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Reviewer: izhavo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 81

Thank you!!! I truly love reading this and i gone miss this.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 81

thanks i love this story hate to see it end

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 81

Every chapter has been a ten. I look forward to " A Family Like Ours". I have enjoyed every chapter and truely fallen in love with every character. You have written a wonderful book and created an awesome story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 81

i just love this story:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 81

I can't believe it is over. I will miss this family until they return.

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 81

I really got nervous when I saw that this story had been marked complete. I have enjoyed this story so much. The fact that it is so long really gave us a chance to learn to know and love your characters. You do a great job with your chapters and I lose myself in your updates every time. I also want to thank you for posting regularly. I have almost stopped reading stories that are not complete because I get involved in them and they don't update for months sometimes or not at all. I can't wait for the sequel and I will also be following you to your new story. Thank you foe your dedication and talent.

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 81

OMG!!!  I really really loved this! You are an incredible writer.

I can't wait for the next installment!!!!  You ended it perfectly.

Don't take too long.  I love your Sparky and Baby Girl.  They are my TOP 5

fav E/B. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 81

I absolutely adore and love this story!!!  You did an AMAZING JOB!!!  I love your characters, I love the CULLEN family and all there friends.  Carlise & Esme have one hugh family and all those grandchildren.  I love that they are so close.  They had there ups & downs but rose above it.  I can't wait for the continuation of this story.  bella is going to do well with her art, Edward will win another oscar.  Emment and Rosalie deserve a little girl.  until you post again

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 81

Sad to see this end.. I loved this  story... looking forward to your next creations..

Reviewer: roryandlogan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 81

A beautiful story  that has filled hours of my life for the past two years. You have gift that is absolutely wonderful.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 81

Sob .. Sniffle sniffle ... What will I do without this story and the Cullen family to look forward to every other week. You are such an exceptional writer. Creating real people for us to love and enjoy. Thank you thank you for giving us the give of your talent. I look forward to your next story.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 81

Love the conversation between Saska and Bella.

Good grief...I don't even know what to say about Bella, the photographers, the car crashes and all of that!  Good grief!  Edward is going to be livid!

I find this so interesting:

She hadn't seen Edward, Jasper, Anderson or Carlisle since she had been admitted.

It is like they abandoned her or something.

Why was Alice so upset when she saw Bella???

Ohhhhh....Alexi's was bleeding too?  No wonder Edward was ticked off.

I am so glad that he redeemed himself with his speech to Bella in the bathroom!  That was simply perfect and swoon-worthy!

The Academy Awards part?  Awesome!!!

Love Carlisle:

The trip was eventful, noisy and Carlisle stated that they were lucky that he didn't have a problem with alcohol as travelling with seven toddlers was enough to send any man to the closest bar.

Amen to that!

I just do not know what to say....hard to believe that this story is over as I have enjoyed reading it so much!  And you wrapped up this part so well too. 


Looking forward to your upcoming stories!

Keye

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 81

I have tears..................

This was BEAUTIFUL ending...  scary and sad,  But a happy ending.. 

I will be watch out for the squeal.. 

what is Hope and spring's about I must of miss this somewhere.. 

Hope to see you soon.

hugs your reader friend <3 Leona:)

Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 81

You are amazing! Your story stayed fresh & juicy to the end (or should I say, the pause & promise?) Loved that you ended with B back in tuscany on her own to paint. And Edward is the stalker instead of the stalked, nice one! Loved the angst & suspense of the highway & hospital scares, Loved seeing all the family & friends (make 'em bleed, songs for subby, hehe), and even a trip to the oscars complete with up-to-date wardrobes. Yes, amazing! 

Here's what I wrote last November,  "This is my first review ever, having only discovered fanfic a few weeks ago. What. A. Treat. My thanks to you, dear author. Your characters' emotions feel so real and your plotting is anything but predictable and your way with the snappy dialog... I love it! Gotta say, part of me wishes I'd stumbled on your addictive story after it was done. Because i hate to wait!  Still, it's probably for the best as I'm embarressed to admit how much my work & all have suffered since I got hooked.  hmm, I suppose the pleasure is all the more delicious since it's so bad for me!

