Date: 05 Mar 2013 12:30 AM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY SOO MUCH! THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT WITH US. UPD ATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ! I LOVE YA !
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 5:22 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Is James blast from the past for Alice
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:39 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens next. I hope you won't drag out their separation.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:03 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
I knew he would break and buy a ticket to be with her. He just loves her so much. I think the shirts was a sweet gesture. I love that Alice was there for him. Wonderful chapter.
Date: 04 Mar 2013 12:33 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 8:03 AM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
:) loved this
Date: 04 Mar 2013 4:41 AM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Sad but necessary!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:37 AM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Such a sad chapter. I feel so much for them. Totally wanted to cry this chapter. I do love Bella's fierceness and going off on the dude with the fugly dog. And I'm happy that Edward has Alice there. After all the time with Emmett and Rosalie and their constant cracks of his behavior, it will be good for him to spend time with his baby sister and move forward. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:02 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
Please tell me you will be posting another chapter soon!!! I just started this story & have fallen in love with it!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:36 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
Victoria is crazy !!!! I am glad to be rid of her and Jacob. It is sad Bella is leaving.
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:22 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:27 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Thank you for not prolonging their meeting! yay!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:05 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
I just found this story! LOVE it....just what I need...something a little light & humourous but also sexy!!! :)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:39 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
The ring is sweet!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 10:44 PM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
awww poor kids having to separate. glad she and E took out Jake and his butt buddy. Sorry Alice got hurt.
Ugh Victoria. Hope she doesnt try to stalk B in the states.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:34 PM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
love the update
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2013 8:23 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
:)
Date: 05 Feb 2013 7:10 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
OH wow, that was amazing! I really cannot wait to see what happens next :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:53 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
She definitely needs to move to the island!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 5:22 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 05 Feb 2013 4:56 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
supper good
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:33 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Nice opener, lots of action but felt natural. I'm just a reader, not a writer so what do I know. Thanks for putting this out there.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 2:49 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
I vote Bella doesn't go home and Alice and Rose has to plan a wedding at the end of the week... Bella and Edward cant stand the thought of being apart.
I also vote that Bella gets to kick Ictoria's @ss!
Date: 14 Jan 2013 1:24 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
how could you ever refer to a naked edward cleaning a munane ..shit I would buy tickets for that show ......it would ne a wonderful time for them both to live n the island but he has so many old hook up seeking him out there ...I just dont kow but they could be happy anywhere
Date: 14 Jan 2013 12:02 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
I think they should live on the island! Please update soon!
Date: 13 Jan 2013 9:51 PM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
That was very hot loved it. Jasper is funny falling asleep i am glad emmett and edwad talked
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:56 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
Bella needs to move to island...its more intetesting...tons of stories of them in wa...
Date: 13 Jan 2013 12:45 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
loving it so far..can't wait for updates!!
Date: 12 Jan 2013 10:57 PM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
Very satisfying chapter. Nothing you write is ever mundane soooooo never think that way. S ince you asked fo suggestions I was thinking with Bella's culinary savy maybe she'll find moving to the island to be both therapeutic and satisfying in her love life butt..... you!!!! are the brains behind the story. Til next time do your magic.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:18 PM Title: Insecurities and Water Sports
Stay on the Island and run the kitchen ...write for travel magazines for a hobby :-)
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:12 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
loved it and canr16;t wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 12 Jan 2013 4:10 AM Title: Insecurities and Water Sports
loved it!
Date: 11 Jan 2013 8:50 PM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
Glad em and e got some bonding time.
Ugh for Victoria. Glad B got to hear him telling her no. She could have assumed the worst. Get the skank B
Yummy lemony time!!!
