[Report This]Date: 30 May 2016 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
very good
Date: 13 Aug 2014 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great story! Loved it. Your are a great writer, this is the 3rd story i've read and they are all great.
Date: 13 Aug 2014 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
OKAY is this win a ghost?
Date: 13 Aug 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow her parents are real jerks!!
Date: 13 Aug 2014 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aw, Edward is so cut with Liam. Love the story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
awesome story thanks for posting it ;)
Date: 29 Jul 2014 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
why did you give him blue eyes?
Date: 24 Nov 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
great loved it
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my I will laugh if jake and nessie r together
Date: 18 Jan 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Amazing - Just love this story!!!!
Date: 18 Jan 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
So excellent. I always love reading one of your stories!!!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm gonna bet Edward gets really pissed about this...
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
That one was "awwww" worthy! great job.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope you had that posted in front of you when you were writing! I do love the mix-up you gave us with the family. Great job.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jesus...that's a lot of people to keep track of in one room! Good job!
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
He's so screwed! The kid loves him.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
He's a bossy one, isn't he? I do love a commanding man! Love the story. Suck at reviewing, but I'll try for you! SK
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, great start. I can see the situation happening from both view points. Alice is a good friend to help and watch Liam.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
I so enjoyed reading your story. You did a great job writing it. I am glad that everything worked out for everyone. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
I can not believe that Charlie and Renee just showed up. Glad that Jake backed Bella. Happy that Edward finally asked her to marry him.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can not believe that Bella's parents were acting like that. They did not even ask how Bella was. I am so glad that Jake stood up to his parents and Bella's.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am so happy that Jake did not make any trouble for Edward and Bella.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that Edward and Bella talked.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
They both need to learn to talk to each other. Good communcation!!!!!!
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ok, what was the deal with the man checking if Bella was still there????
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
LOVED that they finally told each other that they loved one another. I can not wait to read about the Sunday dinner and what Jacob is going to do when Liam calls Edward daddy.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love that Edward took the time out of his busy day as CEO and stayed with Liam even after Bella got back from her lunch break and that he went to the dr.'s appt with them. I knew that Liam was going to ask about the DADDY thing.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Finally, we find out!!!!!!!! I am so glad that they talked and Edward told her about his past.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE LOVE LOVE seeing them as a family.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
I want to know what happened to Edward long ago!!!!!!!!! I am glad that Esme and the girls accepted Bella. Loved that Liam called Esme Nana too. How sweet.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love all the interaction with Liam. I like that Bella was honest with Edward's family. I got tickled that Bella did not take any crap off of Edward when he called and hung up on him.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
I knew it was going to be Jacob. I hope to goodness that Jacob does not want to be a part of Liam's life. That would be really weird.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMGosh!!!! Let me guess Nessie date/boyfriend is Jacob!!!!!!!!! Carlisle said that he had not seen Edward that happy in ten years. What happened 10 years??
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love reading the interaction with Edward and Liam. Love that Esme went up and over Edward's head and got in touch with Bella. lol
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is very possessive. I can't believe that Edward called Bella's boss and had her fired. That was just wrong. Hope Bella gives him a piece of her mind.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love that Edward is taking time with Bella's little boy. Glad that Liam likes Edward too. I love reading stories that have children in them.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward seems nice. What did he mean...This could end badly?????
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOOKKKK!!!!!! This is different!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, short and sweet, I like it.
Thanks for a good simple story, it had everthing.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
great ending
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
I did love this story. Thank you.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you I enjoyed this story
Date: 15 Nov 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great story sad it is over but loved the way it ended Thanks. Have a great break and will be looking forward to your new story.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
cute ending
Date: 15 Nov 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Goodbye and thanks for a nice ride.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the story, I still want to kick Jake, he is very selfish!
I'll miss you, and I will be anxious for the next story.
kisses :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
J'ai bien aimé cette fiction !
Le teaser de la prochaine histoire me plaît, je la lirai avec plaisir !
Donc à bientôt.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
That teaser was good.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was pretty decent of him, I hope he keeps being a good guy from now on
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Merci, j'ai aimé ce chapitre bien qu'il n'y ait que des catastrophes !!!
Ah non il y a la demande d'Edward.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to the epi
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love the marriage proposal... I am also glad to see that Bella didn't give in to her parents in this chapter..
Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
That's what happens with kids in the house!
Good story
Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yikes! What a day :-)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow. The swans had the nerve to show up. Poor Bella. Well at least she gets her man.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think that child lives with me lol.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. He did do the right thing. And he didn't let them try to make him fight it. Growing up a little.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
I found this story yesterday. I love it. I love your quick updates. So glad that Jacob finally did the right thing.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
can't wait for more chapters
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh edward so sexy more sexual moments oh maybe he can down on bella
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
keep going i can't stop reading only bathroom breaks and water
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! JUST 4 I'M SURE THIS STORY CAN GO ON AND REACH AT LEAST100 IF YOU TRIED OR MAYBE A SEQUEL?
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
i really like what you are putting into this story.
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
i love this story i actually lived this way myself about 39 years ago
Date: 13 Nov 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
Date: 13 Nov 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
looking forward to mroe
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
OK so he is not a bad guy now he wants her to be happy
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, his family and ex-boyfriend are lixo.Jake is so insensitive
which showed that only cares about Nessie, Jake is a selfish pig who does not deserve to be a father!
He must envy the happiness of Edward, Bella and Jake, and lament over all that lost.
Kisses.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Those families suck
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
Jacob se conduit bien ! Il défend Bella et Edward devant ses parents et devant les parents de Bella. Je trouve les parents de Bella horribles.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Way to go Jake! I don't say that often. I love the way this story is flowing, but Edward has to take a chill pill every so often! Thanks for the updates.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Congratulations, Jacob! That's maturity speaking. :)
Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
oooh Bellas not gonna be happy - she didnt want her parents knowing anything - looks like Mr fuckup strikes again !!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm I just wonder what Charlie and Renee are gonna do now??? I would love to see Edward and Bella turn both of them down if and when they decide to come visit and see her and Liam...
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward est le papa d Liam, c'est parfait !
Alors mariage ou pas mariage entre ces deux là ?
Date: 13 Nov 2012 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
loveing the story cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cool! Thanks!!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love you thanks for the third update to day I was so excited. Jacob is an idot
Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's a nice story
Date: 13 Nov 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you for updating daily and giving the extra 2 today. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jake signed his rights away then asked to get to know his son...Nessie should dump him now.
Thank-you for the extra chapters.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
What a releif! That had the potential to be a very bad situation but I think it went very well. I'm glad Jake did the right thing.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awwww thanks for the updates, much love to you...I look forward to the next few chapters, but at the same time, I don't want this fun ride to be over!!! Take care & until next time...
~ Helen.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
I have a feeling that the Swans are coming soon...i can see the ripples in the water. Jake was more than agreeable, thank goodness! thanks for all the updates today.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah. Love when everyone tries to be the good guy after the damage has been done but turned their backs when they were needed.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
sweet chapter
Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to more