Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
That was so wonderful and romantic... but then to leave us with that kind of a cliff hanger! AHHHH... Please say you won't wait too long to update... please?
Date: 13 Jul 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
It had been an amazing morning, followed by a quiet day and a wonderful evening. Things had been perfect, but somehow Evan interrupting them, seemed kind of strange.
Then James' POV comes up and we worry about Bella. Why would almost everyone leave?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
ahhhhh....MEAN cliffie!!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Please tell me that they are setting James up and that is not Bella in bed????????? I am so happy you got over your writers block I will keep my fingures crossed that it doesnt come back. That was one hell of a date and proposal how cool.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can't wait till you update!
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm scared!! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter..... Oh no James is back. sigh. Doesnt Eddie have alarms?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for writing such awesomeness for me to enjoy!!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome chapter!!! However... please don't make me wait forever for the next chapter!!!
Date: 26 May 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok, this chapter helped me understand some things. Thanks! I am glad that Bella did agree to go away with Edward. SO PROUD of her for standing up to him, though.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
I liked the update. I am glad you didn't kill or rape Kate. I love how B stood her ground and forbade E. And a little lemon is nice.
Date: 14 May 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad you had her parents arrive in time. I'm also glad you no one was seriously injured. I hope they can get a plan together to trap that SOB. Great chapter, thanks for the update.
Date: 12 May 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank god Kate is alive and James did not have his way with her. Poor little Tanya. I am glad that Bella agreed with Edward to go away and what some nice make up sex. Take care of yourself and get better.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
enjoying cant wait to read more
Date: 12 May 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
Hee hee hee, ordering Bella doesn't often get you what you want, even if it's in her best interests. Kind of like most women. Glad she gave in though.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 11 May 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm glad you're updating this story. I read the first chapters a while ago and got caught up today. I hope your day gets/got better. I'm almost as clumsy as Bella, but door facings seem to be my kryptonite, they just jump out in front of me out of nowhere!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow!! My apologies for not reviewing before now. This story is intriguing and has captured my attention and I can't read fast enough. It is wonderful!!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad that you updated!! Can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
poor little kate. Hope she'll be ok
Date: 11 May 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 11 May 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
thanks for the update can't wait to see what is going to happen!
Date: 11 May 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay Edward is a compete creeper lol. And not the good kind like on Jersey Shore.
But anyway, it's a really good start :)
Date: 11 May 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow this story just gets better and better!! I have no clue which way it is going to go. I hope that James dosent get to Bella. Please let Edward keep her and himself safe.
Date: 04 May 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
It took along time to get this update but when we did it was well worth the wait uptill you evil mybabyblues left me with such a cliffy lol. I cant wait for more or I should say I can wait but I dont want to. I hope Kate and her baby sister are going to be ok. Please tell me that the girls are safe????????
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lots going in in this chapter. Please update soon.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was some hot hot hot sex. GREAT JOB!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow great story. I read through it all. I liked the plot. Unique and a different take on E.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
okay i am confused by the beginning.. what is all that and i guess they are wrong james and aro are around and things are going down now!!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
ed you are one hot guy!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hey, way to set her up to get pregers! made sure you told us that carlisle gave her an antibiotic and now you are taking the time to tell us she is on birth control!! opps and no other form used for the first time... well can't wait to hear the baby news!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
cool back to together! what now?
Date: 31 Mar 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
wow you saved her cool!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
you are bagged he is going to get you... not going to be happy either.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
go bella run!!! but i am sure they are going to get you back... no story if you escape!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
okay now you have forced me to like ed and hate everyone else.... good way to turn him around in quick amount of time. James better hold on he isn't going to be alive for long!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
knew it bella you thought you had it bad before....
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
looks like you are going to know what a real kidnapping is bella!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
okay less creepy i guess....
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
okay you are smoothing him out alittle but not too much like DUH!?! edward you were wrong?!?!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
thank you for the wake up jasper. wow i can't believe she told them everything i don't know if i would be so trusting but who else does she have. i think it is going to come tumbling down when carlisle finds out. i am secretly in love with jasper by the way. can't he give up alice and go get bella?
