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Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 7:02 PM Title: Prologue - Meddling

Oh, Dissy, do you know how it feels when you curl up on your couch on a snowy afternnon with a hot cup of coffee and a brand new book to read? Like you know you're in for a wonderful time, and it's only going to get better? That is how I already feel about this story after only one chapter. I know I'm in for something really special!

I already love Esme, and I can't wait to meet Edward and Bella! I can already tell I'm not going to have to wait long for the "hot stuff". LOL

Your writing makes me feel comfortable... like a converstion with an old friend. That may sound crazy, but that is how I feel. Now you know I'm going to hound you for updates, after I get caught up. ;) I'm off to read Chapter 2. 



Author's Response:

Hey, sweetie!  I know exactly what you're describing, and the thought that my writing feels like that to you is just one of the nicest compliments I could get.  You almost made me teary.  It doesn't sound crazy at all.  I <3 it. 

Esme is so fabulous, isn't she?  I had such a blast with her in this story.  You'll see plenty more of her as we go.  So glad you enjoyed her.  And nope, not a long wait for the hot stuff at all!  :)

Thanks for the really sweet review, hun.  I really treasure it.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

I loved this chapter!! Can't wait for the next. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am glad to hear you enjoyed it.  Thanks for taking the time to let me know.

Reviewer: HBwavehunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

Not a writer, just a reader, but I liked how at the very end of this chapter you really seemed to capture the essence of what it's like to be truly in love. Yeah for you! 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!  That's so sweet.  That's exactly what I was aiming for.  I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.  It means a lot to me.  Thank you. 

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

I would agree that it ranks very high on my fav list as well. Great job!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it as well!  Thanks for taking the time to let me know.

Reviewer: chocolatealmonds Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  Glad to hear you enjoyed it!  I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July

wow! I LOVED this chapter... I think after all the drama with her car they needed a day to just relax and unwind a bit :) Can't wait to read more!!! So excited to see more details unfold with her car and what is going on with Bree! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! And yes, the day to relax was very much needed.  Glad you enjoyed it.  And trust me, there's more to come about what happened with her car and Bree!  Thanks for the nice review, hun!  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Much Needed Distraction

Wow talk about dirty dancing. 



Author's Response:

No kidding!  That would definitely be a great way to take your mind off things, wouldn't it?  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

Bree is still a major suspect. But James, Angela And slightly Victoria have been added to the list. 

 

Im so happy he finally said it. 



Author's Response:

Hmm, Angela and Victoria, too, huh?  I'd love to hear your thoughts on why.  :) 

And yes, Edward realize that she needed to hear the words more than having the perfect seeing to hear them in.  Thanks for the great review! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Much Needed Distraction

That is a good way to forget all the bad things ;)



Author's Response:

Isn't it?  I think Bella's verrrry lucky to have a distraction like that.  :)  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Much Needed Distraction

aww sweet normal chapter



Author's Response:

Yep, they're going to get a couple of those before things start to get a little crazy again.   And I promise, it's never going to get TOO bad.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Much Needed Distraction

Great chapter!!! :) So HOT! They defintely needed a night out! Can't wait to read more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thank you! So glad you liked it.  And yes,the night out really helped distract both of them  Thanks for the review, I always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

I dont trust Bree I think she did it.  I love you and then love making with no condom that is big



Author's Response:

Love hearing the theories about what's going on and who is to blame!  Glad you liked the I Love You's and foregoing the condoms.  It was a big step for both of them. 

Thanks for taking the time to review! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

What a great Birthday nothing better than the ones you love sharing your special day.



Author's Response:

Yep, Edward is feeling pretty darn lucky right now.  Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad to hear you liked it.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

ON THE BRIGHTSIDE THEY FINALLY SAID ILY



Author's Response:

Yeah, not a good experience, but it did bring them closer.  Hope you liked the I Love You's!  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

BELLA SHOULD KEEP AN EYE ON BREE, SHE'S WEIRD ENOUGH TO BE  AN STALKER



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's definitely worrisome, isn't it?  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

I WAS CURIOUS ABOUT JAKE, GLAD HE ACTS LIKE HER BROTHER. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Bella and Jake have moved on, and are very happy for each other.  Nice that they were able to maintain their friendship, huh? 

