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Reviewer: KCPup1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hilarious! The way you wrote Mason's inner-dialog was not only funny but great. You did an amazing job writing from the man's POV. It was so believable, like how a man would actually think. I also like how Bella went from shy girl to temptress through out the 'shoot'. All in all it was a great read. Thank you.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

Fate, destiny, karma, take your pick. It all leads to the two of them together, as it was intended. Hot Shot, hot story!

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story and hot too

Reviewer: Cinaxoxo99 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

O! I loved it! I would so love it if you turned this into a full story i reckon it'd be super funny, sweet, and oh so hot! 

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay! That was totally the hottest photo session that I've ever read. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg you set this up for muliti chapter. Interesting that Alice was who she was. I like this story alot I hope you continue on with it. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh yes, I loved this!  feisty, tasty, sexy, smart, lovely short story!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it!!!!!! 

Reviewer: tinarandal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this. I have tried to read it with the link that came in the email alert for days but it kept saying the story was unavailable due to not being validated by the administrators of this site. I finally went to your profile and pulled it up that way. I don't know what the issue was but it might explain any delays in people reading it. 

I loved all the humor and sexy times.  Great story. And I loved the twist at the end. See ya next time you post. :)



Author's Response:

Well that's weird... thank you for being persistent!  So glad you enjoyed it.  I'd almost forgot I'd written it since it was back in the summer...lol.  

Probably going to be another month or so before I get back to Wallflower writing.  I need to wrap up my manuscript for the publishing house and then do the charity piece I signed up for ~ Toys for Tots.  But then I plan to get Wallflower wrapped up before I pull back from fanfic writing and focus on my original works.

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: Lost In Fanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love this one shot.  Surprise ending for me :)



Author's Response:

haha...yay!  Glad I could surprise ya! Thanks for reading!

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks darlin' ;)

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

I liked it! Great O/S! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wrote it back during the summer and had almost forgotten about it...lol.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Once again, you have come up with a delightful little story that reminds me of all the reasons you are one of my favorite authors. This Masen just made me smile. He was such a typical single man.... turning his underwear inside out... using a Lunchables as appetizers... so adorable! I loved his inner monologue, too! I just wanted to squeeze him to pieces! The twist at the end was great. (and we know you sent Alice off to Kinko's so she will hook up with Jasper!)

Great story, Bella. Thanks so much for sharing your awesomeness with us.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Such awesome words sophdrea... thanks so much!  I'm glad I had a little something to give you guys since I've been so busy working on the book that I haven't had time for fanfiction writing!

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was great. Love from behind the lense.



Author's Response:

:D Thanks for reading and enjoying! So glad you liked it.

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Nice, didn't see the landlady being Alice! Perfect twist.
I liked read each of their dreams coming closer to fruition.
Any thoughts on continuing? So much left to be discovered about your characters.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I never say never, but I will say unlikely on continuing this.  My fanfiction writing is slowing down (but I've logged over 30 stories! lol) while I work on my original projects.  Once I get TSID off to the pub house editor, I need to write my toys4tots compilation piece and finish Wallflower ~ after that, any fanfics will most likely be just for charity causes.

 

xoxo,

texasbella

Reviewer: catvet1999 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was super hot and great!  Loved every minute of it.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!  Glad you enjoyed it xoxo

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this story the first time I read it, and still do hun. well done :) 



Author's Response:

mwah!!  thanks LIsa ~ love you.

Reviewer: lgk311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a fun story and I never put it together that Alice was his landlady.  And I loved his silent commentary, like he knew we were all "out there" looking over his shoulder, and felt the need to make sure we "got" it.  Nice twist all around there.  :-)   Linda 



Author's Response:

Thanks Linda, it was fun to let loose and do something a little silly.  Hehe. Glad you liked it.

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your E&B stories are always my favorite!!!
So what's this about a book? What is it about?
Post all the deets please. Do you have a website?

Author's Response:

Hahaha... thank you so very much. You've been a great reader!!   

And yes, I have a book in the works... well, 4 actually...lol.

Sugar & Spice ( http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/16149432-sugar-spice ) will be released December 11th as part of a 4 book anthology.  The full anthology will be available in print & ebook while the individual stories will be ebook only.  This one is a YA holiday romance about a single mom who finally finds love.

My big project however is The Divine Trilogy.  I pulled To Serve Is Divine and the outtakes after I was approached by a publishing house about it.  I've been working like a crazy lady to rewrite it.  Names are changed, setting, personalities & characteristics, even point of view...the published version will be third instead of first.  Book 1 is tentatively scheduled for release on Jan. 22, followed by book 2 in June/July and book 3 in January of 2014. 

My author site is http://www.rehargrave.com/

My FB author page is https://www.facebook.com/REHargrave

My twitter is @REHargrave

So, you can follow me at one or all to get teasers and updates!!

xoxo,

tb aka R.E. Hargrave ;)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing!

Your work is brilliant as always!



Author's Response:

Mwah!!  I truly appreciate your kind words!!

xoxo

texabella

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Thank you for that tasty lemon drop! Yummy goodness!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, darlin'!  Thanks for reading. 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

just what I needed darlin! that was so cute & pics were *jaw drops* effin amazing! you NEVER let us down, your brilliantly wicked mine is a better than, well a lot! thanks darlin!!!  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

TWCS was being a butt and wouldn't let me add the pics like I usually do, so I figured I'd just include the PDF...lol.  Thank you so much for all of your continued support over the years!  I know I've been crazy busy with my original stuff, so I was glad I had the opportunity to put something out for all of you to enjoy in my downtown.  I'll be finishing my book and getting it off to the editorial team in the next couple of days and then I have to do my toys4tots compilation piece and finish Wallflower before I dive into book 2 of the trilogy.

 

xoxo

texasbella

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Debbi, xoxo!

Reviewer: mdsngrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seriously almost peed my pants laughing so hard at him.  Hilarious!!  The Lunchables thing was so freaking funny.  I do believe I am going to be reading this over and over and over again.  ;)



Author's Response:

:D  Best review ever!!!  Thanks darlin'!

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Sue2265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story. Loved it. 



Author's Response:

Appreciate it darlin' ;)

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

thank you

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