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Reviewer: nemolove_22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks

Woah, that was a hot lemon. Totally loved it!! I totally meant to move over here to keep reading once you moved off Fan Fiction, but I totally spaced and forgot to add it to my favorites. Oops!! But I'm back now and I have a bit of catching up to do!! :D I'm off to catch up.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:43 PM Title: Ripples

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:07 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man

Loved it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:44 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

Whew! 

So much going on!

So happy he's going to Bella's Award dinner! :D

And though it was a quick convo, at least Carlisle said what Edward needed to hear!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:14 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

good

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:48 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

Glad they were all caught. And even happier one of them didn't try something with Edward and have Bella leave him. Loved it. 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

Oh wow that was evil burning down his villa glad everything was gone out of there.  James and Victoria are brother and sister I guess crazy runs in the family. I am happy Carlisle finally redeemed himself.  Poor Edward is so exhausted without Bella by his side. But they will be together soon. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:29 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

Great update.    And it seems that Carlisle is finally coming around, too.   It was great that he acknowledged all that Edward has done.    Hopefully, this will be a turning point for them.    And I'm glad that he told Edward to find a way to go to Bella's awards dinner and that he would regret it forever if he didn't.   I just hope that he does go.  

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 8:57 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

i just re-read all 31 chapters and instead of an epi i think a sequel would be a better idea maybe???? read you soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:43 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

Brazilian jail does not sound like fun. I hope they are there for a long time. James needs to be left in jail. Just throw away the key. Edward needs to talk to Bella about these nightmares before he crashes from lack of sleep. Bella needs to stop making him feel guilty. She could have just left her job. They have the money. She chose to stay until the end of her lease. She needs to suck it up and be a big girl. Edward is doing the best he can.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:29 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 11:59 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

This is fantastic!!! WOW! I really enjoyed this! I am excited for the surprise and a huge lemon! :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:10 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

Ugh  had a feeling Carlisle had messed things up really bad.   oooh He's in the doghouse with Esme too huh?  

Well at least they have skype and email.  Sounds like Alice has been busy.  So sweet of her.

Ugh   Zafrina.   Be reporting her for pricegouging, but I doubt the countries there care about it.  

Gotta love Esme.  So sweet and loyal.  Wow E's got some great ideas for the island.  Wow  Carlisle is a real coward hiding from E like that.   Poor sad B.   Well at least Carlisle finally talked to him.    

Oh wow   Hope all three get long prison terms.   Wowsers.  Go Alice!!!   Glad Everyone is telling him to go.  Be a great surprise.

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

I'm so glad those 3 were caught and are now in jail. 

Reviewer: Franzi1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:13 AM Title: Isle of Craziness

so I just wanted to say that i totally  loveyour story and the way you spun it and the characters out, though I'm not good at reviewing and I normally don't review - I guess I don't really know what to write- anyway I really like how your story played out so far. And I'm rambling - I think.

Uhm given that this is probably the we heard about James and co could you possibly think about writing an outtake in James POV about his time in prison and how it all played out for him ( he'll probably blame blame Alice, Becca and maybe even Bella and Edward for this, but him being used by someone in prison...) I'd be really interested in reading this and maybe other readers of this story are too so could you please think about it, thanks!

And thank you for writing this awesome story (sorry for any possible spelling and gramma mistakes in this I'm not a native speaker)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I truly appreciate it! i will definitely consider doing an outtake of James and his time in jail. He is truly a sadistic, evil character. I've yet to read a James that I like. Thank you for the suggestion! 

I'm also considering on making the letter that Edward wrote Bella be an outtake, but we'll have to see. 

Again, thank you for reviewing! 

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:40 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

I'm so happy those three are gone.  I still don't completely trust Carlisle's apology.  Hopefully, he meant them and doesn't say anything more that will hurt Edward and Bella.  They don't deserve that.  I'm glad Edward is going to the awards.  I was getting a bit miffed at him.

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:13 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

Wow, Edward is super awesome at turning things around. I'm glad that he got things worked out with his father, too. Oh and Rose is disgusting. I'm sure that a lot of pregnant women experience some of those qualities, but good lord is she open about sharing them. I am happy that Edward is going to go back and be there for the awards ceremony. I was disappointed when he said that he would not be able to make it. Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:00 PM Title: Isle of Craziness

loved it.. had faith in you!!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 10:15 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I hope his father is not a total asshat.  I love the counter lovin.  Wonderful chapter. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 7:10 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I am so angry at Renee. She had no business being upset with Edward. He has to be with his family and family business for awhile. Bella is a big girl. She has friends and family to help her, unless Renee and Charlie are too lazy to help her. Renee should just be greatful that Edward understands how much Bella loves them and he is rich enough to buy her a huge temporary house near them. She could loose Bella to the resort all year round.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

Hard to see him leave I'm sure.  I'm thinking he won't make it to the ceremony.  Have a feeling the island is gonna be worse than he thinks.