Glad you liked the interaction.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much

I HOPE HE TELLS HER SOON AND I LIKE TO SEEHOW JAKE AND LEAH ARE WITH EDWARD



Author's Response:

It won't be toooo much longer.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

I LIKE ALICE AND JASPER'S STORY, I HOPE WHEN THEY TELL THE GRANDCHILDREN THE STORY, THEY OMIT THE BOOK'S NAME



Author's Response:

Glad you liked Alice and Jasper's story.  I might do an outtake of it at the end.  And yes, they might have to make the story a little more PG for their future grandkids.  Then again, E&B will have to do that as well.  ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

Nope...James is still weird, but I still think Bree is mad.  A crush is a hard thing to get over....and then he's right in front of your face, with a co-worker.  It's got to hurt.  Looking forward to more clues.  Thx for the update.



Author's Response:

Love hearing your theories!  It's so much fun to see how everyone interprets the chapter.  Thanks for the feedback, I really do love hearing it.

 

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

IT SEEMS THAT BELLA'S RELATIONSHIP WITH JACOB LACKED PASSION AND TRUST



Author's Response:

Not trust so much, but definitely passion.  And the deeper connection that she was looking for.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

AND THE WEEKEND IT'S JUST BEGINING



Author's Response:

I know! Off to a pretty good start, aren't they?  Hope you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

Gah, James or Bree? The million dollar question! Or will you throw us something from left field and name a third suspect? LOL 



Author's Response:

I love keeping you guys on your toes.  And I have such fun hearing all of the possible theories. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

I'M GLADBOTH OF THEM ARE EQUALLY EXCITED FOR THEIR NEW RELATIONSHIP



Author's Response:

Oh yes, they're both on board and very, very excited to jump into the relationship. 

Thank you so much for reviewing.  I love getting the feedback.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

I LIKE VICTORIA, SHE'S A COOL BOSS; WORRIED FOR HER EMPLOYEES (MAYBE ALSO FOR THE GOSSIP)



Author's Response:

Glad you like Victoria, I do, too.  She was a lot of fun to write.  She's definitely concerned for her employees. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch

I LIKE HOW HONEST THEY ARE WITH EACH OTHER; POOR LUCY!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a good start for them.  They're both really trying to open up and see where this could lead. 

I know!  At least she has her Uncle Edward to keep her calm. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 7:58 PM Title: Prologue - Meddling

ANOTHER HIT BY ESME AND HER MINION, :)



Author's Response:

Haha, yep, she did pretty well there, didn't she? 


Thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

hmmmm bree is getting wierder.  She could still be involved with the car thing, like getting someone else to do it.   James is odd but hopefully harmless.  Yey for E being there for her.



Author's Response:

Love hearing all of the theories!  And yes, Edward did quite well taking care of her, didn't he?  She was lucky to have him.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

hmmm..... so weird! Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more and see what happens with Bree and if they find out who messed with her car, maybe they should have checked her place and see if everything was ok there as well! :)

-Kate



Author's Response:

They probably should have, although if there was a problem, Alice would have let them know. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: michelleg3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

great chapter....hmmmm I wonder if James hurt Bree in some way???

 



Author's Response:

Really love hearing all of the theories about what might be going on and why.  Really fascinating.  Thank you so much for taking the time to review.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

amazing!!! LOVED his Bday! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate

 

(oh and I think now that gets me all caught up with your stories at least! :) besides the new one!)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yeah, I had fun with the birthday.  The Cullens are so much fun. 

Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Loved it, and just some more little snippets of Bree, wonder how she knew that.. hmm... off to the next one! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  And yes, that was a bit suspicious, wasn't it? 

Thanks for the review, hun!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

What a great day. But Edward is annoying me a little bit about having to make a romantic night out of saying I Love You. Really they could be covered in dirt stuck in the middle of no where and it would be perfect. The end there seemed like the perfect time to me. 



Author's Response:

He's being a bit silly about it, but not to worry, the 'I love you's' are right around the corner! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

I wonder if Bella will try her hand at fashion. What better way to start then with her hot ass boyfriend. 



Author's Response:

It's certainly an option for her.  And yeah, talk about having the ultimate model on hand at all times.  Lucky, lucky girl, if you ask me! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

I think meeting Jacob went surprisingly well. Even though Edward says he's not the jealous type he's never felt this way about anyone else so he had no real way of knowing how he would feel. 



Author's Response:

Exactly.  And he quickly realized that his fears were unfounded, and now he can relax and not worry.  Like he said, he might not be as close to Jacob as he'll be to Jasper, but he knows Jacob's a good guy and was never right for Bella.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Soon

Kinky. Hopefully the pictures don't get into the wrong hands. Even though I'm sure Victoria would love them. 



Author's Response:

Well, I dunno that Victoria would want to see the pics of Bella, or at least only out of artistic curiosity.  Now Edward's ... yeah, well, who can blame her?  I'd sure like to see them, too!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

It's nice to see everyone getting along so well. It is sure to make life much better. 

