very interesting meeting Edwards family.  Nana Es seems intimidating, hope she mellows as she gets to know Isa.  Looking forward to seeing how Edward and Isa move their relationship forward and increase their play time.  

Well, I'm sure that Isa meeting Carlisle for the first time was..........awkward.  Actually, the comment regarding the sheets and the follow-up comment with regard to any surfaces that would require scrubbing was beyond rude.  I was suspecting it, but thought I was wrong; however, now I truly think that Carlisle is jealous of Isa.  I'm not sure if he wants Edward for himself, or if it is some weird twisted territorial BS.  I am getting the feeling that Carlisle does  not want anyone intruding into Edward's life.  It almost seems to me that Carlisle does not wish to "share" Edward, and by Isa being more entranced into Edward's life that possibly there will, at some point, be no need for Carlisle presence.  I don't know, but at this moment, I am not that enamored of Carlisle.  I guess we will have to wait and see what transpires, but right now Carlisle is giving off "creepy" vibes.

Actually, Isa seemed to handle herself quite well with the grilling from Edward's Nana.  She was very respectful to the Nana and was able to reassure Edward that she was more than comfortable dealing with the "intrusive" questions presented to her.  Even though Edward was aware that Isa is a very independent woman, I am sure that her responding to Edward's grandmother with regard to her ability to support herself without Edward's money probably gave them both the needed reassurance that he is indeed not a "gold digger".  I susupected all along that Edward's last girlfriend had indeed latched on to Edward for both his status and money.  It had to have been rather awkward though since his last girlfriend had been a friend of Edward's sister-in-law.  However, with this being said, admittedly Edward had actually not taken the reins of the situation.  Instead it seems as if he let the woman use him, and even if he used her for a convenient vessel for sex, it obviously took a greater toll on him. 

I guess it took for him to retreat from life briefly to see that he had to play a more active role in obtaining what he wanted out of life than to simply take the easier path.  It almost could be compared to Robert Frost's poem, "The Road Less Travelled".  Instead of just going along with conventionality, he needed to divert and actually seek out and discover for himself what he wanted out of a relationship.  He couldn't rely on his family members or others in society to present him with choices of partners, he needed to seek a partner out for himself. 

I not actually sure why Isa was pissed off that Edward did not share how long it had been that he had been intimate.  Afterall, she most assuredly has not seemed to share all of her past either.  I think now that they both acknowledge that they have approached this relationship by jumping in at the middle, I feel they both realize that they almost have to go back and sew up a few of the loose ends--start at the beginning.  Well, I am sure there will be plenty of time for that to occur.

Now that Emmett sees that Edward is beginning into a committed relationship, and their brother is married, I guess it's time for Emmett to begin actively searching for his special someone.  One certainly cannot pull the "hit and quit it" forever.  LOL   However, I do believe that Emmett had been keep his inappropriate comments and visual observations to himself.  I actually do not believe that Edward will not hesistate to set Emmett straight.  Now that Edward is beginning to embrace his dominant side, his possessive nature is also beginning to rear it's head. 

As always, great chapter.  I look forward to seeing another posted chapter in a couple of weeks.

:)

I liked this chapter, because we find out more about each of them but what the hell is wrong with Carlisle?????

I think they are finding a good middle ground and are enjoying every minute of there time together.

They worked things out quite well so far ;)

He liked his suprise she knew he would be there?

good times ')

She is going to be at the benefit but she will be playing???

Great first meeting and I think it is love at first sight

I loved it so good they are getting more deeper into their ds relationship will they take it father into their life like going out in their roles update soon

I love this story so much. It's seriously the best fanfic--maybe even best story--I've read that properly displays what a healthy D/s relationship is. Thank you! Someone is finally getting it right; I'm so sick of the Top/Dom character not doing his duty in caring for their bottom/sub.

A few things to get out of the way....so happy to see a new chapter posted, read on FB that you were ill, definitely hope you are feeling better; glad all the festivities surrounding your sister's wedding went well, and sorry to hear that you will not be posting every week.  However, I can certainly understand how RL can intrude upon your writing, and honestly I am now sure how you manage to post  such interesting and thought provoking chapters every week.  I'll just say, that I am happy whenever you manage to post.

