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Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

If "the tramp" sues Bella, Edward can sue "the tramp" for sexual assault. She did in front of cameras too, and it was clear on Edward's face that it was unwanted and forceful. I agree with Bella's reaction though, so maybe I'm not the right person to ask.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

thanks so much for completing this awesome story with this f/t as well ;D

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 28

Cute story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it they have all grown up to be a wonderful family

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

I love you girls you are the best thanks so much for another great stroy.  I enjoyed seeing how much they had grown over the years and are happy .

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 26

So happy Alice is getting her shit together.  Bella is going to be a great mom.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

Therapy is a good thing if you want it so happy they are all healing and moving on.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

Aww, that was so lovely and sweet. I'm so happy that everything worked out for them all. I love a happy ending. Thanks for sharing I really loved this story.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

A boy, little Aaron. He loves his mummy and doesn't like to share her, hmmm I wonder who he takes after more, Bella or Edward, lol. Things have come together nicely for them, their families and friends.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 26

Lol, Bella's going to regret all those sandwiches and desserts when she's trying to get her figure back. I'm so glad that Bella and Alice were able to talk more and be on friendlier terms even if it will never be the same at least they can talk and be in the same room.  Awww, they're parents now, life will never be the same again, I hope they're strapped in for the ride, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

You've changed Bella's surname from Cullen to Swan. I'm so happy for them all even Alice. That was probably the best way to break the ice with Alice, casually and nobody watching them. Another sister or brother for Bella, woohoo! Let's hope that neither Elizabeth or Bella go all psycho during their pregnancies, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

Well I didn't think that Ben was going to turn out that good. Thank God he persuaded Alice to give Landon up even though he loves him. I hope they can work out a way for him to still be part of his life if that's what Ben would like. I think as Landon grows up, given everything that happened around his conception, birth and first few months, it will be important for him to know that he was and still is wanted.

Awww, Edward and Bella are engaged. I'm thinking Gary needs some credit for that one when he told Edward not to fear marriage and that it's wonderful with the right one. I'm so glad they're talking a lot more.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank goodness the blinkers have been removed from Edward's eyes. It's sad that it's come to this but Alice really needs the help. I hope she accepts it and works with it so she can have a better life with her family and friends. Where is Ben? What is he up to? All Bella wants is to be with Edward, she loves him with everything she has and you don't throw that away easily. It might be a bit rocky for a while but they'll get through.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

I think Alice needs some serious help, she's lost the plot. Where is Ben, her husband, in all this? I couldn't help thinking that I was glad that Alice and Edward are related, because it seems to me that Alice wants what Bella has and I don't think Edward would be in to incest. Maybe that's going too far but she's most definitely jealous and it looks like she'll stop at nothing to get what she wants. She's got Edward wrapped around her finger and I'm sad that he can't see how he's being manipulated. I have to say that Bella handled herself well and managed to hold her temper in check.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Dare I say it?....I think Bella might be maturing a little bit. All relationships demand communication but one with a fetish involved has an extra side to it and needs more. I have no clue what Alice is up to, I know I would have been asking Edward what happened as soon as he walked through the door.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 20

I never expected Alice to be with Ben, married as well. She really believes that she's not done anything bad. How on earth has she blown $3 million? I'm glad her bank accounts have been frozen.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

I think Edward and Bella should sit and talk about their relationship. Edward can't expect to control Bella like he does all the time, he's making her old before her time. Is he always in daddy mode where Bella's concerned? He has to consider her age and that she'll want to do things with her friends.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

So Alice thought Jasper would change and she'd get her happy ever after. She's done the best thing by giving him up, she would only resent him if she didn't and he's suffered enough already. Now she needs to do the decent thing and support him financially out of that $5 million she got from Jasper to bring him up and keep her mouth shut, she should definitely put at least half of it in trust for him.  Edward needs to work on his work life balance and fast, he's really neglecting Bella. I think part of the problem is that Edward has been a single man for too long, he's not used to sharing his life. He needs to do something and quick.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 17