I'm fascinated by how far you've brought the characters & can't wait to see where they wind up next.  -O"

I've looked forward to & enjoyed every installment, thank you for a year of reading pleasure. If you or Fee are ever in the Boston area I hope you'll let me take you out for a drink, or cook you a meal, or somehow try and return the favor. All the best,  Orange


Reviewer: roselynne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 81

the story is over its really over i am so sad i enjoyed reading this story alot

i look forward to the sequil

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 81

Michelle - Congratulations.  I know this sotry took monumental effort but you are amazing.  I was a little saddened to see that you finally checked the completed box, but I can tell you that you gave us a great story.  I am so honored to have found and read your story and so glad to know your Edward and Bella. 

I am a fan for life and will devour everything you write.  Again, thank you for putting yourself out there.  Each word you write gives me something to look forward to.

Vicki - Wisconsin, USA

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 81

enjoyed it very much. thanks for sharing your talent!!!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 81

Perfect ending for the new begining.

Thank you for two years of the best Edward and Bella story I have ever read.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 81

Wow, I had a feeling it woudl end in Italy as that was where it started !!!!!  Amazing journey you took us on.Thank you for that !!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 81

I have thoroughly enjoyed this journey with you!  Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story with us all! 

 

Catherine

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 81

Hugs, love, kisses and snuggles right back at you.  Thanks for such a satisfying ending to this great story.  I waited for the longest time to read this knowing that it was tlhe end ....this is one of those stories that really touched me.  Promise if you decide to publish this that you will give us a heads up!  Have a great holiday and can't wait for your next story and the continuation of this one. Fondly....Paula

Reviewer: sarahd Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 81

Loved your story - can't wait for the sequel!!

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 81

thank you for sharing this fabulous story with us. I can totally believe it took 2 years to put out!  I look forward to your next endeavour.

a couple of small details which did irritate me: the male form of fiancee is fiance - unless you want to make Gianni iffeminate!  also when you're talking about people doing things, you should use "who" and not "which". And it's amAretti not amOretti.  Sorry about that - I dislike incorrect usage of certain words.

Reviewer: jo1081 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

great story this has been one of my favourites cant wait for sequel. will be definately reading your new story.

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 81

This has been one of my absolute favs and I am so so glad you are continuing it..   Please let them have six kids -- it wouold be hiliarious, esp. when they become teens.   Thanks again for writing such an excellent story.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 81

I will miss your story but I can`t wait to read what you`ll write next.Thank you for your talent.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 76

J'ai relu le chapitre 76 pour me remettre dans l'histoire, j'aime beaucoup, même à la relecture!

 

J'ai bien aimé que ce chapitre soit moins long! Je sais que les prochains chapitres seront plus longs, donc il me manquera la fin de chaque chapitre... dommage...

 

Heureusement que google translate s'est amélioré.  Au moins jusqu'à 20,000 mots maintenant, il ne manquera que la fin du chapitre. 

 

Je voudrais vous dire comment la traduction française est une vraie perle, vous avez une sacré bonne traductrice à votre service!  Ce serait bien si vous annonciez sur votre site qu'il y a une traduction française avec l'adresse.  Cela ne vous enlèverait rien car ceux qui lisent déjà en anglais continueront à lire car nous voulons avoir la suite, lol!  Mais c'est un plaisir de lire dans notre langue maternelle et aide à la compréhension.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 81

Michele~

Well this seems so full circle to press submit on the last review with all ten coffee cups I can give it.  I will drastically miss these characters that you alone have created.  They may be hte twilight character names, but you have taken some PG13 characters from a young adult book and movie based franchise and turned them into a Dom, sub, child filled, loving, obsessive, recluse, fun loving, outspoken, quiet, loving, drama filled, relaxed, encouraging bunch of lovely people.  You have truely made fictional characters just like people we can or could all relate to...People Like Us.

I love you hard core chicka and you are a very true friend to me, thank you for always showing me and my stories love.  Thank you for encouraging me to not only write my story, but to keep up at it.  Thank you for following me the way that I follow you.  Thanks for the long ditance hugs and the understanding that you always have for me.

Thank you most of all for sharing this story and for bringing me through many emotions with this story.  I have laughed, cried, been happy sad and elated.  You have surprised me, shocked me, and done somethings that I was expecting along the way, yet you did it all with such a love and enthusiasim for these characters  it was easy to read the love you have for them.  Thank you my friend.

With much love and sad tears, good bye for now on this story.

