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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 41

knew it!! i am sooo good!! yeah rose!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 63

Huge chapter - thanks.  The scene and punishments.  Why was B so curious, feeling E had to be close to her?  Is her instinct picking up on some upcoming bad stuff?  The scene - hot and very appropriate for these two.  E is once again acting very much a Dom again.

Charlie's feelings were good and well written.  I am very worried about Carlisle's reading of the letter.  Wow.

You are amazing.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and comments. I think that Bella was just feeling nervous about thier first 'public' scene and she wanted to see what Edward was up to. The letter? We will all know the truth soon. Promise.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 63

Michele~

Oh my girlie you know I love you hard core.  This story is so fucking super fantastic.  You amaze me with every word adn I have a bunch of guesses as to what that letter intails.  One is that Bella is not really Charlies....I really hope that is not the case btu that would be a major mind fuck for Bella and Charlie too. 

You again offer up some awesome recs for stories.  Love them!  Love the photos.  Keep in mind that you love me when you read the next chapter of A.S.S.  I struggled my behind off writing it.  It should post on Monday.

xoxo

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Hey Darling, thanks so much for your review and you will know what the letter says soon.  And I am so looking for to YOUR next chapter xoxo

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 40

cool kinda harmless in a way.  glad nothing happened to rose!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 63

there was sex, just nto alot,  great chapter, what was Edwards gift did i miss it?



Author's Response:

thanks for review and I'm glad you liked it. The pics of the gifts, dress etc up next.

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 63

loved loved lovd this chapter . gosh i so want to know what the letter says and what charm did Edward give Bella.



Author's Response:

thank you so much! There are tons of pictures for the next chapter, her dress, Edward's gift, her gift to him, lots more to come,  and I promise, you will know what the letter says - soon.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 63

I know! no sex in this story is such a crime. lol I was reading the chapter update on TWCS bc there's photos (:D) and I put my reply on both ff.net and TWCS bc you answer back on ff.net. so I have a couple questions: one, what is the first picture of at the very top of the story before it even starts? Two: have we seen pictures of her wedding dress or is that next chapter with the tuxes and all? that's it for questions lol but my most favorite part of this whole chapter was a small part, and that was when they were looking at each other across the lake. that was sooo freaking sweet and romantic. I can't wait for more. thanks again and bye for now



Author's Response:

Okay - heres the 411 - the first picture are nipple cups that are used to um, actually used to help inverted nipples but of course it can also be used to um, simulate suckling sensations as well.  NO, we haven't seen the dress yet and you will NEXT CHAPTER. I'm glad you liked it, update soon xoxo

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

well rose is pregers got that one... a shit-storm of hurt is on the way and i hope that rose doesn't loose the baby... she is going to break down when she realizes it is james... wow this is not going to be good at all..

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 63

I don't know what to say.  What do you tell an author when she gives you so much of a story.  You give us their fun, their not so fun, their stress and their laughter.  You gave us daddys that we would love to have and moms that make the world go around.  Friends and siblings that make all the annoying things they do seem worthy of all the special things they do.  AND then you cut if off errrr...no wedding no dress (the other pics are beautiful tho.)  I suppose I will have to wait. LOL thank you for this chapter it was so full of life.  I enjoyed it very much.  



Author's Response:

Aaaw Don't be upset, pleeeease!  I'm about half way through the next update, it won't be two weeks - and there are LOTS of pictures for the next one, too many in fact! Thanks so much for reviewing xoxo

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 63

Wow Awsome chapter loved it.



Author's Response:

thanks honey - update really soon

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 63

GREAT chapter! Can't wait for your next update so looking forward to the rest of the wedding and see what that bitch Renee has to say for herself!

Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review - update soon

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 63

Why do I get the feeling that Charlie is not Bella's biological father?!?  It just seems like something that evil crack whore bitch would do.  But onto happier things until you feel it is time to shit or get off the pot and tell us what the damned letter says. ;)

I loved the play party.  I felt so bad for the way he teesed Bella all day, but I loved the scene (the costumes and set up were fuck-awesome) and I loved his form of aftercare.  I think I could use a little of his aftercare too.

