[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
I think James is closer than Edward realizes. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think I want him Loved it very much as long as he doesen't run from her I will be fine update when you can thanks for sharing.....
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
This story totally rocks I love it and think you did an amazing job. Would love to see another chapter and see what happens to Aro, and James. Also what now happens with Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
What a great story! I found this 2 days ago and now I am addicted to your creative and descriptive storytelling powers. Please update soon!
Date: 24 May 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad that they finally got together. That this time it was because they both wanted it. GREAT GREAT job with this chapter.
Date: 05 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Right now I agree with Bella... He's a sick bastard!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Was he raised under a rock? Where is Esme? Didn't he learn any manners at all? I want to slap some sense into him!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
WHAAAT?!?! How stupid can one man be?! GAH! He just expects her to go along with this program?!?! What is his problem!!!!????!?! I have to find out how this progresses!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 04 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
It took them long enough... along with some encouragement too. They were both nervous, afraid and in such lust, they were about to explode hadn't it been for Emmett and Alice.
Bella was so sweet, talking to herself in the bathroom, and it was great that Edward found her there. It was the last drop needed.
Date: 03 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow...is he a mad man? you know? like...insane?????
Date: 03 May 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
ok, I'm intrigued!
Interesting plot...are you going for beauty & the beast? It's giving me a B&TB feeling...
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
i love it i love it i love it!!!!
update soon!!!!
Date: 02 May 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, glad to see they finally got it together.
Date: 02 May 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think I am going to call the Fire Department on Edward and Bella!
WOW!!!!
*Fanning Myself*
Date: 02 May 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
LOve Alices line.. "Oh, and don’t do anything I wouldn’t do, and in case you don’t know that gives you a ton of leeway!”."
Enjoyed the chpt
Date: 02 May 2010 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
well it's about time these two nut cases do something about all this love they have. great chapter and I can't wait for lots more lovin'
thank you for the update..please give us another soon. :)
Date: 02 May 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was a great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 02 May 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
that was totally hot ! cant wait till the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love that she can't wait to do it again!
Date: 02 May 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
What I thought it was fuck hot and I love the when can we do it again LOL. Love Emmett telling Edward to shit or get off the pot so to speak. Cant wait for what happens next.
Date: 01 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
I have missed your update. I am excited to see what happens with them now. Glad to see your blog.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved this chapter! I thought it was awesome that you wrote Bella as being a virgin and having Edward find her inexperience endering. I'm waiting until marriage...and the older I get the more difficult that choice gets. That choice was definitely more accepted in high school than it was in college. To say the least, finding out the guy you were head over heels over cheated on you because you wouldn't "give it up" gets old. I just hope I can someday find someone who will find my "innocence" an endering quality, like the Edward you just wrote :-) This chapter was fantastic! Update soon :)
Author's Response:
Oh, I think you will. The older I get, I swear it rings true all the things my mother used to tell me .... even though I hate to admit it. Thanks for reading & reviewing my story. I'm glad you enjoy it. :)
Date: 01 May 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was nervous about that one.
Date: 01 May 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
holy shit! I need a cold shower after that!! lol thanks for the update! can't wait for the next one!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked that chapter. I thought I'd never finish it (I change my mind like I change my clothes -- never can decide). Thanks for reading & reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sexy! Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing & rating all the chapters. That means a lot to me, especially to know that you are enjoying the story. I hope you continue to read it. Thanks again! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Very humbling for Edward -- yet he's so sweet & sexy!!!! Bella's thinking with her heart, which is good.
* I want to stay in Edward's room too! *
Date: 01 May 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
I loved this chpater... yay!!! They finally got it on!!! yummy
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading & reviewing ... it means a lot!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
That line is the best line I have heard in while loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I really appreciate your review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this chapter its really good update soon
Author's Response:
I am so glad you like it. I was nervous about this chapter. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Best chapter yet!!! Chock full of suspense -- seriously nail biting read!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Fantastic! Run, Bella, run!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Spooky, spooky James! I wouldn't want him seranading me. I wouldn't mind Edward doing it though. ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow --- Great Chapter!! Loved Bella's dream. Poor Bella with another ordeal but this one seems much worse!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved chapter!
I smell trouble brewing!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter - more opening up -
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holey Moley --- gotta love Emmett! Looks like Edward woke up and smelled the abduction. Another good chapter. Good descriptions in hospital.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
That'a boy Emmett!! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG! What a way to wake up! Of course, it would be better if you were actually ready for that. Another great chapter!
