was possesed just because I'm in in a wheelchair & can't walk!!! NOTHING INFURIATED ME MORE!!! SO DON'T BELIEVE IT!!! TRUST ME I KNOW HOW UPSETTING IT IS!!!  I have been told this many times from others & can understand how hurtful it must be comming from ur mom!! I'm so sorry!! But just know ur readers here truely care for u & how u feel!! And ur Mom if completly wrong!!! Do not believe her!! Anyways I am so glad Sookie is finally getting to meet some of her family member on her fathers side. I definatly would like to here more. It was interesting to see what traits & simularities she has to some of her family members & relatives!! !Definatly would like to hear more!!!



Author's Response:

I wasn't sure if I should have said that or not but I was trying to keep it real. Wow I can't believe anyone would say that! Thanks I appreciate that. You know sometimes I think you guys do care about me and reviews like that prove it to me. I'm glad too I think. I was so certain that my muse was leading me astray with the whole angel buissness but its sort of working out OK I guess. Thanks I'm happy it was interesting, I wrote that when I was blind drunk, I wish I'd been sober it would have been so much better. Hope you enjoy the chapter I just posted. Love hearing from you.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:01 PM Title: His Hand Trembled

 What's scarier than meeting Satan being left alone w/ him! I've heard of being in the Lions Den but this is something different. I don't know where this is going but I'm dying to find out. I have a sick feeling that Sookie maybe in for some more pain & terror. Take care of our little Sookie. 



Author's Response:

I think you may be surprised by the latest chapter. I'm trying to take care of her. She's one of my favorite Sookies I've ever done.

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:48 PM Title: His Hand Trembled

Shame is such a complicated emotion.  I wish I could hang out with you.  Your welcome to our guest room anytime;)



Author's Response:

Hey what room do hang in? And yes shame is very complicated. I was so flattered and surprised that you wanted to talk to me.

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: We Go To Meet Family

I think your an ingenious writer.  I am always so consumed by your stories.  I find so much honesty and beauty in all your stories. I have met some truly frightening people in my life and have always been amazed at how they can be generous and kind in an instant.  I feel like with your experiences, your stories show how complex individuals are.  I love how your characters have trouble reconciling all their different sides.  Thank you for putting so much of yourself into your stories.  Your so truly talented:)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:25 PM Title: We Go To Meet Family

I have read so many different types of stories each writer chooses differnt avenuses to takes. Some writer write dark fic that involves slaves, humantrafficking, abuse, but that doesn't make it any less of a value in to those who write comedy, fantasy, or love stories!!!! I read all types of different stories but u are not damaged because this is what direction u have chosen to direct u writing in!!! Pleases don't be discouraged because us as ur reader do not think of u as damaged in fact each person is valuable!!! I don't know what has happened to u or what u have gone through in ur life. u see I  have Musclar Dystophy & am wheelchair bound & could be considered damaged but I know I'm in spite of my daily difficulties. AWSOME LAST CH. by the way!!! I am enjoying seeing the development between Eric & Sookie & her growing feeling for him. I am definatly what her demented family will be like. Definatly am nervouse for her to be alone with her father though am curious whom else she will meet at this reunion!!! 

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:35 PM Title: We Go To Meet Family

First my review: Shit I don't know where to start, Daddy is a creepy fuck, Jason being asked to move out, imaginig Anborn turnig into a wolf while fucking Sookie (shivers), Sookie coming even closer to falling in love w/ Eric! Awesomesauce! Secondly: Personally I don't ready your work and think it's filthy, a floor is flithy, hands are filthy, stories w/ no real passion or characters w/ gratuitous sex and gratuitous violence is filthy. You are working out your issues by putting them out for others to read. You could do a lot worse like countinue the cycle of violence you have experinced. "Our parents, they want the best stuff for us.  But right now, they go to do what's right for them. Because it's their time... but [now] it's our time". And I love when you share, wheter is just thru your story telling or your notes. Be well, be safe and be loved.