I thought the scene at the lake side with just E&B was incredibly soft and touching.  They needed that time together to take a break from the chaos.  And the part with Rose, Bella and Joshua was so sweet.  I don't see them holding off too long before Bella is carrying a little bean of her own.

The B&B parties were great.  I almost pissed myself laughing at the 'questionable age' of the strippers.  I did not see that coming at all!!!

And now the wedding is here.  Yeah!!!  So stop reading the reviews as we gush over your greatness and get back to writing.  I am going to have Edward work you over with the single tail if we don't get that next chapter soon!!!

Love ya!

Nickey



Author's Response:

OH MY GOD! Could you whine anymore about how I'm not writing enough!!  And okay yes, I will state it right here - I AM A SECRET C & B FAN! Happy now?? You are such a brat sometimes, but I love you so freeking much! And yes here I am on a Saturday night WRITING - OKAY? HAPPY NOW?  You will find out what is in the letter soon, okay, now stop buggin me, brat!

Talk about a work over from Edward, you and me both, baby!

xoxo

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 37

again i am ignorant and will not comment on everything... it always comes down to bella's fault so what can i say

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 36

this again is where i get mad... he can be a jealous and do what he wants but when she feels the same emotions she is in trouble... anyway on witht the story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 63

Great chapter but I really wanted to see Bella's wedding dress.



Author's Response:

Hey there MM,  I have so many great photos that I will put up in the next chapter, INCLUDING her wedding dress. I hope that you will like it!  I promise to post soon!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 34

yes good old jim is james... nothing but trouble ahead for everyone.....

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it!

Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

glad they are back on track...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 31

not good not good at all...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

sweet weekend the squealer interesting

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 29

okay this is where all the logic i have for their relationship falls apart.. ok one person breaks the rules and gets punished then the other person does the same thing and nothing happens... sorry the equality in the relationshp just goes to shit to me...



Author's Response:

wow Maria,

 

Thank you so much for being so faithful and reviewing each chapter as you read it! And yes, the relationship isn't "equal" as we would think it should be, but this is the nature of the lifestyle from what I've read.  

I'm glad that you are still reading and enjoying my story!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 28

oaky they are outted... hum...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 25

okay what way the punishment?  nice ceremony... still not happy with everyone

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

okay i am 100% behind alice i think that woman is a child molester!!  i really do and if jasper loves her so much why is he taking it like not big deal like her feelings don't matter and i feel that edward does the same thing because everytime bella tells him how she feels he has a temper tantrum.. and he wonders why she doesn't like to tell him how she feels.. like duh!!  sorry everything is starting to just rub me the wrong way!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

okay i am really pissed at bella she knew it was the wrong thing to do but she does it anyway.. i am really not liking her very much... she let alice lead her wrong stupid... she really is dumb!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

why does everything always come down as bella to blame?  it always seems like everything ed does is bella's fault.  and she just disregards the rules... come on talking back is easy damn they aren't even playing that long.... anyway what do i know

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 19

damn the drama is out of hand!!!  i thought bella had her head up her ass but damn...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

as i said before i can get into the bondage and other stuff but the pain and the spankings... just don't understand it... anyway i do like the story!  to each his own and who am i to judge

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

go bella go get that bitch!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 13

okay i could get in to the d/s stuff but the spankings a crap just ruin it for me.. no one is going to spank me.  i find also strange when she says that she knows he won't hurt her but in reality he does.... anyway on with the show.  i also don't like that he can do and act anyway he chooses and he doesn't have any consequences like she does.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

oh no there is going to be trouble!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

okay bella quit complaining you are the one that wanted this...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

bella you lucky girl.. yummm

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 8

oh bella you picked your way now you have to deal!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

oohh bella...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh bella that really sucks... ed and the child molester is the next story!!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 62

I understand  Carlisle's sadness. Even though Alice was an adult and not living at home...marriage makes it permanent.

