Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:40 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
SO amazing :) I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens next! Alec sounds like a first-class douche!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 10:52 PM Title: Halloween Hijinks
LOVE YOU! UNFORTUNATLY FF SUCKS,THEY PULL STORIES THEN STOP THEN A YEAR LATER YOU THINK ITS OK THEN THE START UP AGAIN. I PRETTY MUCH STAY ON HERE NOW!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 9:18 PM Title: Halloween Hijinks
If I were Bella I would send my resume out to other newpapers and magazines. I don't think I could work for some like Alec. Loved that they had steamy makeup sex.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 10:56 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
I think Bella needs to take some cues from Paul and start sending her own resume out. I wouldn't want to work for a tyrant like that.
And that lemon? That was hot, hot, hot.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 10:49 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
loved this
Date: 14 Oct 2013 7:01 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Awwwww its about that time marriage time
Date: 14 Oct 2013 6:59 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Glad that she said she was sorry for her behavior that caused their fight. And that lemon was HOOOOT. Yep, total need for new panties from that. Alec's a dickwad and no idea what's going on, but I don't like him. Paul and Robert are a hoot. They are awesome supporting characters. I'm slightly worried about Becca. And Yay for Rose and Emmett! Also, looking forward to them going back to the island. Lots seems to have changed. Can't wait to see what kind of ring Edward picks out. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 6:11 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
I am glad they made up. I really liked Alice in this chapter. I also liked the other characters but I just especially liked the way you wrote her. This was a really lovely chapter.
Date: 14 Oct 2013 5:49 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Such a great story! So glad to see it back!
Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:23 AM Title: Stormy Weather
**Slaps Carlise hard**.dam that was rude and cold hearted.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 9:05 PM Title: Ripples
More please I am so loving this story.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:22 PM Title: Ripples
I absolutely love this story, all your stories are great but this one has everything. Can't wait to see where the rest of the story goes, thank you for sharing all your awesome stories!!
melissa
Date: 15 Sep 2013 11:48 PM Title: Ripples
Oh wow, that was amazing and intense. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 11:16 PM Title: Ripples
poor sick B. We all've known people who are arse's when they are sick.
Date: 13 Sep 2013 12:40 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
Loved it!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 11:17 PM Title: Ripples
Omg, you're killing me...so is he going back to the island to sulk until Bella chases him down or is he going to give her an ultimatum? Don't keep us in suspense too long! Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 12 Sep 2013 7:29 AM Title: Ripples
Poor Bella - stress and hormones do not mix
Date: 12 Sep 2013 3:29 AM Title: Ripples
Poor Edward. I hope she grovels at his feet.
Great chapter!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 10:46 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
That wass amazing :) I really loved this chapter :D
Date: 10 Aug 2013 9:55 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
I'm so glad Edward go over his aversion to fucking! He can have a nice balance. But I love this story and definitely can't wait for much much more!
Date: 09 Aug 2013 6:31 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
I love Charlie he is just too funny. Making him drinking the sludge. He is a great dad.
Date: 08 Aug 2013 9:18 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
Wonderfully sweet date, before and after too. Gotta say I Love Charlie!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2013 8:17 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
What a rousing chapter, LOL! And of course, the sweet moments... just... awwww ;)
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:47 AM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
:) loved this
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:13 AM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
Awww, that was a nice birthday celebration that they had. And damn, that is early for fishing! That sucks. I do love CHarlie and Edward's talk and I'm glad that Charlie gave his permission. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 09 Jul 2013 11:04 PM Title: Confrontations
Almost caught up !!!
Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:47 PM Title: Moving on Up
Maybe I cam get caught up on a couple chapters today!
Date: 05 Jul 2013 12:14 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
Gah, that was amazing :D Cannot wait to see what he has planned for her :D
Date: 04 Jul 2013 10:51 PM Title: Birthday Surprise
Wonderful birthday surprises for her. Of course its the same Jimmy. It would be our luck. Yummy chapter
Date: 02 Jul 2013 10:33 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
What an interesting chapter. Charlie was putting on quite some masculinity show there, huh? As for the Jimmy situation....I'm with Bella. I have a sneaking suspicion that it's James the jackass. As for the start of celebrating her birthday...awesome. Can't wait to see what else Edward has planned for them. And that fishing trip with Charlie is going to be quite interesting....Thanks for sharing!
Date: 02 Jul 2013 9:12 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
:) loved this
Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:27 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
I love Charlie he is so funny. Edward was so sweet getting her and her friends a spa day. I feel bad for becca she needs help. Edward is such a romantic.
Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:21 AM Title: Birthday Surprise
Charlie is one gross dude!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:18 AM Title: Confrontations
Wow Omar was a real dick. Aww for first fight and makeup. charlie is funny
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:28 PM Title: Confrontations
SO amazing :)
Date: 08 Jun 2013 4:49 AM Title: Confrontations
THAT WAS SWEET, I LOVED IT THANKS! I WISH YOU UPDATED MORE THAN ONCE A MONTH THOUGH BECAUSE I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the update, however the comment about the updating schedule upset me. I work full time. This is a hobby. Something to help me relax. Additionally, my work schedule/RL got crazy hectic busy the past few months with moving, working 80+ hours a week, and changing jobs. Please be patient with the updating schedule. If you can't respect that, then I understand.
Thank you.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:59 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
I need to catch up
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:22 PM Title: Confrontations
Love Charlie he is too funny trying out macho Edward. It is funny how she said Tyler was prettier then her. Omar was an ass I am glad he got fired. The concert sex was Hott.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:56 PM Title: Confrontations
IT WAS A LITTLE TOO SHORT FOR THE LONG WAIT BUT I JUST CAN'T GET ENOUGH. I ALWAYS HOPE YOUR STORIES SURPASS THE 100 PLUS CHAPTERS OF "LA CANTANTE" IN FACT IF I REMEMBER CORRECTLY A SEQUEL TO "LA CANTANTE" WAS MENTIONED. ANYWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT CHAPTER DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE. OH HELL ANYTHING YOU UPDATE IS ALWAYS A WELCOMED TREAT.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 2:43 PM Title: Confrontations
:) loved this
Date: 05 Jun 2013 12:51 AM Title: Let's Get it On
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 06 May 2013 6:47 AM Title: Let's Get it On
So has Jimmy the creep figured out that Edward is Alices brother when will Edward find out that he is the one that hurt Alice. I am so happy they are together good times. LMAO Renee setting the mood lol
Date: 04 May 2013 11:55 PM Title: Let's Get it On
Yummy Yummy Yummy great reunion. Oh no Jimmy is probably Alice's Ex. Crap crap crap!!!
Date: 04 May 2013 7:14 PM Title: Let's Get it On
Is Jimmy actually James the one that almost beat Alice to death
Date: 04 May 2013 6:12 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
loved the letters and then the meeting how wonderful
Date: 04 May 2013 6:10 AM Title: Moving on Up
glad Tyler came up with the money he needed to pay
Date: 04 May 2013 6:08 AM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
That was so sad
Date: 04 May 2013 6:05 AM Title: Zero Zero Tolerance for BS
Good thing them creep where taken care of
Date: 04 May 2013 5:57 AM Title: Let Sleeping Texans and Slutty Redheads Lie
fun time
Date: 04 May 2013 5:55 AM Title: Insecurities and Water Sports
They can have alot of fun befor sex
Date: 04 May 2013 5:51 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Eating cheese cake is good but ;)
Date: 04 May 2013 5:48 AM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
Wow what a birthday
Date: 04 May 2013 5:45 AM Title: Trouble in Paradis
She wants him bad
Date: 04 May 2013 5:36 AM Title: A Relational Shift
great date
Date: 04 May 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chicken and Confessions
where is she???
Date: 04 May 2013 5:30 AM Title: Stormy Weather
I think they are getting alone
Date: 04 May 2013 5:23 AM Title: Head over Heels
it begins ;)
Date: 04 May 2013 5:17 AM Title: Flipping Out
he will not mess with her
Date: 04 May 2013 5:13 AM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
skankward lol love that
Date: 04 May 2013 5:10 AM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
wow love it here to
Date: 03 May 2013 11:49 PM Title: Let's Get it On
AS ALWAYS WORTH WAITING FOR. THANK YOU!!!!
Date: 03 May 2013 6:33 AM Title: Let's Get it On
OMG! WORTH THE WAIT, I LOVED IT! UPDATE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZ!
Date: 03 May 2013 4:31 AM Title: Let's Get it On
I truely am enjoing reading this amazingly captivating story u truely are a very talented writer. I thought u might want to know that this is not showing up under most recent;however if u contact TWCS & let them know to change that date manually for u when u last updated it will then show up under most recent. Currently it is showing up as last updated shows as April 7th not May 2nd, which is when u last updated, which is why it's not showing up under MOST RECENT!! U have to do this each time u update a new chapter just thought u might want to know. I look forward to each & every update & the only reason I know when u update a chapter is I have my account set up for e-mail notification to recieve e-mail when u update. I definatly rate this story as a 10 out 0f 10 star rating!! Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story. I know how much time & effort goes into writting each chapter. Untill next time I will be impatienenly waiting for next update!!
