Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Woah, that was a hot lemon. Totally loved it!! I totally meant to move over here to keep reading once you moved off Fan Fiction, but I totally spaced and forgot to add it to my favorites. Oops!! But I'm back now and I have a bit of catching up to do!! :D I'm off to catch up.
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:43 PM Title: Ripples
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:07 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
Loved it!
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:44 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Whew!
So much going on!
So happy he's going to Bella's Award dinner! :D
And though it was a quick convo, at least Carlisle said what Edward needed to hear!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:48 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
Glad they were all caught. And even happier one of them didn't try something with Edward and have Bella leave him. Loved it.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Oh wow that was evil burning down his villa glad everything was gone out of there. James and Victoria are brother and sister I guess crazy runs in the family. I am happy Carlisle finally redeemed himself. Poor Edward is so exhausted without Bella by his side. But they will be together soon.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:29 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
Great update. And it seems that Carlisle is finally coming around, too. It was great that he acknowledged all that Edward has done. Hopefully, this will be a turning point for them. And I'm glad that he told Edward to find a way to go to Bella's awards dinner and that he would regret it forever if he didn't. I just hope that he does go.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 8:57 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
i just re-read all 31 chapters and instead of an epi i think a sequel would be a better idea maybe???? read you soon.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:43 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Brazilian jail does not sound like fun. I hope they are there for a long time. James needs to be left in jail. Just throw away the key. Edward needs to talk to Bella about these nightmares before he crashes from lack of sleep. Bella needs to stop making him feel guilty. She could have just left her job. They have the money. She chose to stay until the end of her lease. She needs to suck it up and be a big girl. Edward is doing the best he can.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 11:59 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
This is fantastic!!! WOW! I really enjoyed this! I am excited for the surprise and a huge lemon! :)
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:10 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
Ugh had a feeling Carlisle had messed things up really bad. oooh He's in the doghouse with Esme too huh?
Well at least they have skype and email. Sounds like Alice has been busy. So sweet of her.
Ugh Zafrina. Be reporting her for pricegouging, but I doubt the countries there care about it.
Gotta love Esme. So sweet and loyal. Wow E's got some great ideas for the island. Wow Carlisle is a real coward hiding from E like that. Poor sad B. Well at least Carlisle finally talked to him.
Oh wow Hope all three get long prison terms. Wowsers. Go Alice!!! Glad Everyone is telling him to go. Be a great surprise.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:16 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
I'm so glad those 3 were caught and are now in jail.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:13 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
so I just wanted to say that i totally loveyour story and the way you spun it and the characters out, though I'm not good at reviewing and I normally don't review - I guess I don't really know what to write- anyway I really like how your story played out so far. And I'm rambling - I think.
Uhm given that this is probably the we heard about James and co could you possibly think about writing an outtake in James POV about his time in prison and how it all played out for him ( he'll probably blame blame Alice, Becca and maybe even Bella and Edward for this, but him being used by someone in prison...) I'd be really interested in reading this and maybe other readers of this story are too so could you please think about it, thanks!
And thank you for writing this awesome story (sorry for any possible spelling and gramma mistakes in this I'm not a native speaker)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I truly appreciate it! i will definitely consider doing an outtake of James and his time in jail. He is truly a sadistic, evil character. I've yet to read a James that I like. Thank you for the suggestion!
I'm also considering on making the letter that Edward wrote Bella be an outtake, but we'll have to see.
Again, thank you for reviewing!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:40 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
I'm so happy those three are gone. I still don't completely trust Carlisle's apology. Hopefully, he meant them and doesn't say anything more that will hurt Edward and Bella. They don't deserve that. I'm glad Edward is going to the awards. I was getting a bit miffed at him.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:13 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Wow, Edward is super awesome at turning things around. I'm glad that he got things worked out with his father, too. Oh and Rose is disgusting. I'm sure that a lot of pregnant women experience some of those qualities, but good lord is she open about sharing them. I am happy that Edward is going to go back and be there for the awards ceremony. I was disappointed when he said that he would not be able to make it. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:00 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
loved it.. had faith in you!!
