[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2015 7:37 PM Title: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin
thanks for completing this o/s extention + o/t ;) i loved all of it and had tears when reading bree's letter to bella ;) i hope you come back to this with some o/t, f/t ie bella's graduation or her business beginning? ;D
Date: 24 Jun 2013 12:34 AM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing it. I look forward to reading more from you.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for taking the time to review. And I am looking forward to hearing your thoughts on other stories!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 3:57 AM Title: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin
amazing ending to this story and LOVED the outtake for A and J! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
I don't know how I missed replying to this! I am thrilled that you enjoyed the ending to the story. Glad you liked A&J's outtake. I had a lot of fun writing it. Thank you for all your sweet reviews, I always appreciate them.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2013 4:47 AM Title: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, hun!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 9:08 PM Title: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin
that was too cute and funny.
Author's Response:
Aww, yay, I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it. I really had fun with it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2013 9:04 PM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
I can't believe this amaing story has come to a end. You truely are an amazingly talented writer I look forward to reading all of ur stories. Thanks so much for all ur dedication & hard work that goes into writting each story. Thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your sweet review. I am thrilled that you enjoyed the story so much. I have a lot more stories to come, so keep an eye out!
Date: 21 Apr 2013 8:30 PM Title: A&J Outtake - Nipples of the Virgin
Thanks for writing this outtake. I really enjoyed Alice and Jasper's sweet shy love.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed Alice and Jasper's story. I really had fun doing it. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback, I appreciate that so much.
Date: 18 Apr 2013 9:02 PM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
Wonderful end to a sweet story. Loved it from first word to last.
Thank you for writing and sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you for the sweet review! I am thrilled that you liked the story so much. And I really appreciate that you took the time to send me feedback. <3
Date: 15 Apr 2013 3:35 PM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
Very good ending to a great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad to hear you enjoyed it and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 4:49 AM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
Great ff! Loved reading it :)
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! So glad to hear you liked it and I appreciate that you took the time to let me know.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 1:37 AM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
Perfect ending to a perfect story!! I really enjoyed reading this story! Loved it! thank you... Looking forward to reading your other stories and their updates!
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you so much! Thrilled that you liked the way it wrapped up and that you've enjoyed writing it so much. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on my other stories.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:50 AM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
enjoy reading the story. thanks
Author's Response:
Really glad to hear you enjoyed it! Thanks for the nice review.!
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
Oh it was a great fluff filled chapter. It was nice that Bree is doing well and I'm glad that Bella can finally put it behind her. It's great to see Edward and Bella both doing so well in their careers.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter. There are lots of really great things happening for them, and I really wanted those little loose ends wrapped up before the end of the story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
That was a great proposal. It was simple and perfect for them.
Author's Response:
Aww, glad you liked it! Simple and perfect for them is exactly what I was going for! Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
"As far as I was concerned, you could never have too much family, or too much love." Perfect ending. Loved this story! Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad to hear you liked that line. It really seemed like the perfect way to wrap up the story. Thanks for taking the time to review and let me know you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:42 PM Title: Epilogue - Full Circle
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank so much. I am glad to hear you enjoyed the story, and I really appreciate that you've taken the time to review every chapter.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
Good Way to end the story. I am one for letting the story end and not dragging it out. Really, how many weddings can we read without them all sounding the same?
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the chapter and the way the story is wrapping up. The epilogue will actually describe their wedding, but the focus is on their families and their relationship more than describing every detail of the wedding. I do hope you'll read it, and that you enjoy it. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
Great chapter. Glad Bree is doing better. Woo Hoo for award!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter. Yes, Bree is doing much better. And I had fun giving Edward that award! Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
LOVED it! The letter coming from Bree I agree gave Bella the closure that she needed. :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Yay, glad to hear it. I'm glad you liked the letter from Bree, and thought it was something she needed. I really wanted to give Bella that closure. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
:) loved this
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! So glad you liked it.
Date: 07 Apr 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Coming Together
I'll be sad to let go of these characters. They were really lovely. Thank you.