 

I actually forgot there was drama coming. Now I'm excited I love a little drama in a story. 



Author's Response:

Yep, it's a good start for all of their friendships.  Like I said, she fits in his life, he fits in hers.  :)  Not too much longer for the drama!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

Edward really is sweet a little horny but sweet. And I absolutely love Esme. Betting on her sons love life, you can't get much better then that. 



Author's Response:

Pretty standard for a guy in a new relationship, I think.  ;)  I am just having too much fun with Esme.  So thrilled that you are enjoying her as well. Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

It was nice seeing this weekend thru Bella's eyes. They really are great together. It was nice seeing Bella interact with Edwards everyday life.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I'm always concerned that alternating POVs make things too repetitive.  She's going to slip pretty seamlessly into his life, and he'll do the same into hers.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

That was really sweet. They didn't get that the first time. 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I thought it made a great change of pace from their first time.  Lots more of both kinds of lemons for them in the future.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

At times you got to hate being responsible. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, sometimes being responsible is really overrated, isn't it?  They're both SO eager.  Not too much longer now though!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

Edward is such a guy. Lol



Author's Response:

LOL, that's good to hear.  I'm always afraid he's going to sound too girly.  :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

It's nice that they aren't just jumping in the physical relationship. It's nice they are getting to know each other. 



Author's Response:

Yep, they might have jumped into things quickly, but they're slowing down just enough so that they can get to know each other a little bit.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch

Poor Lucy! I thought Lucy may of played a different role though. I almost was expecting her to catch Edward and Bella kissing and hate Bella for taking her Edward. It happens a lot with little ones that are that attached. 

Edwards family is great. I love Grandma. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, sometimes kids do get jealous like that.  There will definitely be more Lucy in the future as the story goes on.  So glad you're enjoying his family, and his grandma especially.  I've had a lot of fun writing her.  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 4:01 AM Title: Prologue - Meddling

Wow! Esme is amazing. 



Author's Response:

Isn't she? I had so much fun writing her! Glad you're on board for the story and that you took the time to review. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

Wonderfully sweet chapter. Lucy is adorable.

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Yeah, I've been having fun with Lucy.  So glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

absolutely loved it!  love reading a story without angst!  I know some drama is ok but I do love to read where it is all fun and fluff... thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks! Yeah, the drama is coming up,  but I don't think it's too angsty.  :)  Glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Happy Birthday

l liked it.......this was a fun chapter  :-)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks.  It's one of my favorite chapters, too.  Thanks fo the nice review!

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Bree is a little freaky!  Could she be the future problem??? Hmmm!?  Looking forward to see what's in storefront us next. Thanks for the continuation.

 



Author's Response:

Not much longer and then things start to get crazy for them.  You'll just have to wait and see about Bree.  Glad to hear you're enjoying it! Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Is Bree a stocker of his is that her problem ???  Loved the suit time :)



Author's Response:

Stalker?  Well, you'll just have to wait and see.  Glad you enjoyed the suit time, it was a really fun part for me to write.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Tha was an amazing chapter. I think my panties melted ;)



Author's Response:

I'd apologize, but that's exactly what I was going for!  Glad to hear you enjoyed it so much.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

Loved this chapter.......Edward---you naughty boy ;-)



Author's Response:

Isn't he?  I couldn't resist.  And who can blame Bella for not being able to either!  Glad to hear you enjoyed it.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

great chapter.   yumminess.  Wonder what Bree's deal is.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I enjoyed writing this chapter, too.  :)  You'll learn more about Bree as we continue.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: killmeangel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

You should write about Bree's deal with Edward  but this chapter was great and I love the story



Author's Response:

It'll be a little while before you learn more about Bree, but not to worry, we're about to get into the mystery and things really get exciting.  Glad you liked the chapter and are enjoying the story.  Thank you so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 10:59 PM Title: Prologue - Meddling

would LOVE to see that! 



Author's Response:

Awesome, I'll keep that in mind!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

Edward can feel at ease about Jacob and even become freinds.



Author's Response:

Yes.  Like he said, he and Jacob might not ever be as close as he and Jasper are, but yes, they could definitely become friends.  And that has to make Bella feel pretty great.  And it's a huge relief for Edward as well.

Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

LOVED this one! :) Meeting with the ex can be awkward, I can say that I am not friends with any of my ex's but that is mostly because I dated them all in high school.  Her reaction to his portfolio was priceless! Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you enjoyed it.  I'm definitely friends with a few of mine.  We don't necessarily hang out much anymore, but we still chat online occasionally.  I dated some awesome guys, even if they're weren't the ones I wanted to be with for the rest of my life, they were amazing people.  I'd have a hard time totally losing contact with them, you know?

