Date: 31 Jul 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 35
If I didn't know there was a sequel, I'd be dying right now. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the sequel :)
Date: 31 Jul 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
Good Lawd...I need a cool drink!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved what Emmett said to her!! So perfect. I also like the less serious side of Edward Jake seems to be drawing out. Can't wait for more.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well...blow me down (ha,ha). Great job.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow...they're making progress.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Jake...a slave to his imprint. I hope Edward gets on board with him. Thank you for sharing this great story!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, that poor baby! I'd love to give him a hug. Great job, Lady!
Date: 31 Jul 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 14
Things are progressing well! Love it.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Jasper. I hope they find him in time. Great job.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I knew he'd live...this story has 30-odd chapters, and it wouldn't be an E/J story if E died in chapter 9!! Well done!
Date: 30 Jul 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, poor Jacob!! How awful.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see how this one plays out! Great original idea!!
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
I loved this. Well, okay, so maybe not the ending -- it's still a bit raw to think about it from a writer's perspective yet. But the fic as a whole was beautiful. The slow-burn pace was perfect and so realistic and the reactions of both Jacob and Edward to the imprint were so in character. You wrote them and their relationship perfectly.
Now, I must go turn lights on. I've been sitting here in the dark for an hour because I didn't want to interrupt the story to get up.
Thank you so much for writing this. I can't wait to start on the sequel.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and found the characters realistic. Hope you will enjoy the other parts of the story :)
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
Looking forward to the sequel. im so sad though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, even though the ending was so sad. :)
Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 34
This was so sad . It broke my heart.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Such beautifil vows, igot all chocked up. Love this story.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's a relief!! :). Excited to read it!
Date: 12 Jan 2013 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, I'm at least happy Jacob took that bitch Kate with him. Please don't tell me they reattached her head! I really have enjoyed this story until the last two chapters which just made me sad. Since I'm indeed a glutton for punishment ;), I'll be sticking around for the sequel. It does sound intriguing. I'm crossing my fingers for a happy ending on the next one. :)
Believe me when I say, I am okay, just sad about the boys ending.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it apart from the sad ending. They will get their HEA in the sequel, I promise :) I'm hoping to get the first chapter posted tomorrow.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hey, my email is rivera.mia@gmail.com, I didn't type it correctly in the other review, you can also find me on ff as Mina Rivera.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 35
Oh! You are writing a sequel! THAT'S AWSOME!
This chapter however was heartbreaking, but I'm glad Jacob took down Kate, the bitch deserved to die.
Looking forward to reading the sequel!
xoxo
Mina
PS. Do you want me to make you a banner for the sequel? I could put something siple and pretty like the one I did for this one if you want me to. If you got any pictures you would like me to use, don't be afraid to email me: river.mia@gmail.com
Author's Response:
Hi Mina
I'm glad you liked the end, even if it was heart-breaking. I loved writing this story and had planned that there would be a sequel before I started.
I would LOVE it if you could make me a banner please, I was actually trying to PM you on here earlier but I couldn't get it to work. I'll look for some pictures later on today.
Thanks so much
Sarah
Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm so bummed!! :(
Author's Response:
Sorry it was such a sad one :( Bear with me. One more chapter, but as impossible as it seems, there is a sequel ;)
Date: 10 Jan 2013 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm still crying... oh Edward... oh Jacob... oh Jasper... *wails*
Nah, just kidding... I'm a very tough cookie, so don't worry.
Author's Response:
Glad you are a tough cookie - one last chapter to go and it will be very sad too :(
Date: 10 Jan 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMFG! YOU KILLED EDWARD!
YOU BASTARD!
And that was my South Park moment...
Damn, girl... a warning would have been nice, y'know?
You owe me a box of tissues... js.
Author's Response:
Oh dear, I'm sorry :( There was meant to be a warning as well, I had one on my Fanfic one but it didn't copy for some reason!
More tissues will be needed for Chapter 35, which will be the last one. :(
Thank you for reading.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 33
What a way to christen the new home!! ;)
Author's Response:
Hehe, the best way, I think! Thank you for reading :)
Date: 07 Jan 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
Now that's what I calla party. The alone part, not the one with all the people in the house... LOL
Mmm... I don't trust Kate, and honestly, I don't trust Rose either.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the private party ;)
Kate is definitely not one to be trusted! Hoping to have the next chapter up Thursday.
Sarah
Date: 06 Jan 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 32
Ugh, I really hate this Rosalie, I still don't trust her, I have no doubt she would turn her back on Edward and Jake the first chance she gets, that selfish bitch.
Can't wait to read happens next, the silence from teh Volturi has me worried, and lately I've been wondering if Alice is really dead... Rosalie was supposedly the one that saw her die, but did she really? what if the Volturi never burned her parts?
