Date: 08 Aug 2014 3:59 AM Title: Questions and Answers
When men feel angry it all goes outward, whereas women tend to internalize things. That's why almost all these mass shootings are done by men. At least Alice had someone to help her, which is more than she did for her brother. Hopefully she and jasper can works things out.
It sounds like the Rhiannon episode had one good outcome in that it was a catalyst for Bella and Edward to work through stuff, which is best done before the wedding. Now they can concentrate on having a good time and celebrating their big day.
Date: 08 Aug 2014 2:57 AM Title: Questions and Answers
That nice little morsel about a baby was a nice little bit of drama, especially since you will be ending the story soon. It has taken awhile to read each chapter I have enjoyed every word. Update soon take care.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 9:34 PM Title: Questions and Answers
Loved it! I really though Lauren was going to show up with some incuranle disease and apologize for being a slut, hahahahaha!
I hate that Alice didn't deal with her pain about James better; but, it was a realistic part of the plot, which I love.
Date: 07 Aug 2014 6:47 AM Title: Questions and Answers
Whew!!! I'm SO glad that the baby wasn't his! :) But I'm so sad for whoever the parents of that baby is. I hope they get him back soon & that nut case Rihannon goes to prison!
That being said, I'm REALLY disappointed at Bella's behavior - running off without standing beside Edward, or even giving him the benefit of the doubt. Is this the type of wife she's gonna be - flighty & selfish, running at the first sign of any trouble or problem? I'm not saying that I don't understand her being hurt because I do! I'm just saying that she completely handled the whole situation wrong. :(
I also disagree with Emmett & Jasper keeping Edward from going to Bella. I think they should mind their business from now on.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2014 5:45 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I HOPE for everyone's sake that it's NOT Edward's baby. If it is, I think it will just ruin everything that he & Bella has built...& right before their wedding no less! This would definitely NOT be a good way to start a marriage out. Bella certainly WOULDN'T be in a baby making mood with Edward anymore, & possibly not in the marrying mood anymore either, not that I could blame her. It will also sour his family's opinion of him again, as well. Everything he's worked so hard to fix will be ruined. This just has disaster written all over it. :(
I do have to wonder WHY this woman hasn't come forward before now? Why would she wait all of this time, go through a pregnancy alone, cover all of the expenses herself, so far, & then ironically come forward right before Edward's upcoming wedding? It sounds very fishy, like she's only wanting to cause trouble or wanting money.
Besides, I thought Edward said that he always wore a condom with everyone from his past. If this is true, then unless one broke while he was with her, the child being his is pretty impossible. And I'm sure Edward would've known if it had broken, wouldn't he?
Does the baby even resemble Edward in any way? There are just too many holes in this woman's claim. Do the dates even match up between the time that he was last with Rhiannon with the age of the baby? Before anyone gets worked up, I hope they think of these things.
If Rhiannon really wants to push things, I'd call her bluff & demand a paternity test before anything further was discussed & promptly see that she was escorted off of the island. I'd also tell her before she left to only contact me through an attorney from now on.
I'd just hope & pray that by some small chance that it isn't his because like I said, I think this will really change things between E&B - impact them & their relationship in a VERY negative way, whether they can help it or not.
Bella has got "baby fever" bad & is wanting to have a child of her own with Edward, NOT take on or have to worry about some illegitimate kid from his long line of former flings, for the next 18 years, at least. Bella wants to be able to give Edward his first & only child, not some woman who meant nothing to Edward.
No matter how much you love someone or how understanding you might be, this would definitely be a difficult obstacle to overcome, even for Bella...especially for Bella. It would always be a point of contention between them & something that would get thrown up during every arguement, no matter if the fight was over the child or not. I mean, Edward thought his old villa was "tainted" & didn't want to live in it with Bella, if it was still around, so how do you think either of them will feel about this?! This is WAY more serious of a reminder than some bachelor pad!
If this turns out to be Edward's kid, he will probably withdraw & beat himself up with guilt & remorse & push an already angry & hurt Bella further away.