Some people are meant to be parents and others aren't. I thought Alice was leaving her baby before she even had him from the conversation she had with Esme. Being a single parent is the hardest thing to do ever, take yourself away from your family and it just becomes twice as hard. I think they may be judging Alice too quickly and too harshly. She's obviously found it hard to cope. I could be wrong, it just depends why Alice had Landon in the first place. Was it because she loved Jasper and wanted his baby, was it because she thought he'd change and she'd live happily ever after or did she totally bank on a pay off like she got?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 16

That really was an epic fit. I was cringing in parts with how childish she was being. I do agree that Edward should have spoke to Bella first but he got caught up in the excitement of the moment, he was aware of what he should have done. Bella needs to learn to stop flying off the handle before she has all the facts. Maybe after her spanking it will serve as a reminder before she lets her temper get the better of her and starts to ignore Edward. Fingers crossed, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was so sweet of Edward to arrange for Bella's family to come to the games and stay. Elizabeth seems to have finally seen the light. Edward certainly likes to dominate Bella, not that she's complaining and neither am I, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

I'm cheering Bella on for getting her two punches in. I can't believe that Jess is pregnant, it looks as though her eyes have been opened even if it's a bit late in the day. So baseball bunny wants to sue Bella, well you can't get blood out of a stone. I loved Jim's comment about her good left hook and those commentators were hilarious.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well I'm glad that Bella and her mum are getting on a little better, she even managed to talk about Edward without cringing, maybe Charlotte has mellowed her a bit. Let's hope they can build on it and Charlotte can grow up knowing her big sister.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella. Why hasn't her mum told her? Surely she's not so childish that she's done it to get back at Bella. No matter what's going on she should have told her, all she's done is compound Bella's belief that she's a mistake. I feel sorry for Jim, he's tried hard to build a relationship with Bella and now his wife's childish and stubborn behaviour is jeopardizing that. Elizabeth really does need to get over herself, yes I know I've said it before but she really needs to think about what she's doing and the repercussions it could have for the rest of her life.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

Where's Alice going? Is she thinking of leaving her baby behind? I can't believe she hasn't told Bella what she's doing yet. I'm glad she's free of Jasper. I know she loves him but he's a complete dick. Lol, I'm surprised that someone didn't hear Bella and Edward. Lol, that would have been the icing on Elizabeth's cake if she heard them calling each other Daddy and Little Girl.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oooh, is Elizabeth pregnant? I bet she is. I can't believe it's come to Bella moving out, Elizabeth really needs to get over herself. I loved Carlisle telling her to grow up and go to her room, lol. Has Jasper changed? Is Alice just putting up with things or has she been forced into something she doesn't want? Things don't sound good for her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

Elizabeth might as well just suck it up because Bella and Edward are together for good and she's just making everyone miserable and tense with her little games. Poor Alice, it sounds as though her dad is as controlling as Jasper which could explain a lot really. I think she should stick with her mum and Carlisle. Daddy and Little Girl eh? Lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh dear, Elizabeth didn't remember.  I can understand her concerns but she really is going too far. She raised Bella to be sensible but now she's insinuating that by being with Edward she's not being sensible and it's the worst thing ever. I get that a big age gap is not what you want for your child in a relationship but let's face it Edward is so much better than Ben. He knows what he wants and isn't going to mess Bella around like Ben. There's something to be said for an older man. Elizabeth is taking this too far, she could damage her relationship with Bella or lose her over this if she's not careful.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Well there's safe sex and then there's SAFE sex, lol, I think they took the precautions to the max. I know Bella doesn't want to end up pregnant but dear God she'll be insisting on hazmat suits next, lol. Poor Alice, she's not the first and she won't be the last, she still needs to dump Jasper. Who does he think he is? Nobody needs to be with someone that controlling. I can't believe Ben turned up, he thinks he's God's gift or something.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh my God! Hahaha, I can't believe how drunk they all got. Esme's advice to Elizabeth was just classic. I think Bella and Alice may be scarred for life, they certainly have blackmail material, lol. Alice needs to dump Jasper once and for all, he's manipulative and a user, if Alice wasn't so in love with him she would see it so clearly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awww, they finally got to go on their date. Carlisle's going to freak out when he finds out what's been going on.  Esme's just so calm about it all, but then she knows her brother well.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ben certainly put the moves on Bella, I think if Edward was certain Bella had slept with Ben he would have been more upset, although he could be covering that up with his charm offensive and his declarations of love, like planting a seed and watching it grow. What did Ben say to make them all break in to Edward and Bella's room?  I'm glad that Bella is seeing Ben in a different light.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Mum's are entitled to a life too. My daughter would be just like Bella. When you're a single parent your child gets used to having your undivided attention so they get jealous when there's someone else in your life, they can't understand why they aren't enough anymore. I loved Edward sitting by the side of Bella with Ben on the other side, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2014 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well it looks like Elisabeth has a boyfriend, Carlisle's slowly coming to terms with Bella growing up and dating, Edward's green eyed monster is starting to rear it's head even if he doesn't realise it and Bella's partner in crime, Alice, is way more worldly wise than I thought. I'm thinking Carlisle doesn't know about Alice. I loved the t-shirt, lol. It's all happening.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh to be a teenage girl crushing on an older man.....or should that be lusting? Lol. Carlisle's really protective of Bella, I wonder if there will ever be a time when Bella can mention boys without him warning her off.