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh bella this is not going to be good... ed you are still wacko!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay still yuk!! he is sooo yuky!!! yuk!!! throw up how about that... yeah he is yuky and he makes me want to throw up!!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
CRAZY!!! CRAZY!! wow that is all i have to say right now i hope you make him better because right now he is just wacko and crazy!!! you can't even feel the love he has for her by the way he is treating her.... CRAZY!!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
what a f-ing weirdo!! wtf- now he has no social gene! gee ed do you think that the girls were right that maybe you should have talked to her a dated her.... damn... you could talked to her hello send her someone to watch over her so she doesn't get hurt not kidnap her!! WACKO!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
did edward not get his human gene when born? what up with that? you will do this... doesn't he know if he asks nicely you might get a better result... he sounds really crazy!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy love your bella "boring" bella! haha knew it was em you were talking about before you named him.. i always love him!! Can't wait to see where it all is going to go!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved it!!!!!! just redaing this story makes me want to read more of your stories. when you write please email me at edward_heart204@yahoo.com. Can't wait!!!!!
XoxO :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
I thought this was very good. i did not see josh being shot coming. you are a very talented person. just reading your stories make my sounds and look like crap. when you write more email me at edward_heart204@yahoo.com. can't wait!!!!!!!! oh by the way after edward there is a under score like this _ then the rest.
XoxO :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm a new reader. It took me a while, but I really am loving your story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW, cliffhanger, indeed!!!! Great story, I for one am glad Edward and Bella are getting more sexy time!!! I look forward for more updates!!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Okay this is a good story. I read one similiar to this last year but it was not finished. I hope you keep this going.
suspense!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Boy, these two just can't get a moment's peace, can they? Trouble around every corner.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
excited to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awwwww mannnnn...I need more...more!!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
glad to see ya posting again. Poor Kate
Date: 18 Mar 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
So AWESOME!!! I loved it and need more!!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's been so long since the story has been updated that I'm actually going to have to start from the beginning to refresh my memory. There's a lot I don't remember about the story. As I was reading the current chapter, my mind was coming up blank so I'm going to go back to the 1st chapter and start over.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awwwww mannnnn....more...I need MORE!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love yoour story...I hope you continue it!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
i love this story!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
love the intensity of the story, the feeling you can give to Edwadr and Bella and Emmett in this chapter, very very good.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow what a beautiful chapter, a little stalkerery ? is that a word? Btu it explains everything so well.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
thanks for the chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
i loved it very much
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks for the chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh no, poor bella
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Right at this moment I don't envy her.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
It seems to be an interesting story!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter, will be waiting for more.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ugh! He really is creepy! What expectations he has!
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think James is near right??? I am glad they are staying close and are in love. What a way to be possessed LOL
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Whgoa! H.O.T. Thank you!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! Great chapter. Possessive, dominant Edward is to die for. Thanks for writing this.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
grrrrrrrrr....could I order one of THESE Edwards from ebay?? this was just toooooo friggin HOT!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
FAB.....U.....LOUS!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything I wanted it to be...very, very well written!!
I love Emmett...and his advice. He's just what a brother should be!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
omg omg, my heart was beating as though I was there with her during the escape...well written!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
awesome chappy but haveing a slight bit of a twilight zone moment I went thru my faves and almost everyone that i saw and went hmmm i wonder when we will get an update on this ...updated this weekend lol. btw possesiveward can come out whenever he wants to we like him.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE Possessiveward. He can come see my ANYTIME!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was HOTTT!!! There's just something about Possessiveward........DAMN!!! Great story and I can't wait to see what happens next!! 8D
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Bella is able to find her inner bitch...and not be too awfully whimpy!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
The build up is glorious, you really have a way with painting the picture!! I am enjoying every twist and turn and am looking forward to the coming chapters. I am also sooooo relieved that Bella is turning out to be the person she is! I so wanted her to give him a chance, and I'm thankful Edward has decided to "do the right thing" by giving her a room of her own and allowing her to return to her apt. The upcoming dance lesson date is something to look forward to as well!
Well done, you are an author with talent!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is feeling incapable of protecting Bella as he would like, sadly, it's beyond his control. The FBI is trying, it isn't easy still. They need time and patience. CAn Edward have the later one? Hopefully he will, he needs to. Or he will drive himself crazy.
As for his time with Bella. He wanted to act differently but a part of him took over. Bella didn't seem to mind, in fact, she liked this part of Edward too, a lot.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
i like this edward
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Full of action, suspense and more emotion than imaginable...from each side! Nice, very, very, nice!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I'm loving the beginning! I can just picture Bella having a completely dull life and then being kidnapped. What a surprise, huh? Bet she didn't think that would happen when she woke up that morning...
Great writing style and the way the characters speak to each other...I'm looking forward to more!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Possive, dominant Edward is hot! Well done. I have a feeling that Aro might be less of a problem here than James. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great Chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter...very interesting progress! Update Update Update!! :-)