Author's Response:
I'm definitely sad for me to let go of the characters as well. I am so glad you've enjoyed them. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
Such a cute proposal!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 03 Apr 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
Aww :) Such a sweet proposal!!!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! I had fun writing the proposal. <3 Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 02 Apr 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
Loved the proposal!
Author's Response:
Yay, glad you liked the proposal. I really enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
:) loved this
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 27: Fortunate
Grandma Myrtle is hilarious. Wonderful proposal.
Author's Response:
Isn't she fun? I have such a great time with Grandma Myrtle. Glad you liked the proposal, and thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Double Dating
Loved it, So happy that Jessica and Mike seem to have had a great start! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Yep, Jessica and Mike are off to a good start and B&E can finally enjoy their life together. Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Double Dating
I'm glad Bella is finally able to move on from the horrible situation with Bree. Now they can really concentrate on their relationship.
I love your mike by the way.
Author's Response:
Yes, things are returning to normal and Bella and Edward can just enjoy being together. So glad you liked Mike! He's pretty cute, isn't he? Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Peace in the Aftermath
So I have had a rought couple of weeks in RL but I am still here reading and trying to catch back up slowly.
Great chapter.... Bella really needed this time with everyone to sort out all of her feelings. I loved the part with James :) Off to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Aww, I am so sorry to hear about your RL being rough. I hope it turns around. This story will still be here if you need a little more time. NO Rush. :)
Glad you likd the chapter. And yes, having the time to sort out her feelings was a huge help. She has a great support system. So glad you liked the part with James.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Peace in the Aftermath
I can understand Bella's guilt. I am glad that she has so many people there to help her though this difficult time. It's understandable that she would feel bad for what Bree was going through but she can't stop her life.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was a rough situation for her. You're right that her support system will be a huge help. Not to worry, Bella won't stop her life, she just has to take a little pause to come to terms with it.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it so much.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Double Dating
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Double Dating
Great chapter. Glad b is doing better. Sounds like m and j are going to be good together.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter. Bella is definitely doing better and I'm glad you liked Mike and Jessica! It was a fun chapter to write after all of the heavy stuff. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it so much.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Soon
MAJOR FLAILING GOING ON HERE!! NUDE..... EDWARD.....PHOTOS...... why, oh why, didn't you include pics with this story? Dis, this was one of my favorite chapters. It was so loving and sexy. The massage he gave her made me swoon. The photo session was drool-worthy!! I loved that he instigated that part of the night all by his naughty self! I don't know how you expect me to get any work done now, after reading this during lunch. I have "photos" running through my head. ;) In fact, I'm going to ask our friend Bethy to do a manip just for us.
Now those three little words are about to pop out of Bella's mouth too. I love these two so much. You have made them so real, and so magical at the same time. Thank you so much for another wonderful chapter. I'm going to go try to work now.
PHOTOS..... NUDE..... EDWARD.......
Love ya,
Soph
Author's Response:
LOL, I am still flailing over that chapter. I didn't include photos because I would have died/spontaneously combusted making the manips.
So glad you liked the chapter. The massage was pretty swoon-worthy and ugh, she needed it. Shooting a wedding is exhausting!
Thrilled that you liked the photo session, The moment that idea popped in my head I was SO excited. And I don't expect you to get any work done! I'm a trouble maker like that!
So glad you find them real and magical at the same time. :) I love that.
And hehe. Enjoy those visuals!
Love ya, too! -Dissy
Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Peace in the Aftermath
Wow Renee did a great Mom job. The apology from James was nice. Does sound alot like Aspergers. My son has a mild form of it.
Author's Response:
Isn't Renee awesome? Bella really needed that, and it's fun to write a really great Renee! Glad you liked James's apology. I have met a few people with Aspergers, and yes, some of the behavior is similar. He really wasn't trying to scare her when he made the comments about what was happening to her, but he just wasn't able to express it the way he intended to.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Peace in the Aftermath
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Mar 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece
It's sad. BUt what precipitated this "stalking" behavior? Why did Bree snap? And how did she become so savvy as to change her name? That makes it seem all the more planned and makes her less sympathetic.