So I guess the visit to the shopping trip to the private, exclusive BDSM shop accomplished more than Edward had originally intended.  Actually, it was rather ironic that Edward and Bella were on shopping expeditions, and both of them actually purchased items to progress and enhance their relationship.

It appears that Edward had intended to explore toys to aid in the scenes; however, I not sure that he anticipated being nudged and judged by Madame Rosa to embrace fully his dominant side.  Just with those few thought provoking statements that Madame Rosa uttered, it seemed to snap Edward out of what seemed to be a bit of reluctance on Edward's part to understand that he needed to fully engage his dominant tendencies so that he can be what Isa requires.  Obviously, he needs to be cognizant of not overstepping the limits that they currently have in place, but it also emphasized, I feel, that Edward needs to begin to test those limits.  The more confidence Edward has in himself will only enhance the scenes.  It was almost as if Edward needed validation from an outside party for him to realize that this is what he needs and has obviously been missing in his life.

It was obvious upon returning from the shopping experience, that he was going to implement his newly found "courage".  I really enjoyed that he took the "bull by the horns" and decided to test his new found relevations.  Yep, he certainly took charge, commanded the scene, and did so without discussing it beforehand.  Actually, I believe that by suprising Isa with his verbal commands and instructions and actually pushed beyond limits that they had not even discussed, and I actually think he was astounded to find that Isa followed the cues without hesitation.  It seems that they will obviousy be incorporating more "Daddy/little" into their everyday lives more seemlessly that I belive either had anticipated. 

Even with how Edward dominated the scene, and wordlessly urged Isa to follow his lead and more fully submit, it was a pleasure to read that Edward definitely recognizes that Isa remains an opinionated, strong woman and can still retain who she is in the outside world; but, at the same time, can have her need for dominance be fulfilled without sacraficing her independence.  As they further grow and explore their relationship, it can only enhance both of their lives both in and out of the scenes.

You are doing an absolutely great job with this fiction.  I always look forward to your postings; and, as of yet, you have not disappointed.  I truly look forward to the two of them exploring the exclusive BDSM shop together, and I cannot wait to see how you will incorporate the two of them in-scene outside the confines of their respective homes; that is, of course, if you have that planned.  LOL  Nothing like being pushy on my part!

Thanks again for sharing this journey with us.

SO AMAZING :D  I really loved it! 

Gonna miss this every week!

I loved seeing the guys together. It is so typical for guys to want details about each others sex lives. They are to funny. It was nice to see Edward realize how deep his feelings really are.

I feel incrediably sad for Carmen, I myself had a late miscarriage 2 years before my daughter and know how hard that is. That explains a little bit about what Edward thought of Carmen's strange behavior at the benefit. 

I want to apologies for my review. In no way did I mean any harm. I truly love this story and all the details that you add into every chapter. I just wasn't sure if you knew that looking into the details of the building was something that you were aware of. Not many building can you pull up actual floorplans for, so i just wanted to let you know that that was a option. When I write I like to get as many facts as I can and from reading all your wonderful stories I know that you put a lot of research into your stories as well. So I was just offering some information on a place that I know personally. 

So please know that I wasn't critiquing this story in any way. And I am sorry if you took that the wrong way.

Ok, ok, so I'm a little late with my reading and review. But, I am super glad that Noc gave you a little push to get this chapter out. It was another great chapter, and I was actually really pleased how he dealt with his brothers and telling them about Isa. I can't wait for more. 

Hope you had a lovely Christmas and enjoy all the celebrations!!!

Oh her friends are awesome. Family gatherings just got even better. 

Once again I am awed by your descriptions. It is truly amazing. 

I loved meeting a little but of Edwards family. I can see that family gatherings would be very interesting and fun. 

So it was Bella and not Edward who was interested in daddy kink. You did surprise me with Edwards little quirks. I uses he just never realized the full potential of his kink. 

