[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:54 AM Title: Stormy Weather
Great chapter! I do think they both are seeing qualities in each other besides good looks and lust, and I'm sure that will just keep growing. I also think that Carlisle's behavior towards his son is really ugly. Everyone deserves a second chance, especially when it's your own family. :) Kelly
Date: 06 Oct 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
Great chapter. Cant blame eddie for being mad at dad. Rio sounds fun. Uh oh for the bathroom
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
Love it!!!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
as always another great chapter update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
OME! I love this chapter. This is my favorite part:
"Excellent. Can I get a hug?"
"If I say no, will it stop you?" I laughed.
"Nope. Come here!" Emmett boomed as he picked me up, swinging around wildly. He then kissed my cheek, blowing a raspberry into my skin.
I love the lightness of that scene and seeing Emmett blow raspberries on Edward's cheek is sweet. So different than anything else that I've read. And I love how sensitive Edward is. It's nice to see him finally tell Emmett what's been going on and why he is the way he is.
The scene in Rio is fun. Em on the dance floor looking the way he does is hilarious. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 29 Sep 2012 4:25 AM Title: Stormy Weather
awww B&E are so cute together. Carlisle and Rosie need a good slap upside the heads. Hmmm who sabotaged I wonder?
Date: 28 Sep 2012 2:53 PM Title: Stormy Weather
Oh wow, that was amazing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:55 AM Title: Stormy Weather
Wow, yeah, Carlisle was a complete and total ass to Edward, there. I think he really does want to change. You can totally see it. I love that despite his confidence and former man-whoring ways, he's still shy around girls. I think it's cute. I look forwawrd to the next chapter! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Sep 2012 8:41 AM Title: Stormy Weather
it's s good story-but edward's a bit naive to think people are just gonna automatically see him differently after being a slut for so long
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:33 AM Title: Stormy Weather
Yes Carlisle is being an ass. I am glad Edward shared his geeky side even if he was still a hot geek.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:22 AM Title: Stormy Weather
I really like this Bella and yeh Carlisle sucks
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:03 AM Title: Stormy Weather
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:51 AM Title: Stormy Weather
loved it
Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:16 AM Title: Head over Heels
I am glad his mom was there for him he need some motherly love. Yay Bella and Edward are getting to know each other.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:43 AM Title: Flipping Out
I think he was being real sweet to her. True she was not nice at all but I think that was her embarassment talking. Oh if Alice has her way she will have her brother back to his old self in no time.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:01 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Freakin awesome! Ice cream now please
Date: 25 Sep 2012 4:07 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Awww poor Edward just needs a Alice hug. I think he will try and stay away but she will get him with her sweetness.
Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:10 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
I had a feeling he would be gay with his roomate that is just too funny. I love that she met Alice they need each other. I am sure I will love your Edward.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:29 PM Title: Head over Heels
Love, love, love it! Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 9:29 AM Title: Head over Heels
I love your story so much! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Now I'm going to go and check out the pictures on your blog, then go add you to follow on Twitter. :) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 7:21 AM Title: Flipping Out
Loved this chapter! :D I love your Emmett, he's so damn funny, and sweet too. Alice is awesome too!
It was so great when Bella put Edward in his place by throwing him over her shoulder, and landing his ass in the sand!
It was like a switch was flipped as Edward took care of Bella, I'm sure he'll be back to his grouchy self pretty quickly though, but for how long? Yeah, it's obvious that he has some kind of feelings towards Bella, but even as those feelings grow he'll keep fighting them off. I wonder how long that will last, and how long will Bella last before she succumbs to the pull she feels towards him.
I can't wait for the luau to see what happens. One thought is already nagging at me about Zafrina. At some point, maybe very soon, Edward won't want to fuck every female at the resort, and that will include Zafrina. What's going to happen to their 'deal' with the booze, and is she going to cause problems? Also, what will Alice think if she finds out that Edward has been 'in bed' with Zafrina? As far as any of Edward's pieces of ass are concerned; I guess they could pose a problem, and probably at the most inopportune moment. I'm really loving your story! :) Kelly
Date: 24 Sep 2012 6:16 AM Title: Head over Heels
enjoyed it :) look forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
*Grins* I love your story! :) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:14 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Love it so far! I can't wait to 'meet' Edward next. :) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:44 AM Title: Head over Heels
Another good chapter! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:31 AM Title: Head over Heels
Mmmmm Ice cream with Edward! We need whipped cream :-)
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Head over Heels
Great chapter, hun. No, I didn't think his pov was totally obnoxious. I found it rather insightful. I wish Esme had spoken to him years sooner about his wild ways. So sad. Glad he's turned a new leaf.
I'm very excited for the next chapter! The 'getting to know you' will be cute, I'm sure!
