Date: 05 Mar 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 129
Awesome chapter. Love the cheeky, sex laced banter between Christian and Ana. That shower was a great release for them both. I can see Christian needing ALOT of releases during this crisis with the pirates. Ana will always be ready for him.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 130
thank you for the update...yo go Charlie...lol
Date: 03 Mar 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 130
Really enjoyed this chapter. Wish I could have a Piderman party! And I'm not even a Piderman fan! And what a surprise for Ray...none of us saw that coming! Love, love, love your entire story...wish it would never end!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 130
This is so nice it reminds me of my family birthday parties. You write so enjoyably well. Thank you!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 130
WOW!...Had to go from a hot mess with CG sexpertese to a crying mess as soon as Tommy said "Piderman". OMG I love this story and look forward to the updates so much. I feel like these people are my family and I just don't know what I'd do without them. AMAZING WRITING, you get my emotions everytime! Can't wait for the rest of the party!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 130
Wow, Myra pregnant. Didn't see that one coming. Sounds like a great party ... Yeah Tommy!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2014 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 130
Awwwwwwwwwww always so quick but you never disappoint us thanks .Can't wait on the next chapter ....love ya xxxx
Date: 24 Feb 2014 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 129
Another fantastic update! Love it
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 129
Grace is so cute I can just see her pulling on Christian's sexy chest. Loved the breakfast tease and the shower scene. As always looking forward to more!
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 129
Gotta love shower sex. And Christian interacting with the kids.
Date: 23 Feb 2014 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 129
Excellent ...you are in a class of your own !!! What is happening with Tommy's mum ? Also Leila ? The Night Club Ana's boss too ?? You have far too many roads to go to finish up now lol!!!!!!!!! New York ! and the young girl who started H R too .....love ya Thanks again ............NEXT xx
Date: 23 Feb 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 129
What a day so far and the party hasn't evenstarted yet. LOL
Date: 23 Feb 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 129
Fabulous, just fabulous.
Date: 18 Feb 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 128
Great chapter. As soon as I read it was a pirate attack on one of his ships I thought Uh Oh, it's Columbia again. I'm so glad Ana got him to stay put. He really does need to think of his own safety and the fact that his family MUST come first. Yes, even before the people who work for him. Good for you Ana for putting your foot down.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 128
I loved this chapter.. It was so good to see Ana fight him and not let him leave. I'm really glad she didn't put up with the crap and she was so right about the fact he should be there at home in the morning for Tommy's birthday :) Thank you!
Date: 16 Feb 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 128
Fun chapter. Was great seeing Ana handle Christian. And, OMG... The magical vagina. LOL
Date: 16 Feb 2014 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 128
SO LOVE IT!! You. Are. Awesome. I just wonder how you get the inspiration from writing something so detailed that drives your readers' imagination wild. Fantastic chapter once again. Please don't end this. I always look forward to your chapter every weekend to de-stress me out.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 128
I loved watching Ana manage Christian ... I was really afraid, like Ana, we would have Colombia all over again. Go Ana!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 128
MMmmmm ..well done ..did it again ! At least he listened to her this time .....so far ..we will just have to wait and see ....so didn't see that coming , brilliant twist ! Oh what next ........please hurry up and update lol ...you know you want to !!!!!!!Thanks ! love ya xxxxxxxxxx
Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 128
Mr Grey he is a dumb ass, why does he never think on a personal level of His own family first? Ana i so right. I am liking the drama, oh that office sex such a turn on.... Wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 128
OMG, that was wonderful, there for a minute, I really feared that he wouldn't listen to Ana!
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 128
So good, so so good. thank you for another great chapter. And it's about dam time Ana put her foot down with Christian.
Date: 15 Feb 2014 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 128
Oh My Lord....I didn't know if I'd live through another Columbia experience...whew...thanks for letting his stay home this time...for now...I can't wait for Tommy's birthday and to read about him with all his presents and all the attention!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 127
Good girl Ana! Don't let him run off!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 127
I am enjoying every chapter. Thank You for writing ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 127
My guess is that crazy Leila has somehow broken into his office and trashed it or is kneeling naked in " the position " waiting for him, not expecting him to arrive with Ana. I'm so glad Ana insisted on going with him. He needs to include her in these situations so that if he does have to be in the same room as an ex sub, then it will leave no room for doubt in Ana's mind as to what actually happened. Can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 127
What excitement is on the way! Why would he even give money fror Leila's art work.... I do not like it....can we have the more now, it is needed. Thanks still loving this.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 127
Brilliant but it always is ! Noooooooooooooo Leila bitch ! Or is it Tommy's mum ?mmmmCliff hanger too ...your nasty ...we have to wait until next week now TUT Well update soon and thanks again ....love ya x
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 127
Excitement, yeah.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 127
OMG!!! What has Leila done now?! Thanks for keeping it exciting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 127
Better and Better.....what is going on??? I can't wait for Tommy's party!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 127
Oh no! What's happened now?! I'm glad Ana didn't put up with him not telling her what's going on... He really had no excuse to not givin a brief idea if what's happening. Will he never learn that it's better she knows than not?
Date: 09 Feb 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 127
Oh how you can make me have a sinking feeling in my stomach...why would Christian need to stay up all night...waiting for more...at least Ana is with him...or at least she left with him...Love the story..it's absolutely the best!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 127
Wow ... I can't even imagine what's going down at the office. Guess we'll find out next week.
Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 126
Thanks Nuwriter ..... Your story is this something exceptional ... Grace is a wonder, "I get to be Grace," I laughed with all my ... oh you're great ... the only thing I regret is that you're going to finish this story ... I am sad for this
Date: 05 Feb 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 126
Yeah, adoption day. What a great story to read with a HEA. Keep up the great writing.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 126
Aahhh, what a great day that turned out to be. My fave was when they were in the judges' chambers ... Tommy crying broke my heart. That whole scene was touching. Great job ... I loved reading every minute of it.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 126
Awe, the story has come full circle! Very sweet!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 126
Excellent ....What a great dad Christian has turned out to be eh !!! What Greys ? Oh what will happen to the happy couple next ? Thanks again ! love ya ........Next x
Date: 02 Feb 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 126
Precious!! Great chapter
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 126
Nice, Tommy now an official Grey how lovely!
Date: 02 Feb 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 126
I burst into tears when I read the title and sobbed all the way through. This story is my very very favority most amazing, steady, true to life fanfiction I have ever read. I'm not sure when I startedd following but I feel like I am their neighbors, or best friends living every moment of their lives with them. From the "cheat" and shooting at the beginning, to Christians revelation of his true relationship with Elena, to Columbia, to the loss of baby Sam, to the anniversary Christian almost missed and all the other amazing events and now to Tommy...I feel like this story is part of MY LIFE! I am so so thankful for the time and effort you have put in to writing and updating faithfully every week. I can't imagine this ever ending...I hope you plan to keep it going and going and going!!! Thanks again for the amazing adoption of Tommy!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 125
Gosh that was a hot update. The grapes made me giggle. This has certainly been a marathon story, don't want it to end. Thankyou.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 125
Jesus that was hot .......amazing , you never fail xxxx Oh what next lol Thanks Keep it coming forever !!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 125
Absolutely loved it, Ana is just wonderfull, so perfect and good for Mr god himself CG. I do not like Lorna and I am so worried where that could ge heading, I hate the fact that Christian has been to see her.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 125
Wow, haven't had a good one like that in a while, Thanks!!!
Once the adoption is done us the story done as well?
Author's Response:
No. I have a couple of things in the works, but it is getting close.
Thanks
Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 125
I'll never be able to look at a grape the same again!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 125
Another fantastic chapter! thank you!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 124
Love these kids they are too funny!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
Your writing is the best of any of the fanfiction fifty shades of grey stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 124
Good chapter, left me wanting more.. always does.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 124
Only Mr Grey can make going for a burger exciting! Nice chapter.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 106
Thank you for making sure he was working out and not cheating on her again - I don't think I could take it! LOLOL
Date: 19 Jan 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 124
I love Christian talking about both his sons! Precious! Love the story!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 124
Well that wasn't too dramatic.... Thank goodness. I'm glad she was ok with it and won't cause problems... At least for now.
i hope the judge agrees.
Date: 19 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 124
Oh c'mon you cant say spicy next chapter and leave us hanging for a week
Date: 19 Jan 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 124
Crying over here!!! I love these stories!!
Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 124
Ahh. Do that's what happened to Lorna. Is this story almost over or is there more to come?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 124
That was another stellar chapter. I love family time Christian and Bella. Spicy too! lol thank you
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 124
Thank you for the beautiful update :)
Date: 16 Jan 2014 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 123
Wow that's good twist!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 122
Too horrifying and way too funny!! My husband kept asking what was making me laugh so much. Kate won't be forgetting that anytime soon...hope she takes it out on Elliott! Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 123
thank you for the update......Grace to funny poked her father in the eye...don't much get past Ana...........Is Lorna Tommy's mother or and ex sub, can't remember....until you post again
Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 123
ok feening for more giggling ty for posting
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 123
Such a lovely twist
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 123
no dont end.. i need my fix of fifty shades ever week.. love your writing!!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 123
OMG, well I guess we know what she has been up to now. I wonder what they will do about it.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 123
Please do not let this story end! I look forward to it every weekend!!!! You have extended and created such a great story that I can immerse myself in!!!
Date: 12 Jan 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 123
Awww....please don't end.... Have a book four.... I always look forward to the weekend with your updated chapters...
Date: 12 Jan 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 123
Lorna starring in a porn, that was funny....sad but funny too. Gracie was just too cute for words.
I have to say, I'm a little distressed when you end this with saying "...working our way to the end ...". I don't want this to end - I'll admit, I'm selfish that way. When something is good and you look forward excitedly each week to a new chapter, you don't want to stop...well at least I don't anyway. :( You do such a god job at writing Ana, Christian and the whole clan.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 123
Didn't exactly expect that. But I did expect Tommy's mother to cause some kind of trouble.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 123
TOMMY'S. MOM DID PORN?
EWWW!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 123
OMG! I feel a real hurricane in the horizon! I can't wait.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 123
Yes .....thank you ...Stallion ...I nearly choked lol ..oh here comes trouble
Date: 11 Jan 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 123
WHAT??? THE END??? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my God NURWRITER...what will I do when there is no more FULL CIRCLE??? I HOPE and PRAY that you have another story in the amazing mind of yours because I think I will just die if you don't!!! Okay...now back to the story...I thought life was way too quiet...please let CG's powerful attorney's make her sign over her parental rights!
Now back to PLEASE write something else for us when this is done...Pretty please?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 123
No, not the end... what am I going to read?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 123
Not the End!!
Author's Response:
Not yet. Still a lot more to come.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 123
I loved the normality pulling through in this chapter; the kids actions and their love woth CG is just mesmerisising. I cannot remember who Lorna Blakely was? it is coming to and end oh no!
Author's Response:
Lorna is Tommy's biological mother.
Still a lot more to go and probably another story that takes us farther in the future after this.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 123
I love this take on the original story and the way you keep the angst levels going amongst the family stuff and the hot Christian/Ana stuff too I chuckle at your way of portraying the kids and I can picture them all ( especially Grace ) so vividly.Much appreciated continuation of these characters ( in fact I think that yours are more convincing) Thanks.