Date: 09 Jan 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk
I think edward loves her...and im glad its pat that knows
Author's Response:
Yep, it could have been much worse. Pat's about the best one who could know. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk
Now that's how you celebrate a birthday! *giggles*
Author's Response:
No kidding! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk
It was on that she would be in love with Edward.
Good chapter, thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I'm not sure quite what you mean in the first sentence. Glad you liked the chapter though! Thank you!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Bella's Desk
Glad it was Pat. They do need to be careful.
Sweet ending.
Author's Response:
Yes, it could have been much worse. You're absolutely right that they need to be more careful from here on out. Glad you liked the ending!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
Great chapter!!! UH oh ... well you knew that was gonna happen, they really haven't been too careful! :) Can't wait for more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And yep, they've been being really risky. It's hard to keep a secret like that, even when you're being on your best behavior, and they definitely haven't been. Thanks for the review, hun!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
I liked this chapter!
I hope that Bella will not have any problems.
I look forward to reading more.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! The next chapter will post today. Thanks for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
They really should keep it out of the office, especially during office hours, they're bound to get caught sooner or later.
Heidi obviously knows something, it was no coincidence that she took the flyers to Bella's desk.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yep, they were being really, really risky. It wouldn't have been easy, but they should have been more careful.
Heidi's questions and making a beeline to Bella's desk was very suspicious, wasn't it?
Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 03 Jan 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
I'm thinking that Maggie told her mom and that she reported them.
Author's Response:
Heidi's questions to Bella were pretty suspicious, weren't they? Love hearing the theories about who might know their secret! Thanks for taking the time to let me know what you think.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
Ah The child has been talking to Mommy Dearest I bet.
Knew it had to come eventually. Ah well.
Author's Response:
Mommy Dearest is just about the perfect nickname for her, isn't it? Heidi's questions to Bella were awfully suspicious.
And yes, it was pretty much inevitable that their secret came out eventually.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Glad to have you on board for the story. Yeah, Bella was feeling pretty crappy about things. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts as the story goes on! Thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
Crap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: That pretty much sums it up, doesn't it? The next chapter posts today!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review! The next chapter will post today!
Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Boardroom
Oh God! who could know about their relationship??? please update soon... you killing me here!
Author's Response:
I know, I was so mean with that cliffie! Not to worry, the next chapter will post today! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: 20 Dec 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
a little short but informative.
Author's Response:
I felt the chapter covered everything important. I'd rather keep things a bit shorter than write more just for the sake of it being a longer chapter. Most chapters will be in the 3,000-5,500 word range, depending on what's happening. This falls right into the middle of that.
Glad you found it informative though! :)
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
so young maggie is but at her age it would be weird..
Author's Response:
Definitely. It's an awkward situation for all of them. Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
looking forward ot more
Author's Response:
The next chapter will post today! Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
I loved seeing daddyward in action. So hot :)
I hate Heidi even more after this chapter. What a bitch.
I understand where Maggie is coming from. I like her a but more after this chapter. Poor girl just wants he family together.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked him! There will certainly be more of him in the future. And yes, Heidi is wretched, isn't she?
Yeah, it's a tough situation for Maggie. She's being a brat about it, but that's kind of expected given then circumstances. She will come around. Eventually.
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
You tease with that lime i need lemon lol glad edward has support from bella
Author's Response:
Hey, not every chapter can be lemons. There is a plot here, you know! ;) Not to worry though, there will be more lemons in the future.
And yes, Edward does have a lot of support from Bella. She might not know exactly what she's doing, but she cares and she's trying, and that goes a long way.
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
This is a good chapter, thank you.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
I just have a bad feeling that Maggie will either somehow purposely, or inadvertently "out" Edward & Bella before they are ready to go public with their relationship. Maggie might mention Bella's name and age to Heidi, who might figure out who she is, and her work relationship to Edward. Heidi would definitely be vindictive enough to cause problems, I believe. But...I'll keep my fingers crossed! LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Well, I don't want to give away my whole plot, but I do love hearing your theories on what might happen! Heidi is certainly the type who would be vindictive enough to cause problems in a situation like that.