Date: 24 Jun 2014 10:15 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I hope his father is not a total asshat. I love the counter lovin. Wonderful chapter.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 7:10 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I am so angry at Renee. She had no business being upset with Edward. He has to be with his family and family business for awhile. Bella is a big girl. She has friends and family to help her, unless Renee and Charlie are too lazy to help her. Renee should just be greatful that Edward understands how much Bella loves them and he is rich enough to buy her a huge temporary house near them. She could loose Bella to the resort all year round.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Hard to see him leave I'm sure. I'm thinking he won't make it to the ceremony. Have a feeling the island is gonna be worse than he thinks.
Nice that Marcus came up with a way to keep her, sort of.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:03 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
This one made me cry. I remember feeling the exact way about my husband back when were dating and I had to go out of state for a week. I was a mess! And I was in Disney World!! The happiest place on earth and I was a wreck cause my love was a thousand miles away.
Date: 23 Jun 2014 2:39 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I'm a little worried about the victoria thing. If she does cause problems I hope it's nothing that will destroy Edward and Bella's relationship. I'm not sure what will happen with Carlise. I do hope he gets his head out of his ass. Lol
Date: 23 Jun 2014 1:06 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I certainly hope that Edward returns for the Newsroom Awards. That would be a nice surprise for her. His departure is so sad, it made me cry, too. I agree with Bella, I don't think things are over with Victoria, nor with James. I'm happy Becca and Daniel are working on it. And I can't wait to find out what Edward has planned for the basement of the new house. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 22 Jun 2014 10:55 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Hate to see them so sad and apart. Hopefully the two months will fly by.
Date: 22 Jun 2014 9:40 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Sorry but regardless of your plan I think separating them was wrong, it seems as though Edward is acting selfishly putting his own needs, his family and his job before Bella. I don't really want to read about them apart, so I will leave this story now but thank you for everything you have written so far.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 5:53 PM Title: Broken Fairy Tale
Thank you soooo much for this chapter!!! I love this story, and I have been waiting anxiously for a new chapter!!! I really don´t like when Edward and Bella are apart, but if its for the good of the story I´ll take it. I hope he is able to get back to Bella soon!!!! I'll be waiting for the next Chapter, and I hope Edward is able to have a better relationship with his father
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:51 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I love this story so much! I love this chapter and these characters! I am so very excited to read the next chapter!! I think that Edward is going to do one of his 'surprise! I am here' moves for the awards and I am SO excited about who "the blast from the past" visitors will be! As, for daddy dearest...I can't wait to find out what will happen with that! :)=)
Date: 21 Jun 2014 10:32 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Sniff.....
Date: 21 Jun 2014 6:56 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I think Edward will surprise Bella by showing up for the awards.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 4:28 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
=)
Date: 21 Jun 2014 2:57 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Hang in there Bella. You can make it. You just have to keep yourself busy. It will be an interesting conversation between Edward and his dad. Both parties have to want it for it to work. I'm sure Victoria and the gang are not done making trouble, especially once they realize that Edward is back on the island. Maybe she will fall overboard and get eaten by sharks but the sharks probably have better taste than that. As Bella said, she is too plastic for them.
Date: 21 Jun 2014 2:46 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I'm not as worried about Victoria as I am James. My brain keeps trying to decide if he's going to go down to the island to go after Alice, or if he's going to try to go after Bella while Edward's gone. Either way, I'm nervous about what's coming.
I really hope that Edward can make it home for the awards, even if it's for a couple of days. I think it's complete crap that Edward has to bail Carlisle out after he treated him so poorly. I wish he would just say screw it, but I know he's worked so hard to keep the resort up, and doesn't want to see all of his hard work going down the drain. Is it wrong of me to hope that Esme is still making him sleep on the couch?
Date: 21 Jun 2014 1:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
i am more worried about the blast from the past bit!!! please let there not be any more hurt before Bella's wedding...