Kasi

XOXO I<3U!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 81

Brilliant story!

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 81

Wonderful! One of my favorite D/S stories. I can't wait to hear more from you. Your updates always leave a smile on my face when I see them in my inbox. I get excited and I have to remind myself to wait, so I have enough time to read the chapter in one sitting (and not in the morning when I check e-mail before class... lol)

 

Good luck and can't wait to read more!

 

Crimson

Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 81

OMG I can't believe this is the end. I LOVE THIS STORY. What an amazing author you are. I can't wait to read your new stories. Happy holidays to you and yours.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 81

You have been a constant for so long, I have loved every bit of this story and awaited each update with anticipation. Glad to hear its not all ending and you will be on author alert. Thank you for many hours of enjoyment.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 81

I have enjoyed reading People Like Us, and can't wait for the second story. I have loved everything about the story, the laughs, the drama,the passion, love and even the tears!!!  The sexy times too!!! It is such a unique story, just because they have money and looks, their life was not perfect. They came thru every incident with even more love for one another. Carlisle and Esme were two loving but passionate in their love too!! The love they had for their children and grandchildren, wow!! They offered great advice without being "bossy??" Jasper and Alice, two people who compliment eachother and love their siblings!! Emmett and Rose, Em is too funny, but once again very protective of his family!! So glad to hear they moved to Cullen Crest, now even more fun, with them all together!! Charlie and Sue, glad Charlie bared his soul and heart to Bella! Renee can rot!!  Please don't make us wait to long for the "sequel".....

Reviewer: paula1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 81

I WOULD LIKE TO SAY A BIG THANKYOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY AND I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO READING FAMILIES LIKE US. I HAVE BOTH LAUGHED ANF CRIED AT THIS STORY. I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT THE UNCLES ARE MY FAVOURITE "NEW CHARACTERS".

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 80

Awwww....Jack sounds adorable, doesn't he?

Poor Bella:

They didn't like her because she was having another baby and they knew it.

Couldn't agree with Bella more on the fact that Jasper is the perfect southern gentleman cowboy!!

I need the number to "Eddie the massuses!! LOL!

OME!  That is funny that Rosalie took away Emmett's ESPN and made him pay the damages for the broken window!  LOL!

I love how this family jokes and teases with each other...especially when Edward is on the receiving end....like when Carlisle was telling him that he needs to feed Bella first!!!  ROTF!!!

Go Esme!!  Smacking Edward on the head for him yelling!  I laughed out loud at that one.

Got to love Carlisle:

To an onlooker, it would seem as though Carlisle was just holding her hand, but Bella knew that he was checking it over - he was in full ‘doctor' mode.

I love those guys!:

Anderson smiled, "I offered, well actually, Brian and I tossed a coin for this - I won!"

It takes an awful lot for a woman in labor to set her husband straight and boy did Bella ever!!  LOL!

Was this about the fact that MJ always wore white socks:

"Still going ‘Michael Jackson' I see."  Edward said with a small smirk.


That was the sweetest thing that Carlisle did for Edward.  IDK why men don't understand that they can be loving AND strong all at the same time.  Meaning...I don't understand why men have a hard time showing affection like that.

Love that they named the baby after the two uncles!

Good grief....poor Esme....and her parents did that?  I knew that they were awful but that is completely insane!!!

Laughed so hard at the "Edward Touch" sponsored pantry raid!!!  I don't blame Jasper for posting pics!!!

Two Academy Awards?  Awesome!!

Keye

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 81

wipes away a tear.  That was a perfect ending to the first part of your amazing story. Thank you do much for sharing. 

I am really looking forward to the second part of your wonderful story.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 81

omg! i remember 2 years ago i would lay in bed on the weeknds and read your chapters with my baby nxt to me. now...how poetic....i am lying in bed with my now 2 year old and new 5 month old boy (2 boys) lying on either side of me....fancy way to end the story...just as i began it.cant wait for more...thanks for blesing us with your writing.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 81

awwe it was awesome and you are soooooooo going on my fave author list :) loved the journey of PLU:)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 81

What an emotional rollercoaster of a "last" chapter but rest assured you've gone out on a high.  I'm looking forward to the sequel and in the meantime I will be reading your new story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 81

loved the ending ! 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 81

This ending is bittersweet. I've hurt, cried, laughed & enjoyed sharing in their lives. A true love like theirs is so very rare. Thank you for sharing your talented mind.