Sadly I don't remember my first kiss but I do remember giggling with my friends about boys and men and the butterflies they caused, happy days.

Jane x

Reviewer: KBB Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 28

So Bella and Edward did not have anymore children?

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

I REALLY, REALLY LOVED THIS STORY I ONLY HAVE ONE OF YOUR STORY LEFT TO READ  AND I HAVE LOVED THEM ALL SO FAR.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

Love it but I wonder why bella and edward stopped at one kid

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

lol at least she has a long and happy life with edward and still going at it like bunnies even at their old age with grown children. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 28

it was a great future take

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 28

Awe...so sweet!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 28

I'm surprised they only had one child (Aaron) after all of this time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

wonderful look into their future.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

love it

Reviewer: OCA Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

thank you for a great story I have not written a single review for this story but I have read it from the beginning and I just wanted to say I have enjoyed the rollercoaster ride can't wait for your next one.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Cool ending. Glad they got a healthy. TY for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

If Bella wants to be treated like an adult, she needs to act like one. She can be such a brat. She better be glad that Edward loves her so much. Most men would not put up with her crap. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Oooh timid bella and bar owning edwArd sounds fun

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Loved it :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thank you for this good fiction!

I really had a good time reading it.

kisses

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thos story was a wonderful read. I really enjoyed ut and I am so you guys wrote it. Thanks for writting TWIFICS!!!!

Reviewer: jenn1214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Loved it! 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

Wow!  I can't believe we are so close to this one being over. I'll miss these characters, all of them not just Bella and Edward. See ya next week



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

I've really enjoyed this story. Awesome job!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to the last chatper 



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 26

Im glad edward handled her pregnancy hopefully he still found her sexy when she was as big as a house



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: jgenier Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 26

Seriously UGH Sooooo cheated lol



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is a beautiful chapter.

I loved this story from beginning to end.

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

What a cliffie!!! Alice still disgusts me. But, I DO hope that it's a mini-Edward, and NOT a mini-Bella, though. The world needs more Edward's running around in it! LOL!



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26

I'm glad she made up with Alice; and I hope Alice's relationship with Landon stays the same. 

What did Bella expect about labor pains? It hurts.



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

Woo hoo For wedding and cravings and making up (sort of) with alice.   Evil keeping the sex of baby a secret.  lol



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter. I expected Bella to be pregnant but I didn't expect Elizabeth to be pregnant too. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 25

Glad school went/is going well.  Aww for B's family moving to St Louis.  Alice is def bi polar.  Slight Paranoia???   Dont blame B for not wanting to be anywhere near Alice.  Wow  ben stepped up to being an adult.  That is good.  Are they still legally married??   Def glad b and e are doing therapy.   they both need it.   Glad they didnt get prego right away.    

Glad Gary is stepping up with Alice.  ROFL for Liz and B both being prego.  oooh an alice meeting where she wasnt a screaming lunatic.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

oh so she does know he snooped?  surprised he didn't already know her password.  Sorry E has alot to make up for.  She actually acted quite mature with her "arguement" side of it.  