Or maybe I'm just reading too much into things...
Great chapter, hon.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for your reviews, glad you enjoyed the latest :)
The Volturi will make their presence know eventually, it's just a question of when ;) Alice really is dead though.
Next chapter should be out in the next couple of days :)
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well shit, that was like a bucket of cold water... damn, I'm not liking your Carlisle, and I'm usually all over his junk! LOL
Author's Response:
He is being a bit of a jerk, but he'll get over it - some of them on both sides take longer to come around to it than others ;)
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
Aw, that was perfect! Really, so happy they were able to share all that on their wedding night. I'm so happy for them!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed, I wanted them to have the perfect wedding night :)
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 31
The boys never seem to catch a break from the others except Jasper of course.
Author's Response:
They'll get a bit more support in the next chapter :)
Date: 04 Jan 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
Well, that was fun! :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, glad you enjoyed! ;)
Date: 04 Jan 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was beautiful!!
i totally missed this update until now. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 02 Jan 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved how Edward stood up to Carlisle!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you liked it :)
Date: 30 Dec 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
*swoon* That was perfect! :) Great job!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 28 Dec 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
awwwwwww loved it!!!!!!!!! simple and sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 27 Dec 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
NOOOOO YOU TOTALLY COCKBLOCK US!!! *wails*
Nah, just kidding. That was beautiful actually. Their vows were perfet and I'm so happy Jasper was there for them.
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read the next one!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. It was an awful place to leave it but I'm glad you enjoyed their wedding.
Wedding night in the next chapter; hopefully it won't be too long :D
Date: 23 Dec 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh, I like that you made the vampires less indestructible. So Paul has done a 180, adn Rose is gone for the moment. I can't wait to read what happens next! xoxo ~Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Glad you liked this chapter. I decided that if wolf teeth can hurt a vampire then a bullet would certainly at least crack them. Wherever it hit it wouldn't really do any damage, just cause pain, but Edward taking it certainly got Paul over his attitude problem :) Next chapter they will marry :D
Date: 23 Dec 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
I loved this chapter! Jake and Edward's love is so heartwarming. The way Jacob tried to keep Edward calm while Carlisle removed the bullet brought a smile to my face.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed this one. They will get married in the next chapter :)
Date: 23 Dec 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm so glad Edward is alright! I didn't think he'd be harmed, I liked how you changed it up. I'm also relieved Paul is finally laying off the boys!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. Wedding in the next one :)
Date: 21 Dec 2012 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well, the others were pretty upsetting with the way they spoke to Jacob about what he wants. The 3 vamps were awful to Jacob but I was worried he'd phase and kill one. I hope things will work out with Edward and Jacob's plans.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. The next couple of chapters will be much happier for Edward & Jacob :) Hopefully the next chapter will be out before Christmas.
Date: 21 Dec 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27
gotta love Jasper, the voice of reason and cupid himself, mr. emo man.....
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I was pleased to bring Jasper back into the story :)
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 26
awww together at last......
Author's Response:
Thank you for readng - glad you're enjoying it so far :)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
I really hope Paul doesn't bring trouble to Jake, that's the last thing he needs right now. And I wasn't expecting that little lemon zest at the end, but it was very wecomed! LOL
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Paul will pull himself together soon, promise! Glad you enjoyed the little lemon ;)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Paul disgusts me. Does he secretly want to be friends with a vampire or something because his hatred, when the Cullens have proved to be nothing but friendly, is odd and extremely misplaced. The rest of the pack is fine, but Paul continues to spew his hatred.