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 81

This chapter made me cry ... I loved this story I hope to see a continuation of it .... This is one of my Favorite Bella/edward stories ...You are an awesome writer

Reviewer: Teens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 81

Reread this from the beginning this week even better the 2nd time round. So said its come to an end :-( can't wait for your continuation of this. Thanks for posting. Teens

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 81

I am crying my eyes out and it is 2:30 in the morning, but when I saw you had posted I couldn't wait...I had to read. How do you say thank you enough for 2 years of your life, of giving me the most wonderful story I have ever read. Unlike so many stories, your writing held in excitement and suspense and character form from chapter 1 all the way to the end. So, how do you say goodbye (even if it's just for awhile) to all of these wonderful characters that you have given us and brought to life?  I knew it had to end, of course it had to end, but I truly do not know how to let this go.  I guess I will just have to start over on Chapter 1! 

I look forward to anything you decide to write, you are a wonderful writer and I am so thankful that you share this with all of your fans.

Still crying and already missing this unique Cullan Clan and their wonderful love and life.  Again, thank you  -  Cheri

 

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 81

Awesome way to end this one.

I cant wait til the sequal starts.

This has been a story I look forward to seeing updated. I will miss them,

 til next time

Reviewer: bellaroxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 81

hey u will post the sequel at fanfic? because sometimes TWSC ...sometimesa donot send alerts....

luv this story so much..it is an epic....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 81

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved this story!  I cannot wait to see what happens next for them in A Family Like Ours!  YAY!

Reviewer: hilndgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 45

I found your story & I've been hooked since I started reading. You've made me laugh & you've made me cry. The family Christmas has been especially hard because I'm an only child & both of my parents passed away many years ago. Bella's & Charlie's reconciliation will definitely take time & it's great that Carlisle & Garrett have tried to make Edward understand that he's going to have to give Bella time & space.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 80

Still trying to catch up on my reading since moving and taking a cruise in less than a 2 week period. I'll get there!
Glad I got to your story, it made me smile!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 80

LOVED this whole chapter. You are one amazing writer. GREAT GREAT GREAT job!!!! Love the baby's name.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 80

Go Edward! yeah i would vote for him!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 80

as always awesome chapter thank you and i loved bd too i creaked up with the wolves gathering when they where talking it reminded me of a old japens movie so loved it.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 80

this chapter was for intense emotions..  I laughed cryed..  I all most had a heartattack when she was in dilevery..  I actuall went and looked up OP.  to understand better.  it is scary.. 

I love that they are trying to find a balance. 

I am so happy for Ed to get 2 nomiteeies .  exceellent.

I love this story it is out of this world..   

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 79

first-  I love what the uncles did...  I would have loved her to have to apoligise to the girls..  but I will take this..  skank will never touch or see the family again. 

I love their anver.  it was beautifull  the children are wonderful. 

This whole chapter was amazing..  150% A+

I can't wait for their teenage children to give them a run for their money.  I one and somedays I want to luck him away for 3 more yrs. hehe. 

Thank you so much..

<3 Leona :)

ps..  please let fioella know I send her all the best and happiness for her nieces.  so sweet.  and happy she is home and healthy. 

 

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 80

Omg! Update soon! I love this story!

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 80

I loved Breaking Dawn I pulled my son out of school early Friday just so we could go watch it.  This was a great chapter, I love the uncles they are like insane but make me laugh with their antics.  I am glad that Edward and Bella are communicating and making time to find balance between being parents and husband and wife it's important.  Awesome that Edward was nominated for 2 Academy awards for his soundtrack I really think he didn't think anything would happen even though Aro mentioned it to him being a possibility.  I will be looking forward to see what happens next!  I hope you and yours have a great Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 80

Breaking Dawn was the best so far. Rob/Edward was so hot. I melted. Bella/Kristen looked the most beautifula and the worst I have ever seen her as well. The wedding was so touching and I cried when their song played as well.

So much happened in this chapter, I don't know where to start, but I loved it. I loved how Edward took charge in the birth, but then needed Carlisle when it was over. It really was sweet. Did  Nicholas turn out to have green eyes and brown hair?  I think the girls should all share a nanny. That way they can all get a break when they need one. They all want to work at least part time. They will some one that they trust. They can work some D/S time in as well. It would be a win for all.