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
Great story... I would like to see Maggie come around and see Bella in a different light... I truely think she would very much lilke Bella once she gets to know her..
Author's Response:
She will. It's just going to take time. Changes like that don't happen overnight. :)
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
LOVED it! :) And yeah Maggie is a charmer, but aren't all 16 year old girls? LOL
-Kate
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. And yes, you do have a point. :) Plus, Maggie has had more to deal with than many girls that age. She'll come around. Eventually.
Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 19 Dec 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Edward's Library
If Heidi continues to let Maggie think the divorce was all E's fault, they should tell her. She is old enough to hear the truth.
Bella is so good to him.
Author's Response:
At the time, he thought it was the right decision. He will come to realize that Maggie knowing the truth is important. They'll get there.
And yes, Bella is good to him. And good for him. Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
Awe, the flowers were so sweet. I love that they came up with a way to not be completely quiet about her "boyfriend".
That date was perfect. I just love this Edward. He is awesome. Heidi was a complete idot. I couldn't imagine cheating on a man that was that sweet, loving and attentive.
Author's Response:
Aww, yay! Glad you liked it. I wanted Edward to be able to make some romantic gestures without giving things away. And it was important to him that they could be "out" about the relationship in that way at least.
Well, what they say about cheating is true. Heidi didn't cheat because Edward wasn't wonderful, she cheated because she's a deeply unhappy woman.
Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
Love the date, so sweet.
Author's Response:
YAY, glad you enjoyed it. I've been eager to post this chapter for you guys. :) Thanks for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
love the date.. make believe boyfriend will be a hard one with tanya... love love your edward so easy to love
Author's Response:
Aww, glad you liked it! And it's going to be hard on everyone in her life, but they will eventually understand. I love my Edward, too. :) Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
Great chapter! Love the flowers :) And yeah they needed to come up with a cover story, because it will be obvious that she is seeing someone, hopefully it won't cause any problems, but I am sure they will handle it if there is any! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked the flowers, I've been eager to post this chapter for a while. And yes, it's a tricky situation, but they're trying to make it work. And they will be able to handle anything that gets thrown at them. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
Aww no detailed lemons but still loved the flowers
Author's Response:
Not to worry, there will definitely be more detailed lemons in the future for them. And I'm glad you liked the flowers :) Thanks for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
I love this chapter!
Edward is charming and he knows how to make Bella happy.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Yes, he is rather charming, isn't he. He certainly is trying to make Bella happy and I think he's doing quite well! Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter will go up today! Thank you for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
He is so sweet and romantic
Author's Response:
Aww, glad you liked it. He is pretty amazing, isn't he? Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
def swoon worthy. Glad they thought of the Anthony rse. flowers were so sweet.
Author's Response:
Aww, yay! Glad you liked it. :) Hopefully the Anthony ruse will help make things a bit easier for them. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
THE COVER STORY SHOULD BE BENEFICIAL AND THE FLOWERS WERE SWEET. A QUESTION THOUGH HAS MAGGIE MENTIONED BELLA TO HER MOM YET?????? LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT WEEK.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And you're going to find out about Maggie in the next chapter! :) Thanks for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Terrace
:-D
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
wow I wanna do more than punch Heidi in her nose. What a skank.
Bella is def a good employee, esp without having medical training.
Cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's quite the piece of work. Edward thought he was doing the right thing at the time, but it wasn't such a good decision to stay with her. Bella is a great employee, and I really wanted Edward to first notice her as more than just someone who works for him because of her personality and character. He sees her beauty too of course, but it's who she is that appeals to him first.
Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it! I have enjoyed reading them all so much and I am glad to have you on board for the story. The next chapter posts tomorrow!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Glad they are talking things out not just pushing them aside. Work is going to be really hard. Heidi should have been neutered. What a skank.
Author's Response:
They are communicating well, and with everything else they have to deal with, that's critical. They'd never make it otherwise. Work is doing to be difficult for them.
