Date: 21 Sep 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 46
Well, I'm glad it worked out
Date: 21 Sep 2014 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
Shit hit the fan, just like we knew it would.
Date: 19 Sep 2014 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
Omigod, Ana is so damn hard headed!
Date: 18 Sep 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ack! Ana is insane. Planning on meeting a stranger, without security. Not smart at all.
Date: 11 Sep 2014 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 150
Where is the rest? I'm sad I can't find more of the story. Is it over or is it somewhere else? I hope you just didn't stop writing. You are so good.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 149
Is this book done? I read that you normally post weekly but it's been over a month since you posted and us fans would like to know if there is more coming or should we start looking for another book to read.. I personally hope you are not done I could read yr writing for years and years and never get bored... Please reply so we all know what's going on please and thank you and thank you so much for these 3 books they have been wonderful xoxo
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2014 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 150
I just read all three books and finally got to the end.. Amazing job :-) but I was just wondering is chapter 150 the end of the books or is there more to come.. I HOPE, PRAY, BEG THERE IS MORE .... PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Date: 02 Sep 2014 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 150
Love it.. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 150
Loved the chapter, they are wonderful together as a team! Looking forward to CEO mode at the meeting....
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 150
Still the best 50 SOG fanfic out there, just saying :)
Date: 21 Aug 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 150
Wow... It's been a while since they were kinky, cool.
Date: 20 Aug 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 150
Brilliant . Loved the banter with the kids as uaual and the kink lol Thanks xxxx
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 150
Just read the last two chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them. The people in Dallas don't know the shit storm that's about to hit them LOL.
How cute were the kids talking about where babies come from. Little Tonmy when he said "I know but he didn't make me." Tommy explains. " He's my new daddy not my make- me daddy."....that wad beautiful. You write the kids so well.
Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 150
Poor Tommy and his separation problem. Lol over the land mines in Grace's bedroom!
Date: 20 Aug 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 150
I understand RL gets in the way, so I will never be upset about a late post, only extremely excited when a new one comes out way. Thanks again for writing. Loving it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 149
I'm glad peep is on the mend. Thank you for the update and congrats on your new job :)
Date: 20 Aug 2014 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 150
Thank goodness you didn't abandon us. Hope your new job goes well and will still let you find time to continue our journey with Christian and Ana.
Date: 20 Aug 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 150
Such a beautiful chapter. Please don't apologize. I'm just so glad you are writing this story.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 149
Such a good chapter, love, sex, hilarious kids and action on its way.Mr Grey is so sexy when he is steamed up from work and dragging Ana along is brilliant. cannot wait for the next part to the stir
Date: 04 Aug 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 149
I love that the "sneeze" talk made such an impression on Teddy that he is now educating his siblings. Poor Tommy, I hope he doesn't get down cause his "make-me" mommy and daddy are not around.
Still hoping all will be well with Mouse.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 149
"Wifely duties." Lol
love the kids
Date: 03 Aug 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 149
Yip ...lovedit.comasusual ....... you are so dedicated to your work and always the pro ! I cannot wait for next weekend as usual xxx Thanks xxxxxxxx
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 149
Cracking up with the baby making story line! Thanks for another fab chapter! Can't wait for Texas and Ana performs her " wifely duties"!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 149
Wow, the poor children are more than a little confused here! Awh Ms. Grace you are a true Daddy's girl! Can't wait to see what happens in Dallas!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 149
Amazing chapter. Love the storyline about the business trip. Can't wait to read all about it.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 148
I hope Peep gets better. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 147
What a lovely tea party. It seams Grace may be the hardest to convince when it comes to adding to the family. Thank you for the lovely update :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well Ms. Bellows learn a hard lesson.
Date: 31 Jul 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 148
Oh I do hope Peep will be ok. Sounds like Grace and Tommy might be warming up to the idea.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2014 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 148
Wonderful chapter. Loved the kids talking about bringing the baby home. So cute. I hope she gets well soon. It sounds like they are about 95% in favour of adding Peep to their family.