Date: 21 Jun 2014 12:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
This sucks so much for Bella and Edward! Just please promise me that they are not going to have to go through any bull about Bella thinking that Edward cheated while in Brazil!!!???
Date: 21 Jun 2014 12:51 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I'm hating this separation already and hoping the time just flies by. They do better together than when they are apart. And I really hope that Edward does come back for the awards, even if it is just for a weekend; by that point, they will really be missing each other.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 5:28 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
Nice tie back with the ex. I wish they didn't have to separate again, I juat know Victoria is going to be trouble.
Date: 10 Jun 2014 5:18 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Ugh Common Core!! It the devil! Hate it hate it hate it!! As for the chapter Love it love it love it :) and my name is Miranda so yay for using that name!!
Date: 09 Jun 2014 5:04 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
He may be cheesy but he's with the love of his life and is extremely happy. I can't say I blame him. :)
Date: 08 Jun 2014 9:04 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
Wonderful chapter. Glad he got such great reviews at the convention. Yummy play time between them too. yey for getting the house
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:31 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
=)
Date: 07 Jun 2014 11:27 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
=)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:28 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
:)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:30 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
great chapter. I want to go to California now.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 4:52 PM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
I love it. I think you made a hotter elf then legolas. Glad they got the house. Seeing Tyler again was interesting of course Tyler would want Edward.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 11:46 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
I freakin love this!! :)=)
Date: 06 Jun 2014 8:21 AM Title: Elvendore, Alcatraz and Napa, Oh My!
Glad these two enjoyed their trip to my part of the country.
I personally enjoy Edwards cheesiness. I thought his line about having the option to be lazy but not really doing it was good. He should enjoy his time now because it sounds like Brazil is going to be nothing but work.
Date: 05 Jun 2014 11:06 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Thanks for the update. Still my favorite WIP story.
Date: 03 Jun 2014 5:25 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
:)
Date: 03 Jun 2014 7:28 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Edward is SUCH a sweetheart. My hubby would never attempt to pack for me.
Date: 02 Jun 2014 5:28 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
I love this couple.
Date: 31 May 2014 8:28 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
I am an sf native and still live here. Some ideas I have are a cable car ride, a sunset cruise on the bay and Edward will like our hands on science museum. There are also art museums and a natural history museum. There is also a nice conservatory of flowers in golden gate park that will remind them of the tropics. Let me know if you want specific ideas. Oh and then there is beach blanket babylon which is a show that spoofs current events using drag queens.
It's a little ironic that Bella is finally enjoying her job when she is getting ready to quit. But she can still write. It sounds like she already has a good idea for a book. Sometimes you have to go where your heart leads. Congrats to rob and Paul.
Date: 31 May 2014 1:38 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Great chapter, as always!! I'm looking forward to their trip and wondering if they'll get the house. I think it's very sweet of Edward to want to buy it for Bella as a wedding present!
Date: 31 May 2014 12:20 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Great chapter. Love it.
Date: 30 May 2014 5:56 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Well it's not easy to DM here on TWCS like FF--- so I guess you'll see this in a review.....
Native SFer here---- so my "classic" newbie tour of SF includes driving over the Golden Gate bridge, brunch at Sam's in Sausalito, then back over bridge into Marina. Walk along Crissy Field and up to Giaradelli Square. From there you can walk or taxi to the Piers and have Crab lunch (Dungeness crab---yum) and see the sea lions at Pier 39. Then you can walk to the top of Coit tower (great views of city).
Finally you cab it up (or can take a Cable Car from Ghiradelli area) to Chinatown and have great Dim Sum.
Day trip to Alcatraz is another day. a day trip to Napa is another day.
Those are the "touristy" spots most know about.
For a little more "insider"--catch beer tasting at Anchor Steam brewery in Potero Hill, take a canoe out on Stowe lake in Golden Gate park, or find the food truck lot in the Mission (Food Truck Fridays).