Ben has real nerve.  She should have told him to come back when E was there.  Sorry but I find this Ben hard to believe after what he did at the court thing and all.   B is too nice.  

Can you blame her for worrying about you leaving though E?  He chose then to propose???  He is really pissing me off so far with the after dinner talk.  He's basically saying that Alice will always be more important than B.  Sorry but he needs to re prioritize.  He'll need to prove the 

not sucked in and ignore" part cause he's done a shitty job of it so far.  She's letting him off way too easy. Esp at the end, dont think she had ANYthing to appologize for.   Dont think her getting prego is right, right now.  He really needs to show he can be there for her, not just care for her materially.  JMHO.  Well at least there is two months until its possible.  

Aww for letting Corin buy B's old car cheap.  Glad they are seeing a counsellor.  They need it.

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Date: 25 Feb 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

At least he is sort of thinking of Bella.  OMG  Cant believe he is listening to any of this garbage coming out of Alice?   B has asked about his mom and E and Es have always shut her down.  Grrr Edward is acutally listening to her?  He is going to lose the best thing that ever happened to him at this rate.  He refuses to be used??? What does he think Alice is doing?  B controled the argument and put her hand in his face??? Really???   

OMG  he went through her texts and emails?   He does not deserve B.  He needs help of his own.  I'm really pissed at him.   He better admit what he did to B.   Wow  Still putting Alice's needs before B.  She's talking to Es more than E.  that ought to open his eyes, but I know it wont.  Alice needs to be committed.  Cant believe she tried to hurt landon.  Gary is delusional to not see it.  Ah he found a diary.   Well at least he came to his senses. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow  nice present....can he adopt me?  Ugh  Alice again?  Sorry I'm with B.   E is an enabler.   Kids are too cute.

Ok time for Alice to be beat down hard.  Good for B walking away.  SOOOOO mad at E right now.  Bella gets the bitch brow???   B is the naughty child??  oh E you are one delusional idiot right now.    Glad she stood up to him.  He's being a real douche.  She had a calm rational arguement and his first thing is to tell her she is blowing it out of proportion?   Moron.    Oh It just gets better.  Alice is going back with him?!?!   Fucking bitch.  Can she get run over by a car!!! plz plz plz!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

Why would B think Alice would talk to anyone, esp since her $$ was cut off?  Glad Carlisle is going to retire from active baseball.  Landon needs his dad around.  What great goodbye sex!!

lol for getting B to leave Char alone.  ooooh Alice in PA?   Ben leave her I wonder??  ROFL for moving in with his folks.  Guess she and he couldnt pay for college and all?  aww for E trying to surprise her with a visit.    esme needs to just give up on the girl at this point. Sucks to say it, but yeah.  hmm Garrett would have paid for her schooling....wonder if she flunked out or Ben made her leave?  can blame E for questioning B though.  Seems kinda random.   I think he is making special proposal plans.  

I'm tired of the Alice thing too.  She is kinda right.  he does brush her off.    Better she stay in bed, than be out and about and bitchy. She's probably right about Alice and attention.   They do need better balance.  B seems to be the first thing he neglects out of everything.  B is wrong though.  They both need to communicate better


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Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad the lawsuit went away.  Hopefully they threatened her with a counter suit.  Dont know why Jasper could get rights back when he signed them away before.  Wonder what is going on.  

Nice in house dinner date.  Sweet present and lovemaking.

OMG Alice and Ben?!?!?   Glad the judge verbally smacked down Jazz and Alice.   oooh a sneak elopment.  Jasper makes no sense to me nor Jessica staying with him.   Alice is just......pathetic is the word I'm looking for I guess.   Wow  blew through a lot of money too?  Guess Benny is helping with that.    Funny that E is the one yelling and telling B to behave.  

LOL for Gary wanting a cat scan.  Alice is lucky B didnt punch her in the face and Ben in the nuts.  She got married when she dumped the kid? Go Esme!!!  lol for Alice being mad at being "betrayed".  glad Gary took that money from her.   Wouldnt be surprised if Ben dumps/divorces her.  She'd deserve it.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

Taking care of Landon is a great test for parenthood thats for sure.  E is great with him.    