My husband and I hung out with my ex and some friends of his a few times and I was so pleased that they got along well.  No jealousy, no weirdness, and they really had fun together.  It was awesome.  If he didn't live all the way across the country I am sure the guys would be friends and hang out without me!

Yes, I had a blast with the portfolio and Bella's reaction!  I've been dying to post that scene for a while now.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Soon

great chapter! Yeah something is going on with Bree :( Hopefully they can get her to open up and figure out what it is and help her :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Yeah, they'll slowly start to put some pieces together as they go.  Just remember, you haven't seen everything yet!  :)  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much

Love it! :) And I love that they are keeping communication open! That is sooooo important!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Yes.  Open communication is key.  They're doing really well together I think!  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

Love Alice and Jasper's story! :) So cruel she was, but at least he didn't give up!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun telling it! She was, but Jasper was tough.  Would you like an outtake of that? I am considering writing one, if anyone is interested.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

awww that was so cool.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  It was a fun chapter to write.  Thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Soon

What I would do to see those photos as if they were real. Loved this!

Author's Response:

OMG, I know!  I was drooling just thinking about it!  I am a photographer and I'll kill to get those two in front of my camera, clothed or otherwise!

Thanks for the nice review! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Soon

great chapter.  Glad they feel so comfortable with each other.  Hope the pics dont come back to haunt them though.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.  It was a huge step forward in trust.   Yes, wouldn't that be bad if the pics came back to haunt them! 

Thanks for the nice review! I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

sorry-  just realized Alice is her best friend-  hit me right after I hit the submit button.



Author's Response:

That's okay.  And yes, Alice is her best friend.  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch

wow-  this Tanya is really nice-  not use to it... where is Alice???



Author's Response:

I thought it was more fun to write a nice Tanya.  It's a nice change of pace, isn't it?  And you'll see Alice soon!  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much

yummy.   hope he tells her soon.



Author's Response:

It won't be too much longer.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much

They are having such a great time together Im like the girl in the drug store to funny.



Author's Response:

I know! I actually did have the drugstore happen to me with my ex.  :P  It was so incredibly funny and I just had to add it to this story.   Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much

I think the 'I love you' will be coming up rather shortly ;-) Can't wait !!!



Author's Response:

It definitely won't be long now.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

twitterpated... really?   LOL.   Sweet meeting between the couples



Author's Response:

LOL, I couldn't resist.  It SO fitted their personalities.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.  Really enjoyed all of the reviews you sent, actually!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

they are too cute together.  lol for work day dreaming



Author's Response:

Aww, glad you liked it.  Yeah, they're pretty ridiculous day dreaming about each other.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

wonderful chapter.  Loved the talks and food interspersed with yummy lemons



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yeah, I wanted them to have a nice relaxed weekend getting to know each other in every way.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

nice dinner.  Woo hoo for "proper" lemon in a bed.  hee hee  You get a dance for that first one

dl



Author's Response:

Glad you liked dinner.  And yes, they made it to a bed.  That was something else Edward was insistent about.  :) 

Eeeek, dancing lemon!  Love it.  So cute.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

really sweet first mini-date



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  I had fun writing the mini-date.  Edward was very insistent that it was NOT an official date yet.  Silly boy.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

oooh love the mini lemon at  the end.  Glad he has a job he likes.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the mini-lemon.  And yes, Edward loves his job.  I thought it was a slightly different career for Edward than usual.  :)  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

her and alice seem like great friends.  Vikki and James seem cool.   Glad there isnt too much dirt in either background.  they are too cute.



Author's Response:

Yes, Alice and Bella are great friends. I wanted a really close, relaxed relationship between them.  Glad you liked Vickie and James as well.  :)  Nope, they both have pretty boring pasts, Edward was just trying to be upfront.  :)

Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch

Wonderful day together.  Glad the family likes her so much.  aww for lucy.   Stopped him telling his story....hmmm bad or not I wonder?



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a nice start to their relationship.  Isn't Edward's family fun?  I've been wanting to write a big, fun Cullen family for a while now. 

Lucy will be okay.  :)

Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer

wonderful re-read of the one shot.  Hope Tanya is happy with the photos.  Glad you painted her in a nice light.  Welcome change to the normal Tanya portrayal.   Gotta love Esme.



Author's Response:

It was fun writing a nice Tanya.  Too many nasty ones out there!  Yes, she was very happy with the photos.  :)

So glad you enjoyed the one-shot (again). 

Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: Prologue - Meddling

sweet start.  Cant wait to see where you take it.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

I like smoth sailing. Does the drama have to do with Bree???