So Bella seems to be doing better after her talk with Charlie. I wonder if she will ever read Renee's letter.

Yay! Bean is born!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

enough self love we need bell and ed love!! haha! love the story so far!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh bella you are playing with fire!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

well we have established that jacob is one big a$shole!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is going to be interesting!!!  i can just tell

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 61

Yes! Let's hope it's over for Bella and she and Edward can move on and be happy. I am sure Bella can't totally turn her feelings off about the past...but she can let of the pain and move forward.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 59

Loved the end! Bikerward and Bikerella! Bella pushing Edward up against the car telling him he was such a tease! LOL! They keep talking...they stutter and then the move on. Life is complicated! Oh and Bella and her parents...sigh. Hopefully she can work through that. But yeah...they really did a number on her.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 58

There was an awful lot going on in this chapter. Engagement, missing Edward, art show... No wonder Bella kind of hit a wall. I can't imagine what it would be like to sell part of yourself. I think for Bella that's what selling her paintings were like. She put a lot of herself into them and now they are gone. At least she knew she had to go to Paul and then he sent for Edward. Edward and Bella were just out of tune there for a bit. This time alone will help them reconnect.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 57

I can see Edward's explanation of why he uses the hairbrush...Bella wants and needs that type of control. It's just not for everyone!

Poor Em! Course Rose didn't help with her retort about brain damage! LOL! I am glad that Bella and Carlilse got Em back on track with his wife!

Loved the ring and the proposal.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 56

I know I could never live this lifestyle! LOL! Too damn painful!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 55

It must be nice to be so talented, rich and good looking! LOL! I know Bella and Edward have their issues, but they are getting better. It's an exciting time for both of them. That is if Bella will let herself be excited! Oh and did Dr. C. punch Riley?! LOL!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 53

Edward writing a score to a movie would be the perfect thing to keep him in the business and trying something new. I see Bella and Edward making great strides in their relationship.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 51

Yay for Bella! She finally told Renee off. I hope that Renee stays out of their lives. I think therapy with Paul is going well. Bella and Edward do have a challange...with their issues and relationship. Sometimes I think Edward is too dominent, even when Bella isn't collared. What they did today with Bella getting to pick was a good thing for both of them...a stretch.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

These two can't get a break can they. They keep trying to get it right...both going to therapy, trying to work out their fears and this happens. It seems to me that Billy shouldn't have a leg to stand on. Jacob did break in and did hit Bella. I was glad that Edward went and talked to Jasper and Alice. Poor Alice. Edward did abandon her. I hope that Alice and Jasper work things out.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 49

I am happy that Bella and Edward are finally talking and opening up to each other. They both need to do some growing up! I think Bella is right though, they will get there! I loved that Edward finally put those three witches to rest and stuck up for Bella! It was a good New Years Eve!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 47

I am glad Bella is angry. Edward is being unreasonable. I know Bella kept something from him, but she was going to tell. I think he's being an asshat. I agree with Carlisle, I think Edward took this too far.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 45

I got teary-eyed over the Christmas exchange between Bella and Charlie. So bittersweet.  These Cullen's are loveable!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 45

I liked this chapter. It really showed the depth of Bella's pain. Her loss of both parents when Renee left  and what that did to her. Carlisle is right about the addictive cycle. Bella has to conquer that. Every time she's upset she throws up...or doesn't eat. 