Date: 03 May 2013 4:28 AM Title: Let's Get it On
Awww. So happy Edward's finally in Seattle and the sexy fun times have begun. I'm surprised she was able to walk and Paul...well, he's funny. I kinda like him. Thanks for sharing! Oh...yeah. WHAT is up with Jimmy? He's wierd!
Date: 03 May 2013 4:15 AM Title: Let's Get it On
Oh no is jimmy the same as Alice's abusive asshole. I love there first time it was amazing and Paul you have to love him a male version of Alice. Love the chapter.
Date: 03 May 2013 3:58 AM Title: Let's Get it On
SO amazing :) I really loved it SO much!
Date: 26 Apr 2013 8:57 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Big sigh. Home...
Date: 17 Apr 2013 2:02 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
OMG!!!!!!! Please tell me you are ready to post another chapter!!! I LOVE this story!
Date: 10 Apr 2013 5:47 PM Title: Happy Birthday, Mr. Cullen
I actually do believe in love at first sight!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 12:37 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
CANT WAIT UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 12:34 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Loved it!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 1:11 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
BWAH HAHAHA!!!!!! HEHE SO EXCITED THAT THEYRE BACK TOGETHER!!!!!!! absolutely love the anal sex conversation it was hilarious and hopefully edward makes big oon that promise update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 9:50 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT. IT'S ABOUT TIME!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 6:55 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Great chapter as always. The letters were hilarious. You almost had me spit pepsi at my screen.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 2:32 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Oh I am sure that pic kept Edward busy for a while. The poor guy is about to rip out of his pants. I am so excited that they are finally together.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 6:51 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
loved it! cant wait to read more......
Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:38 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Oh wow, that was AMAZING :D I CANNOT wait for them to get back "home" :D
Date: 08 Apr 2013 3:49 AM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Awww, I wondered how that whole separtion was going to be written. I think the emails and such was perfect. Totally works and love their reunion. Very well written. And I didn't think Huilen was in on the theft of alcohol. Nice twist. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 26 Mar 2013 1:23 AM Title: A Relational Shift
Hello, I don't know if this message is going to be seen by the others who read the story, and I don't want you to get me wrong. I'm portuguese and the lines up there are not, so I just wanna tell you the correct form:
"Desculpe? Podia tirar - nos uma foto? Eu gostaria de uma lembrança do primeiro encontro com a mulher que eu sei que irei casar..."
If you need help in future translation you can send me a message :)
Date: 25 Mar 2013 11:05 PM Title: Moving on Up
Love the story. So looking forward to updates
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:01 PM Title: Moving on Up
I know you're busy, so I'll just say that this was a fantastic chapter, Josie! :D Loved it! Especially the consummation of her life at the end.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:19 PM Title: Moving on Up
That was amazing :) I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:50 PM Title: Flipping Out
Poor Bella. I hope she doesn't feel bad for long. The girl is having a though few days. I think it is going to get better with the help of her new friends. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:54 PM Title: Tales of a Manwhore
Wow...he is a mess! What an ass. I hope Edward cleans his act up. I understand running a business, but I feel bad for Nahuel and I don't like Zafrina. I am loving the story. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 2:52 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Very interesting! I can't wait to get caught up! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:20 AM Title: Moving on Up
Great chapter. I think she should defiantly take the promotion espish if she is going to be tied down with her lease. Thakks for writing looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:16 AM Title: Moving on Up
I think she should until the reporter comes back. Edward nerds to stay for the year as her roomie then they both go back to the island together
Date: 24 Mar 2013 12:56 AM Title: Moving on Up
i love whatever you write!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:39 PM Title: Moving on Up
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:18 PM Title: Moving on Up
Love the chapter Edward is just too perfect. I loved the flowers. The apartment is a little to brite for my taste. I love that Alice is coming to visit.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 7:36 PM Title: Moving on Up
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CAN'T WAIT!!! TIL NEXT TIME
Date: 23 Mar 2013 5:48 PM Title: Moving on Up
Great chapter. Glad Tyler's family made sure B was take care of. YeY for new job offer.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 5:25 PM Title: Moving on Up
Poor Bella. I hate that she had to go back to the apartment. I'm glad that Tyler did the right thing, though. Her apartment sounds fun the way it's decorated. She should totally take that promotion it will be good for her and Alice is right. I look forward to the next chapter. And good luck with all the things coming up for you!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:15 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Awwwww....PLEASE!!!! MORE!!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2013 1:05 PM Title: Insecurities and Water Sports
I definitely think that Bella should move to the island! There is a lot more opportunity for the story if you keep all the Cullen's together!! I'm almost caught up now...on to the next chapter!! I can't get enough of this story!!