Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
I liked this. I'm glad we got to see a little more of them getting to know each other and for us to see why she's falling for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
C'est loin demain...
Bon j'aime ce chapitre, Edward est un gagnant mais Bella va peut-être gagner Edward ! Non ?
Merci
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I have fallen in love with this story! Thanks so much for sharing.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
OK Edward, you're going to have to appologize big time! PS Love Liam. Thank you, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
Dinner scene with Edward charming. Exactly 18 years Bella and Edward-38? Not vice versa?
Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you. Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
No bad guys except Jacob?
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good we all need fluff!!!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is new for Edward
Date: 07 Nov 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
great chapter
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
why is she thinking negatively, Is it not what she wants.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wann hear wedding bells!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yay 2 in a day (again) your spoiling us. I'm totally ok with a "feel good" story sometimes it's refreshing to not have to fear the heartfail :0)
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm wonder what Edwards story is... why didn't Esme just let Jesica keep talking? ha ha I guess I'll just have to wait for him to tell Bella himself.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I can't WAIT to hear what Jake has to say for himself. This is a great story!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
He just cant stay away from her. There age difference is not a problem with his family that is a good thing.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really love this story, especially Edwards attitude!! Thanks for being respectful to your readers and complete a story before posting. Too many writers aband their story and leave the readers hanging. Thanks again for a great story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Merci d'avoir mis un chapitre si rapidement, j'aime cette histoire !
Edward trouve un travail pour Bella, c'est vraiment une bonne chose.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to more
Date: 07 Nov 2012 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
So sweet his family loves her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Penso che la famiglia di Edward in aute pieno dopo questo incontro con Bella e Liam. Campana è una vera donna - una capanna ardente, cavallo naskaku stop.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
J'aime bien ce chapitre !
Esmé, Jess, Emilie et Bella font connaissance !
Edward est un peu énervé !
Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
I like this Jess. She seems pretty nice. And Esme is as welcoming as ever too. No way anyone could not love little Liam. Can't wait to here about Edwards past. Looking forward to the next update.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to mroe
Date: 07 Nov 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
thank you. Of course, it had to be him!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
what a jerk! I really hate jake. I was really hoping edward was going to kick his ass, but i know he is way to classy for that. love this can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
You just brought the crazy in. And made the couple official! Woot!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the family chart. I needed it!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Interestingly, Nessie will be friend or foe for Bella? Victim or Jake?
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow thanks so much for the second update. Yep I had a feeling the boyfriend would be Jake. At least he seems to still be a jerk so there shouldn't be any attempts by him to get back with Bella. I'm so happy that Edward wants to try to be together with Bella I know people in real life that have a bigger age gap than your Edward and Bella and they are happily married even after 20 something years.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forweard to mroe
Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter
Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
controling edward i like
Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is the best he did good by Bella. Jacob is a bastard.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jacob the douche is going to show up??? How is Bella or better yet how is Edward going to react to this.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you!! Two chapters in one day was great.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
I had a feeling :-)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
Mon Dieu ! Pauvre Bella !
Rencontre avec Jacob, j'espère qu'Edward veut rester avec Bella.
Liam est tout mignon.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Jake is a disgusting pig!!
Well that E and B are trying.
Love for Liam.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
En tout cas bon chapitre !
Bella est un peu intimidée comme Liam !
Alors Edward est heureux ?
Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really love your story!!!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story. Hurry back with more. I would love to see what happened after they left. Poor poor duckweed jake. Had to see his son.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG! Boyfriend Ness is Jake!? This will be perfect, Edward will be insanely jealous.
Kisses.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. I love this Edward..Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow that's quite the family. I like big faimiles my husband is one of 8 so it's always fun when we can all get together. I'm feeling nervous for Bella. I'm afraid that Nessies's new guy friend is going to be Jake. Hold on tight Edward I think your in for quite a ride. :0) Still love love love Liam
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is an awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to find out if Nessie's new boyfriend is Jake. On the edge of my seat waiting.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Let me just say that your story "Always On My Mind" is a favorite of mine so when I read in your notes that you had a new story starting, I knew I had to read it. I'm glad I did because it's really good. Liam is as cute as he can be. I'm glad that Edward is so caring and good to him. I feel there is a reason in his past that makes him act this way with him, but what do I know. I also have a feeling that the douche bag Nessie is bringing home is Jacob. I can't wait for the next update to see if I'm right.
Thanks, Maria
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Drunk driving killer. Bella umnichka. She has everything under control. He sat behind the wheel - a drop of alcohol. It seems that in this pair, despite the money, the leader is Bella. Edward or she just lets it?
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh MY GOD! The douchebag is going to be Jacob. Can't wait to see Edward's reaction! Love it!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to the next chapter i have a feeling who the duche bag is
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Like the story, deff. going to follow:). I'm little bit cautious to read fic. with just few chp. But i gave this one a go, when i saw that you update regulary. Keep writing, and i'll keep reading;).
Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh he'll I'm hooked!!!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
I to fell in love with Fold Your Wings, but haven/t seen an update in forever. Thank YOU for the promise of a finish to this wonderful story. Hard to get enthralled in a story and not see it finished. Liam is a doll and I love the VERY young pic of Bella in your banner. It helps to picture her so young. She did great in that movie by the way! Looking forward to dinner at the Cullens. Sorry for any mistakes in this review. Typing with a broken finger. Lots of love sent your way, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
The plot thickens. I think Edward is falling hard for both Liam and Bella. Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it he has feelings for her he didnt expcet ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for such a strong Bella and this "thrifty" Edward. Thank you for this very, surprisingly tender story (story?)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
He wants her. He so wants her! How long will it take to see that? Can't wait to find out.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yea these two are going to have it rough
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter.
They're already falling for each other
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
J'aime ce chapitre ! Edward lui a proposé un travail.
C'est très agréable à lire et j'ai encore hâte de lire la suite.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
They realize now that this relationship is more than sex?
I think when Edward realize how much is involved he will be so angry.
I hope that Liam did not get hurt.
More, please.
Kisses.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
No emotions, yeah right. ha ha
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonder how this will work out. He really oversteped his boundaries here. I think I know why he doesn't want her to work, but he went about it all wrong by getting her fired. All that stuff aside he's so sweet with Liam. That makes me smile.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward tom ore
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love your possessiveward, he really wants to control your life, in and out of bed.
Kisses.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I can feel Bella wants to hand Edward his ass! So loving this story! I get so excited when I get updates.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love Liam! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is a very interesting story.I like how you portrayed Bella.It`s very easy to understand why she is doing what she is doing and as a reader I can`t help but to sympathize with her.I hope she will find her happiness near Edward.Keep writing.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
can't wait for more this is getting really really good!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
He wants to control and take care of her I dont think she is going to take it very well.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story. Can't wait for Eward's point view and why he is that way.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wahou ! Edward est très autoritaire et il a fait virer Bella de son travail, ce n'est pas gentil...
Il aurait dû lui parler un peu plus de ce qui le dérangeait, elle va être en colère contre lui maintenant.
Evidemment je voudrais vite lire la suite.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter..I love how Edward is with Liam.. I also love a posesive Edward so I really enjoyed this chapter.Can't wait for more
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Controlling Edward!!!! Mmmm
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this story! Thanks for the update.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to mroe
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
A little afternoon delight with Edward!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Things are off to a good start ;)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more