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Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I don't know if I reviewed the first time I read this or not, so I'll do it this time anyway.  Thanks, I enjoyed it enough to read it a second time.

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great O/S. Well written. :o)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

How did I miss this O/S? It was everything one would expect from two fabulous writers!
The hot storyline was a huge bonus. hehe

Reviewer: 3diamonds Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aw! Loved it! Thanks for this :)

Reviewer: Geminiroyalty Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

wow i kinda loved that lol

 

Reviewer: yoli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was late to this one, but WOW!

Reviewer: Country kitchen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is the first story that I felt I wanted to review because it is PERFECT.  I suspected the 'gotcha' when the business name popped up a few times, and was so glad that I was right.  Steamy, yummy with a perfect ending!  It's just too bad that the story is complete.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Such a sweet ending.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

really good

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

awesome story so romantic and intense.aww perfect ending.

Reviewer: crosunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Is 10 the best rating? :D thand you deserve a 20 for this one

what a great OS!!! great great great!!

 

 



Author's Response:

aww... thanks so very much!!!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Dumbeline Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!



Author's Response:

mwah!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: RoseE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was sweetsexy, steamy dreamy...sigh. So deliciously wonderful I want to hug it and rub it all over myself.

Thanks for such a great story. I loved the dialog and especially your characters' honest motivations, reactions and forthright manners. Perfect. 

Great job. Wish it could be somehow continued but it was wrapped up pretty much perfectly. ~RoseE. xx



Author's Response:

And this is pretty much a perfect review!  Thank you sooooo very much RoseE!!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

i LOVED this! it was steamy, but i loved that it dealt with so many real life issues... dedicating your life to work, illicit affairs, and falling in love when you shouldnt... even though i'd love more from this pair, you wrapped the story up and finished it so well



Author's Response:

Aww shucks, thanks babe!  Glad you enjoyed reading it :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Edward was really unfair! He approached her, made the assumption--and he gets to be all righteous and indignant, flipping out on her and blackmailing her, then saying she "owes" him? Why is being a lawyer and a hooker so much worse than being a lawyer and soliciting a hooker? Both get prosecuted. Hmph. Jerk.

Other than his hypocrisy, this is a really sweet and well-paced story. Me likey.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!  We're glad you likey!  Thanks for reading :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this! The loophole in pragraph 147 was brilliant. I love that Edward was all prepared to be angry, and then the fight went out of him when he got a look at the shoebox. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Darn loopholes... lol!  Thanks so much for reading!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this entry in the contest, you throughly deserved 1st place by the Judges. x 



Author's Response:

*blushing* Thanks so much Julia!  Tickled pink that you loved it!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was such a great entry! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Tinsley, that's awesome of you to say :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: luvyateamedward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Loved this! 



Author's Response:

:D Thanks babe!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: ubuhall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

amazing!! addicting from the get go!! so glad you won, great story!! and darlin, I seem to love all your work, don't I? must be that amazing talent of yours ;)  ~Tracey xoxox



Author's Response:

You are an awesome reader Tracey! Always love hearing from you! mwah!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: ObessedMama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome and fuck hot!!!



Author's Response:

LOL... glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading :)

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: SexyCanI Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

great ending



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks,

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!!! So much in so few words. It was HOT, HOT, HOT!!!!

Author's Response:

We actually had more words, about 1k more, that we spent a day having to cut from the story to make it fit contest guidelines... lol. It's too bad we didn't think to save a copy of the original :S

Thanks for reading and enjoying!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: xxxLOTxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

God, totally loved this. It took me 3/4th of the story to figure it out - yeah, I do feel stupid now - but hey, at least I got it before you gave it away. LOL
Awesome!!



Author's Response:

Hello beautiful Lot!  Don't feel stupid, no one else has admitted to figuring it out beforehand! Glad you enjoyed it babe!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Nocturnal Emissions Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it in the contest, and I love it here! 



Author's Response:

You're too sweet Noc!  Thank you :)

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

that was Kick A$$ awesome!



Author's Response:

LOL... thanks!!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: wiltshireglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Happy to hear that! Thanks for reading :)

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Lost In Fanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it ladies!!!  Congrats on the success of this in the contest.



Author's Response:

So very kind of you to say C~  thanks for reading :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!!  That was amazing!  You ladies never cease to amaze me with your writing talents. Always tantalizing, always intriguing, always attention grabbing to the end. Thanks for writing. 



Author's Response:

Awww, that's an awesome review... thank YOU for your amazing words.

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really good. Short but just enough.



Author's Response:

Haha... yeah, we had a word limit and actually had to cut almost 1k words from this to make it fit!  Thanks for reading and happy that you enjoyed it.

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: nikif Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was awesome!:) i love it ... a lot..great idea!!

thanks to share:)

 

xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting us know you liked!

 

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: OcSickGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was awesome! Loved it and it totally deserved to win!! Thanks for sharing ladies!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome words!  We had a blast writing it!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: Bugnme5 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

R u guys gonna continue this story?

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and probably not, at least we don't have plans to right now. Though we do have plans for future collabs together :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yeah!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks babe!

xoxo

TB and Jelly

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