Date: 09 May 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time
awesome story;) it was weird that bella had to have a prostestic leg though i liked how you made the hybid lore different ;) thanks so much for completing and posting you rewritten works of the 4 books on here for us ;D
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time
Yea outliving your family/friends would have to be the hardest part. Glad Jake and Rory made a wonderful lives for themselves. LOl for Rory trying to ground her daughter.
TY for writing and sharing with us all. You will be missed.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 29- We Don't Have To Take This, We Can End It All
Rpov: Glad her and Jake are doing so well. They need to go back though. awww for the proposal.
BPOV: oooh the kids brought help. coolness. ugh V have crappy timing. Glad Kate et al came to join the party. Go Rory and Xara!!!!
JPOV: NOOOOO Rory!!!! Wait??? jake bit her?
Date: 10 Mar 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 26- Where As A Child I'd Hide
RPOV: Glad R feels good about being there and doing normal girl stuff. Aww for her knowing something is off about her and Jake. lol for breaking hte doorknob though. Don't blame her for being pissed though. ok her going off on her own is NOT smart though. The V could get her and blackmail the rest of the family.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Death of Comfort
Rpov: lol for her scheming to get her first kiss. Oh wow Renee showing up and stealing Rory....ACK!!!!
EPOV: I can see Edward as a teacher. Glad they have allies. The V overstep alot it seems. They should serve the constituents, not the other way around.
BPOV: Wonder if someone will be able to get through to Renee. oh no. Bella is going to take a long time to forgive herself. Hope they take out the anger on the V.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 21- The Werewolf Side, The Vampire Side
lol for Morgan channelling Forest Gump. Jake dating??? I don't like that. Why do I get the feeling that the V changed Renee to try and get her to voluntarily come to them?
BPOV: lol for the typical dad/kid fight over music. Rory is a smart kid. Glad she talked to her mom.
APOV: Ugh I knew they had changed that POS that was her egg donor. (Yeah I don't like Renee; pfft)
Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 20- I'm Gonna Make This Place Your Home
Poor Jake. Sucks that he and Rory have to be split like thing because of a greedy wanker. Hope B can keep herself together through all this. Meeting Kitty was a help to her I think.
APOV: They are defying them by not joining I suppose? Sactamonious pricks. Well I usually like Marcus, but sounds like he a a prick too. Well at least they are leaving Charlie alone. They know way too much as it is. Ugh Renee....
Date: 10 Mar 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17- Adjusting
Yea still not really caring about Renee at all. Glad her hunts and visits from the pack/imprints is going well. oooh interesting new power. I'd be worried about the V too, esp since they don't want to see her. Carlisle is gonna feel bad for speaking well of Betta the traitor. lol for the ogling og Damon/Ian.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 16- The View
Wow Aro is a devious little prick ain't he. Betta got what was coming to her for her part in it all. Guessing Betta knew how to get around Alice huh?
Wow not sure if Charlie is being brave or just stupid. I was wondering if you were going to do the cottage or not.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie
Glad the pack is standing behind them as well as Sue and Charlie. Dear God, please dont use Renesmee. That was the stupidest thing I'd ever hear/read. Sleeping Beauty reference huh?
lol for B seeing him imprint.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap
EPOV: Glad E is enjoying his honeymoon. oooh Ms Laki really wants to die huh? Don't blame E for reacting that way. Pfft Edward. B loves you.
Hmm Now I'm wondering if this is why Aro wanted her for the volturi?
Date: 09 Mar 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy
Don't blame her for taking me time. She deserves quiet alone time. ROFL for kidnapping her to a strip club. An even bigger ROFL for the strippers.
Aro: Ugh for Sleezy Aro and his "wife". Sigh someone else who feels 'entitled' to claim Bella.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23- Mama
OMG that has to be the hardest chapete I have read so far, poor bella having to kill her own mother, I knew that she would come out of it in the end but ti still has to be hard for, I know now that bella will fight even harder now to keep her family, the volturi will not win now.
Thank you for reading Sarah! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) JB
Date: 02 Dec 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time
I enjoyed your re-write of the Twilight Saga. The only request I would make is please, don't use the name of Jesus Christ as an expletive. If you must curse, please use your own name. Thank you.
Keep up the writing, you're good at it.
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the rewrite, and thank you for taking the time to review, and with a compliment at that. However while I recognize your right to make the request for me to not use Jesus Christ as an expletive; I would hope you would recognize my right to not amend my writing on yours, or anyones behalf. The characters speak as their personalities suggest they would. I apologize if you take offense to that, or the language in this story; but that is the way I do things. Thank you for being a reader. -JB
Date: 07 Jan 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time
Abousolutly amazing, really enjoyed the whole series but this story most of all. I'll enjoy reading it over and over again, and letting my friends know where to find an fantastic read.
That's wonderful to hear! I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope your friends do as well! Thank you for reading.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 31- Tale As Old As Time
Sorry, JB, it makes me sad to say goodbye! I have so very much enjoyed reading all your stories, and it was fun sending little thoughts about all the chapters. I'm so impressed that you have accomplished all this at such a young age! I wish you a wonderful career and a great 2013! You wrapped up all the Twilight rewrite just perfectly, right back where it all began!