I just don't see this as being a winning situation, no matter what. So PLEASE don't let this be Edward's kid. The whole situation is already going to cause enough trouble as it is, as well as put a real damper on the wedding & everyone's wedding spirit. :(
I hope it all works out. Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 04 Aug 2014 9:37 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Didn't see that coming believe it or not. I don't think the baby should be Edward's. Rhiannon is a witch and bitter because her hubby found out about her many affairs and divorced her. So now she's using the baby, product of another affair, but she can't remember who, to try to get Edward's money in revenge. Great chapter though!!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 3:17 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
OMFNG!!I figured something like this was going to happen! I pray to all that is right in the world that the baby isn't his!!! :( I am hoping she is just looking for a free ride...money. I am talking about the money! :P I am dying for more!!! :)=)
Date: 03 Aug 2014 9:22 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
While I do love babies, I hope the baby isn't Edwards. Edward might have slept around, but I remember him always being safe. Besides, Bella deserves a perfect wedding and the happily ever after and baby mama drama just won't do. But if the kid's his, I hope everyone does what's best for the baby.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 6:01 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
It is possible that it is Edwards son but it's also possible she is trying to make drama for him. There are still people out there who would love to mess up their life and I wouldn't put it past them to try something like this. The first thing I would demand is a DNA test. And it's not like he forced her to sleep with him. Here is where Bella has to stay strong.
Date: 03 Aug 2014 4:40 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I don't think that baby is Edward's. If she was pregnant and had an inkliing that the baby was his why didn't she contact him before then? Why wait til the baby was 3 months old. Besides, if the baby is already 3 months old then that means she was already pregnant when she hooked up with him. Right?!
Date: 03 Aug 2014 2:40 AM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
I hope the baby isn't his. That woman has no one to blame but herself for her marriage ending. If I remember correctly isn't she the one that kept coming on to Edward. I this means that Alice was right about her feeling of something bad was going to happen.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 10:12 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Oh jebus that a cliffy and a half! I'm hoping its not Edwards baby! Had a look back at earlier chapters and Rhiannon said her marraige was one of convinence so maybe she stepped out more than that time with Edward and decided Edward had the fancier lifestyle and money.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 8:02 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
No he can't have a baby. She was a slut it could be any body's. Love the house christening and the birthday blow job. The bridal shower with her mom and friends was awesome. Alice was right the past was going to bite him on his ass.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:57 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
no this can't be happening!! this is not edwards biological child!! or at least i hope not. they do no deserve this now that they have everything coming together! please let this pass without them doubting one another!!! did i mention i love a strong bella and edward
Date: 02 Aug 2014 3:30 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
It was bound to happen. He was premiscuous and condoms are not 100%. There is a real chance it is his. The timing would have been about a year ago, so it is possibly but by my calculations a bit improbable. Edward and Bella are getting married at their 1 year anniversary, right? That would mean she would have been one of his last conquests.
Date: 02 Aug 2014 12:38 PM Title: X-Rated Fairy Tales
Please do not make that baby Edwards!!!! Of course this bitch is going - to blame Edward for ruining her life, when all she had to say was NO! Sick and tired of hearing excuses from people who cheat - I was drunk - I felt presured - I just wanted to feel loved - this all equals - BULLSHIT! If you are married and you are sleep with anyone else it is called CHEATING!
Josie, please do not make that baby Edwards - I am begging you!!! I know condoms fail but I remember Edward talking about how he always wrapped it up!!! Also, Bella should not be angry at Edward - this shit with this girl was before his relationship with Bella!
Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2014 1:42 AM Title: Closing One Chapter...