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 80

Another amazing chapter - OMG Edward was nominated for 2 Oscars - this is great. Thanks so much for sharing & until next time, take care.

~Helen xxx

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 80

bd was good...i just wish there would have been more sexiness!

 

 

looking forward to the oscar's with this rowdy bunch!

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 80

If we don't get a sequel i'll have to come after you with a whip lol. Seriously though, you write beautifuly and i love your version of E&B. It would be great to be able to read about there lives forever :D

I'd be interested to see how the BDSM side of there relationship develops while they continue to juggle parenthood.

I'm glad Domward made an appearence when she was giving birth because she clearly needed it. He was alot calmer this time round,( even though his initial reaction when she went into labor with the twins was funny) she needed him in absolute control this time.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Jesse

P.S. I don't know how you manage to write so much in such a short space of time but I love how long the chapters are.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 80

I loved the chapter.  I didn't like how pushy Alice was with Bella's birthday, but you know - she is Alice.  As someone who has never had the pleasure of being pregnant - is it really hard to tell when you are in labor?  Makes me nervous for the experience. 

I was also really appreciative of Edward's awareness in the chapter.  He always seemed to know when Bella was upset or feeling down and he did his best to try and change those feelings.  As someone who has always seen Edward as the weak link in the relationship in this story (sorry - I still love him and the story) it was nice to see. 

And you somehow made the crazy uncles that no one could stand part of this family - oh the magic you weave. 

I have to tell you that everytime there is an update I am agraid that the completed box is finally going to say YES.  I really don't want it to end.  You have done an amazing job and have amazing talent.  Happy Thanksgiving.  Thank you for writing this story that has kept me entertained for many months.

 

vic

Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 80

What a great chapter. I cannot find the words to tell you how great it was. From Nicholas' birth and Edward's reaction to the award. Loved it.

Saw Breaking Dawn and loved it, however, I really think they could have spent a little more time on the honeymoon especially since the movie only last for 1 hr & 45 min.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 79

The Uncles are PERFECT!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 80

It seems like its just possible our Edward and Bella are finally growing up.  I am glad that the uncles had been invited into the mix, they are so naughty and funny. I adore how they adore the children. I was also moved by the Carlisle and Edward scene's. Wonderful, totally wonderful.

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 80

I loved BD... Yes they left out something's and adlibbed a bit but it was still great... They get better and better with each movie.

I love your writing and the stuff you come up with. The pantry mess was so funny, even if Bella didn't think so. I was so scared during the delivery, but our master took over and all was well. I am excited a out the academy awards... That should be so fun to write. Thanks again for sharing this wonderful story.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 80

Can I tell you how much I needed this chapter tonight?  My Twi-sister came into town for BD which I agree was amazing!!!  But now that the movie is over and she has headed home I was very bummed out.  But then you my beautiful friend posted this and all is right with the world once more!!!

The sex...oh my hottness!!!!  I loved all the dirty prego play!  You make pregnancy kink hot and that is a serious accomplishment!

I loved the drama of the birth scene and how Edward was there for Bella like no one else could be.  And Carlisle holding him in the shower afterwards when he broke down brought me to tears.  Epic my friend.

I love that they named the baby after the uncle and when Esme said that Nicholas looked like Edward Sr...you totally stole my heart.

You know I think you are awesome and I could go on for days on everything in this chapter that rocked my world, but it is nearly 2am and I need to sleep.

Excellent chapter my friend!!!!  Can wait to read this in hard copy (wink, wink).

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 80

First, I also saw Breaking Dawn Friday and LOVED it!!! Now, I also LOVED this chapter, it was long which was GREAT!!! I loved the birth, the name they chose, I loved how emotional it was, their love, you could just feel it. I loved they are getting some play time, the lemons were HOT!!!I love Edward was nominated after all the work he put in. I just love this story and can't wait for more. I look forward for every update!!! :) 

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 80

great chapter!!!! I love this story and can't wait for more, I'll get tired of this story.