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 6:11 PM Title: We Go To Meet Family

Wow..your such a good writer ..I really like how this story is going, just cant wait till the reunion ... 

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:05 PM Title: "Because I'm Going To Date Her"

How twisted am I that I was happy that she fucked Anborn to annoy Eric but that she didn't enjoy fucking him that much. As soon as I read the name Gabriel I wondered if he was the Angel Gabrielle (which mean Sookie may have two more Uncles-who will probably want to fuck her (hahaha)). Am anxious to find out how Jason feels about the new "relationship" between Eric & Sookie? And I I don't know which I rather happen: Sookie beg to be fucked  by Eric or Eric losing his will power and fucking her. Both choices have there own set of consquences, I'm sure which ever I guess you'll pick the opposite  because you never cease to amaze me. Okay Hemingway get your drink on and get busy typing. Oh Belinda for heaven sakes post already, I needs my writer happy (I'm joking but I'm not).



Author's Response:

I love you. This review is the shit! I was happy she did that too. I'm almost finished with the next chapter. I'm going to go nuts with my obssesion with this story. He is the Angel of Death btw, but don't tell anyone. I can't wait to write the renioun, I hope I'm good enough for it. Jason a little cocksucker and I can't fucking stand him. I don't know what I would pefer either and your right about the consquenses. LOL yeah I never know what will happen next in my stories which keeps me exicted. That's very nice of you to call me Heminway and amusing, I'm just a sick freak though with a fucked up mind, but I guess so was he since he couldn't write unless he was standing up and drunk out of his mind and of course he blew his own brains out. LOL at the Belinda comment, I miss her so much when I dont' hear from her, of course you are amazing as well. Love you. camp30



Author's Response:

I love you. This review is the shit! I was happy she did that too. I'm almost finished with the next chapter. I'm going to go nuts with my obssesion with this story. He is the Angel of Death btw, but don't tell anyone. I can't wait to write the renioun, I hope I'm good enough for it. Jason a little cocksucker and I can't fucking stand him. I don't know what I would pefer either and your right about the consquenses. LOL yeah I never know what will happen next in my stories which keeps me exicted. That's very nice of you to call me Heminway and amusing, I'm just a sick freak though with a fucked up mind, but I guess so was he since he couldn't write unless he was standing up and drunk out of his mind and of course he blew his own brains out. LOL at the Belinda comment, I miss her so much when I dont' hear from her, of course you are amazing as well. Love you. camp30

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 7:03 AM Title: "Because I'm Going To Date Her"

I was so excited when sookies dad made an apperance! I was just dying to find out more about him!! I love that Sookis=e is trying to make Eric jelous which revealls here true feeling about Eric that she is strill very conflicted about that she just can't admit it to herself yet!!! She is obviousouly horrified knowing incest is common practice in the vampire race skiningly so!!! I would loath my dad as well for what torture he's allowed to happen without intervention. However he does not allow & interviens if if life is threated that could lead to her potential death!!! Thiis family reuinon ought to be very interesting!!! I am very curious as to how her powers should reveal themselves as she is still human!!!

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:41 AM Title: The Begining

I live in Seattle.  It's really frowned upon here and you need to drive quite a distance to reach it.  Your story is awesome as usual and provides so much entertainment:) thank you.

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 2:52 AM Title: Sam's Club

I love playful you.  I especially loved the line "they turned and seemed confused".  Too funny!  I've been to Walmart once...it was an experience I won't forget:)



Author's Response:

Thanks I had fun writing it. I loved that line too. You've only been once? Are you European? Because us Americans go to Walmart all the time. Thanks for the review it was fun to read.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 9:38 PM Title: Sam's Club

This I think was the most amusing and funny chapter I've ever read by you. Sookie being so bold either because she doesn't care or knowing Eric won't let Anborn hurt her. I guess some people would say Sookie is being a bitch but I don't think so she's making the best out of a bad situation and torturing a spoiled, childish vampire is fun! Again love your humour! Can't wait for the next chapter in this tale.



