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Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

This story was getting good u should finish it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hmm this is different I like it 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2016 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

At least they know that they have there mothers apporval.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

Truly an interesting twist!



Author's Response:

I thought it was a little different I hop you will like it...stories/44076/images/00000a.JPG

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

like it very interesting they need to sacrifice the prists what creeps.  The dog likes Edward that shows he is a good guy.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture

lots of info on who is who good to know.  sounds like fun I hope he likes a fisty wife :)



Author's Response:

I think all three guys had better like fiesty wives, the queen is also fiesty. Did you notice that Bellina's father is not king, Amazons are ruled by women so you no fiesty there.

 

Yeah I think that the Pontif and his priests had better watch it, they are really creepy.

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

yeah sure i'd love to be your beta my email is sinisterthing@yahoo.com

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture

this has the potential to be a REALLY great story. but it has too many errors and it needs more visual, better sentence fluency, as well as better written dialogue.  i really wanna read this but it is very hard to. great idea though.



Author's Response:

Would you like to be my beta...Why don't you read chapter 2 before you answer thank you for the constructive critiscim I will work on those areas...Deb

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Capture

You are bad, bad, bad!  Update soooonnn!



Author's Response:

I Will like today...Deb

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