And yep, Heidi is a real piece of work, isn't she? Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
good conversation start. I think they need to take it somewhat slow and continue to talk. Wonder who's going to catch them or call them out first? hmmmm
Author's Response:
Any more, they would have been getting into topics that were a bit too serious for a new relationship. But they covered the important parts they need to consider now. It's a good start for them. And yes, they will continue to talk as things come up.
You'll just have to wait and see who catches them/calls them out. :) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
Hope Pat stays with the discretion. I think they are both needing to be a bit hesitant. Wonder how long till the kid says something to mommy
Author's Response:
Yeah, they don't want to rush things. Can't tell you how long before Maggie spills to Heidi, but she definitely will say something. :) You'll have to wait and see how it all goes down. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
The kid could make a difference. Can understand B's reaction esp when it got dropped the way it did, but they should talk about it more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's a bit stressed and overwhelmed by all of it. And yes, they will definitely talk more about things. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom
OOOH YUMMY YUMMY Uh oh The kid caught them.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. And yep, Maggie has arrived! Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room
lol for making him jealous and attacking him Woo Hoo happy lemon dance.
Author's Response:
Can't blame her for trying to make him jealous. After getting shot down like that, she's a bit frustrated. And who could blame her for attacking him? LOVE the dancing lemon. Too funny!
Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 10 Dec 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center
Great start. Glad I started reading this one. Oh Eddie.....kinda cruel there at the end you know.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much! Really appreciate the review. Glad to hear you're enjoying it. Edward wasn't trying to be cruel, but yes, he really made Bella feel awful.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
I was so happy to see an EPOV! I loved hearing from him. One of the things that keeps going through my mind is what Heidi will say about Bella to Edward when she finds out. I worry that Maggie will tell her mom before the three months are over. I can absolutely see Heidi being vindictive enough to try and ruin Edward's career, or especially Bella's. Or maybe not so much Edward's because of Maggie, but definately Bella's. I guess I'll see what you have up your sleeve, eventually. :) Looking forward to your next chapter. xoxo
Author's Response:
It's not going to be pretty, that's for sure. Heidi is a real piece of work and she isn't going to take kindly to Edward moving on and finding happiness. I can't say much more, because I want you to see it as it all unfolds, but Maggie and Heidi will be huge factors in how things play out with Edward and Bella at work, and how the relationship moves forward. :)
So, so thrilled that you've reviewed every single chapter, I've enjoyed reading them so much, and you have no idea how much I appreciate them. The next chapter will post tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Yeah, Heidi really messed up Edward's self asteem as far as his confidence with women goes. He also needs to let go of his over obsessive worry about he and Bella's age difference. I know it will take him some time, this is all new. I just hope Bella really can be patient with him, and that the three months of hiding won't take too terrible of a toll on them. xoxo
Author's Response:
It would be hard to be in a relationship like the one he had with Heidi and not come out of it with a few lingering effects. He's trying, and Bella knows that. She's just worried about it. She will be patient, she cares too much about him to walk away. The hiding is going to be rough, but I certainly don't have any plans for them to break up or anything. They have enough to deal with from the outside world. They'll struggle but work together to deal with it all.
Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
*grins* So far, so good. I know it won't stay that way though. I'll just bask in the glow of the good times. :) xoxo
Author's Response:
They'll have their share of problems, but yes, it's a good start for them. They're both feeling pretty giddy about things right now. :) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
There is so much at stake for both of them, but I don't think they can be without each other at this point. I'm most worried about them getting caught at work, even if it would just be a look or something small. Also, Bella has now been in Edward's office twice to notorize something; I think they better cool it with that. xo
Author's Response:
Even if they tried to be apart, it wouldn't last long, and they both know it. They are being quite risky at work, and if they aren't careful ...
Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
Can't really blame Bella for her reaction, afterall that's a ton to take in. I'm sure Edward would have told her about his daughter. He was probably going to tell her when they had their talk, but Bella distracted him just a bit. ;) xo
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's just feeling a bit overwhelmed. Poor girl. I would be, too. And yes, he wasn't deliberately trying to hide it from her. She told him she wanted to go up to bed without talking. And it doesn't really make for good pillow talk. :) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Bedroom
Oh crap! It's his daughter, no doubt. I kind of wondered if she'd show up to see her dad while Bella was there. Still though, I can't stop laughing a bit. I can't wait to see what she says. I also have to say, Damn! What a hot ass weekend they had. I want an encore! ;) xoxo
Author's Response:
Yep ... rather awkward for all of them, huh? So glad you enjoyed the weekend. It certainly won't be the last one they have. ;) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Break Room
Loving this! xoxo
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center
Love it! I can tell this is going to be a great story! I can't wait to see how things go for these two, and how they keep things a secret at the office. Not to mention his ex-wife and daughter. xoxo
Author's Response:
Glad to have you on board! It's definitely going to be a difficult ride for all of them. So glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 06 Dec 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
Love it
Author's Response:
Aww, glad you liked it so much. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
i agree i would have wanted to hug him
Author's Response:
I just hate how lost and alone he sounds. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Providence Medical Center
always a pleasue to read anything you write
Author's Response:
Aww, that's so sweet. :) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
Great chapter...loved seeing what happened to bring him to the point he was at! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
I thought you would like this! Back to Bella's POV for the next chapter, but I might do another EPOV or two for the story. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
Good chapter!
Fortunately Edward and Bella is now divorced with him.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! And yes, it's a huuuuge improvement, isn't it? Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Great chapter!!! :) Poor Edward, he just needs to work out the mess in his head, but that won't be easy.
-Kate
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! And yeah, he's certainly trying to work out the mess in his head. It will take time, but he'll get there. He wants to be with Bella, and that'll be a great motivator. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
I am glad that Edward did not cheat... even though Heidi deserved it. I am also glad that he and Bella are gonna chance a relationship even with Maggie not liking the situation.. I think she will love Bella even more than her own mom, because Bella will treat her so much better..
Author's Response:
He was tempted, but yeah, he just couldn't go through with it. It's going to be rough for all of them to make things work, but they will get there eventually.
And yes, even Maggie will come around to liking Bella. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 04 Dec 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 - The Past
YES IT WAS GOOD TO READ EDWARD'S POV......... NOW GET HIM BACK TO BELLA WHERE HE BELONGS.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed his POV. And not to worry, he's back to Edward in the next chapter. :) Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Thankfully the only interruptions this time were Edward's negative thoughts.
Great chapter
Author's Response:
Yes! It's a step forward for them. And his negative thoughts will disappear eventually, it'll just take a bit of time. Thank you for the nice review!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Heidi is a power grabing bitch. Love there weekend good amount of loving and talking.
Author's Response:
Yes, she really is. They're doing a bit better finding that balance between loving and talking. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
WOW!!! This is truely an amazingly captivating & intriging story!!! Thank 4 all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story. I definatly can't wait 4 ur next UPDATE & PLEASE DO UPDATE AGAIN SOOOON!!!! I am definatly waiting impatienly for the next update. What an AWSOME story!!! I am absolutly loving reading this story & rate this story as a #10 out of a #10!!! I will try to review as often as I can, but I am currently reading 280 stories from here & try to spread my reviews amongst eveyone & trust me I review often like every dad or at least every other day so alot in otherwords.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the nice review. So glad you're enjoying it so much. I will do my very best to post a new chapter every Wednesday. :) Looking forward to hearing your reviews when you are able to send them.
Date: 28 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
I JUST READ ALL 7 CHAPTERS AND THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING I CAN'T WAIT TO CONTINUE. JUST TELL ME IS THERE A HEA FOR THEM? LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the nive review. Glad to hear you're enjoying the story so much. And yes, of course there is a HEA for them! :) Looking forward to hearing your thoughts as the story continues.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
Its not going to be easy, and I think Bella is going to have to be the stronger person in this relationship due to Edward's insecurity. Hopefully she will keep him grounded with her love. But I bet its gonna be a bumpy ride!