Author's Response:

I loved this review, you feel like a kiss ass sometimes but then so do I lol. You are the only one for the most part that gets my sense of humor. I'm not sure why she's being a bitch, I think she doesn't care and is hoping that one of them kills her. I'm almost finished with the next chapter. I had fun writing this chapter, I think its my favorite one so far. I know that I'm not really funny usually but I always get my own jokes. Thanks again.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 9:28 PM Title: Alfred And The Fish

You said once you suck at writing sex scenes (I'm paraphrazing) that sex scence with Eric and Sookie  fuckton HOT! This little mind game Eric is now playing with Sokie is sick but delicious at the same time. Anborn and Jason are going to be livid when they discover Sookie's feelings for Eric even if they are (just) sexual. You left another little treat so I'm off to read that.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 12:59 PM Title: His Tattered Heart

I wanted to cry for Eric he is the beautiful monster that wants to be loved but is incapable of being loving (at least to Sookie, no sure how he treats Thomas). I am angry for being so cold to Eric then I have to remember how insanely cruel he & Jason & Anborn have been to her. This is one of those perfectly done chapters I love. Keep up the soul wrenching work. ***** And here are your stars sorry they're not shiny. A had a huge grin on my face when I read the name of the palace. Your such my Geek Princess !

Author's Response:

Well it's offical I think I have a crush on you, lol. I actually almost teared up when I was writing this chapter. I felt pissed at her too but I liked that she didn't let a few earth shattering orgasms blow her mind to the point where she deluded herself. Thank you, I was proud of it. Thanks for the stars Moonchild. Greek Princess? Interesting, much love to you.

Reviewer: paisleypatches Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:23 AM Title: My Upcoming Egagment

First time  reviewer here. I just wanted to say I really liked that one of them could prefer a more willing partner in Sookie for sex. As much as I can understand the premise you have that they can get anyone they want at any time because they are beautiful so forcing someone is erotic for them, I think it was wise of you to also show how it would be exciting to change someone's mind and making them want you when they didn't for so long. The very fact that she sought him out once, shows the change. She might hate herself for it later,but that is huge. Anyway, I thought all of that was expressed really well and had very important psychological ramfications that just made perfect sense. Thanks for the update, you crazy writing machine!

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 3:26 AM Title: My Upcoming Egagment

This chapter slayed me, how you had Sookie be so with her emotions and the torn feeling as her body betrayed her. Not to mention we met Daddy Dearest how awesome are you! And a family reunion I'm guessing the only other worse reunion would be the Manson Family reunion. And I also in love w/ NeverEnding Story. A shiny bright star for you if you can remember Bastian's mothers name.

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:54 AM Title: Thomas

Stupid, stupid Sookie I know her heart was in the right place giving the note to Thomas or was it really her being devious (I don't know). I re-read the previous chapter and I can see your side about Anborn he's kinda like an angry child who pulls a girls hair but more extreme because he is more extreme. I'm leaving now I see there is another chapter waiting for you. TtFn

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Date: 30 Nov 2012 12:13 AM Title: Thomas

I love this story it has to be one of my favorite out of all your stories. Cant wait for next update!

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 11:49 PM Title: Thomas

OMG!!! What a powerfully explosive chapter!!! It was awsome & totally unexpectedly captivating !!! I can't believe Eric just pushed Sookie off!!! That was truely unexpected for sure can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I will definatly be impatiently waiting for it!!! WOW!!! Is all I can say about this story u truely have earned a #10 out of a #10 in my book for sure!!! Please post next chapter real sooooooooooooon can't wait this truely was an amazing chapter WOW! WOW!