Nice that Marcus came up with a way to keep her, sort of.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:03 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

This one made me cry. I remember feeling the exact way about my husband back when were dating and I had to go out of state for a week. I was a mess! And I was in Disney World!! The happiest place on earth and I was a wreck cause my love was a thousand miles away.

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:39 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I'm a little worried about the victoria thing. If she does cause problems I hope it's nothing that will destroy Edward and Bella's relationship. I'm not sure what will happen with Carlise. I do hope he gets his head out of his ass. Lol

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2014 1:06 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I certainly hope that Edward returns for the Newsroom Awards. That would be a nice surprise for her. His departure is so sad, it made me cry, too. I agree with Bella, I don't think things are over with Victoria, nor with James. I'm happy Becca and Daniel are working on it. And I can't wait to find out what Edward has planned for the basement of the new house. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:55 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

Hate to see them so sad and apart. Hopefully the two months will fly by. 

Reviewer: jac4765 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:40 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

Sorry but regardless of your plan I think separating them was wrong, it seems as though Edward is acting selfishly putting his own needs, his family and his job before Bella. I don't really want to read about them apart, so I will leave this story now but thank you for everything you have written so far.

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:53 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale

Thank you soooo much for this chapter!!! I love this story, and I have been waiting anxiously for a new chapter!!! I really don´t like when Edward and Bella are apart, but if its for the good of the story I´ll take it. I hope he is able to get back to Bella soon!!!! I'll be waiting for the next Chapter, and I hope Edward is able to have a better relationship with his father

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:51 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I love this story so much! I love this chapter and these characters! I am so very excited to read the next chapter!! I think that Edward is going to do one of his 'surprise! I am here' moves for the awards and I am SO excited about who "the blast from the past" visitors will be! As, for daddy dearest...I can't wait to find out what will happen with that! :)=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:32 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

Sniff.....

Reviewer: nnalday Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:56 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I think Edward will surprise Bella by showing up for the awards.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 4:28 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 2:57 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

Hang in there Bella. You can make it. You just have to keep yourself busy. It will be an interesting conversation between Edward and his dad. Both parties have to want it for it to work. I'm sure Victoria and the gang are not done making trouble, especially once they realize that Edward is back on the island. Maybe she will fall overboard and get eaten by sharks but the sharks probably have better taste than that. As Bella said, she is too plastic for them.

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 2:46 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I'm not as worried about Victoria as I am James.  My brain keeps trying to decide if he's going to go down to the island to go after Alice, or if he's going to try to go after Bella while Edward's gone.  Either way, I'm nervous about what's coming.

I really hope that Edward can make it home for the awards, even if it's for a couple of days.  I think it's complete crap that Edward has to bail Carlisle out after he treated him so poorly.  I wish he would just say screw it, but I know he's worked so hard to keep the resort up, and doesn't want to see all of his hard work going down the drain.  Is it wrong of me to hope that Esme is still making him sleep on the couch?

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

i am more worried about the blast from the past bit!!! please let there not be any more hurt before Bella's wedding...

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 12:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

This sucks so much for Bella and Edward!  Just please promise me that they are not going to have to go through any bull about Bella thinking that Edward cheated while in Brazil!!!???

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2014 12:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?

I'm hating this separation already and hoping the time just flies by.    They do better together than when they are apart.   And I really hope that Edward does come back for the awards, even if it is just for a weekend; by that point, they will really be missing each other.  

Reviewer: chatterbox33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:28 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

Nice tie back with the ex. I wish they didn't have to separate again, I juat know Victoria is going to be trouble.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 5:18 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Ugh Common Core!! It the devil! Hate it hate it hate it!! As for the chapter Love it love it love it :) and my name is Miranda so yay for using that name!!

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 5:04 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

He may be cheesy but he's with the love of his life and is extremely happy. I can't say I blame him. :) 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 9:04 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

Wonderful chapter.  Glad he got such great reviews at the convention.   Yummy play time between them too.  yey for getting the house

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:31 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

=)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 11:27 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

=)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:28 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:30 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

great chapter. I want to go to California now.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:52 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

I love it. I think you made a hotter elf then legolas. Glad they got the house.  Seeing Tyler again was interesting of course Tyler would want Edward. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 11:46 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

I freakin love this!! :)=)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:21 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!

Glad these two enjoyed their trip to my part of the country. 

I personally enjoy Edwards cheesiness. I thought his line about having the option to be lazy but not really doing it was good. He should enjoy his time now because it sounds like Brazil is going to be nothing but work.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 11:06 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Thanks for the update. Still my favorite WIP story. 