I'm glad Jake will be able to live at the Cullens and receive the support he needs. Seth was so adorable when he thought Jake might leave the pack.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Paul just needs to get over himself and he will before too much longer. :)
Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm very happy to see most of the pack accepted Jacob's decision. I'm also relieved that Jacob took the Cullen's up on their offer. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing - glad that you liked the latest developments :)
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
I feel so bad for Jake. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. He's really going to need Edward's comfort now :(
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 25
So sad for Jacob! I'm so glad he has Edward. :/
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Poor Jake, going to need plenty of comfort :(
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awww, poor Jacob! I hope Billy will be okay. :/
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Poor Jacob will have a hard time with Billy sick, but at least he has Edward at his side to help him deal :)
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Jacob! I'm glad Edward is there for him. I also like how the Cullens are more and more accepting of Jacob, especially Carlisle and Emmett. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing; Jacob is going to need Edward's comfort with his Dad so sick :(
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh no.... Poor Billy, poor Jacob :'(
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what comes next.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Poor Jacob will be pretty anguished with his Dad so sick, but at least he has the comfort of Edward. Next chapter in a couple of days! :)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
TOUCHDOWN! LOL Sorry, I had to say it ;)
Author's Response:
Hehehe! Excellent! :)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
SO VERY HOT HOT HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed the next step of their relationsip :)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
Excellent chapter! The Cullens need to visit more often! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading - they still have 3 more days to enjoy before the others get back at least :)
Date: 02 Dec 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Jacob and Edward are adorable! :) I'm glad Jake put Mike in his place. He's always so annoying and stupid.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I never liked Mike, haha :)
Date: 30 Nov 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
That really does suck for Jacob about his house. As always, loving the boys getting even closer! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed the update :)
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
Moving right along. How long will the pack leave them alone. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. The pack will be ok so long as Jacob being with Edward doesn't affect the tribe, but Jacob's going to be discussing things with some of the pack members soon ;)
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aww! I'm so happy for them! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed the update :)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
well, that was... um, unexpected. Good and fucking hot, tho! LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed their step forward! :)
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really liked this chapter...a lot! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Finally they are moving forward :)
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
I was excited to see this update! I like that Edward seems to be loosening up with Jacob even more. More please?!?!?? :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, glad you enjoyed the update :) More to follow soon!
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
So, baby steps, huh? God, what I wouldn't give to hear from Edward, such a mystery to what the hell is going through his mind!
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next.
~Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. Baby steps indeed, it'll take them a while yet to get much further.
Sarah
Date: 24 Nov 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much :)
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad that didn't drag out between the guys. Also, who'd of thought that Emmett would be the advise giver. :)
Author's Response:
I didn't want to torment them long. Now they can move forward again. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, t least it was just a small freak out, I was afraid Edward would push Jake away. I'm glad he didn't.
Thanks for updating! Loved the chapter.
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Ed's feeling the effects of the imprint too much for a major freak. Now they can get back to kissing :D
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow! Love this story!! I apologize for not reviewing before but I was so engrossed by the story I had to keep going. I really like how you've progressed Edward and Jacob's relationship in a realistic way, even for imprinting...hehe! :) That kiss was hot btw.
How often do you update? I'm craving more already!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing, glad that you are enjoying the story so much. I am updating two or three times a week at the moment, sometimes a bit less as I am working on another story at the same time which is almost finished. I should have another chapter of this one posted tomorrow hopefully :)
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Jake. :(
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. They will be ok again soon, Edward just needs to get his head straight (or NOT straight, haha).
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aw, poor Jacob. Edward si just confused, I bet. Thanks for the update and I'm glad you liked the banner, though could I ask if you could please put somewhere in your summary the banner was made by Mina Rivera? Just so that people now that I made it and come to me if they want a banner too.
Can't wait to read more!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing - poor Edward still has part of his head stuck in 1918 and he's worrying about what people, especially his parents, would have thought of him.
I'm just going to edit my summary now - so sorry for not just doing that as a matter of course, that was remiss of me. I do love the banner!
HL
xxx
Date: 18 Nov 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
My poor Jake! Hopefully Edward will start to feel the way J does. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Jake won't suffer for long, I promise.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loving the story so far, please tell me you will update soon! LOL
Btw, I made you a banner, but I don't know where to send it to, I can't PM you here, but here is a link of the banner so you can download it.
BANNER: http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/ab52/MayumiR/Banners/UWFbanner.jpg
Hope you like it!
xoxo
Mina
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much for going to such trouble! I really appreciate it, it's an awesome banner! Had a bit of trouble figuring out how to load it onto the story, but got there in the end! :D
Thank you for reviewing too, glad you are enjoying the story so far. I aim to update 2 or 3 times a week and am working on the next chapter today.
HL
xxx
Date: 16 Nov 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Luving you story! All the twists and turns for this one have kept me wanting more! LOL!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, so happy you like it!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
OH BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Nov 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! Glad to hear that you enjoyed it :)
Date: 15 Nov 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Nooooo..... Don't stop here...
Writing is super as always... Love your stories... Keep writing...
Author's Response:
I couldn't resist a small cliffhanger :) Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
THIS IS THE BEST STORY.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm happy you like it so much :)
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
GREAT STORY.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much :D
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOW, WHERE IS THE LITTLE PIXIE, WHEN YOU NEED HER.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
She will make a surprising appearance in the next chapter. Thank you for reading :)
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
this is one of your best stories. i just love it. cant wait for the next update, keep up the goodwork!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much :) The next chapter is in progress at the moment, should be done in the next day or so.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
What a way to tell his friend, crying out in pain. Damn! Im really liking this one keep it up. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to see where you take this one. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, hope you enjoy what I have planned :)
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story. Such an Intriguing idea.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I'm happy you like it :)