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Reviewer: Emo4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2021 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, I  am shocked that after Bella loses her viginity just 3 weeks earlier, Jasper would think she would be up for a 3 or 4 some. He went about it all wrong. Why not have a conversation about it, nope he just brings in 2 people she doesn't know and is surprised by her reaction. I normally like poly stories with P,B,J&C. However in this context it was just wrong I'm glad Bella said no, and in a big way

 Like go ahead but you will lose your mate. I'm proud she stood up for herself.

Thank you for sharing your story. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

i love dominant japer plus the blood play was deftront and i like what she said  to edward



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the one shot. I wasn't too sure what others would think of it. a lot of the stories i am putting up are old or older thn the ones that are incomplete.

 

The blood play? Well, they are vampires after all. this way they can feed and play. 'blood play' lol

I know, i am twisted at itmes.

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