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Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sweet, irreverent and surprising. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my Edward! Well he's already got mommy involved with Bella... I am loving this story so far. It's got some plot and not too much sex.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love how sweet Edward was with Liam

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ok Liam is going to have Edward wrapped around his little fingers. He's already won my heart and we're only 3 chapters in. ha ha I can see Edward buying Bella a bed since it looks like he may just be stopping by any time to mess up the sheets. A twin size bed or air mattress just won't do. Thanks so much for the daily updates.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is he paying for escort services too?

Great writing

Reviewer: katie0422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

cant wait to see what esme does

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

EDWARD IS SO GOING TO FALL IN LOVE WITH LIAM AND BELL. but is going to fight it. fool that he is !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 3

Is Edward falling for Bella or is it just a business arrangement?  Now that Esme knows about Bella and Liam how will that go?  Does Esme know that Edward pays for sex?  Being a parent you would do anything for your child and Bella is doing just that and all by herself.  What she is doing may not be right in publics eye but when you need to feed and have shelter for your child you can't say you wouldn't do certain things because honestly until you are in that situation you don't know.  I know this is just a story but I would do anything for my children's well being as long as it wasn't dangerous to me or my kids.  I love this story and can't wait till the next update!

 

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

He is falling for Bella!
It really is a bit bossy, but I think after everything that Bella now, it's good to have someone to care for her.
Kisses.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

J'aime beaucoup et tes citrons sont très bien, j'aime quand ils ne sont pas trop "descriptifs".

Edward est charmant et je crois que Bella va être gâtée avec lui.

Il aime bien Liam.

Merci.

Reviewer: Findjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 3

love where this is headed!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

Really really good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Dirty, old man.....or just a man who wants sex with no strings attached?

i think it's probably going to turn out to be the latter.

:-)

Reviewer: pindrop Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2

i thought edward was like 30. hmmm. Doesn't matter had sex. lol great job can't wait for more.

Reviewer: katie0422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 2

can't wait for more

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

That was pretty hot. When she thought to herself " I remember it lasting longer" it made me laugh. 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow I couldn't ever imagine going to my friend and telling her about a job like this. ha ha But then I've never been in their situation. I can see where Bella would be desperate enought to do just about anything though. Have a feeling she's really going to love this job. 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow that is crazy shit! I bet he feels something already. Hehehehe.

Reviewer: xoxokristen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

interesting story, i can't wait for more!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

!!!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

More please

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward sees what he likes so he wants more.

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE THE STORY SO FAR.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bon chapitre !

J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

Merci.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

That was hot!
I love your stories, I read them in FF.
It makes me sad to know that you will pause, but I imagine that writing takes a lot of time.
Kisses.

Reviewer: princessjustine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love it!!! I am so excited that you are updating everyday!!!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really good

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved  it cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Je pense que cette histoire va me plaire !

Merci.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

tough being a single mom and they go to great legnths to take care of their child

i wish she would ask for help from her parents but i guess she has  her reasons

well i hope things work out for bella so she can get ahead and take care of liam

looking forward tot he next encounter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome start. Can't wait for more. Do we really have to wait until Monday to meet Edward. :( *pouts*

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

How much older is Edward? Man I wonder what his deal is?

Reviewer: pindrop Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

Where is liam's dad so i can kick his ass! lol sorry i know it's just a story still i feel so bad for bella. I can't not wait to read more.

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: vicki123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fab start, cannot wait to read more.. :-)

 

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds interesting and sad poor thing life is not working out like the dreams she had.

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow what a great first chapter.. Can't wait for more..

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