I wanna see B on the island!!!! with all the family
Date: 11 Jan 2013 4:11 PM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
OH WOW...that was amazing! I really loved it! I am so proud of Bella for standing up to Skank...aka Victoria. I think Bella should move down to the island, we hear so many stories about Seattle, this would be different :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2013 3:11 PM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2012 3:54 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
I love sappy! I love to get all swoony too. I can't help it; I'm a hopeless romantic. Loved the chapter! xoxo Kelly
I hope you have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2012 3:06 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
:D I love them! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2012 1:23 PM Title: Trouble in Paradis
I love your story! I don't remember if I made a guess as to who could be sabotaging, and stealing from the Cullens or not, but I still can't figure it out. I can't wait to find out just how Zafrina is a 'bad guy'. I will die if Jake shows up, because that will no doubt be an ugly situation. As for anyone else in their past's showing up; I just don't know. You've spun quite a story here, so anything could happen! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:14 AM Title: Insecurities and Water Sports
Can understand E's reluctance. Great party and water time. Carlisle is learning about Edward isnt he.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 12:32 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Oh dang that was hottt. So sweet and romantic I just love him.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:39 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 3:31 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
So glad I found this story it's awesome
what a great lemon
had to take care of myself after reading it
Date: 17 Nov 2012 12:51 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
HOW EVIL IS THAT LAUREN ..GIVING OUR POOR BOY NIGHTMEARS ....THE LEMON WEDGE WAS NICE ..I LOVE A LONG SLOW BURN .....RL DOES SUCK ..BUT NEVER DISPARE YOU HAVE GOOD FRIENDS HERE
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:34 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Absolutely loved it as always :)
Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:38 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
oooh yummy yummy smexy times.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:37 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Gah, that lemon was INCREDIBLE! I really loved every bit of it! I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:00 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
:)
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:39 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
What a perfect way to spend a birthday. And I totally feel the emotion in the chapter. I don't know what the hell my issue is, but like everything is making me cry lately. Probably my feelings with the saga ending. I love this story. And don't worry about the rate of updates. you can only do so much and I'd wait for whatever length of time I have to in order to read more. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:04 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
This was great! I really loved it! The only thing I noticed "wrong" was the fact that Bella told Edward twice about her birthday. Here, "mmm,” Edward said, smiling secretly. “I may have to take another vacation in September to visit my beautiful girlfriend in Seattle. Spoil her for her birthday. What day?”
“September thirteenth,” I responded."
and here, "So,” Edward said as he popped a carrot into his mouth, leaning back on his elbows. “I know what month your birthday is but what exact day? I want to make sure I’m there with enough time to spoil my girl.”
“It’s several months away, Edward,” I said as I nibbled on my lunch.
“I can just come for the entire month of September and celebrate your birthday each day,” he chuckled. “Imagine all of those presents I can get for you.”
“September thirteenth,” I said quickly."
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:41 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
i love this story:)))
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:48 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
sweet chapter. Glad everyone pitched in to help with birthday.
PS you mentioned September 13th up top before you mentioned at the bottom when E insinuated he didnt know the exact date.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:32 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
you always put a smile on my day. it seemed short because you always leave us wanting more. looking forward to the citrus but dying for the lemon!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:02 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
:-) :-)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:46 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:15 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:29 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
THis chapter was awesome! I do believe the love so soon, I have seen it and heard it with my own eyes. They are still married, 3 beautiful children, and more in love every day.
If some have a problem with that, then just let us readers that DO love this type of fiction be the voices you hear first.
I loved it! *hugs*
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:19 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
Loved it :)
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:05 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
Love it. What a perfect birthday surprise and the I love you's were great.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 3:40 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
Awww, I love this chapter. It's so sweet. Can't wait for the next part. Thansk for sharing!
Date: 31 Oct 2012 4:38 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
Loving the story and all the dunkings in the pool lol.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:19 PM Title: A Relational Shift
Good lord; I'm grinning like a fool, and I'm feeling pretty swoony too! I love, love, love your story so much! I can't believe how cute and sweet your Edward and Bella are. Edward is pretty damn romantic for not being so for the last seven or eight years. Bella is one lucky woman! I'm having so much fun reading your story! I can't wait to see what happens in the next couple of chapters. *Shakes head back and forth, then pouts* No more disgusting Jacob. Boo! Just kidding, I think things are going to get a little crazy, but that just makes life more interesting! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2012 5:37 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
I loved the chapter, it was amazing.
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:22 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
lauren will com back i m sure .the stea;ing is weird and wgo is the weird here?james or victoria.or maybe toghether
Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:14 PM Title: Trouble in Paradis
I absolutely love this story can't wait for more :)
Date: 25 Oct 2012 2:13 PM Title: Trouble in Paradis
So amazing :) I really cannot wait to see what happens next for them ;)
Date: 25 Oct 2012 12:29 PM Title: Trouble in Paradis
Wow i love this!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:46 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
OOH, okay. Totally love that Carlisle apologized. Marcus' gesture was very sweet. Bella tossing Alice in the pool was the best way to get through to her. I like that Bella also does that to Edward when he's brooding. He needs it. Glad Rhiannon are gone. Hm, not sure who's stealing from the bar. I'm guessing that Lauren and James are going to hook up and come to the island to try and make Alice and Edward miserable. Lauren's still gonna be a slut and hook up with anything she can or find someone in Rio and James and Victoria are gonna hook up to try and get back to Edward. Edward, Emmett and Jasper are gonna kick James's ass for what he did to Alice. Bella's gonna deal with Lauren (that's why she leaves) and Victoria is just pathetic. I've not figured out what to do with Zafrina...yet. I think Tyler's good in San Fran with Eric. AND...why can't Bella just work for the paper from Isle Esme?! I mean, it's a gossip column for Christs sake. She SHOULD be able to do that from anywhere on earth, she just has to mind time zones. That's how it can work from there. And boy, am I long winded this chapter or what?! LOL. Thanks for sharing! I look forward to Edward's birthday celebration!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:02 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
I think Zafrina is in on the stealing somehow?