E is asking for her to go out.  He's acting like her father rather than her boyfriend.  They really need to learn to communicate better, but I can understand her frustration.  He doesnt want her to go places like that without him, but he also said he refused to go to places like that.   B is right in this arguement.   B shouldnt be punished this time.  Gotta disagree here.  She has nothing to be ashamed of in my opinion.  

Glad things are going better.  They need communication lessons though.   Hmm not sure how I feel about the Alice thing.  Makes me nervous.  LOL for Esme proposing.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Real life with jobs B.  Get used to it.   Alice is a piece of work. Surprised Garrett even cares.    Hope Esme and Carlisle can make it through this.  

Well E you arent around much.  Why would she think you'd have time to shop with her.  She is being a  bit bratty, but I can understand her frustration.  Glad Corin said for her to decorate the tree with E at least.   

oooh he didnt even call??  not good.   Wow  sounds like A got prego on purpose from what i got from that email.  What a selfish little biatch.  

Glad E made it to decorate the tree.  But he does need to talk to B more about what is going on with him.  And a text saying he'll be late is not too much to ask.  Yummy make up time.

Awww poor little Char.  awww sweet present getting to still get to see Char and her mom.  Wow   Big bills if she spends that a month.   Ah the Sex coupons are always a hit with men.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

Glad he took the home jobs.  Down time is good, but some out time is needed too.  LOL  Morning delight indeed.  

hmmm wonder if Jake is right about Alice and Landon.  Wow  scatterbrained going to St Louis.  

Wow  great marriage speech by B.   What is with Alice????  Oh No....Alice is running isnt she?   Sam sounds nice.  Ah  B got E to admit a little on marriage.   I knew Alice was going to run.  Ugh. 

Wow  now I'm wondering who got to Alice.  Thinking some stupid guy again.  At least she made sure the kid was safe with family and didnt pull a Susan Smith

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

uh oh...what did E do now???  She's gotta learn to argue with out yelling.  Wow  Liz taking E's side?  But while B is acting like a child at the moment, E should have talked to her first.  Love Esme taking her side, but glad she realizes she is being bratty.  He should realize he didn wrong by making decisions with out talking to her, but B needs to calm down and talk too

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad Alice is doing ok.  School does take alot of time when you are doing a whole course load.  

LOL for telling her she cant rub one out anymore. 

Glad she is doing well in school. Wow  Nice present for B's family. And for Corin's too.   

Glad Liz is being normal again.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

B needs to understand that he probably gets hounded if he goes out anywhere.  Ah so Jazz got another job huh.  LOL for bimbo pics.  Security prob set it up for a blowjob or something.   Wow  While b is overreacting a little, E should have pushed her off.  But i guess his excuses made sense, but I can see if from B's POV.  Skank deserved it for assaulting E. 

Go B punching J in the nuts!!! Hope Jessica goes public with everything.  Would serve J right.   He hit the ball J threw, why was he thrown out?  J should be thrown out for trying to hit E.  

Sue the bitch right back for assaulting E.  Serve her right.  



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theladykt

 

thank you so much for all the review :-)

 

Kasi and Jess

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

Liz is being a biatch.  B is acting more grown up than she is.   She's still going to go to college, thats good.   Glad Alice is doing ok.  Esme is so cool.  Think Alice is doing what's best for her.  Hope B supports her.  Surprised she called Liz to talk and not Esme.  Wow  sucks that no one could go to her graduation.  Wow  mom acutally let her stay in the room.  Wow  Liz is acting like a human/real mom now.  

The road trip sounds great.   They need to go to Fitz' restaurant in St Louis.  Great burgers and EXCELLENT in house made sodas, esp root beer.  I'd ship it here if it weren't so expensive.  


Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Sounds like a wonderful NYE.  Twilight zone indeed.  oooh lemony skype sex.  Ah so Liz is having a baby.  that explains some of her nuttiness.    Dont agree with B taking it out on Jim.   Liz really is a piece of work.  Unfortunately E, I think B is right.  Liz does love to throw mistake in her face.  

He is so sweet coming to see her.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Ah that explains the nicey nice at the press conference.  Only 5 mil?  Liz is really annoying.  

LOL for the girls up early.  At least they cooked before waking people up.  ROFL for blowjob bribery.  Yummy Christmas lemon.  

