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Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16

Merci pour ce chapitre !

Je pense que Jacob va renoncer à ses droits sur Liam.

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

Jake really is an idiot!
He rubs the face of how Bella likes Nessie, no regrets for all the suffering that Bella did pass, shows no real interest in Liam, just give it to Edward.Gostaria that Edward Bella socasse.Ainda criticism by departing from their parents.
I loved how Edward was only support.
Kisses.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love that Jake signed the papers without any hassle.. I just hope that he doesn't somehow cause any problems in the future.. Is she pregnant by any chance with all the tiredness???

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bon ça ne va pas trop bien entre eux mais j'ai confiance ça va s'arranger !!!

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yes please

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

Well hopefully he won't kick up a storm about any of it.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

So is she knocked up? Sounds like it. Or she is pmsing really bad. Funny enough they have similar signs.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

I love Alice even more Jake should be nutless.  I cant wait for tomorrow 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

lookingforward to more 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait for more please update ASAFP.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 15

He is being a bit over possesive and wants it all his way he has a lot to learn.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait for that conversation...

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yes another chapter would be great. Lol, great chapter btw

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

yes please!! Great chapter

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Will Bella pregnant?
Living together is really very laborious, requires effort and maturity.
Often makes you want to drop everything, but then you have to sit
and enter into an agreement with the other party.
The two are being immature, Bella is young, but Edward should have seen the difficulties.
More chapters, please.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

absolutely!!!!  please i'm begging!

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

love this story

Reviewer: beezy0563 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

yes yes yes 

Reviewer: MistySummer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yes would love another chapter.  I am so engrossed in this story, that I can't wait to get to the end.  I have a feeling that Bella might just be pregnant with her being so tired.  I can't wait to see if I'm right.  

BTW I hardly ever start reading an uncompleted story, but this one caught my attention, and it is holding it.  This is an excellent story.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

They're on a sharp learning curve. they have to get used to each other and Liam too.

I hope he's come to take her to lunch so they can talk.

Yes, yes, yes, please?

Reviewer: angelburt84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

well of course I would I love the story

Reviewer: maddyrodg Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

UPDATE TODAY PLEASSSSE

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: anjalovesyou Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yes love à update again today 

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 15

another chapter ??? yessssssssssssss please. i am loving this story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 15

looking forweard to more 

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am sooooo in love with this story & look forward to more. I only came across it today & I'm totally hooked. Thank you for sharing...eagerly anticipating the next instalment, until then, take care

~ Helen.

Reviewer: Lotus1011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm officially hooked! Can't wait for the next update :)

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

me gusta :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward hasn't thought this all out yet

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

Liam is so cute!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

Daddy huh? :-)

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

sweet

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 14

He's not going to be happy.

Good story

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

great chapter

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Je crois que Bella a besoin d'une voiture !!!

Bon chapitre, merci.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Yes, she needs a car, but I hope she has her phone on her because Edward will blow a gasket if he comes home to an empty house.  LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it :)

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

yay another update :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved the sweetness

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Edward is going to freak out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was the sweetest thing ever I love that the I love yous are out for all of them.

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

This is such a feel good story. I love it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yay! It's a family! I'm so happy!

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. SO SWEET.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

:-)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

J'adore, j'adore, c'est très très mignon.

Merci.

Reviewer: pierard85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

amazing chapter

thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love the baby talk, I so miss that in my house, my kids are all teenagers and the language is far sickly sweet. Liam is too cute.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes, but I pray that Li don't get hurt out of this.

Reviewer: Lantus123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

Stick to Jake, cant wait to see

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

can't wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

J'adore cet Edward !!!

Merci pour ce bon chapitre

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

Say yes!say yes! Please.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor little Liam.

Great chapter

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ok, Edward your the man, tell her you love her!  You obviously love them and to Li you're all the daddy he knows.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love this!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 12

How sweet is he and he want to be his daddy now he needs to tell her.  Please update soon so good cant wait for more

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Just find myself grinning like an idiot after reading your story.  It is just so darn cute!  Thank you and lol, Cheri

Reviewer: Delvik Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

They say that sex is not a reason for dating. But, there were two good people and .... there was a reason. The author is absolutely right to select a range of ages of heroes. Each of them in each other get what dopoluchil not in real life. Thank you.    

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12

love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are truely are an amazingly talented writer!!! There hasn't been 1 story of your's that hasn't captivated me intriguied, which keeps me waiting expectantly for the next update!!! I rate all your stories I have read as #10!!! Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication!!!

smileya987

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

Sweet they talked

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Women be bitches. Man why do that to a man. Poor Edward.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful!

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

I am glad he didnt have  aproblem telling her what happened he is opening up to her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Edward. Glad he's found Bella and Liam 

Reviewer: Angie8776 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well you can't really continue to think a baby is yours when it has a different color skin can you? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Edwards story is so sad...but, he did exact revenge, fear!    I like time jumps...some stories are 18 chapters long and it was like 4 days!  I love this story -maybe because I'm old and angst is not my thing.  Looking forward to the next installment.  Thanks.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 11

Merci, j'ai bien aimé ce chapitre avec l'explication d'Edward.

J'aime que tout soit bien entre eux.

Merci.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 11

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

There is no way they are going to split they are in love

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

I LOVE YOUR EDWARD!

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

sweet

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

I think these two are awesome together. They could make more babies!

Reviewer: LannyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love your story so much! It always puts a smile on my face. :)

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Only now realizes that Bella fell in love!
This story is so beautiful.
I just love a possessiveward.

Reviewer: pindrop Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 10

boys bake... lol great job i can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Neat story!  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

She's such a pessimist.

Will Jake turn up for the party?

 

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is cute.  :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

He is kind of pushy :-)

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

Another great chapter

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