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:47 PM Title: Sleeping Beauty

Awww you are a darlin'. So if I knew I just had to ask & you would deliver I would have asked for a million dollars. Thanks for the introduction of Thomas I will be sorry to miss the insanity of Jason & Anborn but I'm sure I will be delighted by Thomas & Sookie interaction. Oh and by the way I'm back to hating Anborn again. “I will always strive to protect you and cherish you, of course I will take you by force and abuse you as well", the complexity of that one sentence, protect Sookie from what exactly he will do to her and is a new kind of crazy (but I love him-why is that?). All right get your drink on chill, clean whatevs. Look forward to a new one. And if I haven't said it thank you for making me feel special in your shout out (great now my eyes are glass-I'm a dork).

Author's Response:

No I'm really not but thanks. LOL, if only I had a couple of millions laying around. I don't hate Anborn now, what he did was based from some twisted form of love, I  felt bad for him. You're welcome I always try to thank you for every review. Love ya. A new chapter is up btw. I think you'll like it. Oh I liked that line of Eric's too.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:55 PM Title: "I Was Jealous Of Your Mother"

Seriously you are campaigning hard for me to fall for Anborn hearing he tragic childhood and then being found by Jason I would not object to more back story on that (I know I'm greedy-you made me that way).

Author's Response:

Yay! I knew I could get you to like him, but first I had to make myself care about him, that is always the turning point for me when I get invested in a charcter. You are often in my thoughts while I write this. Thanks for your support.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:32 PM Title: "We Loved The Strange Things You Would Say"

So many small quiet moments, Sookie comforting Jason after the awful things he's done to her. I'm glad she is honest about her only reasoning for dating Anborn. And when she tells Jason she will date him & he mistakenly thought she meant him & her not her & Anborn in my head Jason sounded so hopeful, sad & happy saying “Who, you and me?” This chapter was more than Okay never doubt yourself. You captivate me more while in a black out than any other who sit & sit & sit to think of these retellings of the CH universe.

Author's Response:

I think out of all the reviews you've given me so generously this is my favoirte so far. I felt that too when Jason said that, I could hear the hope even thoguh I didnt' say it. I love your last line of this. People are really diveded on cannon, some people won't read my work because Sookie doesn't look the same (tan and plump) honestly I don't know how some of these writers can stand to constantly rehash those fucking books. I'm almost done with the next chapter. Love you.

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:35 AM Title: "We Loved The Strange Things You Would Say"

Every now and again you write a sentence that is surprisingly funny...it's always unexpected and makes you an especially awesome writer.  Don't forget to eat during your drinking binge;)



Author's Response:

I forgot to thank you for this surprising review. Hold on a minute and I will add it to my AN's. I don't ever try to be funny so when people think something that I write is its nice. I ate btw.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 4:08 AM Title: Anborn

Congratulations this is the first time I felt anything besides loathing toward Anborn. My demented heart was breaking for Jason and I'm not even that fond if him I'm more of a Team Eric person. I think if Eric leaves Jason for Thomas Jason will die of a broken heart. And again NEVER apologize for rapid updates!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I really didn't like Anborn either at first, in fact I couldn't stand him. I feel bad for Jason too. I don't know who I prefer. I'm sick to death of writing Erics so probably Jason. You're probably right about that, thanks again for all your reviews.

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 12:11 AM Title: Anborn

You have the best muse;) 



Author's Response:

This review was so simple but it made me smile. Thanks.



Author's Response:

This review was so simple but it made me smile. Thanks.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Miles To Go Before I Sleep

“Even after thousands of years you’re still figuring him out aren’t you?” That's the great thing about your writing no one is just black or white, good or bad (okay maybe bad). This chapter accompanied the previously perfectly, Sookie is now become a friend and confidant to these creatures. I fear Sookie's affection for Colm maybe the straw when it comes to Eric. I am looking forward to meeting Thomas but then again if we see him most likey so does Jason & bode well for Thomas.

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:13 PM Title: Beholding Him

I just luv chapter after chapter, this storey is so awesome..



