Why not use besides or except instead of bar? I would love to know all of the gifts Bella has hidden inside that rockin' body she has.
It's tear,bury.i am throughly enjoying this story,but you could have used a Betato crrect spelling errors
Loved it! Poor Peter!
Well I am sure that Maria isn't just going to let it go like that
it was great
awww sweet ending.
Thank you for writing and sharing
Buh Bye Maria and the evil bro's
Go Bad ass bella. Although I though she was going to leave victoria to Leah and the tribe? ah well.
well at least maria realizes they cant win. Oh Aro....you and caius are in for it.
Elle is doing really good
awww poor Forks. LOL for throwing Em
awww poor Boris and Elle. Hope they'll be ok.
Gawd I love peter
yummy chapter. You get something special for the lemon
Awww poor Peter havin to watch. Great fight though
Irena is going to be trouble i think. Go B and J
lol love her messing with the pack.
yey the Major is coming out to play
Yeah for Boris and Elle!!!
oh the three skank triplettes are in for a world of pain now
awww poor seth
wow b is bad ass
yup the Cullens are wierd. ah well. Go Bella
oh its was stupid letting skankya live. At least Kate had brains.
oh eddie....she has your mind reading now idiot. Fuckward really needs to die.
Irena is a moron after seeing what Skankya got. Malice...you just heard that Eddie lied....did ya really think her life was sun and roses?
oooh I hope Em takes a piece out of eddie next? Stupid Slutya.
"There's thirteen, seven girls and six females" I think you meant Males, not girls."Bella loves a good show huh? ROFL
cool how she absorbs powers. Cant wait till fuckward gets whats coming to him.
go B taking down Vicky's minions. Hope she get to Vicky soon. uh oh peter...you are in trouble now.
Uh oh malice is in for it when they meet up.
Aww for first meeting
Go bad ass b
Hmm so b has some powers huh? Cool ones it seems. Wonder why she never went after fuckward?
Hmmm interesting start
loved it! Poor Bella!
Well done! I enjoyed it very much! Thanks for writing.