Author's Response:
You will get the answers to those questions in the next chapter. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece
I'm glad that Bree didn't hurt Bella. She needs a lot of help and I know that Bella will try to help her. Poor Bree she has a lot to work through. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella will definitely play a part in Bree getting the help she needs. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 11 Mar 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece
Bree def needs help. Maybe now getting convicted with Breaking and Entering, she'll get it.
Author's Response:
Yes, she will get the help she desperately needs. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 11 Mar 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 24 - The Final Puzzle Piece
oh poor Bree, kinda feel bad for her :( Hopefully she can get some help now. Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
It is sad about Bree, but at least now she has to chance to get the help she needs.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
I knew something was up with Bree. And with her being James' girlfriend, she had to be up to no good.
Author's Response:
Bree isn't James's girlfriend. James is married to Victoria.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
i totally thought it was bree to begin with .... but i still think James is involved somehow
Author's Response:
Love hearing your thoughts! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
:) loved this
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks, hun! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
Kinda suspected Bree from the start. Ugh.
Author's Response:
Yep, Bree's the culprit. The real question is, did you figure out why?
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
I kinda figured it would be Bree it kinda freaks me out that she has such a deep set hatred for Bella that wasn't her fault. I kinda suspected James but maybe he's just weird or something's going to happen later on in the story with him but I'm also worried with how Bree responded to Bella saying that what she did scared her. Hopefully someone finds them or Bella remembers her pepperspray in her pocket!
Author's Response:
You'll definitely find out more in the next two chapters about why Bree hates Bella so much. Not to worry, Bella remembers the pepper spray and someone is on their way. The question is, who is it?
Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Mar 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
Someone's going to coming in. Maybe Angela had a gut feeling and came back. I'm sort of hoping she was there the whole time listening. I don't think I would of been able to leave Bella alone knowing everything that's been happening. But then again I went from selling high end jewelry to working in a bank. We are trained to be careful. Or maybe even James will come in to get something for Victoria. Edward being as overprotective as he is may sense something is wrong and drive by on his way home and see her car. But he doesn't have a key to get in so James, Victoria and Angela are more likely.
Author's Response:
I love hearing your thoughts on who might come in, and help Bella out! You'll just have to wait and see! The next chapter posts today, so you won't have too long of a wait! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
Omg... don't stop there!!! :) I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
I totally blame my beta for that. I was going to end in a different spot and she encouraged me to end it on a cliffie! Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Answers
I knew there was something wrong with her... Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bree is a bit of a mess. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 03 Mar 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
Charlie is a good guy, I'm glad he didn't give Edward a hard time. It was really great to see them working together.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked Charlie. He is a good guy and he's much more concerned about Bella being safe than intimidating the guy who clearly loves her and is trying to do all he can to help. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer
awesome lemon
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :)
Date: 03 Mar 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
How sad. And Bree seems even more likely now. She is jealous of Bella's success, why else would she destroy Bella's portfolio? That is the single most important to a artist.
While James is creepy, I'm starting to feel that it's just that. He's creepy. Bella is making Victoria's business more lucrative, it's making Victoria look good because she hired Bella and has been a mentor. I could understand if Bella was talking about leaving then it would make sense.
Author's Response:
It is sad. And you're absolutely right that a portfolio would be very important to an artist. At least as a photographer, Bella can always get new prints made. It would have been worse if she were a painter and someone had destroyed her painting.
You have lots of great points, and I can't wait to talk to you more about it once you read the next few chapters! Thanks for the review.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
Too bad that a great night has to end like that.
Author's Response:
I know. But, it's all happeing for a reason and it isn't too much longer until they'll be able to relax and enjoy life together. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 - So Much
Mr. Sexy Pants isn't going to last long. Those feeling are going to come bursting out of his mouth before too long. I love the routine they've fallen into. It's so great when you just can't stay away from each other. Dissy, the lemons in this chapter were awesome..... so sweet, slow, and meaningful.
I LOVED this line: “Either way, it’s my cock that wore you out,” I teased her and she giggled again. “I’m just that good.”
This man couldn't get any better. I'm in love!!