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:25 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

:) 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 7:28 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Edward is SUCH a sweetheart. My hubby would never attempt to pack for me.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 5:28 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

I love this couple.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 8:28 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

I am an sf native and still live here. Some ideas I have are a cable car ride, a sunset cruise on the bay and Edward will like our hands on science museum. There are also art museums and a natural history museum. There is also a nice conservatory of flowers in golden gate park that will remind them of the tropics. Let me know if you want specific ideas. Oh and then there is beach blanket babylon which is a show that spoofs current events using drag queens. 

It's a little ironic that Bella is finally enjoying her job when she is getting ready to quit. But she can still write. It sounds like she already has a good idea for a book. Sometimes you have to go where your heart leads. Congrats to rob and Paul.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 1:38 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Great chapter, as always!!   I'm looking forward to their trip and wondering if they'll get the house.    I think it's very sweet of Edward to want to buy it for Bella as a wedding present!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 12:20 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Great chapter. Love it. 

Reviewer: js123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 5:56 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Well it's not easy to DM here on TWCS like FF--- so I guess you'll see this in a review.....

Native SFer here---- so my "classic" newbie tour of SF includes driving over the Golden Gate bridge, brunch at Sam's in Sausalito, then back over bridge into Marina. Walk along Crissy Field and up to Giaradelli Square. From there you can walk or taxi to the Piers and have Crab lunch (Dungeness crab---yum) and see the sea lions at Pier 39.  Then you can walk to the top of Coit tower  (great views of city). 

Finally you cab it up (or can take a Cable Car from Ghiradelli area) to Chinatown and have great Dim Sum.

Day trip to Alcatraz is another day. a day trip to Napa is another day.

Those are the "touristy" spots most know about.

For a little more "insider"--catch beer tasting at Anchor Steam brewery in Potero Hill, take a canoe out on Stowe lake in Golden Gate park, or find the food truck lot in the Mission (Food Truck Fridays).

 

Can you tell SF is a lot about eating and drinking?

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the information!!! I will definitely be using some of the ideas you've mentioned! :-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 4:08 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

awww for wedding and reception.  Hope they get the house they want.   Hope San Francisco trip goes well.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 12:48 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 10:53 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats

Fantastic! I am excited about San Fran in EPOV! :)=)

Reviewer: browniegyrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2014 3:58 AM Title: Back to Reality

Please please please update soon! I miss reading this story!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:43 PM Title: Back to Reality

Love it.  Charlie is too funny. Carlisle is still a douche.  

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:33 PM Title: Back to Reality

I am so happy for them. Who would live in rainy Seattle when you can live on a tropical island? Charlie and Renee will probably fall in love with the place as soon as they see it.

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 9:32 PM Title: Back to Reality

I can't believe what an ass carlise was being. I hope he doesn't pull anything crazy. 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:55 PM Title: Back to Reality

The proposal was awesome!!!  I hope Carlisle gets his act together. Everyone makes mistakes, some more than others, but Edward was coping with things that happened in the only way he knew how at the time. I really hope he gets it together before Esme moves his from the couch to his own Villa!!  I can't wait to see the new Villa that Edward wants to build for him and Bella.  

 

I hope your writer's block is better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 5:07 AM Title: Back to Reality

I really hope Carlisle gets his head out of his ass!!!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:33 PM Title: Back to Reality

Good for Edward for laying into Carlisle.   He totally deserved it for all the stuff he was saying about Edward and Bella, which was totally off the rails. I a hoping that if they are separated, it won't be for any long period of time.   Edward and Bella do much better together.   Hey, instead of that, I think Carlisle shoud be the one to go to Edward to apologize.   That would really go a long way in not only making amends with Edward, but Esme as well.... just saying.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:44 AM Title: Back to Reality

wow  thought Carlisle was cool with everything. He is being a douche canoe.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:21 AM Title: Back to Reality

Glad that they were able to stand up for their relationship. That is one of the signs they will last. Poor Carlisle letting stress go to your head. Now you can think about it on the couch. Can't wait to see what is coming next.

Reviewer: zpower21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:13 AM Title: Back to Reality

I'm so happy to see an update! Sorry about the writers block and lack of time. Hope it all works itself out. 

~Z~

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 3:24 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

I imagine Bitchoria will resurface, andprobably the ever elusive Nahuel. 

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 12:06 PM Title: Back to Reality

I LOVE THIS!!
As for the waiting for the update....perfection takes time! ;)
I can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:26 AM Title: Back to Reality

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 7:02 AM Title: Back to Reality

=)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:15 AM Title: Back to Reality

That was amazing!  I really loved it SO much!