I chuckled about the fact that Esme knows too about their lifestyle...but then since Carlisle knows...so would Esme, they share everything. Now Charlie knows! He was pretty accepting of it too.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 41

Little Bean! I thought Rosalie might be pregnant! It seems rather simplified that Edward could spank the trauma out of Bella...but maybe so? I love Emmett!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 40

Yay! No one was seriously hurt. However...I think the trauma is going to stay for awhile. I was so proud of Bella...she was so calm and collected after her early stuttering. She was amazing. I am glad you wrote a strong Bella! I also enjoyed all the drama and suspense of these last two chapters.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 39

Damn...hit the panic button Bella! I don't want anyone to be hurt!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

Edward's senses danger doesn't he? His Domsense...Protectivewardsense is twitching. I thought the 'play' nite was a good thing for them to do.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 37

So Bella has decided to become the best sub for Edward. I think Edward is right, Bella has come so far from the beginning. They still have a ways to go...but they keep talking. That is good.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 62

What an amazing chapter! You made the birth and the wedding everything they should have been. You continue to draw us into the lives of these characters like they were real people. Thank you for sharing your great talent with us.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 34

So Jim = James. That's bad news. Bella has so many insecurities and issues right now. I think she totally interpreted Esme's tears. I think they were happy tears.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 62

I sooooooo loved this chapter. I loved all the kids telling Esme and Carlisle to "get a room" or to cool it. That was GREAT.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 28

So I wonder how the paps and dating a famous actor is going to change Bella's life?!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

I am glad that they talked. Both had concerns about the whole 'Jim' thing and how Bella feels unworthy of Edward. I think the talk went well. This is so overwhelming for Bella. I think some for Edward too. This love they have and then the D/s complicates it all. Bella is afraid of losing herself and she's used to being independent.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved the ceremony. If Bella remembers all her 'words' she should know she needs to tell Edward about Jim. He is definitely a creep and he's up to no good. I wonder how Alice and Jasper are? Alice seemed sad.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 62

Awesome chapter from beginning to end.  The "Uncles" crack me up.  Soooo much happened in this chapter, but everything had a happy ending. So glad for that. 

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 22

James and Vicki are definitely...EW! Riley seems interesting and I wonder if he is taking Bella as being off the market seriously.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

No wonder Bella left. Edward left her and he was out of control before. Bella was frightened of Edward. She wasn't wearing his collar and yet he treated her like she was wearing it. He said he didn't want to be 24/7 yet he seems to be that way. They need to talk....if he can find Bella.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Bella has one disapointment after another. Her parents are non-existant, her ex boyfriend abused her and now her friend has moved in with her enemy and didn't bother to tell her. Just left her high and dry. Bella has a lot of abandonment issues and Edward needs to keep telling her he is there for her. So I wonder when we will get to meet Angela and Lauren...and Jacob.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 14

Rosalie is a bitch! She doesn't realize what she's doing to Bella. Bella has been abused and Rosalie's words are hurtful.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

It seems to me that Edward is being a Dom all the time. He is jealous and possessive. I do think they need to talk. Are they doing D/s 24/7? He should have informed Bella that she was his sub before they went out. I think Edward has some adjusting to do too.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love that Bella has a fan crush on Jasper Whitlock. I loved her blush when she met him. Alice is really a force isn't she? I was happy that Bella stood up for herself...well as much as you can with Alice. They are all getting to know one another.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think Bella's feelings about whether what they were doing made them unnatural. I think that Edward gave her a good answer, but I think it's something Bella is also going to have to come to grips with herself. She has some baggage and I think that Edward is going to have to be careful. Their last session did go wonderfully!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

A very emotional day for Bella. She has a lot to learn. This is something Bella wants, but she has no experience and D/s is a very emotional relationship. Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is calling Bella, 'Love' already. He has it bad. Bella has a lot to learn and Edward is going to have to be patient. Hopefully Jasper and Alice will help. Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

So Bella found out who Esme was. LOL! I liked that as Edward explained his life style to Bella he also was angry at Jacob. Yeah...what Jacob did was abuse and was not done with care for the other person. Bella is interested, but she's afraid too. Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

The morning after the tequila body shots was a bit awkward for Bella, though she did enjoy it. Jealousward shows up at the market. The meadow sounded lovely with the stream running through it. Thoughts of Jacob...he was terrible and cruel. Bella really freaked out when Edward called her his Pet. I am guessing Jacob called her that. I feel bad for Bella thinking  how she was interested in BDSM caused her problems with Jake and she was a freak. I am glad that Edward told her she wasn't.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

The body shot scene was so hot! The Ust just boiling off both of them!

