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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

C'est un bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette fiction !

Maggie a été choqué mais elle va s'y habituer et sera contente de voir son père heureux.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Je vous remercie! Je suis heureux que vous êtes en profiter. Maggie va prendre un certain temps avant qu'elle accepte l'idée de Bella. Mais elle va y arriver un jour.

J'apprécie votre avis.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

I think it is the shits when the kid comes home  and reality sets in????  Bella needs to figure out if he is worth it and I am sure she will find him to her liking lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, kind of disappointing now that they aren't in their little bubble anymore.  But, yes, she'll decide he's worth it.  She just needs a bit of time to think and to talk it over more with Edward. 

Thank you for the review, I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

Fantastic chapter. Your story keeps getting better and better.

 



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I am glad to hear you're enjoying it so much.  I've been having a lot of fun writing it.  :)

I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen

Wow I really like how this chapter was written it was like I see myself in Bella's position. I hope everything works out and they both want the same thing!!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much! I am glad to hear you enjoyed it. 

You won't have to wait too long to see what they are both looking for.  :)

Thank you for the review, I appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: jemanjii Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

more... now...

and yes it liked the add ons



Author's Response:

The next chapter will post soon!  And thanks for the review, glad to hear you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: belafono Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

ohh god!!!! yessssss!! I'm soooo dying to know what happens next!! When do you uptade this????



Author's Response:

Not too much longer, I promise!  The next chapter will go up soon!  Thanks for the review.  Glad to hear you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

Really looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  It will be up soon!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

His daughter ???? Oh Shit not the best ending to a great weekend.



Author's Response:

Oh yes, that's his daughter and she is PISSED!  Definitely not a good way to end the weekend.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

Amazing as usual!!! :) Such a steamy weekend they had, and now the ice cold bucket of water is being dumped on them in the form of Edward's daughter :) Can't wait to read more!!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, hun!  Glad you liked it.  The steamy weekend was so fun to write.  And yep, reality is here and it's not a fun one for them.  The next chapter will post soon!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

HOT!

Wow!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Glad you're enjoying it.  I appreciate that you took the time to review and let me know.  :)

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

I am so glad they got together, age doesn't matter when the heart wants....
now who the heck burst through the door???
A daughter?? o-o

Author's Response:

Edward's still a little worried about the age thing, but Bella will convince him he's the right man for her.  And oh yes, that's his daughter!  She's not happy to find her dad groping some woman in the kitchen. 

Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate that you took the time to let me know you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

looking forwad to more 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad your're enjoying it.  I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.

 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

WOW, time to run off daddys' friend.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she is definitely not happy to find her dad groping some random woman in the kitchen!  The next chapter is lots of fun!  ;)  Thank you so much for the review.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

Yes!  Can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the nice review! I really appreciate it.  Glad to hear you're enjoying the story so much.  The next chapter should be up pretty soon!

Reviewer: Muddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

Just found this and totally addicted already! It's so hot!!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for reviewing it.  I really appreciate it,

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

Im dying to whats next, loved it, cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad to hear you're enjoying it.  The next chapter should be up soon.  Thank you so much for the reivew.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

J'aime Edward et Bella ensemble, ils ont passés un super week end en amoureux, ça fait du bien d'être heureux !

Ils ont de la visite !!!

Merci ! 



Author's Response:

Je suis si heureux que vous avez apprécié Edward et Bella week-end ensemble. Oui, ils ont un visiteur. Elle est la fille d'Edward. Merci beaucoup pour l'examen. Je l'apprécie.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

uuuhhhhh ooooo here comes the daughter but what a hot sexy weekend :)



Author's Response:

Yep, and she is NOT happy.  So glad you enjoyed their weekend.  They sure did!  Thanks so much for the review.  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom

That was hot! Edward needs to relax and enjoy. Can't wait to see how explains what is going on to his daughter. Are fireworks up ahead?



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Edward will relax eventually, he just need a little bit of a nudge from Bella.  She'll convince him he's the man for her.  Oh yeah, definitely fireworks ahead.  She is NOT happy to find her father groping some random woman in their kitchen.

Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

Great stuff so far! Looking to see what will happen with these two!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it!  I really appreciate that you took the time to review.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

HOT, SIZZLING B.!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Yay! So glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you very much for the reivew!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre, Bella a bien joué en rendant Edward jaloux, il n'a pas pu résisté !!!

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.



Author's Response:

Oui, Bella a eu beaucoup de plaisir à faire Edward jaloux. Je suis tellement content que vous avez aimé le chapitre! Nous vous remercions de l'examen.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

hot hot  



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad to hear you're enjoying it.  ;)

Reviewer: inbetweendayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

olderwards are my favorite !! and this one is very brooding and sexy and powerful the best kind.. great job i cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Oh yes, Olderward is a lot of fun to write!  Glad to hear you're enjoying him.  Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

Loved about time he gave in to what they both want  I hope there is more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Yep, they've both been dying to be together! 

There is going to be tons more!  I am updating as fast as I can. 

I really appreciate that you took the time to review.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I am glad to hear you're enjoying it. 

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

More please! YUM!



Author's Response:

I'm updating as fast as I can!  Thank you so much.  I am glad to hear you're enjoying it.  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room

so excited to see the next part of this one now!!!!

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I am sorry the updates can't be faster, I'm trying to keep everything in sync with Twilighted.  Glad you enjoying it!  And thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

I'd love to see what happens next



Author's Response:

The next chapter goes up tonight!  Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

more please :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you enjoyed it.  And the next chapter should go up tonight!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

:) excited to see this one expanded!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

I'm really excited to continue it.  It's going to be a fun one.  And of course I'm thrilled to have you on board! Always love your reviews, hun!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

J'aime ce chapitre !

Je trouve Bella très courrageuse et je comprends ce qu'elle peut ressentire comme frustation quand elle pense qu'Edward la rejette.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Merci!  Je suis heureux que vous ayez aimé.

J'ai essayé d'écrire un fort, courageux BellaC'était très décevant pour elle d'être rejetée par Edward.

Je suis désolé si mon français n'est pas très bon.  Je l'ai étudiée ans et je suis en utilisant Google Translate pour vous aider.

Nous vous remercions de l'examen. Je l'apprécie!

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much! I really appreciate the review.  Glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center

Love that  she has put herself out ther enough of the pussy footing around  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  I love a strong Bella who goes after what she wants! 

Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

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