Date: 01 May 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
He can say the right things and yet he can do the wrong things. Really liked the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa ... stalker much?? Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
"Does he need to wipe my bottom as well?" -- Loved that line!!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Don't want to get on Edward's bad side.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
Scary ... but GOOD!
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems like a really great story!
Date: 01 May 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
lol for parting line
Author's Response:
Yeah, I figured that's what I would say if it had been me in Bella's place (wish it could be, if it weren't fiction). Thanks for reading & reviewing ... it means a lot! Loved the graphic!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Why can't she even choose her clothes?! Why he's such controlling asshat?!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
As I said one delusional bastard. He's total control freak with major issues.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
"the devil’s lair" hahaha
What is wrong with Edward? Is he delusional?
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
This is a great story and I am glad that I took time to read it. I know that you said that it's been difficult for you to write, but I hope that you continue!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
You do a great job with dramatic writing! I am so relieved that Edward found her!!! This was a wonderful chapter!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG I hope Bella gets away!!!! Your story is very riveting! It has me on the edge of my seat!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
You did a great job writing the dialouge in this chapter. That video made my skin crawl!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was a hot chapter! :)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Favorite line:
"I can show you the beauty of yourself and we can find the beauty of us.”
I am enjoying your story and I can't wait to read more.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW...Edward must be crazy to think that Bella would just accept him right after being kidnapped. Goodness!! :)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!! Edward to the rescue :)
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
ooooooh crap... She better get away!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
I adore this story. I always get all giddy when I see you've updated :) :) This chapter was fantastic...it's nice to have some Edward/Bella time again. She does need to get to the hospital sooner than later though. I'm surprised Edward hasn't pushed her to go already with her ankle being in such a fragile state. After all she went through, I'm curious if she isn't worse off than she's trying to make it sound. But that's Bella...she'll have some horrific injury like her knee facing the opposite direction - and swear she's ok,hahaha. She never said she wasn't stubborn, I guess :) :)
I do have one question. I'm left a bit confused regarding the conflict with Aro. Edward seems to be acting as if the whole crisis is over since Bella has been saved. Which...I guess I can understand because a huge part of their crisis has been lifted. But are things still messy between Aro & Edward? Like shouldn't we still be worried about Aro wanting to kill Edward or get revenge in another way? Or was that resolved & I didn't catch it? Thanks for easing my curiosity! Again, I love this story & can't wait for your next update :) :)
Author's Response:
Aro and James are most definitely on Edward's mind. He won't forget them and I doubt they'll forget him. It's just now everything is up in the air since we don't know where and what those key players are doing. So, other things will happen until the Aro/James situation becomes resolved. I can't tell you all that may happen (in large part because it's not written yet ... yes, bad me). I have ideas on where to go but when I go to write lately my adled brain wants to shut off and I end up falling asleep. After we're not so busy at work I should have more time. Thanks for your wonderful review. I hope you continue to read and review.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am really enjoying this story and am looking forward to reading more soon! Great writing!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
two words. Love It
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
two words. Love It
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, and i love this story and don't mind waiting for updates, i am just glad that their are people like you that give us this great stories.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
So glad Bella has been rescued!
Hang in there - writing isn't always easy but it is always worth it.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter happy that she is back with edward
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved this chapter...alot. I'm so glad that Edward and Bella had a chance to talk and that she wants to be with him. I also hope that thee are many more chapters....
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
How is Edward going to be dealing with Aro now? And that stupid James...he just needs to be beheaded and I don't mean the head that sits on top of our shoulders either. the creeper-o'meter has really gone up in this story. I am glad to see that Demetri and Felix are not such bad guys in here. And we need more Jazz and Em mmmmmm yes more of the hotties please.
I am glad to see that Bella is in love with her Eddie and he is in love with his Bellie and they can have a HEA hopefully.
Thank you for your wonderful words...you amaze me.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope Felix is OK!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aww...Edward is being so doting and attentive to Bella. It is beautiful to read.
But somehow i fear that we have not seen the last of James? And Aro won't be too happy with Bella's escape either. I wonder what has become of Felix and that fight in the alley.
For now, no one in Edward's family is safe. There is too much on the line.
Thankyou for the update. I look forward to your next installment...