It was interesting to hear how Edward came into the BDSM scene and that Jazz was part of it too. I laughed when Edward found out about Alice being a sub and punching Jazz in the face! LOL! No more scenes together! It is good that they can talk about their lifestyle together.

So when are Bella and Edward going to give into this lust? Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love their banter and the building UST!

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

Where Bella is staying sounds lovely...the town and the Villa. I am enjoying reading Bella's thoughts and how she feels about Edward...just Edward...not the famous man.

Bella sounds as though she had an unhappy life...her father and alcoholic and it sounds as if Jacob was about the same. Oh and he hurt Bella. That makes me angry! I hope Jacob got his, and didn't get away with it. Or did Bella just leave? Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the beginning. Both seem to have fiery personalities. I like that Bella talks right back at Edward even though he is famous and devastatingly handsome.  Reading on!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 62

I'm not sure who was crazier... Alice or the uncles. Thank god Bella was able to calm everyone. The wedding was wonderful and I loved all the dresses and tuxes. Can't wait to see what Edward has planned for their wedding. I absolutely love you story and want to thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: dsccc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 62

Hooray bean is here and Bella tamed the savage bridezilla beast! I am glad they are making an effort to be more regular in their d/s relationship. I think it will help both of them stay grounded! I am really curious what Edwrd has up his sleeve for their wedding. You cracked me up with the pervy old uncles!

Reviewer: Kimberlyann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 62

good god that was long... I loved it....

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 62

great chapter! 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 62

Perfect as always. ;)

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 62

oh crazy alice! I bet they are all glad that is over

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 61

Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter. It gave us everything we have come to expect from you...touching emotions, hot sex and beautiful writing. I feel like I have known these characters for years. It's been a long time since those first days in Italy. You're the best !!

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 62

I loved this chapter! It covered so much! Great job! Looking forward to E&B's wedding.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 62

Alice sure went crazy. I was proud how well Bella stepped up and helped calm the situation. I loved the baby name. That was one huge baby. Emmett and Edward are very close. Bella's mouth gets her in trouble. Edward has to do what he is comfortable in doing with and to her. If he doesn't think she is in the right mindset or if he isn't then they just need to be Edward and Bella. She should not question him on that point. Bella was going through a lot of stress plus she was injured. I do agree that Edward should have got her on being sloppy on her daily duties. He was being to lenient on that point. She was acting spoiled. If I can't have it all, I won't do any of it. I am glad they are getting back on track. Edward needs to be tough on her because she will try to cheat the system.

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 62

Great chapter as always. So visual
So poignant. So HOT! I cried and laughed.
I noticed several little typos and mispells. Unusual for you. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 62

Good. Bella not only takes care of Edward...she takes care of all of them.
Hard to believe where we are from where it started so long ago in Italy.
Great journey!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 62

Shouldn't Bella havd been punished for not following her work out schedule; she was collared at the time right?

Whoa, Alice was a little off her rocker, Jasper should have stepped up as her Dom and set her straight. Bridezilla doesn't even come close to her rantings.

How will Edward pull a wedding that will be everything he thinks Bella deserves?

Loved Esme's  two wacked out uncles. Excentric just scratches the surface to describe them.

That was a bang-up job on the ending of this chapter! Hot, Hot, Hot.

Can't wait for the play party!

 

Reviewer: kalenaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 62

Another great update!

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 62

WOW, Bean is a big one!!!

Thank God the wedding is over...at least Alice and Jaspers.  I can't even imagine how true paparazzi would act with two famous actors being in the same wedding.

Reviewer: cb2brown Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 62

I love this story and especially your long chapters!  Thanks for sharing with us.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 62

awe great chappy

Reviewer: bellawant2be Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 62

Great as always : )

Reviewer: izhavo Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 62

 

THANK YOU!!Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 62

thanks awsome chapter as always

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