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's good to hear from you again! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 12:59 PM Title: Beholding Him

This is the most heartbreaking chapter so far even more than Sookie's rapes & beatings (I know I'm fucked in the head). Everyone here just wants to love and be loved but no seems to be loved by who they love. I can see how Sookie is gaining sympathy for Colm, Jason & Eric, Anborn not so much but the story's not over yet.

Author's Response:

I found this chapter incredbialy sad too. Much sadder than the rape chapters, it may sound strange but I don't enjoy writing about her being raped, I know people probably think I do, it's just that I'm incapable of writing regular love scenes for the most part due to my abuse as a child. This review is one of your best yet, it's so percective. I love that you got right to the heart of what this story is really about, people sometimes think that my stories are empty and filled with nothing but rape and abuse but my real readers know better, like you. I haven't figured out Anborn yet and I don't know if I even like him yet. Love this review, you rock.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:33 AM Title: The Graffitied Stone

This may sound silly but my favorite bit was when Sookie describe how everyone was dressed but when she go to Eric she said "who care", I laughed out loud. I like Sookie felt grateful for the promise of not being best ends and raped for a week. I don't think Eric & Jason can break up & not just because they're twins even I there was no relation they're different sides of the same coin they need each other.

Reviewer: missie12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:21 AM Title: The Graffitied Stone

I like that she wants to die to escape them it's more realistic than falling in love with them.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:44 PM Title: The Hourglass

I am one sick bitch, on the one hand I feel terribly bad for Sookie and her situation but on the other hand I kind of laughed at her second suicide attempt how did she not know she was going to be discovered. And a "thank you" from Jason not expected at all. The dream (or vision) of Sookie's mother nice addition. When I was reading the begining I could so clearly see these events happening I felt like I was watching a movie, Bravo.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:00 PM Title: The Hourglass

I absolutly am loving reading this truely beautifully captivating story!!! This story is truely so different from so may other out there. I look here juserveral times a day just to see if this story has been updated. I truely am enjoying this story line this the different twist & turns u have incorperated into it such sookie no being fully human and am very interested in finding out what other half she is I suspect she is half vampire though!! This story is very intriging!!!! I definatly rate this story a #10 out of a #10. I have enjoyed sookie's attempt at death only to be saved time & time again!!!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:03 PM Title: I Dive Into The Deep

Colm is one of my favorite Irish name (who told you), The scene between Eric and Sookie the best ever, I wouldn't care if the who story was them just talking. Then this added bit about Sookie not beoing human and her father is some sort of Big Bad (Mantastic!-spelling intended) also her mother was half human well this little girl is really something special. To be honest I was afraind I would never love this story because of how much I was in live with Blue but first I fell in like now I and in love and soon enough I will be head over feet. And I was right about Eric's feelings for Thomas (YES!). Read you later, alligator. XoXo



Author's Response:

It's one of my favorites too. I liked that scene too. Yeah I'm not sure as you know if I made the right call on Sookie but we'll see I guess. Well I'm glad that you are coming to love this story, I felt the same way when I started this story (I loved writing Blue so much) that I thought there was no way I could even come to like this story or writing it but its slowly growing on me. Yes you were right. Loved this review and all your others.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 2:12 PM Title: Blood Older Than The World

Oh, and I don't find Sookie bitchy, I think she coping in this new world the best she can, I'd be a massive cunt rag if I was kidnapped and rapped constantly. And never, ever, ever apologise for "over" updating there is no such thing! And agin with the cliffy, you're lucky I love you...



Author's Response:

I was worried about that so thank you! LOL I would be too. I'm just worried about the quality of the story, I don't know, today I've been feeling unsure of myself. Ha! Love you too.

Reviewer: Skarsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:29 AM Title: Blood Older Than The World

Anborn is my new favorite character! How in the hell are you writing three chapters in one day? Not that I'm complaining...:)



Author's Response:

I like him too! I have nothing but time on my hands you know. I hope you like what I do with it. Thanks for all your awesome reviews!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 8:46 PM Title: Nearly A Perfect Day

She is a demanding little thing isn't she. I like her spunk. She should be scared to death and cowering in a corner but she's not she's a fighter (& I have a feeling she resembles her author). Another goodie, laters.