Thanks K! I've loved every insight from your reviews, and they've meant the world to me. It's going to be very strange now to write a chapter and not hear from you after its done! Definitely keep in touch, you're one of my best fans.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 30- Waiting For This
Thank heaven for your creative mind! That was a really cool way to win the battle, save the Cullens and Quileutes and insure Rory's immortality! Scared hell out of everyone who loved her, but truly, all's well that ends well. Carlisle's pendants sound lovely, by the way!
Date: 31 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 29- We Don't Have To Take This, We Can End It All
What in the world is Jacob doing biting Rory? Or did I misread, and it's her father? I'm confused, as that battle was horrifying, and I'm almost dreading the casualty list! The only blessing is that the unholy trio are gone, never to return! Hallelujah, and amen! Pardon me while I grit my teeth and try not to think about how soon you will be finished with this and gone from fan fiction.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 28- Can't Stop Now, I've Traveled So Far
Your author's note really made me laugh, minus the part where you only have two more chapters left and then are outta' here! The notion of Jacob being racist must come from a terminal case of political correctness! As for the chapter contents, Carlisle has a winner with that combo name. Quen sounds just right, and sure says it like it is. Alice's idea of a party might not be so outlandish. Maybe Jake and Rory could even come home for that! I loved it when the girls came over to raise hell about the airline tickets. Carlisle should have consulted with Edward before doing that!
Date: 29 Dec 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 27- 10,000 Miles
I'm happy Jake let himself be talked into following Rory, and by her father, no less! They need this time together, to make up for lost time and to get to know each other. I'm also hoping those two doves were just doves, and not vampire shape shifters from Volterra!
Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 26- Where As A Child I'd Hide
What a time for Rory ro experience teenage rebellion! This will be the perfect time for Aro to take her and that thought just about makes me sick! How can they let her go now? Isn't anyone going to watch out for her? I can't stand it!
Date: 23 Dec 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 25- Across My Memory
Thank you so much for this happy, joyous chapter! Just the thing right before Christmas! I kinow bad stuff will follow, but for this moment it's good times with family, as it should be this time of year. Be seeing you!
Date: 21 Dec 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 24- Back To The Start
So, Aro is pleased that the Cullens are prepared to defend themselves against attack. Well isn't that sweet! All he has to do is kidnap Bella and Edward's child and kill the ones he doesn't want! Pretty cut and dried, he thinks. Guess he forgot that old saying, catching comes before hanging. I can't wait for this clash that's coming. Only wish Jacob would get back on board, one way or the other.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23- Mama
Well now, seems as if Aro's vicious plan may have backfired on him! Instead of breaking Bella's heart and spirit, her mother's death, as what Aro made her, has steeled her daughter to what must be done to regain all their lives. I'm glad she will fight on their own ground, so to speak. So, back to Forks and preparing. I feel bad, for Charlie, for Bella, for Rory and for Edward. May they all have revenge on the Volturi!
Date: 19 Dec 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Death of Comfort
Dear God in Heaven, Bella had to kill her own mother, to save her child!.How will she ever get over that? I vote that Caius, Marcus and especially Aro, be sent to Hell by the quickest route available! Now they have to retaliate somehow. It just makes me so sad that those evil monsters did that to Renee and thus to Bella. There needs to be payback, and I hope it's a major bitch!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 21- The Werewolf Side, The Vampire Side
I should have known that Aro would pull some evil bullshit like this! Poor Renee, not only turned against her will, but vampire brainwashed to boot! He thinks he has the perfect weapon to destroy the Cullens. It may cause a lot of pain and misery, but I still vote for Bella and all her family, vampire and wolf alike!
Date: 16 Dec 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20- I'm Gonna Make This Place Your Home
Look out, Renee, something wicked this way comes! So, Aro thinks he can break Bella with threatening her mother, or some such bull-shit! I think he has no real idea with whom he's dealing! The meeting between Bella and Kitty was very touching, and just the boost Bella needed at that moment.There just has to be a way for the Cullens to win against Aro! I'm not smart enough to know what it is, but it's out there!
Date: 03 Dec 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19- Running Away
Being aware that this is fiction and all still didn't keep the tears at bay. I don't blame Bella one bit for her bone-deep sadness. It's damn discouraging to keep having to fight for what's yours, because some meglomaniacal monster wants to take it from you! Keeping my fingers crossed until next time, take care!
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 18- I Wonder What The Poor People Are Doing
Thanks for the chapter, and the cliffhanger, it gives me something to think about while stuffung the turkey and peeling potaoes. Please give us a little gift and let Bella kill Jane. If not kill, then at least maim, okay? Have a lovely day, eat lots and look out, here comes Christmas!
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 17- Adjusting
Your teacher was spoton about your talent. You write a really good story, my dear. I'm crossing my fingers that you won't let Aro get his filthy hands on Aurora, and that Alice will see them coming soon enough to give them all time to prepare a defense. I trust you to write us all a happy ever after ending, before you ride off into the sunset!