I can imagine moving that far from home is tough but love inspires great courage. It reminds me a little of the story of Steve and Terri Irwin (minus the crocs of course). I look forward to hearing about the wedding.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 6:58 AM Title: Newsroom Awards
While I am glad that Edward was able to surprise Bella, I did feel that she was acting a little childish when she thought he was not coming. I understand it's hard being separated but it's not like he was just up the road. But they had a really hot reunion to make up for all the drama lately.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:44 AM Title: Halloween Hijinks
Woah, that was a hot lemon. Totally loved it!! I totally meant to move over here to keep reading once you moved off Fan Fiction, but I totally spaced and forgot to add it to my favorites. Oops!! But I'm back now and I have a bit of catching up to do!! :D I'm off to catch up.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Oh wow that was evil burning down his villa glad everything was gone out of there. James and Victoria are brother and sister I guess crazy runs in the family. I am happy Carlisle finally redeemed himself. Poor Edward is so exhausted without Bella by his side. But they will be together soon.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 10:29 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
Great update. And it seems that Carlisle is finally coming around, too. It was great that he acknowledged all that Edward has done. Hopefully, this will be a turning point for them. And I'm glad that he told Edward to find a way to go to Bella's awards dinner and that he would regret it forever if he didn't. I just hope that he does go.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:43 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Brazilian jail does not sound like fun. I hope they are there for a long time. James needs to be left in jail. Just throw away the key. Edward needs to talk to Bella about these nightmares before he crashes from lack of sleep. Bella needs to stop making him feel guilty. She could have just left her job. They have the money. She chose to stay until the end of her lease. She needs to suck it up and be a big girl. Edward is doing the best he can.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:10 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
Ugh had a feeling Carlisle had messed things up really bad. oooh He's in the doghouse with Esme too huh?
Well at least they have skype and email. Sounds like Alice has been busy. So sweet of her.
Ugh Zafrina. Be reporting her for pricegouging, but I doubt the countries there care about it.
Gotta love Esme. So sweet and loyal. Wow E's got some great ideas for the island. Wow Carlisle is a real coward hiding from E like that. Poor sad B. Well at least Carlisle finally talked to him.
Oh wow Hope all three get long prison terms. Wowsers. Go Alice!!! Glad Everyone is telling him to go. Be a great surprise.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 1:13 AM Title: Isle of Craziness
so I just wanted to say that i totally loveyour story and the way you spun it and the characters out, though I'm not good at reviewing and I normally don't review - I guess I don't really know what to write- anyway I really like how your story played out so far. And I'm rambling - I think.
Uhm given that this is probably the we heard about James and co could you possibly think about writing an outtake in James POV about his time in prison and how it all played out for him ( he'll probably blame blame Alice, Becca and maybe even Bella and Edward for this, but him being used by someone in prison...) I'd be really interested in reading this and maybe other readers of this story are too so could you please think about it, thanks!
And thank you for writing this awesome story (sorry for any possible spelling and gramma mistakes in this I'm not a native speaker)
Thank you for reviewing! I truly appreciate it! i will definitely consider doing an outtake of James and his time in jail. He is truly a sadistic, evil character. I've yet to read a James that I like. Thank you for the suggestion!
I'm also considering on making the letter that Edward wrote Bella be an outtake, but we'll have to see.
Again, thank you for reviewing!
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:40 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
I'm so happy those three are gone. I still don't completely trust Carlisle's apology. Hopefully, he meant them and doesn't say anything more that will hurt Edward and Bella. They don't deserve that. I'm glad Edward is going to the awards. I was getting a bit miffed at him.
Date: 26 Jun 2014 11:13 PM Title: Isle of Craziness
Wow, Edward is super awesome at turning things around. I'm glad that he got things worked out with his father, too. Oh and Rose is disgusting. I'm sure that a lot of pregnant women experience some of those qualities, but good lord is she open about sharing them. I am happy that Edward is going to go back and be there for the awards ceremony. I was disappointed when he said that he would not be able to make it. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 24 Jun 2014 7:10 PM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
I am so angry at Renee. She had no business being upset with Edward. He has to be with his family and family business for awhile. Bella is a big girl. She has friends and family to help her, unless Renee and Charlie are too lazy to help her. Renee should just be greatful that Edward understands how much Bella loves them and he is rich enough to buy her a huge temporary house near them. She could loose Bella to the resort all year round.
Date: 24 Jun 2014 2:26 AM Title: Home is Where the Edward Is...what?
Hard to see him leave I'm sure. I'm thinking he won't make it to the ceremony. Have a feeling the island is gonna be worse than he thinks.
Nice that Marcus came up with a way to keep her, sort of.