Author's Response:
Nope, he isn't going to last long at all. So glad you like the routine. It's such a fun part of a relationship when you can't keep your hands off each other, but the feelings are deepening and you start to settle into that nice routine. Glad you liked the lemons! And cocky Edward. It's fun to have him pop up occasionally! ;) I really love this Edward a lot, too!
Thanks for the nice review, sweetie!
Date: 26 Feb 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
The meeting of the parents went well, considering why they had to meet the way they did. I'm thinking its Bree thats behind this, but at the same time James is also off.
Author's Response:
Yeah, definitely not the ideal meeting, but it did go well. They could see how much Edward cares about her and all that he's been doing to solve the mystery. Thanks for the review!
Date: 25 Feb 2013 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
wow! Glad that the parental meeting went well, but really with everything that Edward has done for Bella they couldn't find too many flaws. Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Exactly! And really, what's not to like about Edward? He clearly cares about her and is doing everything he can to help support her and take care of her. So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
I loved it. I think an open-minded Charlie is a better Charlie in the end. If there is anything Edward should know is that he can never let his guard down. Hopefully there is more information found for the whole situation...but, I guess we will still have to wait to read what you have on store for us. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter. I thought under the circumstances, it made more sense for Charlie to be open-minded. He can see how much Edward cares about Bella and how hard he's working to take care of her. Thanks for the nice review!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Meeting Chief Swan
Glad Charlie is there. He seems really cool with E. I dont want the girls there in that apartment either. Maybe Renee could go to work with B that day? hide in the shadows or something.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Charlie's a good dad. He can see how much Edward cares about Bella and that's more important to him than anything else. Moving out of the apartment was a good idea. And that's a great suggestion about Renee. Thanks for the review!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After
They both so have it bad!!!! Love it! :)
Author's Response:
Oh yes, they're totally smitten with each other! Thanks for all the reviews!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning
Another great getting to know you chapter, but I'm glad the next chapter is their date because I know them pretty well now, it's time to move on to the lemons, j/k!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Oh yes, they're just about to the lemons!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Anticipation
It was fun getting inside his head & seeing how gone he is for her. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward's falling hard and fast! :)
Date: 19 Feb 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer
This was a great chapter to give us some background on both of them.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the background on both of them. Nothing too crazy in their pasts.
Date: 19 Feb 2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch
Ok, wow!!! Meeting the family before ever really going on a date...AWKWARD!!!! Lmao...Grandma MYRTLE!!!!! The name cracked me up & that's she's a spitfire is even better. :) I loved EPOV!
Author's Response:
Yep definitely awkward. Glad you liked Grandma Myrtle, I had fun with her, too! She IS Esme's mother, so she had to be a spitfire! I had a great time writing the EPOV. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 12:31 AM Title: Prologue - Meddling
Lol! I LOVE ESME!!!!! This was such a fun chapter to read. :)
Author's Response:
So glad you liked her. I had such fun writing her. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk
Great chapter, Dissy. I love how open Bella and Alice are with each other about their relationships. In fact, I loved the whole dinner with the two couples. Alice and Jasper's side story was so adorable. It's really nice that they all seem to be getting along so well. Sometimes it is hard to find a couple that meshes well with both the guy and the girl.
As to Bree... that girl is up to something. I have a feeling she has a huge crush on Edward. Could be wrong.
Edward and Bella keep getting better and better, as does this story!!
P.S. LOVED that Edward showed up with his overnight bag!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you likd the chapter. I had a lot of fun with the dinner with the two couples and Alice and Jasper's relationship. I am going to do an outtake of when A&J met! It can be hard to find couples to socialize with, and it'll be nice that the four of them can hang out.
So glad you're loving the story. And Bella did tell him she wanted him to stay after. :)
Date: 18 Feb 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
Thank you! And glad something good came from it as well... Looking forward to more soon...
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review! The next chapter will post today!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
wow Poor Bella :( So excited to read more!!! :)
-Kate
Author's Response:
Yeah, she's having a rough time, isn't she? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
Great chapter!! Why do I always think of Bree when something happens to Bella???