Author's Response:
You're right, it's definitely not going to be easy. But it will be worth it. Bella's strong enough to handle this and he will get there. :) Thank you for the nice review!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad to hear you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
hot hot weekend :) love your update
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Yeah, they're definitely enjoying the alone time, that's for sure. So glad you're enjoying it, too. :) Thanks for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
j'aime ce chapitre !
merci
Author's Response:
Merci. Je l'apprécie.
Date: 27 Nov 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
great chapter, I love the alone time at his home..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. They're definitely having fun with all of the alone time as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Shower
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
I think they both made there point they both want the same thing each other :) I love that she is independent and does not want him getting her another job she will do it on her own. Is Maggie going to tell Heidi ???
Author's Response:
Yep, they're both on the same page and they can enjoy each other without it all looming over their heads. Yes! I really wanted Bella to be independent, and wanting to succeed in her career on her own.
Well, I can't tell you about Maggie and Heidi! That would be giving away the story. You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 23 Nov 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it!
Date: 22 Nov 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
Oh My God I freaking love this story its amazing i love Edward and Bellas Conversation and maggie seems like a difficult person to deal with but please continue with the story
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! So glad to hear you're enjoying it. It was an important conversation for them to have. It's a good start for them.
Yeah, Maggie is going to be a challenge, but they'll all figure it out eventually. Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
Love it!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
love it thank u for the update
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to hear you enjoyed it! I really appreciate the review.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
Well I guess they could have gone more in depth but they do have a good portion of things worked out. I wonder if they will actually be able to keep it secret though and if there were any cameras that caught them. Can't wait to read more!!!
-Kate
Author's Response:
It's certainly not the last conversation about this they'll be having! It's going to be difficult for them to keep it a secret, but they are going to try. Thanks for the nice review as always. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
The conversation was perfect for where their relationship is now. It would be totally unrealistic for them to be talking about living arrangements, marriage and babies at this stage, their relationship needs to develop first.
Great writing
Author's Response:
Good! Glad to hear you liked the talk. I wanted it to be in-depth enough for them to cover all of the important things like Maggie, work, and the age difference. But you're right, it's way too early to talk about living together, marriage and babies. That will come once they've tackled the other things and have been together quite a bit longer.
Thank you for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice review! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
I think they actually had a very good talk... very mature
Author's Response:
Glad you liked their talk! I really wanted them to have a long, serious talk before they really started things. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Living Room
I love it sad the lemon wasnt in the chapter lol and i have a feeling ppl at wrk find out about the relationship
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! I know, I'm such a tease, not including the lemon in this chapter. :)
You'll have to wait and see if people at work find out! I'm not telling.
Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
Cant wait for more
Author's Response:
I promise, I am updating as fast as I possibly can. I am glad you are enjoying it so much! Thanks for the review.
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
Poor Bella is going to lose her mind but she know what she wants and it is him and he made it clear he wants the same.
Author's Response:
Yep, it's a really stressful situation for her. She is beginning o realize that she wants him, and that he wants her, too. They just need to sit down and talk through the issues they are going to face. Thanks for the nice review!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
I think that in this complex of a situation, it is very mature and wise of Bella to take some time to think about all of the pros & cons, and not just jump in too quickly. There is A LOT at stake here...not just careers, but lives...feelings, and Edward's daughter. Bella is awfully young to take a relationship like this on, so she better be 100% certain that it's what she wants, and not just for the sake of lust. Taking time to evaluate your thoughts and feelings is never a bad thing to do.
However, they really need to sit down and talk, though. While taking time to think for herself is wise, she also needs his point of view on things, such as his intentions or expectations of their relationship. She needs to ask certain things, due to their age difference, that while they may not be important to her now...but in the future, might be, such as : would he ever consider getting married again, or having more children...stuff like that. Talking with him will help to put things in perspective for her. As long as they are both honest and up front with each other, they have as good of a shot as anyone. Well...as long as their workplace and/or Edward's daughter doesn't take their toll. I hope they can work it out.