Date: 25 Oct 2012 4:28 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
great chapter. glad carlisle is trying to make amends. rhiannon is a moron.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:23 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 10:46 AM Title: A Relational Shift
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
loved it!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:02 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
loved it!
Date: 21 Oct 2012 12:34 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
loved it!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:25 PM Title: A Relational Shift
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:07 AM Title: A Relational Shift
You just had to put the dog in here didn't you she should have stuck her heel in his puny testicles. What a romantic date I loved it. Alice is funny not remembering she offered to plan the wedding.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:15 AM Title: A Relational Shift
I LOVED IT, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON~!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 10:50 PM Title: A Relational Shift
I love the story keep up the good work!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: A Relational Shift
SO amazing :) I really loved it SO much! I cannot wait to see what will happen next! Guess as to who is stealing from the Cullens? No idea, sorry :(
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:53 AM Title: A Relational Shift
VERY WELL DONE. NOT TO MUCH ANGST PLEASE! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE.
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:44 AM Title: A Relational Shift
AHHH! So happy my suggestions panned out for you! Totally perfect and the chapter is so sweet, that it nearly made me freaking cry. LOVE IT. And good lord, Jacob is a freaking beast in this story. I love that Bella smacked him with her shoe. She's fierce. Hmmm, not sure who's stealing from the Cullens..someone unnamed as of yet I assume. Thanks for sharing! I love this story.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:19 AM Title: A Relational Shift
I Love this new CharmWard! I so hope he doesn't fuck up, literally. :-)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:17 AM Title: A Relational Shift
What a wonderful date. Very well done. Glad B smushed Jacob's face. Aww for the Portugese translation at the end.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: A Relational Shift
love it... i live for these updates :)
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chicken and Confessions
WHAT DID HAPPEN TO BELLA HAS SOMEONE DONE SOMETHING TO HER? OR GRABED HER? HOW OFFTEN DO YOU UP DATE? I'M STILL LOVING YOUR STORY.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 8:57 AM Title: Head over Heels
DAMN STUCK TOGETHER WITH A STORM OUTSIDE AND BELLA AFARID OF STORMS THATS GREAT FOR EDWARD HE CAN HOLD HER ALL NIGHT AFTER THE ICE CREAM THAT IS. I HOPE BELLA SEE'S EDWARD IS JUST ANOTHER PERSON THATS BEEN HURT LIKE HER AND THEY CAN BE FRIENDS OR MORE.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 7:11 AM Title: Flipping Out
OH THATS SO COOL EDWARD REALLY CARED IF BELLA IS OK OR NOT, AND HE HELPED BY CARRING HER TO HER OFFICE SO CARLISLE COULD CHECK HER OUT TO MAKE SURE SHE WOULD BE OK. I'M REALLY LOVING IT SO MUCH.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 6:09 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
WOULDN'T IT BE NICE IF EDWARD COULD LOVE AGAIN AND STOP BEING A MANWHORE
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:13 AM Title: Stormy Weather
WOW I LOVE YOUR STORY ALREADY.I'M GUESSING YOU ARE NOT FROM THE USA SO I'D LIKE TO LET YOU KNOW YOU ARE USEING A TERM ( BASED OFF ) THIS IS WRONG IT SHOULD BE ( BASED ON ) JUST TRYING TO HELP YOU OUT, PLEASE DON'T GET MAD AT ME. OK SO YOU HAVE 5 MORE CHAPTERS UP SO I'M MOVING ON TO READ THEM BECAUSE I DO REALLY LIKE WHAT I'VE READ SO FAR.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
Fun times in rio. He is so sweet giving her the bed.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chicken and Confessions
SO amazing! I really cannot wait for more :) So happy they are somewhat attracted to each other ;)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
Loved it :)
Date: 06 Oct 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chicken and Confessions
Hurry!! Love this story, can't wait to read more....
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chicken and Confessions
I loved this chapter so much! :) You know, I've been wondering who it could have been that stole the booze, money, and who glued the gas caps on; I have too many suspects. Sure it could be one of the resort employees, (but not likely) or one of Edward's bitter past flings, (not so sure about that either) or how about Royce, or Alice's ex James? Hmm. Well I'm sure there will be more clues, so I'll just have to wait. :) Now I'll be dying until your next update to see what happened to Bella. Passed out? Sick? Being hit on by some guy? Edward to the rescue!!! I can't wait to see what happens! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chicken and Confessions
:)