I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter! And the chapter after next is when you'll find out if your instincts were right about Bree. Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Destruction and Hope
Poor B. Wow they stole her keys too. They need to remember to change the mailbox key too. Her mail being stolen could be another revenge tactic. Wonderful speech by him asking her to move in.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's definitely scary, huh? Good thoughts about the mailbox key! So glad you liked Edward's speech. She really needed to hear that!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Still Distracted
This Edward is so adorable that I want to squeeze him, and smooch him, and do all kinds of naughty things with him. Think you can arrange that? Their relationship seems so perfect right now. They both feel the same way about each other, and are so comfortable together. It reminds me of those wonderful first months of love that we've all experienced. That's what I love about your writing, Dissy. It is so "relatable"! It's so easy to feel what your characters are feeling. I also love that Edward isn't afraid to let his guy friends know how he feels about Bella.
I can't wait to fall more in love with these two. *whispers to Dissy* You're not going to throw something really nasty at them, are you? I don't want to have to come hunt you down.
Great chapter, as always, Dis.
Author's Response:
Isn't he? And believe me, if I could clone this Edward, I sure would.
It is a great start to their relationship, isn't it? So glad you enjoy the relatability of it. That's definitely something I was aiming for, especially in this story. And yeah, Edward is pretty open to admitting his feelings.
Thanks for the nice review, hun!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
James is now going on the back burner of suspects. While he is acting totally crazy it's to obvious. To many sneaky things are happening Bree is looking better everyday. Her quite displeasure at Bella's success is really telling.
Author's Response:
Love your theories. Just a few more chapters until you find out if you're right or not! ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
What kind of story would it be if all the little things weren't because someone had it out for Bella. Lol
Author's Response:
Very true! :) But Bella doesn't know that for sure ... Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
OMG! Getting very interesting! Please update soon I can't wait!!!
Author's Response:
I know! Hope you're enjoying the mystery! The next chapter will post on Sunday! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
omg! so excited for the next few chapters to find out everything!
-Kate
Author's Response:
I really think you're going to love them! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
Wow Mike seems like he really wants to try.
Ugh a break in now too??? This is getting nuts.
Author's Response:
Yep, Mike is really trying. I think Jessica will be pretty impressed by the new, improved version of him.
And yeah, things are getting pretty crazy. I promise it won't get tooo much crazier though. Only a few more chapters before this mysteryl wraps up. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Getting Her Attention
I think Mike likes Jess or he wouldn't have asked for help and be willing to do what they said. I still think that Bree has something to do with all the problems.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, Mike is definitely sincere about his feelings for Jess. He's pretty eager to try out his new plan on her. And I think she'll be wowed by the new improved Mike Newton.
Just a few more chapters before you find out if you're right or not! Things are speeding up! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 - The Morning After
I was wrong about what chapter I was on. It was this one. Whew, Dissy. That was some weekend to read about on my lunch hour. I could barely eat, between the panting and the drooling! These two are just too hot together. I got the giggles at the condom shopping scene. Bella is so adorable. If they keep this up, they will need a case of those magnums. ;)
It is so wonderful to see them falling for each other so quickly. I'm really glad, too, that neither of them are letting normal conventions bother them. You have done such an brilliant job of letting us feel exactly what they are feeling. To me, they had the perfect weekend together. It was comfortable and easy, and very SEXY. I can't wait to see where they go from here.
Thanks for all the inspiration...... hubs says he will mail you the dark chocolate ASAP.
Author's Response:
Hey, baby cakes! Glad I could spice up your lunch hour. They are really hot together, aren't they? I thought the condom shopping was funny. :) And yes, they are going to need a case. Nothing like a new relationship and the crazed desire to go at it like bunnies!
Glad you're enjoying the quick fall. It just makes sense for them. No ex issues, nothing to hold them back. They've found the person they want to be with and they're just going to enjoy it. Glad you liked the relaxed, easy feel, along with the sexy. I just wanted them to click and ENJOY their time together.
You are welcome! And so is your hubs. Still waiting on that dark chocolate ...