:)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:16 AM Title: Head over Heels
Loved it!! And although I love Edward, he deserved the slapping.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:57 AM Title: Head over Heels
So amazing :) I really loved it! I am happy he is changing :)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 2:52 AM Title: Head over Heels
Loved it :) can't wait for more!!!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:54 AM Title: Head over Heels
Glad esmom talked to him. Poor screwdriver up kids
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2012 11:12 PM Title: Head over Heels
Yay for storms and ice cream!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2012 10:52 PM Title: Head over Heels
Awww, I'm happy that Edward's not the colossal douche that everyone's pegged him as. And boy, Rhiannon wasn't very happy there, was she? And wow, that storm sounds horrible. I look forward to these two talking everything out. Oh, and I like that conversation between Edward and Esme. He really needed that! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:41 AM Title: Flipping Out
love this so much. cant wait for more :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:45 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Loved it :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:57 AM Title: Flipping Out
LOVE IT!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:43 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Edward is really something. From one woman to another. But his "change of heart" with a little seed of doubt of Alice is in my mind a little bit to early. I mean he just met her for 2 minutes and already he thinks to open his heart for her?
Nevertheless it will be interesting to see his change and how Bella enjoys her stay on the island.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:15 AM Title: Flipping Out
The whole flipping Edward over thing, sooo funny
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:02 AM Title: Flipping Out
Thanks for sparing us the barbie session!
Also hoping this isn't a bitchy snarky snarky Bella
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:15 AM Title: Flipping Out
Okay, so Edward's not a total Douche. I like that he's the one that found Bella as she fell. And good lord, her flipping him, that's EPIC! LOVE IT! This story is going to be so much fun! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 4:09 AM Title: Flipping Out
ROFL Love her flipping him. Jerk. But aww for taking care of her after the fall
Oh Here is a dancing plot bunny for ya.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:48 AM Title: Flipping Out
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! Go Bella! I loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:45 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
skankward......ROFL. Can understand being hurt but being a whore doesnt help either. Ah well.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 11:46 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
thanks for something a little lighter as always this like all your other stories are worth following. update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:53 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
I think he will be a little of both because he's afraid of getting hurt again
Date: 15 Sep 2012 12:05 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
:)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:54 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
This is amazing! I really loved it! I hope he crumbles under her ways...Slutward only needs to be a slut for her (if that is even possible). I cannot wait for more!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:29 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
DAYUM! He's a total man whore. BUT, I do believe that he will change his man-whoring ways for Bella. Totally loving how the story's going. And as I posted in the group, BEST LINE, EV-AH...""Oh, please," Alice retorted, rolling her eyes. "If she wants you, I'm a guy who likes to wear those nasty pants from the 90s...those Hammer pants. I'll even do the dance." She did a very lame version of the Hammer dance, shimmying her shoulders.
Tha had me laughing out loud. I can just see tiny little Alice doing that! Thanks so much for sharing!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:47 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
He's doomed :-)
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Probably he'll trie to stay away and keep he's manwhoring ways, at first
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 11:26 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Totally loved this chapter. I feel so bad for Alice, but I'm happy she's out of that situation. And Edward being a douche. Some of my favorite kinds of stories. Especially when Doucheward gets a clue and becomes the sweet, loving Edward we all know and love. And as for Tyler...What a freaking loser. He can't break up with her in person?! GAH. That's just wrong. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:23 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Love, love, love this juicy story, my dear!!!! I can't wait to meet Edward. XXOO
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 7:18 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
love alice always has a plan.poor bella glad she has alice now to help her.fab start look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 6:18 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Great start, looking forward to more. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 5:20 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
GREAT start. Cant wait for more!!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:07 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Good start, can't wait to read more...
One thing, in Tampa, one would find Ybor City not Ebor.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 7:54 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Cant wait for more........
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:05 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Loved it so far can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:45 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
love love love... i want more... so much more... NOW :) hehe
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 10:06 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
oh another good one! Poor Bella and poor Alice. But things are gonna heat up on the island, I gotta a feeling! Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 9:18 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Well, lets see how this story plays out. The first chapter seems to be a pretty interesting start. It is going to be interesting how Edward and Bella will meet and how they will interact.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:09 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
I'm so excited about this story! Loved this first chapter and can't wait to read more
Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:17 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Very nice beginning to a fun story. I totally called Tyler being gay due to the excessive tanning. And nice line about the Robsten fiasco. Poor Rob. I look forward to the rest of the story. Any EPOVs in mind?
Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:07 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
SO SO EXCITED!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:58 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
I can't wait to see where you go with this! It's excellent writing and an excellent start of a story line! Good Job!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:48 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Whoo hoo- I love Manwhore Edward!
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:22 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:19 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Looks great!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:10 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Can't wait to read more! Great first chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:25 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Great first chapter, sweetie!
I wish Emmett was available ;) LOL
Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:13 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Oh, I have a feeling I am going to love this. Oh, who am I kidding, I love all of your stories! Thank you!