Date: 10 Jul 2020 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Such a good story. You really write well.
Date: 29 Jul 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Is this story completed?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
The analogy of her feeling like the waters were only getting deeper and the struggle for the surface is so accurate. The darkness is blending into the light of a new dawn for Bella.
I hope Benny doesn't hang on too long in hope of reuniting with his lost girlfriend. Bella is not that girl any longer.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward has competition!
Poor Benny was left hanging in the balance while Bella's life spun out of control. Will he be a thorn in Edward's side or will he be the friend that Bella needs to push her through the tough practices needed to achieve her new goals?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
She finally figured out what she needed to move forward in life.
Interesting how Edward felt it from the very first meeting after Renee and Charlie's funeral.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is it a 'failure to thrive' situation that is causing Bella to have blackouts? The loss of being loved that has her so confused as to wandering aimlessly?
Edward didn't confess to loving her though.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
The therapy did spark her return to life. In more ways than one!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
A turning point possibly in Bella's mind? How long has Edward harbored feeling for Bella?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
I found this story through a web search. Interesting what types of words will lead to undiscovered reading!
Looking forward to the rest of this tale.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
The story could technically be finished right where you left it. In fact, I almost think it should be. They decided to stay together, she's awake... maybe an epilogue to tie up loose ends? Either way, I really enjoyed this. I love olderward stories! Thanks for posting. A
Date: 08 May 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Please continue this!!!! I love it!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
When will u update again???
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
what a great story! i hope you continue writting it!!
Date: 13 Jan 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEE
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN IF IT WAS ONLY 7 CHAPTERS!!!!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my god, this is sooo good, it's breaking my heart
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter!
I like their explanation.
Thank you.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Finally they are giving in.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful! What a great update! Can't wait to see what happens now that they have declared themselves...
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
glad they talked
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
great story truly loved it can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
he is her home
Date: 08 Dec 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
I will never understand why people can't be nice. The fandom has lost so many wonderful writers to people being nasty. It is so simple, if you don't like a story, DONT READ IT. Like I said simple. Please remember that there are so many of us out here that do enjoy all the hard work and imagination that are given to all of us for FREE to enjoy. Ok, will get off my high horse and just say I am enjoying your story and looking forward to more. lol, Cheri
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
glad Ben was there to help and be the friend she needs.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Dec 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
hoping he's not worried/freaking out b/c she's late
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Im so glad she is swiming but I think Edward is freaking out not knowing where she was.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Will be be jealous?
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh so a bunch of time has elapsed (was thinking Irina was talking to her like that within months of the deaths). Still dont like her talking to a minor that way.
Lauren is pathetic. ah well.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
ok the blackouts are unnerving. At least she is trying swimming again.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok I do NOT like Irina. Jeez its only been, what, a month or so since their deaths? Being a teen is hard enough without therapists like her. ugh
PS If you get flamer and/or personally attacked here, let us know ASAP. That is not tolerated here.
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor b. Hard thing to lose everything
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
interesting start. Is this a BDSM or daddykink kinda story???
Author's Response:
No, it's neither.
Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really enjoying your story. Please don't take what mean people have to say to heart, like that FB person you were talking about a few chapters back. I think you're fantastic !
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the end bit so beautiful.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks good chapter
Date: 22 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
You have described Bella`s suffering very thorough.I`ve hesitated before I decided to write this little message.I think you`ve got a great talent that you should not allow waisting.I hope Bella will be happier and will find her place near Edward.Ever since I read first about Edward and Bella I hope that every Edward and Bella are together in the happily ever after;thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the backstory here. It helps knowing that Edward understands what Bella is going through. I didn't comprehend just how deep his attraction to Bella goes. Can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story.. I'm interested to see where this goes.. please update soon!
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
She is coming back to life
Date: 21 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh cat how i love you and your creative mind lol xx
Date: 21 Nov 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
good to get epov. interesting to see what has been going on
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really good so far.
Will you ever get back to Conventioneers?
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love getting Edward's perspective!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
this is really good
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just started to read this fic and love it.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is so lost she needs to find herself and if she lets Edward in I think she will.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 03 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
getting so good!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bon chapitre !
Est ce que Bella va aller mieux ?
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved the story, i hope you will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Thanks good chapter
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it so far can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Please keep posting
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the story catastrophia. If someone doesnt like it then maybe they should read other stories instead. People choose to read the stories you gals as the authors don't force us. so this person can yap all she wants to rile you guys up at the end of the day it was her choice to "read" the stories you guys have posted.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
She is coming up for air
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I look forward to watching Edward bring Bella around. Great chapter!
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
wonder how e will handle the relationship
Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love your writing and your stories are awesome. I hope this jerk does not stop you from writing. I hope you continue your wonderful work.
Love Jukie
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
that girl is terrible she sent me one to :(...... looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Thanks good chapters
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Aww they both don't know where they stand about how they feel about each other or what will happen in the future with them
Hope you update REALLY soon
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 2
great chapter! wow she is really in a dark place.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really good keep going!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella, so lost,so lonely! My heart aches for her and for Edward who is only trying to help,(I think). Waiting oh so impatiently for the next chapter! :)