Date: 07 Feb 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
Wow! So enjoyed reading!:-) and really looking forward to the next updates and hope soon! Thank take care
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one will post on Sunday! Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
hmmm I still think its Bree being jealous of B's success and all. think James is jus being creepy
Author's Response:
Not too much longer til you find out the truth! A few more chapters and you'll have your answers. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
I think Bree is the one causing Bella problems. James is makimg it to easy to think its him. Unless him and Bree are doing it together. Hum just have to figure it out. good chapter
Author's Response:
I am really enjoying all of your theories! Thanks for taking the time to give me the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
:) love this
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
OH jeez.... both Bree and and James are both just as creepy.... Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Yeah, I have you guys questioning everyone, don't I? :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 03 Feb 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - A Little Alone Time
Maybe James and agree are in this together? Hmmmm...weird!
Author's Response:
I assume you meant James and Bree. Auto-correct problems? :)
And I love hearing the theories! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
I have a feeling it's Angela.....maybe Bree hired her??
Author's Response:
Love hearing the theories! It won't be too much longer until we find out. I promise, I won't drag it out forever. Thanks for the review!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally
I loved the date, I thought it was so sweet thAt Edward wanted to be the perfect gentleman and take her out. The lemon was amazing. I am pretty sure there are more to follow. Love the story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yep, he's definitely a gentleman, but Bella's sure testing him. So glad you enjoyed the lemon, and there are PLENTY more to follow! Thanks for the nice review, I appreciate it so much.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Finally
Oh my gosh, their first date was definitely worth the wait! That had to be the hottest lunch hour I've ever spent. ;) I love how Edward is trying to do everything the right way. He's just so sweet and cute. And I love horny Bella. I think she would have been happy to skip the dinner and go straight to the sex. She's my kind of girl!!!
This story makes me smile, Dissy. I truly LOVE it! Now I have to try and sneak in another chapter, before I go back to work.
P.S. I'm very curious about Bree. What's up with that girl? (just thinking to myself here) xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Yay, glad you had a nice naughty lunch hour! Edward is definitely trying to do things right, but horny Bella keeps being difficult. Shee would TOTALLY have skipped dinner and went straight to bed. Who can blame her? If I had that man, I'd be doing the same thing.
So thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter, and that you're having so much with the story in general. :) It makes me very happy to hear. Love getting your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning
I have to tell you what a big girl crush I have on your Bella. I wanted to fist pump you for this little doozy of a line: "What you'd look like when you came with my mouth on you." I was so proud of her for saying exactly what she was thinking. She's so adorable!
Now to the cockblocking episode in the parking lot after they had drinks... *pouts* I wanted them to go home and do really wicked things to each other. But since you and I know what's it like to have to get up every morning and go to work, I guess it makes sense to postpone the wicked things. I'm really looking forward to the weekend with these two.
Loved this chapter, Dissy.
Author's Response:
Isn't she awesome? I'm having a blast writing her. Love how bold she is! Glad you are enjoying it, too. Just about killed Edward though!
And I know, it was so disappointing that I cockblocked like that, but you know they wouldn't have been able to stop. They would never have made it into work again! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
someone is messing with her. I cant wait to see what Edward fines
Author's Response:
Yes. Edward's certainly doing all he can to figure out what's going on. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
:)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
wow!!! So yeah, I am thinking it has to be Bree, because there is just too much there... but I can't wait to read more!!!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Love hearing your thoughts on it. Thanks for the review, hun!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 18 - On Edge
Still thinking bree is involved. Too many coincidences of stuff going wtong
Author's Response:
There are lots of little coincidences going on. Love hearing your guesses! Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July
Nice Picture. The thought of them all playing together was a very pleasant one. Lol
Ah and you wanted to know why I added Angela and Victoria to the list of suspects. Well Angela knew Bella from school, she is taking over part of Bella's responsibilities at work. Plus she was the last to leave work. She would of had time to destroy the car when no one else was around. But she's still not my first choice. Victoria is on the list because she could feel threatened by Bella. Bella is very talented. Then there is the fact that James came on to her which she may or may not of noticed while on the phone. Some women will do crazy things to keep on top.