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it.  I'm not telling about Bree.  You'll just have to wait and see.  Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

love it they are so together.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it.  They're a lot of fun to write.  I appreciate that you took the time to let me know you like it!  :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

aww I love Esme!!! Can't wait to read more! :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm having a blast writing her!  :)  I appreciate the nice review.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

Great update. I think its funny that Esme and Cynthia were betting on if they would get together. Can't wait until next time.



Author's Response:

Yep, they're pretty funny, aren't they?  I'm having so much fun writing Esme.  :)  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted

Yes, he is very adorable! Love this couple!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you're enjoying them.  I've had a lot of fun writing them, especially Edward.  Thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

Great chapter!!! Such a exhausting weekend! LOL :) LOVED Mei! :) Can't wait for more!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  Glad you enjoyed it.  It would be exhausting, but totalllllly worth it.  I am glad you liked Mei!  I could totally see this Edward charming women of every age, no matter where he went.  :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

They have both fell hard and fast I think it is a good thing.  I dont think she will be able to walk after all that and have a permint smile on her face



Author's Response:

Yep, they're both falling hard.  :)  LOL, you're right, she's probably feeling a bit sore, but... I think it would be worth it, and bet she'd agree.  :)

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

Wow! Great chapter. Things are developing quickly, but I am afraid that the shit is about to hit the proverbial fan! Great job!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much!  Glad to hear you enjoyed it  They're going to have a little while to enjoy each other before the shit hits the fan.  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

Much better than a cramped car ;)  I am amazed they made it through dinner lol



Author's Response:

Oh definitely!  It is kind of amazing that they made it through dinner.  Edward was some really incredible willpower.  Bella....not so much.  But who can blame her? :) Sorry I am a bit behind on review replies, I am doing my best to catch up.

 

 

Reviewer: KuroiTenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:51 AM Title: Prologue - Meddling

Thanks, Thanks, Thanks....From the bottom of my heart!! I've been waiting for the long version of this story for sooo long and FINALLY you've done it!!! (Insert Happy Dance) You are the best, hope to read more!



Author's Response:

Aww, you're welcome.  I am so excited to be continuing it.  Sorry it took so long!  There will be lots more to read, and I am posting as frequently as I possibly can.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

All I say is, "Incredible!"



Author's Response:

Sorry I am a bit behind on review replies. I am doing my best to catch up.  So glad to hear you really liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

That was probably the hottest chapter about appetizers and drinks I've ever read!

 



Author's Response:

LOL, well I hope it was about a bit more the appetizers and drinks!  Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

Definitely worth the wait! Great job. Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Sorry I am a little behind on review replies.  I am doing my best to catch up!  Thanks for the nice review.  I am glad you enjoyed the chapter and thought it was worth the wait.  :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally

Great chapter! Loved the date and extra dessert! :) Can't wait to see the rest of their weekend!

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

So sorry I am bit behind on review replies!  But I am doing my best to get caught up.  So glad you liked the date and extra dessert.  Edward is pretty yummy!

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

hey

great chapter!

you really are mean! just dragging it out ;D

but yeah, he is probably making it right! 

I really believe the date will be great!

bye

Lil



Author's Response:

Thanks! I know, I am so mean, but I did my best to make sure the next chapter will totally be worth the wait!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

great chapter, can not wait for their date night

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I did my best to make the next chapter worth the wait, so I think you'll enjoy it! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

What is up with Bree???  



Author's Response:

Well, I can't tell you that, I'd be giving away the story!  You're just going to have to wait and see! ;)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

Great chapter!!! I am so excited for their date, and weekend :)

 

-Kate



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks, hun!  Not to worry, the next chapter is their date and I think you'll really enjoy it!  :)

As always, I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

Can't wait! The tension is killing me!! Love it, although I am hoping that Bree isn't going to be a problem! She seemed kind of off after she met him.



Author's Response:

Just imagine how much the tension is killing Edward and Bella!  :)

I'm keeping my lips zipped about who might cause problems for them, you're just going to have to wait and see!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

Oooohhhhhh........that was not nice at all :p Let's get on to this first date!



Author's Response:

I know.  I am a horrible tease.  Not to worry, the next chapter is their date and I think it'll be worth the wait!  ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

perfect chapter for getting to know someone I liked it can't wait for more ,great story.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks!  That's what I was hoping for.  Glad to hear you're enjoying the story.  I really appreciate that you took the time to review and let me know!  :)

 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Anticipation

Aww! He's missing her! Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Yep, he's pretty smitten!  And the next chapter will post tonight!

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