Can you tell SF is a lot about eating and drinking?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the information!!! I will definitely be using some of the ideas you've mentioned! :-)
Date: 30 May 2014 4:08 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
awww for wedding and reception. Hope they get the house they want. Hope San Francisco trip goes well.
Date: 30 May 2014 12:48 PM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
:)
Date: 30 May 2014 10:53 AM Title: Cupid's Arrow and San Francisco Treats
Fantastic! I am excited about San Fran in EPOV! :)=)
Date: 11 May 2014 3:58 AM Title: Back to Reality
Please please please update soon! I miss reading this story!
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:43 PM Title: Back to Reality
Love it. Charlie is too funny. Carlisle is still a douche.
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:33 PM Title: Back to Reality
I am so happy for them. Who would live in rainy Seattle when you can live on a tropical island? Charlie and Renee will probably fall in love with the place as soon as they see it.
Date: 31 Mar 2014 9:32 PM Title: Back to Reality
I can't believe what an ass carlise was being. I hope he doesn't pull anything crazy.
Date: 31 Mar 2014 6:55 PM Title: Back to Reality
The proposal was awesome!!! I hope Carlisle gets his act together. Everyone makes mistakes, some more than others, but Edward was coping with things that happened in the only way he knew how at the time. I really hope he gets it together before Esme moves his from the couch to his own Villa!! I can't wait to see the new Villa that Edward wants to build for him and Bella.
I hope your writer's block is better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 5:07 AM Title: Back to Reality
I really hope Carlisle gets his head out of his ass!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 12:33 PM Title: Back to Reality
Good for Edward for laying into Carlisle. He totally deserved it for all the stuff he was saying about Edward and Bella, which was totally off the rails. I a hoping that if they are separated, it won't be for any long period of time. Edward and Bella do much better together. Hey, instead of that, I think Carlisle shoud be the one to go to Edward to apologize. That would really go a long way in not only making amends with Edward, but Esme as well.... just saying.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:44 AM Title: Back to Reality
wow thought Carlisle was cool with everything. He is being a douche canoe.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 3:21 AM Title: Back to Reality
Glad that they were able to stand up for their relationship. That is one of the signs they will last. Poor Carlisle letting stress go to your head. Now you can think about it on the couch. Can't wait to see what is coming next.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 2:13 AM Title: Back to Reality
I'm so happy to see an update! Sorry about the writers block and lack of time. Hope it all works itself out.
~Z~
Date: 28 Mar 2014 3:24 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life
I imagine Bitchoria will resurface, andprobably the ever elusive Nahuel.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 12:06 PM Title: Back to Reality
I LOVE THIS!!
As for the waiting for the update....perfection takes time! ;)
I can't wait for more!!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 5:15 AM Title: Back to Reality
That was amazing! I really loved it SO much!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:28 AM Title: Back to Reality
Hopefully edward and Carlisle can work things out. Love how things are going between edward and bella, happy they are engaged. Hope what ever characters that come back don't come between edward and bella and they stand together,m
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:23 AM Title: Back to Reality
Awwwwwww, and Carlisle was a huge ass
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:17 AM Title: Back to Reality
Well, for starters, that was a nice wake up she got. I am really disappointed that we didn't get to see Edward's familys reaction to the engagement news. I LOVE the idea that Edward scheduled it in, especially before telling his family that she said yes. I would have LOVED to see the family's reaction to seeing it scheduled in the events. Alice and I imagine Esme, would have practically bowled them over after seeing it pop up. Carlisle...OMG what a colossal freaking douchebag. I wanted to punch him, too! I am not sure I like the idea of them separating for a while, but I totally get it and understand why it's needed. Perhaps, Alice can come visit for a while, hmmm? Help with wedding stuff? Man, Charlie did not take to them moving to the Island very well, did he? I do like that he came back and apologized and the fact that he stopped in the middle of the street and left the car to come apologize, it's goofy, but totally sweet and I love it!