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward's thoughts in the shower were deep and profound, he was crumbling, feeling like one of the bad guys. Okay, he might have been at some point, but not now. He isn't responsible for what happened to Bella, no matter what he thinks. Bella will insist on it for as long as she needs to. I guess she won't be moving out of his house or his room again.
It will take time for Bella to get through this, but with Edward and the rest of the family, it will be easier, hopefully. She is safe now, all of them will make sure to keep her safe.
Sadly this isn't over, they still need to find what happened to Felix; where James, Alec and Aro might be and what to do now.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
It was a challenge of wit and brains. Both Bella and James are smart and were close to each other every step of the chase. But Bella had a few tricks James never suspected of. Still it was close, too close. Hadn't it not been for Felix, it might have been too late. So whose side is he on? Why did he help her? Not that anyone, but James. Alec and Aro will complain.
She finally is where she feels safe.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is being really brave, trying and getting to escape. She knows her chances of escaping are slim, but she still wants to try and if possible help Edward.
Meanwhile what seemed as useless and hopeless has finally given a glimpse of fortune. Jasper's thorough analysis is leading them into possibly the right course. Aro on the other hand seems to be loosing again. Bella was smarter than his guys, she at least has a head start. Hopefully even more.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great Chapter
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
It's being tough on all of them, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Eric, the girls. It seems they are stuck with nothing to do, no options and no ideas. Jasper is right, they need to remain as calm as possible through all of this. That's the best thing they can do. To prepare themselves for as many possibilities as they can think of. Hopefully they will find the best one.
Bella isn't sitting idle, she came up with a plan and is trying to make it work.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it very much like always can't wait to see what happens next thanks.....
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
you did such a wonderful job on this chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so glad that Edward was able to get her to safety. I just hope James and Aro dont hurt them again. I know they are going to have to do something to both of them to get them to back off. I love that they Bella and Edward as open about how they feel toward each other. I know there are hard roads ahead but at least with both of them at each other side they will make it through most anything. Great job and I cant wait to see what will happen next and I hope we find out what happened to Felix.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter update soon
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Is Aro behind Edward's parents death or not? He had no idea it was Edward behind it, and now he is really angry and wants revenge. To his benefit Alec found the perfect way to do it. But, they didn't and don't expect jasper to be taking such control and good planning of the situation. Sadly he is right, they aren't planning on just making an exchange.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yay! I am glad Bella is Safe.... for now I am sure :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
They didn't wast any time going for Bella. She never expected it, and neither did Edward. Just when things were starting to look better.
At least Edward knows James is involved and who one of the other men is. That should help.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
As good as it was on Edward's part to open up to Bella, a public place wasn't the best one to do so. You never know who might be listening in. And in this case, someone was, and it will turn out as a problem for Bella.
Edward thought he knew this mystery man, would it help if he remebers?
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aww this is such an awesome story! I am really enjoying reading it and am really looking forward to the next update!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
Lots of information and details in this chapter; along with Bella and Edward's interactions. They are getting to know each other and liking their findings. That is key, if you are truly happy with who you are, whom you can become. You'll be able to see things and people under better light.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
It was close. Bella got really sick and if Edward hadn't found her then, it might have been worse. What would Edward have done then? Now he is surprising Bella. Probably what happened, along with Alice's words are making him try a "more normal" path.
The idea of loosing Bella made him see things. And thinking how much stress he put on her, and the consequences to it, have to weight a lot on him.
He has to be a nice person since everyone keeps saying the same. Is he being really honest and will let Bella leave? Can he really do it?
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
It must have taken a lot of courage from Bella to open up to Emmett and Jasper. It was difficult, but she had to do it. She needs to talk to someone. She needs friends, people around who will care and want to listen to her.
Edward might love her, but he isn't showing it. Jasper and Emmett are aware and are trying as much as they can, which isn't too much, to get him to see things as they are, not as he wants them to be.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella is at last putting together some pieces in her plan to get out of this place. Does Edward really suspect nothing?
Will Bella's plan work out?
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is Bella snapping out of the shock and realizing what's going on? Or is she starting to sound desperate? She is in a really unconventional situation where the ways out are still hidden. But she is now willing to go looking for them.
Edward is a sweet talker, determined to convince Bella to see herself as he does. Easier said than done...
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward told Bella a lot of things she needs to think about. Most of them shocking and scary. She needs to figure out a lot.
It's amazing how certain he is in his actions. He has no doubt all will work out according to his ideas. I'm not so sure Bella agrees with him.
What will she do now she is finally alone? At least for a few hours.