Author's Response:

Yah she is. I hope not too bitchy, I don't like doing strident females. LOL yeah I'm a fighter, thanks I hope to hear from you again.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 7:27 PM Title: A Visitor

I truely am loving to read this very captivating & intriging story. This story is truely differnt story line than anything else written out there!!! Please keep up the awsome work & please keep up with ur frequent updates!!! I chek he 2x daily at least just to see if u updated this story I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Imatiently waiting for next chapter Update. I rate this story a 10 out of a #10.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:05 PM Title: A Visitor

So there just weren't enough sick fucks for ya, LOL. Imagining Sookie in the kitchen read and eating while listening to her captors fucking was both sad and funny (but I am a bit mental).



Author's Response:

Can there ever be enough? Lol. I thought that scene was sort of hilarious too. I love that you get my sense of humor.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:54 PM Title: "I'll Follow You Into The Dark"

It's good that you're putting more of yourself in this story, it makes it more realistic. I know it's based in part on supernatural beings but emotions are emotion no matter what you are. And I LOVE lemons but I am addicted to your stories for there charaters. Oh and way to go and drop a major detail (the mother's death & "a Plaugue") right at the end.



Author's Response:

Yeah it makes it more interesting for me too, more mine. So true, and thank you for saying that about my characters. Yeah that last bit surprised me, I've been wondering how she died. Thanks for all your kick ass reviews!

Reviewer: Kat2569 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:45 PM Title: A Visitor

Hello I just started reading your stories and I'm really enjoying them !! I get all excited waiting for the next chapter !!!!!! Lol 



Author's Response:

Yay! I love getting new readers, glad you are enjoying them~ Then tenth chapter will be up later today. Thanks for reviewing~

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:43 PM Title: Shut Softly Your Watery Eyes

Eric is in a "relationship" with Thomas well isn't that unexpected now in my humble opion I think Jason is jealous of Thomas not because of the sex but the perceived intamicay Eric may share with Thomas , am I right, am I right? Oh never mind don't tell me I'll like surprises. I like like your sex scenes, they are very easy to visaulize, I don't know how you write them at all, I can imagine a sex scene all day every day but to puy it on paper (so to speak) is a talent I don't not posses. The last bit with Sookie hear the ocean speaking to her so eerie spot on, it gave me goose flesh. Better go now I have three more chapters to read.



Author's Response:

You're correct as usual dear. Yay! I've felt really self consious about them ever since that review but I'm over it. I adore your reviews they are like the best present ever. I just finsihed the tenth chapter which I'll post later today. I'm hoping to write another one before I get drunk. Thanks again, you're the best~ Oh I wanted to tell you that besides Sophi you are my favorite reviewer.



Author's Response:

You're correct as usual dear. Yay! I've felt really self consious about them ever since that review but I'm over it. I adore your reviews they are like the best present ever. I just finsihed the tenth chapter which I'll post later today. I'm hoping to write another one before I get drunk. Thanks again, you're the best~ Oh I wanted to tell you that besides Sophi you are my favorite reviewer.

Reviewer: Skarsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: "I'll Follow You Into The Dark"

Wow what a fantastic chapter, my favorite one yet. Very emotional and introspective. It seems that letting go of your worries allowed you get to back to the matter at hand of writing a good story and develop the characters to a much greater extent. Keep up the good work...(and I like your dark lemons for what it's worth). 



Author's Response:

Wow what a fantastic review! I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah I get so self concious sometimes from a bad review but then I just have to remember that everyone is entitled to thier opionions and its whether I'm proud of it or not that matters. Thanks I'll do my best, and I appreciate that:) Love your reviews!