Nice location for Edwards apartment. Very classy. That date was really sweet. A perfect date to get to know each other. 

I love how realistically you approach this subject.  I feel like they are buildings real relationship and that it is not forced or rushed, etc..  So very good!

Loved it!!!!!!! It was amazing!! I was wondering what will happen when Edward get lost into his mind and his work and this chapter pretty much answered it!!! I loved how Isa took it!! She was mad at him for ignoring her but when she understood what was going on she was so nice!! And I loved her first answere to his text when he go to lunch!! Can't wait to read more andsee them descovering more about themselves and their relantionship!!!!

great chapter

Great chapter, hon. I loved discovereing a different side of Edward, the lunch especially revealed how much he cares for his brothers, even though their are all very different.

Thanks for the update, and Happy Christmas.

xoxo

Mina

I loved it so good they way they talk so openly is great they need that to keep moving forward it both parts of their relationship update soon

awesome chapter

great chapter

getting good

i like it

Loving this story.  Really like the way you're writing their building romance and play time.  Looking forward to more.

SO amazing!  I really loved it all.  I am sad about the updates not being weekly for awhile, but I completely understand.  Cannot wait for the next one :D

What a fabulous breakfast!!!

Happy to have you back posting.  Oh yeah, it was only a week without a chapter, and it's not as if you had not forewarned us, but.....glad you're back.  LOL  Wow, not one, but two bachelorette parties--what a lucky girl your sister is.  I hope all parties concerned have a good time, and I will anxiously await for the new year for your future postings.

I am really glad that Edward ascertained that he was actually letting Isa top from the bottom.  However, in his defense, I don't believe he realized just how much he is drawn to the role of the Dominant, and with that being said, I sincerely believe he now "gets it".  For this relationship to work, he must, of course with Isa's input, take more of the reins and begin to play a more active role in initiating the scenes.  Since he is aware that being in the role of submissive is both something Isa wants and obviously needs, he will need to step up his gameplan. 

Isa definitely wants the scenes, but since she is obviously still warring within herself with the notion of what is conventional and acceptable in "normal" society, it is going to cause problems if she begins to attempt to manipulate Edward to gets what she wants and needs.  Thank the f--- that Edward is becoming more astute to reading the tells.  Even though Isa is a very strong, independent woman who is capable of functioning in the world at charge, it is becoming more obvious that she herself cannot meet all the needs and aspects of her life though what society deems as normal.  I certainly hope that somewhere along the lines of this story, you will be able to give us some insight as to what led Isa to this.  I do not feel that this makes her twisted or demented in anyway shape or form, but obviously somewhere in her formative years something or someone did not meet her needs.  Or then again, I could be way off base in my assumptions.

For Edward, though, I do feel that his assuming a much more active role of the Dominant, it will enable him to channel in a positive direction his need for dominance and possissiveness.  I think this comes as a surprise to him; but now that he has discovered it with Isa, I don't believe there will be any retreating.  Possibly, he let other women direct so many aspects of his previous realtionships (almost being a passive participant) that now that he has discovered someone that will allow him to lead and take control, it will begin to complete him and provide tools he needs to become the person that he buried for so long--that he did not even realize that he had not reached his full potential for a fulfilling life.  I hope that this is not too much speculation on my behalf. 

They most definitely will need to discuss further their limits, but with the establishment of somewhat regular "role playing" times, I do believe that they will realize just how much they meld.  With that being said, I also believe that pushing each other's limits, it is going to make for some very interesting interactions.  Even though you stated you don't necessarily write unnecessary drama, sometimes some good angst and drama make the "reconcilliation" that much more interesting.  LOL

Anyways, as always, another great chapter.  Look forward to the next time you post. 

I loved it so yummy how he just take control and starts it wow so good update soon

I loved it her friends are too funny hehe and damn those two are so on fire intense and sinful so good update soon

Q: When is the chapter with the peircing?

Gah, they are amazing :)  I cannot wait for more :D

Wonderful story. It has become one of my favorites as was Papi. I didn't realize you live in Israel. Please know we are all praying for you all here in our corner of Southern California. Stay safe!!

