Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story was getting good u should finish it
Date: 19 Aug 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm this is different I like it
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
At least they know that they have there mothers apporval.
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Truly an interesting twist!
Author's Response:
I thought it was a little different I hop you will like it...
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
like it very interesting they need to sacrifice the prists what creeps. The dog likes Edward that shows he is a good guy.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture
lots of info on who is who good to know. sounds like fun I hope he likes a fisty wife :)
Author's Response:
I think all three guys had better like fiesty wives, the queen is also fiesty. Did you notice that Bellina's father is not king, Amazons are ruled by women so you no fiesty there.
Yeah I think that the Pontif and his priests had better watch it, they are really creepy.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
yeah sure i'd love to be your beta my email is sinisterthing@yahoo.com
Date: 22 Oct 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture
this has the potential to be a REALLY great story. but it has too many errors and it needs more visual, better sentence fluency, as well as better written dialogue. i really wanna read this but it is very hard to. great idea though.
Author's Response:
Would you like to be my beta...Why don't you read chapter 2 before you answer thank you for the constructive critiscim I will work on those areas...Deb
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture
You are bad, bad, bad! Update soooonnn!
Author's Response:
I Will like today...Deb