Date: 30 Jul 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 148
I love this family.....I'm excited about Thanksgiving!!!!.....and Peep. I think it would be great to see the family with a newborn. We missed out on that interaction between Ana and CG with the other kids. KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING :)
Date: 29 Jul 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 148
I hope peep gets better and they do,take here home. Your story cuts right through every emotion, so good!
Date: 29 Jul 2014 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 148
Thank you for the update. With all the comments about "our" story ending soon and you posting a tad late, I was afraid it might end. I hope that you will give us a bit of a heads up to give us a chance to wind down and not be dropped too abruptly.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 132
now that was nothing short of a perfect chapter ...dick ..now that was funny
Date: 22 Jul 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 147
Say it isn't so. Please, please don't end this one.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 147
Best line:You look like Ronald McDonald's gay cousin." He growls at me. Had me cracking up!
Date: 21 Jul 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 147
Brilliant and so sweet x You really are great at taking us right there with you and enjoying their fun with them. xxxxx Cannot wait until next weekend xxx
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 147
It looks like my head has been in a blender. LOL....the best line. I'm wondering if Grace got any nail polish on the sofa and Ana hasn't seen it. Especially if Jack has been walking on it. Christian will hit the roof. Grace is a funny little girl the way she talks. Great chapter.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 147
So so good. Those kids are all adorable, shell in the bowl, flour everywhere so down to earth and funny and they are still talking about their antics over the phone, they never stop.
Date: 21 Jul 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 147
Not complaining but, will this one end?? Both the previous books only had 30+ chapters each. There is so much more I can envision happening so was wondering if it will be as book IV?
Loved the makeup & tea party and OMG Teddy having to poop was hysterical!!!
Looking forward to the next post.
Author's Response:
Yes. Not to worry. It will end very soon.
Author's Response:
Yes. Not to worry. It will end very soon.
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 147
Tommy is too cute
Lil Grace is a trip...at least she is honest. However I hope she gets and accepts her a little sister is
Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 147
I am cracking up! What a fun family chapter! Thanks! Can't wait until next week!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 147
That Grace is something on a stick!!! Awe she doesn't wants a sister!!! She is Princess Gracie!! Hopefully she will warm up to a sister!!!
Blue Men and Beer and?!$& yep about right at a football game!!! Yep to tommy kept CG busy ..tinkle ... # 2!
Keep the make up Anaaaaa! Kinky!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 147
OMG! that was fantastic! I chuckled and laughed my way through it. I really enjoy your writing. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 141
Thank you for the update <3
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2014 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 146
Great chapter. I love how he tries to do special things just for the kids. Trust Christian to know about suckling. LOL
Date: 16 Jul 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 146
They shouldn't adopt her. An infertile couple without children should get her.
I love this story. Please keep writing.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 146
Well I guess that was a quick change of pace. I was kind of hoping Ana would find the original contract and revised copy of the contract between Amy and Christian. And perhaps found a few others that took place over the past eight year period. You know when he would feel out control. Maybe Ana needs to go by Escala for something she forgot and ends up in his office and the cabinet turns out to unlocked. She did for give him but from all of it, exactly what. She really doesn't know. Well I tried.
I've enjoyed your version of the continuation their lives the most. I'm all caught up now I have to wait.
Date: 15 Jul 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 146
This is one of my favorite chapters .... I love seeing Ana and Christian in their daily lives getting stuff done interacting with the kids.
Tommy crying when Christian had to leave was endearing. I like the guys only day...wonder what the girls will come up with to do????
Date: 15 Jul 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 146
Wow! I have a lot to catch up... I have been reading some books and now I decided to continue reading your story and wow... I have to read a lot, I guess I'll be reading the entire weekend.
Date: 14 Jul 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 146
Thanks x Well you live and learn alittle every day ! Excellent xxxxxx
Date: 14 Jul 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 146
So love this story! Please keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 146
Oh my ......fantastic chapter!!! Peep Mouse needs to come home!!! Then they need to hurry and finish the playroom!!!!