Date: 14 Nov 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 16- The View
Life is so perfect now for Bella and Edward, everything has turned out so well, it was inevitable that trouble would follow. I just didn't realize how far that evil son-of-a-bitch, Aro would go to ruin everything! I just hope Alice will see what's coming and they will hatch a plan to defeat him! I couldn't stand for him to take Rory and kill her parents, just to use her as a lab rat! Not after all they have endured to get to this happy place! That would be hideous! Please tell me you won't do that, please!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 15- She Is Breaking Dawn
Careful, girl, you'll make me blush! It's not my fault your stories are so good I have to review every chapter, it's yours! Bella's awakening was excellent, not to mention amazing. She was so ready for this, so strong. No wonder Edward had such confidence in her reactions, it came from his faith in her, and his great love for her. Everyone was so ready to see her, especially Jacob. By the way, that's a lot of name for a little baby! Good thing she's a human/vampire hybrid, and will be able to handle it! That was so sweet that Bella's first sight was her Edward, rocking Rory's cradle. Good daddy! Loved it all, and see you soon, right? xoxo, Kathleen
Date: 08 Nov 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 14- A Father's Instinct
While I'm loving these chapters, that nagging little voice in my head keeps reminding me, it's almost over. When this is done, I'm really going to miss you writing fanfic about Edward and Bella, and the wolves! This transformational episode was perfect, the way Edward handled Jacob, and his family. It makes sense to me to wait for Bella to see Aurora before anyone besides her father does! Just lovely, my dear!
Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 13- C'est La Vie
You did a great job on Aurora's birth, and Jake's imprinting on her. Now we just have to cross our fingers and hope for the best as Bella goes through the change. Then all we have to worry about are the Volturi!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12- Afraid of Changes
What a wonderful, complex conversation, between Bella and Jacob! It epitomizes their connection, somehow. This view of her pregnancy is a bit more like real life, I think. Time is almost upon us, I'm thinking. Can just barely wait!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11- That's The Word
I loved this chapter so much! This is really how Charlie should have been informed, because we know he would always be there for his little girl! You have done such a good job with this story, Stephanie should have consulted with you! Just sayin'!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot
Not that I haven't read this,or similar stories, dozens of times, and it still grabvs me by the throat and I have to hold my breath! I want to help them all somehow and can't wait to see how it all turns out! See you soon!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 10- Blind Spot
I've just started reading your saga, but thought I would skip ahead and see how you are dealing with Breaking Dawn. I just read this chapter, but I must say.
BRAVO! I never could understand how Bella refused in the books to look at how her decision affected everyone. She was so incredibly selfish. I look forward to seeing how they deal with this.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 9- Bela Lugosi
I'm so pulling for Bella and Edward's child to be a product of their love and not a curse from a Ticuna witch. With the support group she has, the odds are definitely in Bellas favor. UI'm still crossing my fingers, just in case!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8- That's What You Get Kids For Making Whoopee
That's my girl! No surprise to me that Bella stepped up the way she did. I totally get what she's telling Edward. In my own twisted way, I think Laki got just what she deserved! This is how their future was meant to be decided, by the two of them working it out together! The small amount of humour thrown in just makes it better.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 7- Snap Snap Snap
Edward will probably soon regret what he has done to Laki, but even more that he did it in front of Bella! Now that they know what the problem is, now the hunt begins for a solution, one they both can live with!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 6- Under The Honeymoon Spell
Poor Jake, he's suffering from the same thing Edward put up with for years, single -guy syndrome, among mated pairs. Bella probably sympathizes as much as Edward does. I think I caught a few words from Laki's incantation to Bella. Something about a baby and poor little girl, perhaps? Does this mean what I think it means, hmmm? Maybe Jake won't be alone much longer? Please let me know if I'm guessing correctly.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 4- Traditionally Untraditional
It was well worth the wait! The reception was great, and Bella's toast was quite lovely and heartfelt. This marriage was more than earned, it was fought for and won! Makes you want to raise a glass to the happy couple, and then pray that they make it through the dark stuff Aro has in store for them!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 3- After All This Time
Except for the part where Bella woke up to Alice pinching her face, this was a lovely wedding day. The silver ring Charlie gave her, made from his and Renee's wedding rings, blew me away! It is like he knows things subconciously, sometimes! Anyway, I'm glad Edward and Bella are married and on their way to a honeymoon. Since they have no idea what Aro has planned, it's a perfect day! Ignorance really is bliss in this instance. Are you sure there's a happy ending for these two?
Date: 13 Sep 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2- A Long Night
I'm really glad neither Bella nor Edward are aware of Aro's plans. They only know how happy the next day will make them, and all their families. Sure weddings are stressful, but wonderful as well! This surely is what they both deserve, God knows they have worked and sacrificed enough for this !
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy
As soon as I read the words about all their troubles being behind them, I knew damn good and well there was a fly in the ointment! Of course, Aro and his evil plans are more like a poisonous spider than a fly. Whst's this about waiting eighteen years for Bella to be a vampire? And who is Aro's psychic? I'm so glad the wolves and vampires get along as family, because this looks like there will be another battle over Bella.