Wow  wonder where A is thinking of moving to?  Liz really needs to grow up herself.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

hmm  Wonder what brainwashing has gone on with Alice.  Sort of glad he was fired.   Liz is getting ridiculous.  She is either prego or dying I think.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

Im afraid of what Garrett and Jasper might do to Alice.  

Liz is really pushing her luck.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

Liz really overreacted.   Would prefer E to be in his 20s rather than 30s but ah well.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh wow  Hard to think of Jim/James as a nice guy and Jazz as a douche.  He and Ben are two peas in a pod.   

Woo Hoo for alone time for our kiddies.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMG  Hilarious drunks.   Carlisle didnt kill him at least.   Oh Wow. Jazz sounds like a real jerk.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 5

Of course Ben had to run his mouth.  Most high school boys do.   Surprised E told her already.  LOL for him messing with the AC on purpose.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sad that she let Ben presure/blackmail her that way.   Kinda wanted her to say no and leave.  sigh

Them sharing a bed does look bad.

 

Still hoping Jim in on the up and up

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 3

Glad she is growing up but knows she's not ready for sex and is holding out.   Ben is a typical boy though.  Not sure what I think about Jim though.   Hope he's on the up and up, and not a closet pedophile or something.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

Carlisle really needed to get a grip.  To strict and she'll revolt.     Ooh  Alice isnt a V anymore.  interesting.     Awww E is having some thoughts I think.  

hmmm Ben sounds like a typical boy. 

I love Mongolian BBQ.



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theladykt

 

thank you for reading and reviewing

 

Jess and Kasi

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great start ladies.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it :)



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amcullen

 

Well it seems that most people have gotten the grasp that we were not going to let them become parents until they were working better together as a couple.  I know that it seems like the story traveled fast, but when we started this we never intended to show everyday life all the time.  The majority of the story was learned through her diary entries.  We really hope that you like the final chapter and the Epi that will follow.  The Epilogue is not yet written, but Jess and I plan to have it hammered out by Wednesday of this week so it should post on time without any issue.  If you get the time please check out the Jess2002 profile and hit up her story Raising Ashlynn it is AMAZING and if you want to read a drabble there are over 200 chapters posted of Diamond Doll's Kitty Cave, by WeeKittyAndTAT.   You could also check out You Own Me by BeeCute82.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing and we will see you on Wednesday with the final chapter before the Epilogue.

Kasi & (Jess~)

Teaser:

"Are you almost ready to leave?"

"Yes, where are we going?"

"To the airport," he answers cheekily.

"And after we get to the airport?"

"We will get on a plane," he says, sticking his tongue out at me.  I lean forward and nip the tip of it.

"Well, I guess I better go change, huh?"

"Yes, I think that would be wise.  Getting through security even for the private plane I've chartered would not be easy in this beautiful dress."

"Private plane?  Where are we going?"

"To another airport," he says with a smirk, and I smack him on the shoulder.

"Go change out of the tuxedo while I get ready."

"Yes, Ma'am. Not even married a whole day and she is already bossing me around."

Even though I see his smile, I give him a bitch brow and am surprised when a camera flashes rather close to us.

"Oh buddy, I can't wait to get this picture printed and blown up.  Now we know who wears the pants. She gave you the look and you immediately tucked tail," shouts Emmett.

"I want a copy of it," I say with a smile as Edward shakes his head.

Reviewer: xXCicadaXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24

Ok..... I'm probably going to sound like some of the reviewers but here goes...It's good to see that they are working with a counselor because they need it. Edward gave a half-assed apology. He keeps going on and on about being there for his family and again... I don't recall Bella ever asking him to choose otherwise - so he should probably just let that explanation go. It troubles me that Edward just seems to be ok with casting her aside for the sake of his sister's kid. A kid who, grant it, has mental problems, but also been evil, manipulative, and criminally liable for money thats not hers and criminally negligent to her own kid.

And Bella... I still give her credit for her maturity but her willingness to just accept everything and even try to take the blame for acting like a spoiled brat doesn't sit well with me. She seems to completely overlook the fact that he's gone through her email to "check on Alice's story" while of course checking on Bella too. Yea, definitely not ok. That's not to say Bella should rage but it doesn't seem like she's even standing up for herself. Edward shows up, gives a half assed apology, then proposes to make it better, and now she's ready to have a baby. I just don't know...