Gwen ;)
Date: 14 Jul 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 146
Nice chapter. I have seen adoptive women successfully nurse their baby. It takes a lot of dedication.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 145
Loved the walk down memory lane. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 145
Beautifully arranged memories
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 142
Look at how far Ana & Christian have come together. My heart is connected to them.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 145
it felt really real them bring back at Escala. All that chat about the past, the fibes are so normal and sexy, as always cannot wait for more! I am feeling a little nervous with all this Amy chat and Ana going on about CG missiing "it" though.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 145
I feels like it's winding down to an end. Is it?
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 145
Love Them!!! Great chapter as always!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 145
LOL at Christian making just bacon for breakfast. The more I think about them and baby peep, I'm having second thoughts if they should adopt her or not. It is a huuuuuge decision. On one hand it would be good for peep to go to a family like the Greys and it would be good for Grace to have a sister, but also it's a big change to the family when it comes to any future decisions. An extra child will change everything. Either way, the story is amazing and I can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 145
Loved it so x Cannot wait for next week and starting the playroom again xxxxxxxx Thanks you're BRILLIANT xxxx
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 145
Awesome as always...I feel the baby girl slipping through our fingers but it feels okay if it happens now...I absolutely love this story and anxiously await the updates...thanks for the time and effort you put into this story! I LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 144
Smoking !!! Excellent writing !!! I hope you are not tying up the loose ends here and ending this beautiful story ....if yes a 4th !!!!!! story ! Thanks xxxxx
Date: 06 Jul 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 145
While there at the apartment you should Have Ana ask what actually occurred (details)'between him and Amy. Still like to know how it's not a nonsexual incounter hen he has them naked and she was wrapped in the red satin sheet. We know what happend when he was Elena. Come on revisit it. He had 2 scenes with Amy. Had to be a little more going on.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 145
Wow, I'm glad they can reminisce with humor... It will serve them well for ever.
Great chapter!
Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 144
I'm so loving your writings!! like Ermahgerd, it's giving me so much feels! and hey, I was just wondering on how many Chapters are there more? and What day do you update? I'm so sorry, I'm so new to this. >w<
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2014 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 144
New here and enjoy the story very much. I do think that there is some imbalance between C and A - he goes more than an extra mile to please her, and it's not clear sometimes where she stands - does she only want to make sure he "cools off" at home? Is it possession or love? I'd love to see her taking care of his health (healthy food, less coffee, helps with his stress management) rather than saying nasty things like "I remember a time where you didn't need to rest" (or along these lines). She is getting hard to please, and it seems like he is doing all the flowers and hearts work. I know she loves him, but there is some lacking in the ways she's shows it. She is accepting form a sexual point of view, but I'd love to see her getting more mature. And no, I don't think she needs to get punished or go through a horrible expirience, but she does need to understand what does it mean to grow together. Maybe they do adopt the baby (Garce needs a sister) but before they switch- Anna decides she doesn't want to, and C wants to - and she has to yield to his wishes this time. A little bit more balance. My 2 cents. You write very well:)
Date: 02 Jul 2014 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 144
That's was hot and hilarious. Goods love Christians ingenuity. Great job writing as always!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 144
Hi. I went back and re-read "More". And reading this chapter, you brought up Amy again. I still believe you should show just how it wasn't sexual. She was naked and he gets turned on. Also he uses sex as a punishment, how is going back to Escala going intenseify his anger issues. He still wants to cause her pain she just takes it. He is now her abuser physically now. What kind of mind games will play out at Escala? And again please do not let adopt that baby. She is now the manipulator/Dom and just rolls over now. I said before something needs to happen to her for not wanting protection, care, security. He cheats and all is well.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 144
Oh I think they so want the little girl. To tooth brush womderful, your writing is pso good. Love it!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 144
Loved the trip down memory lane and thanks for the extra long chapter.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 144
What a fun loving hot chapter- thanks! Can't wait until next week!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 144
Ahh, back to some long awaited fun. Will never look at an electric toothbrush the same. Lol!!! Great fun, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 144
LOL, very talented way to improvise. The part where he was rummaging around the kitchen was funny. Then having the bow on his cock..LMAO. he's got a playful sense of humour. I've forgotten who Amy is.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 143
Hi! Enjoying your story. Just found it last week Looking forward to an update. Love your writing it sets me in the story.
cheers!