I loved this chapter and how they are just expanding their relationship. On the other hand, please take care of yourself, honey and be safe. I will pray for your safety and that of your loved ones.

plu - Michele

Hey,

I really liked the meeting with her friends, they were crazy but funny and really nice! Can't wait to read more!

HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WOW. That was intense. Good job they had all that water around it may have been needed to dampen the flames. How on earth did he manage to say no to going back to her place. I would have thought the fact that he has a butler would have freaked her out, it would me. Thanks for the info on FB, twitter etc I'll look you up so please friend me. 

LOVED IT,!!! This chapter was soooooo amazing!!! They are so natural in both aspects of their relantionship!! They were so great in the morning after and their scene was so hot!! I loved that they talked and that they are so open with each other!! The only think I didn't get was when they talked and agreed to tne scene they played... was it at a previous chapter? Anyway it was so awesoe!! And sexy!! Can't wait to read more...

It was a pretty good chapter. I liked how well the scene was written, all aspects of it. But the language when Edward and Bella talk is too formal at times, making it seem very forced and false.

SO amazing :D  Loved the kink ;)

And so it would seem that their journey has begun. 

If I'm not reading more into this than is actually there, I really glad that Edward did not wake to find this realtionship would travel to the same level that obviously most of his previous sexual encounters have thus far.  I guess he was mildly surprised that Isa did not slip into the mindset that some women do when they "give it up".  Sometimes it seems that some women feel that once they have "allowed" the man to experience the "promised land", they often reverse the roles and find themselves claiming a power that actually should not even exist in a relationship.  Instead of enjoying the intimacy and sharing, they begin to use their sexuality as a means to gain acquience over other parts of the realtionship (If you don't do as I wish, there will be no intimacy for you.).  I guess Edward expected that, but this is where is will begin to understand that Isa is very different from other women he has dated in the past.  This just demonstrates how being completely honest and leaving the game playing out of the relationship can only strengthen and deepen their connection.   

It is so telling just how much Edward's understands Isa's desires, and along the same lines it is obvious how much Isa's involvement in Edward's life thus far has enabled him to realease the deep seeded desires that have been lying just under the radar waiting for the correct woman to come along and help his embrace his desires.  The way in which Edward address the idea of the piercing of her nipples, during demonstrated his intuitiveness in regard for Isa's need for submission as well as her desire to please.  By his suggestion that Isa have the piercing done to please Edward--to submit to his desire to see her nipples peirced--it also meets Isa's need to be able to address a situation that is possibly fearful or awkward for her.  Therefore, it seems that by submitting to one of Edward's desires it has a two-fold effect--she pleases him, and gets something accomplished that she also wants but cannot seem to face committing to on her own.  Yeah, hope that makes some sense.

It seems obvious that Edward is not ready to embrace the idea of "love", but I do hope that as their realtionship develops both through role-playing and the vanilla BF/GF times, that he will eventually see that they seem to be quite suited for one another.  Yeah, it's obvious that they are currently in the "honeymoon" phase and with Isa being very independent and fiesty--obviously not something that she is going to put on the back burner for anyone,  and Edward's need to dominate possibly beyond the role-playing aspect, the two of them will see how discovering and embracing this type of a realtionship can be a win/win for both of them.  It might even be possible that fate led to the two of them meeting. 

I truly am enjoying the "slow burn" that you are doing with these two.  It's almost as if it is a very sensual dance--almost that of a tango.  I look forward to when the "honeymoon phase" ceases, and we see some of the fire that these two have. 

So, once again, another great chapter.  I truly do try not to get so wordy with these reviews, but I absolutely love the subtle nuances that you weave with your words.  It often makes me want to just delve into these characters and see if indeed what I have said is what you intended, or if I am completely off base in some of my assumptions. Anyways, look forward to next week's chapter.

Can't wait for more

 Great chapter. Both sides of their relationship are really beginning to develop, I'm very curious to see how far and how fast you take this.

Frozen jeans - sounds like a typical man-excuse for neglecting to do the weekly wash!

Well worth the wait! And very hot! Well done!