I don't know where/how you came up with the story line and all the amazing details in this story but god I love your brain!

sapho99/dinah

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 80

Michele~

My dear what can I say, except WOWSA liek normal!  Love it, love you and Yeah I have seen BD1 too, more than once already.  I am on my normal pace with it, seeign it several times the first day it was out.  Midnight than the morning show night show the next day matinee show, you know just busy busy busy movies, now I am desperately awaiting part 2.  loved this chapter it was phenominal.  huge huge hugely huge hugs adn will talk to you soon.  LK&IV has some updates, you got some catchign up to do, i can;t wait to see who you think it is! LOL.  TTY soon my friend!

Kasi~

xoxo

Reviewer: imc67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 80

Loved Breaking Dawn so much I've already seen it 4 times. Love your story too. Keep it coming. Thanks.

 Carol from Tacoma

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 80

loved the movie, loved this chapter, love my hubby (its his birthday, had to through that in there) loved the soundtrack to the movie, etc. etc. Its just a loving kinda day lol. Course it took me 3 times to read this chapter cause I kept getting interupted for birthday stuff. So here it is latish Sunday evening and I finally can relax with Master Edward sigh. Thanks for sharing him!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 80

Yet another great chapter!!! Awesome.  I saw BD too and loved it!!!  I love your story and love following these two...great job as always!!!!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 80

As usual, I absolutely LOVE these lenghty chapters but feel my reviews are inadequate. So much occurred here I fear I will not do justice to the work presented.

I am glad the family knows the uncles' 'secret' interference.

Edward’s birthday gifts to Bella were so incredibly touching. The Tuscan tour will be something she remembers for the rest of her life. The bracelet she shall cherish every day.

I grinned at the naivety of Alice and Bella that their three ‘normal’ friends would not have known who they were AND to whom they were married to.

It was scary watching baby Nicolas’ delivery. I liked seeing Master Edward step in to calm Isabella like only he can. And then to have Carlisle embrace Edward to soothe his emotions in the shower was just wonderful. Too few families have that kind of bond to do that.

Wow. While we knew Esme suffered at her parents’ rejection, I never would have suspected their treatment of her extended to such horrible depths.

I was incredibly pleased she cajoled the uncles to come live nearby.

It is fun seeing the crazy extended family with all the little ones enjoy each other.

*Yippee!* So pleased Edward was nominated. The nomination in itself is a great honor even if he does not win.

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 80

Wow ... Awesome chapter. Loved every bit of it especially the bit where Master stepped in to take control in the hospital and then Carlisle stepping in to comfort Edward when he broke down in the shower. 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 80

I'm glad that B & E are figuring out a way to balance their life/style.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 80

OH WOW!  That was AMAZING!  I really loved it SO much!  Loved Noodle's name :)  Also, yay for Edward :D  Cannot wait for more :D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 80

Wohoo that was a great chapter...caught it all.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 80

great chapter. loved it!

sadly I won't be able to see BD for a while :(

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 80

Yes Yes BD Part 1 was so fantastic!!! I too, went Friday night with my daughter, I must admit I also found the wedding and reception to be perhaps some of my favorites of the movie.. It was well done all around... If there was anything I didn't like totally it would be the "look and texture of the blood and afterbirth" on the baby and Edward's clothing....Everything else was done wonderfully from the story line to the acting... Top notch!!!

You have out done yourself with another exquisite chapter!!!!!  Thank you!!!!  

This chapter had so much happening and I loved how they named the new baby after Uncle Nic, that's awesome and hearing more about Esme's story was just wonderful...loved how Edward thought he had the special touch when it came to having toddlers and a newborn...I guess little Jackson and Alexis taught you huh Daddy!!!! LOL!  What a wonderful birthday present Edward gave to Bella  that was preety awesome of him, but then again he seems to ALWAYS know what she needs before she does, I can see that see is putting her painting aside for the children and she truly does need another outlet aside from just the children, but this is what makes Bella such a good mother

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 80

Another excellent chapter, so many ups and downs.

I sense the story winding down... I don't know what I'll do without this to read every other Sunday!  You did say you were doing a sequel... perhaps I will live.  Thanks so much for all your hard work.

BTW, I also had a quick 2nd child.... I was in the hospital at 7:15 pm and my daughter was born at 10:06 pm.

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 80

Fabulous read. Loved Edward in the delivery room, looking forward to Bella beginning to paint again as well as the playroom. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 80

loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 80

Wonderfully long chapter.   Woo hoo for new baby!!!   sweet name too (thankyou for not having some wierd name like Renesmee).   Yipee on nomination and for figuring out play time.  