Date: 25 Jun 2014 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 143
Hi this is my 1st time review. Thank you for continuing Christian and Ana's story. This is much better then the original. Christian was an abuser and he has come a long way in his ability to love and be loved. Ana on the other had is still stupid. At every opportunity she goes against Christian, his need to protect her, care and her. She just doesn't get it. He couldn't protect his mom and that's something he can't get past. So why she continues to fight him on that, I feel you need to put her to the test on how she can take care of herself and doesn't need all his protection. They are a high profile couple so have her get kidnapped and knocked around or either raped or molested. As you can tell not a fan of Ana. Then let's see how Christian can handle what is his, mine, only me when someone else tries to take that away. I feel Ana has become the Dom. She manipulates Christian at every turn now when he is not ready. "No" to her means, I'm gonna keep badgering you until you comply. Because he just wants her to be happy at his own emotional expense. Like the crack baby, please don't give into that, he said did say no. Like the playroom, he already said he doesn't need it, but of course she pushes it even to the point of incorporating one in there family home. This just might push him back to his sadist behavior. She's so stupid. She doesn't listen to him and it's really tearing him up inside. I'm also new to this BDSM and don't understand the relationship he had with Amy. I think you need to bring that out to exactly what they did during those 2 scenes. Christian is a very sexual being and he has them sit there just in there panties and he is all about pushing limits between pain and pleasure and she walked out wearing the silk sheet. For him to dismantle that room something more had to happen then just beat her. I know you write from Ana's point of view, but really Christan is more interesting. How about follow him some where and let's get his insite on a 1st person account. Maybe when he goes to the hospital or to Dr. John or how he feels during sex especially when he is feeling aggressive and reminds her of the safe word. She just takes what he gives her. she wants him stop but of course she doesn't. Thank you again. I appLaude your commit to Christan and sucky Ana and making them better characters then the original. I hope you continue. Now I have to wait for every chapter but well worth the wait.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 143
Yep, like everyone has said great chapter and still more suspense to keep us hooked?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 143
Loved that last line. Sick bitch for leaving some to Teddy. She had a sick fascination for him as well. She would have tried to have him as a sub when he reached his teens. I'm soooo glad she's dead.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 143
Poor Ana ....I want to kick Elena's ass too. I they're done having to do anything 'Elena' related.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 143
I love it! Can't wait til next week!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 143
I understand why he kept it from her at first, but why not tell her later. Will he never learn! MEN...
Great chapter!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 143
Loved it as always ......I was imagining that dress Angelina wore 2 or 3 years ago with her hair in a pony . Christian at his balls lol ...so normal , your a natural. Well now I cannot wait until next week . I wonder what that guy wanted to talk to Christian about mmmmmmmmm???? Thanks again Nuwriter your the best xxxxxxx
Date: 16 Jun 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 142
This is truly a very difficult decision, I don't know what they should do...
Date: 16 Jun 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 142
Nice chapter. I love that he's stepping back and trying to be objective about the baby. Very hot love sceen.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 142
Could I love this Christian any more?? Love this story, you know that, right? Best story ever!
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 142
Another great chapter! Wonder what Ana will say to the teacher?
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 142
Another beautiful chapter. I love your way of writing the emotions of these characters. You can feel theM. I had to laugh at the line of Christian scratching his balls while walking naked across the bedroom. Having a "hard" time getting that picture out of my head and I'm totally OK with that.....LOL. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 142
Those teachers can keep their hands and thoughts to themselves. Lovely baby talk.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 142
Thanks my friend ......another great one ! So the teacher thought Christian was hot and needed cooling down .....BITCH Well here's hoping it flies in until next week because I can't wait ....Thanks again Nuwriter xxxxxxx
Date: 15 Jun 2014 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 142
I think my favorite part was Teddy telling his mom that he overheard his teacher talking about how hot his dad is. LMAO.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 141
LMAO....little Tommy wanting to "hep" Daddy. Love your kid speak. Great chapter and I loved the office BJ. Kinky and funny at the same time. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 139
Thank you for the update :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 141
How many chapter is this?
Date: 08 Jun 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 141
just what the doctor ordered, great stuff, Tommy catching them was fun. their sexisease gets better and better. I loved it, thank you!