Looking forward to the next update. :)
Author's Response:
You have an excellent grasp on things. It is a very complicated situation for all of them, and its not something they can just jump into rashly. Bella was already rash by pursing Edward at work, and an actual relationship is a lot more complex. THey will definitely sit down and have the talk they need to before they decide to do anything. Now, they won't necessarily explore ALL of those topics (marriage and children is a bit much for before you've even gone on a single date) right away, but they will have them eventually. Communication is going to be key for them. :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
enjoying can't wait to read more i even have your story set on my phone for updates :)
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Glad to hear you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
I think that Bella is being very smart about everything, but as hot as it is, they probably should cool it down at work before someone sees something and it all blows up :( Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
She knows she was a bit reckless before, and she's trying to be more cautious now. And yes, they definitely need to avoid any more situations like that while at work. It's not going to be easy for either of them, either. Thanks for the nice review hun!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
Man temptation is a bi*ch, all I have to say is that I need my job. LOL
Author's Response:
LOL. Yes. It's a tricky, tricky situation. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
C'est un très bon chapitre !
Bella a peur mais elle va être heureuse d'être aimée par Edward.
Merci.
Author's Response:
Je vous remercie! Oui, elle va avoir de la chance. Cette Edward est assez merveilleux. Merci pour la belle revue!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, hun! Glad you're appreciating it.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Edward's Office
Oh I hope everything works for them... after all they are sole mates.... love them to pieces....
Author's Response:
It will! It's just not going to be a very easy road for them to get there. Lots to deal with. So glad to hear you're enjoying the story, Thanks for the nice review! I appreciate it.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! Thank you for the review, I appreciate it so much!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
that would be hard situation
Author's Response:
Yes, it's difficult for all of them. They'll find a way to make it work, it's just not going to be easy. Thank you for the review, I appreciate it so much!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
I realize that teenagers are difficult - some more than others. But...despite that, Maggie seems not only to be exceptionally selfish and spoiled, but also an extremely rude, inconsiderate, immature brat!
Does she know, or even realize how much Edward has sacrificed for her? HE has basically been her only parent...HE was the one that wanted her and kept her...raised her, and struggled. Does she even care? Apparently not.
I realize that because she's been her father's whole world for 16 years, that she's most likely acting out of jealously, and feels threatened by other females in her dad's life. But she needs to get over herself, and realize how much she's hurting her dad. It sounds as if Bella isn't the only one that she's ran off.
It's a shame that she doesn't appreciate or respect her father. She denies him of any happiness, whether she realizes it or not.
Does she treat her mom that way? Probably not, even though her mom has a lot more free time to herself. Maybe she's inherited her mother's selfishness.
Great story, so far. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, Maggie's pretty awful. At this point, she's too immature to realize how much her father has sacrificed for her. Edward tried to shield Maggie from a lot of the problems with Heidi. She was 14 when they separated, and although he meant well, that might not have been the best decision in the long run.
Yes, she's very jealous of the idea of another female in his life. And the status quo has been shaken up. She'd be happier if things just went back to "normal" and her parents got back together. She doesn't understand how unhappy her father was with Heidi.
Well, Heidi certainly lets Maggie get away with being a spoiled, selfish brat. So yes, she does treat her mom rudely and disrespectfully. She's not as selfish as Heidi, because Edward has tried very hard to curb that. But she has a long way to go before she grows up and sees the full picture. I'm certainly going to do my best to get here there!
I am so glad you're enjoying the story so much. Thank you for the lovely, thorough review. I really appreciate it.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Kitchen
Great chapter! and I love that she is thinking about things rationally now, (even if she should have done that before) Can't wait to read more!!!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, generally speaking, Bella is pretty mature. She just lost her head there for a bit. But now she's trying to make sure she doesn't make another rash decision without considering the conequences. Thanks for the nice review as always!