Author's Response:

Wow what a fantastic review! I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah I get so self concious sometimes from a bad review but then I just have to remember that everyone is entitled to thier opionions and its whether I'm proud of it or not that matters. Thanks I'll do my best, and I appreciate that:) Love your reviews!

Reviewer: aangputi Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: "I'll Follow You Into The Dark"

Please don't second guess your writing based on a review.  Your characters are so complex.  The sex scenes you write are enough in this story because there is more going on then just that aspect.  I've always admired your writing and would be sad if you changed how you felt a story should go because of a criticism.  



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate that sentiment as I try to give them layers. I really loved this review, it brightened my whole day. Thanks+)

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 12:37 PM Title: "We Can Always Smell It"

A slow moving chapter but I like those it lulls you into a false sense of security. Sookie is their slave & only their for enjoyment but sometimes they seem to want to please them but then again the love inflicting pain on her very conflicting but in a good way conflict is never boring.

Author's Response:

It was I suppose,  I never have any control over how the chapter will progress. Yes she is thier slave but something tells me they care very deeply for her. I love writing conflict and feel grateful that I'm half way decent at it. Thanks for all you awesome reviews! This story is breaking my heart for some reason, in a way that Blue didn't. It confuses me sort of, as I didn't think I could ever write another superantual story again much less care about it. I love you and your support for this story+)

Reviewer: Skarsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 3:26 AM Title: Tenderly Cruel

I'm enjoying the vampire characters and the endless possibilities this can open the door to. I love the unique "powers" you give to your supes...Your other stories with supernatural abilities are always fun and surprising. This setting is nice and creepy too. I hope you get inspired by this story because it's great, and I am personally wishing you continue the Song of Steel and Silk (I loved that tormented Eric). 



Author's Response:

Me too actually. People have been asking me for ages to do a supernatural story and I finally caved. Thanks, the powers are fun to come up with. Yes the setting is almost like a character in and of its self. I'm getting there thanks to kick ass reviews like this. I'm on the fence about Steel as I recently got blasted by a ton of people over it. So I will probably be deleting that or giving it a final chapter soon. Thanks for this review, you rock!

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 3:19 AM Title: Tenderly Cruel

“We hurt them before they can want us", that is all sorts of scary creepy as well as insiteful. I was thinking maybe they don't want to give her their blood because they don't want her fall in love with them? Thanks for the new chapter & I hope your Thankgiving was good! 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that line. That's not why, but good guess, I will reveal why at some point. You're welcome and it was good, hope the same for you! Thanks for all your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: missie12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:39 AM Title: His Face Like An Eclipse

I would like more detail in the love/rape scenes they just seem choppy and rushed sometimes.  Also if they broke all those bones she should be feeling more pain.  That being said I am a big fan and love your writing, please don't take offence.

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 12:51 PM Title: His Face Like An Eclipse

For someone who doesn't like writing supernatural you're doing it well. I am very curious to what comes next as always I hunger for more backstory. I was surprised they raped her so early I would have thought they would savior her virgin blood longer. Waiting (im)patiently for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I think I love you, lol. Thank you, but I feel like a new born calf writing this story, its just so different. I love writing backstory so don't worry on that account. I was surprised too, I don't know why that happened, maybe because I felt that the story was getting too vanilla. I had to reassure myself that I could make this story dark as fuck. I will update as soon as possible. Thanks for another wonderful review!

Reviewer: Nordiclover Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 8:48 PM Title: "He Let Me Down"

What a great story....

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:55 PM Title: "He Let Me Down"

Sookie's taking this all in stride. I like them all just talking learning more about their  empire lore. 

Reviewer: marebare1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:46 PM Title: "No Higher Than A Dumpster"

This feels different to me but a good different I don't feel like you're repeating yourself. They are much more controlled (so far at least) than the captors in Blue. Well you have me interested. Read ya later. 

Reviewer: olleyberry2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:43 PM Title: The Begining

Very interesting so far I cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 11:19 PM Title: The Begining

cant wait for more.

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