Still love the fic... Keep it going ladies just disappointed in Edward (honestly don't see that changing) but still very hopeful that Bella will put her foot down and not be a doormat. 



Author's Response:

xXCicadaXx

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

 

 

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love the story and the OC Alice is a nice change from the norm. Just an FYI
in the US Acct degrees are 5yrs(4yrs college and 1yr masters) plus 2-4 yrs of work experience and exam similar to a bar exam(3days of testing) to become a CPA. 2yrs only gets you an assoc degree to be a bookkeeper. Keep up the good writing.

Author's Response:

roxy34145

 

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 24

It is good that Alice is getting help and Ben is not so much the asshole.  Wedding and babys



Author's Response:

troberts

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

lanigirl096003

 

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

amcullen

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

 

Reviewer: tiffanyleigh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

I think their poor counselor has their work cut out for them.  That was a crap apology on Edward's part, and Bella is just plain stupid to accept a proposal before they talked, and then apologizing for being a brat?  And as his wife, he's still not going to put her first?  What if they have a baby?  Does the baby come third?  Fourth?  She's never asked him to turn his back on his family, so where he keeps coming up with that is beyond me.  At least she knew about the snooping, but what about trust?  She knows he doesn't trust her, but she's marrying him and having a baby anyway?  They still need a lot of work before they are ready for that.



Author's Response:

tiffanyleigh

 

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

Reviewer: BigEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

As always, fabulous!!

Author's Response:

BigEyes

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

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Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

Reviewer: boo1414 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 24

So glad they talked and are moving forward.



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boo1414

 

I totally understand that Edward made some bad choices, as many of us have in our own pasts.  Unfortunately no one can go back and change a past altercation and or a bad choice-if we could this would be a perfect world.  What we all can do is choose to do is change things in the future to make things worth fighting for.  Everyone does things that others find offensive and or don't agree with.  Neither of us can make any of you stop hating Edward, but we hope that you like the way things have changed for Bella and Edward in this story at the end.  There is a several month jump in time, almost a full year actually.  I look forward to hearing what you all think, because our reader's opinions mean a lot to us.  The next chapter will start out with a huge diary entry, and there will be an outstanding amount of information within that entry.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thank you all for caring so much about the characters we have developed within this story.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser: 

Edward and I are doing amazing. With school and my internship, I have been crazy busy. On a brighter note, we get to see each other a lot more. I love working with him and I have found that we really do make a great team. I have learned a lot from the people I am working with and I'm confident that I am going to make a solid career out of my degree.

The holidays have come and gone. My days were moving so fast that I could barely remember them. The best Christmas present I could ever get happened this year. Edward and Dad were being very sneaky and I had no idea why. I remember fighting with Edward over the sneakiness, but he just told me to mind my own business. That is something he really doesn't say often so at that moment I was nosier than nosy! I needed to know what was going on. What was even weirder was that my own Mom was acting weird too!  I asked Esme and she was wondering the same thing, so I knew she didn't know what was going on, that or she knew how to play it cool.

Reviewer: Darkangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 23

Bella needs to leave him awhile to punish him like he does when he spank her,cause he never trusted her enough and chose to believe Alice



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Thank you for reviewing

 

Jess and Kasi

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

This chapter is cool, in my opinion he has to learn a lesson. Bella should ask Edward time for herself without any contact from him.



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Bellawitch75

 

Thank you for reviewing

 

Jess and Kasi

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Wow, Alice is a real piece of work.  If I were Edward, I would pray that Bella never found out I went through her phone records and emails in order to find evidence of Alice's accusations; that could very well kill the relationship.  I feel like for all Edward's talk of loving Bella and her being the best relationship he's ever had, he doesn't trust her in the least.  I was offended on Bella's behalf when Alice called her a whore and all Edward had to say was that she should keep her voice down.  And for all his talk of control, he's allowed Alice to manipulate and control him; Bella's right, he needs to take a long hard look at himself.



Author's Response:

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

 

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“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

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