I'm sorry that you're suffering with writer's block. It's absolutely no fun and the more you write, the more it will flow. Yes, I know you're rolling your eyes or think I'm stupid, but it's what all my friends tell me when I'm stuck and I write dramatically less than you do. (Normally I write under 2k words in a chapter). Don't feel bad this chapter did not go as long as you wanted or anything. I like this chapter as is and I think that it ends in a good place. Lots of stuff going on, so when you get a chance and can come back to it, it should help ideas flow.
Thanks for sharing!!
Date: 22 Mar 2014 3:38 PM Title: Let's Get it On
Jimmy is Alice's James. Was wondering when he was going to come back into play.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:45 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life
Awesome new years celebration, for Edward and Bella. Victoria will probably be up to no good, maybe the Lauren bitch will try to squeeze back in, whatever I know you got it covered. Update soon take care.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: The End of an Era
Wonderful chapter, happy, happy, Alex ( is that his name ), is gone. Now Edward and Bella can relax.
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:43 PM Title: The End of an Era
Ding dong the prick is gone... (Hey, it still works!)
Date: 28 Feb 2014 5:11 AM Title: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?
I hope that Bella and Edward are at LEAST engaged before Becca and Daniel get married!!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 3:15 AM Title: Daily Grind
That was so freaking sexy!
I hope Charlie finds the dirt!
Date: 28 Feb 2014 1:39 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Hot damn! That was a tastee-lemon!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:21 AM Title: Ripples
PMS can turn the sweetest person into a raving bitch!!
Date: 20 Feb 2014 6:06 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life
Awesome proposal. Love a drunk Paul. Wonderful island sexin
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:30 PM Title: Sing Us A Song, You're the Piano Man
Wow! That went really well.
i'm so glad that Edward is learning to embrace the concept of enjoying all aspects of his sexual relationship with Bella. You can fuck the one you love in a way that isn't demeaning, but highly enjoyable for both. I think he's graspin that now!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:23 PM Title: Birthday Surprise
Oh, my!!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:44 PM Title: Confrontations
Charlie's a hoot!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:01 PM Title: Let's Get it On
I have a feeling that Jimmy is going to be a SERIOUS problem for Becca
Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:47 PM Title: Letters to my Beloved
Yaayy!! I'm so glad hey're back together. Already, I dread him leaving. 😢 But, MAYBE he'll just stay? I hope he'll just stay. 😊
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:49 PM Title: Moving on Up
Uh, YEAH! Se should take this job and OWN it. Even if the other girl comes back, she will have proven her worth, and they'll either give her this spot in whatever capacity she seems to fill (the other lady was into politics), OR they'll vreate seething new for her to do ... Preferably something freelance that she can do from anywhere ... Then she can move to the Island. (Longest sentence ever!)
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:17 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life
I am thinking Victoria is going to rear her ugly head. Loved their New Year's Eve.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:48 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life
im glad they are getting married and going to be happy from now on, i just keep wandering what happened to james and who it is that is still screwing with the resort. keep up the good work
Date: 10 Feb 2014 11:59 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life
I freaking love this story. And I'm a little sad because it sounds like you're wrapping it up soon. But I love this story.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:14 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life
i loved the chapter(:
Date: 09 Feb 2014 5:57 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life
OMG!!! This was SOOO great!! It was so nice and different to see a flawed Edward and a broken-hearted Bella and to see them both fix each other. Both having gone through broken-hearts you know that they will cherish each other for the rest of their lives. I love stories where they love and adore and never cheat on each other and stay married till death parts them. My mother's family all had marriages that lasted over fifty years. True love is out there you just have to find it
Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:16 PM Title: A New Year, A New Life
YES!! She said,"YES"!! I love this story! These two definitely deserve happiness! I have to admit you have me freaking out about the returning characters! :)
Date: 09 Feb 2014 3:56 AM Title: A New Year, A New Life
Loved the proposal! :)
Date: 08 Feb 2014 8:18 PM Title: It's so Hard to Say Goodbye
Their goodbye was painful.