Reviewer: TwiAngel92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:28 AM Title: Back to Reality

Hopefully edward and Carlisle can work things out. Love how things are going between edward and bella, happy they are engaged. Hope what ever characters that come back don't come between edward and bella and they stand together,m

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: Back to Reality

Awwwwwww, and Carlisle was a huge ass 

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:17 AM Title: Back to Reality

Well, for starters, that was a nice wake up she got. I am really disappointed that we didn't get to see Edward's familys reaction to the engagement news. I LOVE the idea that Edward scheduled it in, especially before telling his family that she said yes. I would have LOVED to see the family's reaction to seeing it scheduled in the events. Alice and I imagine Esme, would have practically bowled them over after seeing it pop up. Carlisle...OMG what a colossal freaking douchebag. I wanted to punch him, too! I am not sure I like the idea of them separating for a while, but I totally get it and understand why it's needed. Perhaps, Alice can come visit for a while, hmmm? Help with wedding stuff? Man, Charlie did not take to them moving to the Island very well, did he? I do like that he came back and apologized and the fact that he stopped in the middle of the street and left the car to come apologize, it's goofy, but totally sweet and I love it! 

I'm sorry that you're suffering with writer's block. It's absolutely no fun and the more you write, the more it will flow. Yes, I know you're rolling your eyes or think I'm stupid, but it's what all my friends tell me when I'm stuck and I write dramatically less than you do. (Normally I write under 2k words in a chapter). Don't feel bad this chapter did not go as long as you wanted or anything. I like this chapter as is and I think that it ends in a good place. Lots of stuff going on, so when you get a chance and can come back to it, it should help ideas flow. 

Thanks for sharing!! 

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:38 PM Title: Let's Get it On

Jimmy is Alice's James. Was wondering when he was going to come back into play.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:45 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

Awesome new years celebration, for Edward and Bella. Victoria will probably be up to no good, maybe the Lauren bitch will try to squeeze back in, whatever I know you got it covered. Update soon take care.

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: The End of an Era

Wonderful chapter, happy, happy, Alex ( is that his name ), is gone. Now Edward and Bella can relax.

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:43 PM Title: The End of an Era

Ding dong the prick is gone... (Hey, it still works!)

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:11 AM Title: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?

I hope that Bella and Edward are at LEAST engaged before Becca and Daniel get married!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:15 AM Title: Daily Grind

That was so freaking sexy! 

I hope Charlie finds the dirt!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:39 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks

Hot damn! That was a tastee-lemon!!! 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:21 AM Title: Ripples

PMS can turn the sweetest person into a raving bitch!!

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:06 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life

Awesome proposal.  Love a drunk Paul.  Wonderful island sexin 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:30 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man

Wow! That went really well.

i'm so glad that Edward is learning to embrace the concept of enjoying all aspects of his sexual relationship with Bella. You can fuck the one you love in a way that isn't demeaning, but highly enjoyable for both. I think he's graspin that now!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:23 PM Title: Birthday Surprise

Oh, my!!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:44 PM Title: Confrontations

Charlie's a hoot!

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:01 PM Title: Let's Get it On

I have a feeling that Jimmy is going to be a SERIOUS problem for Becca

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:47 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved

Yaayy!! I'm so glad hey're back together. Already, I dread him leaving. 😢 But, MAYBE he'll just stay? I hope he'll just stay. 😊

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:49 PM Title: Moving on Up

Uh, YEAH! Se should take this job and OWN it. Even if the other girl comes back, she will have proven her worth, and they'll either give her this spot in whatever capacity she seems to fill (the other lady was into politics), OR they'll vreate seething new for her to do ... Preferably something freelance that she can do from anywhere ... Then she can move to the Island. (Longest sentence ever!)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:17 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life

I am thinking Victoria is going to rear her ugly head. Loved their New Year's Eve. 

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:48 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

im glad they are getting married and going to be happy from now on, i just keep wandering what happened to james and who it is that is still screwing with the resort. keep up the good work

Reviewer: browniegyrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 11:59 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life

I freaking love this story. And I'm a little sad because it sounds like you're wrapping it up soon. But I love this story.

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:14 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:57 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

OMG!!! This was SOOO great!! It was so nice and different to see a flawed Edward and a broken-hearted Bella and to see them both fix each other. Both having gone through broken-hearts you know that they will cherish each other for the rest of their lives. I love stories where they love and adore and never cheat on each other and stay married till death parts them. My mother's family all had marriages that lasted over fifty years. True love is out there you just have to find it

 

 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:16 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

YES!! She said,"YES"!! I love this story! These two definitely deserve happiness! I have to admit you have me freaking out about the returning characters! :)

Reviewer: branlc Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:56 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life

Loved the proposal! :) 

Reviewer: ThatsMzPeachesTYVM Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 8:18 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye

Their goodbye was painful.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:49 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life

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