Reviewer: paula2838bu Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 80

Wow what a great chapter can't wait for the Academy Awards.  Thank you for not ending it yet...as much as I am looking forward to the next chapter or sequel, I am not ready to give these great characters up.  Thank you and have a great holiday if you celebrate if not Cheers to you and your family.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 80

I cried over the birth. You wrote it perfectly. And i loved BD!

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 80

I love love this story in fact I am rereading every chapter again and am up to 52 .... I loved Breaking Dawn Part one .... actually it made me like the book more lol ...

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 80

wow, lady you have outdone yourself with this chpater, amazing we had lemons and more lemons, childbirth, more lemons, cranky toddlers, beautiful babies. the uncles !!!! and nominations for academy awards.  you rock sister !!!!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 79

I vote HELL YEAH! for a sequel!!!!!!

Reviewer: cullenetc Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 79

I just want you to know that I never get tired of this story. I love that your chapters are long and detailed. I have fallen in love with all of your characters especially the uncles. I missed the rest of the family this chapter, but I am sure they will be back. I'm excited to hear that you will continue the story, I will keep reading faithfully as long as you keep writing. How do you become a beta? I have not tried my hand at writing yet, but I do find myself catching mistakes as I read all the time. I would love to help someone out even if they just needed a prereader. I just don't know how to get started. Thanks for your dedication to this story, you are a great writer.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 79

I love the Uncles!! I will read anything you write at this point! :)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 79

thanks as alwauys awesome chapter

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 77

Amazing chapter! These two people and their story just own me!!  I know there has to be drama to keep things interesting, and I trust you; so I'm not going to get too upset about slutty Irena. I'm so glad you mentioned Megan Fox. She is the perfect visual for Irena. Once again, you have me totally captivated with your wonderful story. Thank you!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 79

Are you kidding.... Of course we want you to continue until they are old and have great great great grandchildren. Oh I loved the uncles they are so cute and no they didn't go too far. Would have liked to see how Irene groveled at Bella and Kate's feet. Love the things you come up with you are so talented. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 79

Are you kidding! Irena got exactly what she deserved ads hound have gotten more! I wish the entire crew had heard & seen what she had agreed to!

Absolutely I want more!!

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 79

O-M-G!! I ADORE the uncles! What a great pair of guys. I picture the uncles from 'Secondhand Lions', they seem to share many of the eccentricities. I love how protective they are of Bella. I was glad Charlie shared their crazy stunt with Bella, she deserved to know that her nemesis is forever gone from her life.

A crazy family, but what a great group.

Reviewer: rebellion7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 79

love the uncles, the story and looking forward to the sequel.  Not before more ply.  Xxx

 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 79

Lets see, do I want more of this story?  OMG YES!!!!!! Thank you, thank you. You have made my day!  Love the uncles, you did perfect, love all the babies. Edward and Bella would be amazing parents to 4, 5, 6.... guess I love Bella pregnant. Not many stories convey the love between Edward and Bella like you do, its why I love this story.

PS Love the names you have chosen, Christopher Heath and Tiffany are perfect for Jasper and Alice.  Again thank you for your decision to continue this story!

Reviewer: Edwards_Love_101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 79

Another AMAZING Chapter. Thank you for the update - The Uncles were hilarious as usual & they really gave it to Irena. I look forward to the next chapter & the meeting of the new baby Cullen & Whitlock!

Thanks for sharing this story & look forward to every update - I'm glad there will be a sequel. Until next time, Take Care,

~Helen xxx

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 79

I will just tell you this...I am sorry that I don't review as much as some readers but I am taking notes to probably have a long long review when you finish and by the looks of it if we are lucky that wont be for a very long time!  (YEA!!!)  I cant get enough of this story.  Its like a soap opera on tv that just goes on and on for years.  One minute babies are being born and six months later they are teenagers. Ha!  So just to let you know I am all for a continuation of this.  You do whatever you want and know that it will keep us very happy!

Hugs, Stephanie

*oh, and what the uncles did was priceless!  Very clever and I'm soooo glad you did that! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 79

omg! i could kiss Ernst and Nicholas! love them, so loyal and mischievous :) can't believe the possums are 1 already, they're growing so fast!

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