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! Yes, don't you wish we had a video of all of them playing?
I love hearing your theories! They're all really interesting. Thanks for explaining, I appreciate it a lot.
Date: 25 Jan 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July
That was sweet and hot loved it
Author's Response:
Aww, thank you! So glad you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Anticipation
I loved getting a glimpse into Edward's day. He could just sit there and breathe, and I would watch!! I also liked that Emmett called him to talk about Bella. Your Emmett seems like a wonderful man.
I enjoyed learning about Edward's ex-girlfiends. Doesn't sound like any of those relationships were very special. No wonder the man is ready for something meaningful!! And I'm sure you're going to give it to him, right?
LOVED the self-loving, Dissy!! That was HOT!! Edward may have had "a thousand fantasies" flickering through his mind; but I had a thousand more!
Thank you again for a very inspiring lunch (or would that be perspiring?) I love spending my lunch hour with you, girl. xoxo
Author's Response:
Edward is pretty fascinating, isn't he? Emmett is a wonderful man, and he may give him shit, but he really loves his little brother.
No, none of Edward's ex-gf's were very special. They weren't bad people, but not at all what he was looking for. And oh yes, he deserves something meaningful, and he's about to get it!
Feel free to share your thousand fantasies, I might be convinced to encorporate a few! ;)
Glad you enjoyed your perspiring lunch! I love that you choose to spend your lunch hour with me! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer
Well, I was really releaved to find out that Edward didn't have anything too sordid in his past. BUT then I started thinking.... this is Dissy writing this! I'm not sure I trust you, girl. Are you going to spring something really bad on me later in the story? I don't do angst well, I don't like crying, and I don't like having to drink to get myself through a story. *wink* Well, maybe I do have a drink while I'm reading sometimes. I do hang out with those crazy girls, you know.
I liked the "getting to know you" questions. We always need a little background. And I'm so glad they aren't waiting until Friday to see each other again. I mean background info is ok, but compared to the sexy stuff..... NAH!!
Love ya, Dissy.
Author's Response:
No, no, I promise. Edward is exactly as he seems. Sweet, and funny, and sexy and a little bit goofy sometimes. Nothing sordid in his past. There's some drama, but really nothing I'd consider angsty. No crying or drinking required.
I can understand why those crazy girls drive you to drink, though! ;)
Glad you enjoyed the background and getting to know you. And yes, they are both pretty eager for more sexy stuff as well!
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Brunch
This story is just so you, Dissy. I can picture you sitting there writing this and smirking. Loved their texts: What time do you want me? <B Now. <E I was smiling and giggling like an idiot reading this.
That was really bad of you to make poor Lucy break her arm just so Edward wouldn't have to tell Bella about his past until the next chapter. ;) Guess I'm off to find out how bad your boy really was.
Seriously, Dis, I love this story. It makes me SMILE!! And pant, and drool. Knowing you, it's only going to get better!
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah. I have kind of oddball humor. And I am often amused by myself! :) You know me, too well!
I know! I'm so mean, aren't I? Poor Lucy! I promise, our boy isn't too naughty.
I always aiming for smiling, panting, and drooling, so my mission has been accomplished!
Thanks for the nice revivew!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Fourth of July
wonderful family day.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad to hear you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer
Good gosh, Discordia!! You and Edward don't waste any time, do you? The man knows exactly what he wants, and just takes it! That first kiss was one of the hottest I've ever read. There were so many great lines in this chapter, but I won't quote them all back to you. I did LOVE this: "Where do you think you're going? "I was going to get dressed." "Overrated." I FLOVE THIS MAN!!!
Oh, Dissy, I am so loving this already!!!!! You rock, girl!!!!!
Author's Response:
Haha, nope, we don't waste any time at all! Yes, he does know what he wants! Although you'll see later that he's not always quite so bold. Glad you liked the kiss!
This Edward is pretty funny. I 'heard' his voice very clearly as I wrote this story, and he has lots of lines like that. :) So glad you're enjoying them.
Thanks for the lovely review. I am thrilled that you're having fun with the story.