Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 15, Peepholes
loved this chapter
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 15, Peepholes
i loved it!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 15, Peepholes
no you werent my sister has TBI its a rollercoaster ride. But she is not as bad as some.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15, Peepholes
loved it so sad its almost over can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 14, Thoughts
so love it please update soon
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 14, Thoughts
The journal entries were an awesome idea for this chapter. It was nice to really get into Bella's head. I'm sad that I've caught up and don't have another chapter to go right to.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 13, Cause & Effect
You've got me crying again. Edward naming her Ethan's guardian should give her a clue about his feelings for her. What a way to tell someone how much you love and trust them.
I trust you and think Edward will wake up and they will be happy. I think his accident was probably the kick in the ass Bella needed to realize she could be happy and let her walls down because she loved Edward.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 12, Lyrical Flowers
That was so not fair. I was bawling mye eyes out while Bella poured her heart out to Esme at the cemetary. I got all happy over the wonderful gifts Edward had delivered and the songs. I was happily riding my love high and then boom. You leave me there. It is time to leave and I have to endure the ride home wondering WTH happened to Edward. This is such torture.
You have done an amazing job writing this story and drawing me in emotionally. Now I'll suffer through my 45 minute commute wondering what happened to Edward.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast
Poor Bella can't let her guard down to see the truth. Edward really loves her. I think Tanya is a relative. I really need to get busy working but I have to read the next chapter.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words
That was an intense chapter from beginning to end. You had me all happy that they were finally getting somewhere and then Mike attacks. I really don't like that douche. Edward was so good to her at New Year's. You had me bawling by the end of the chapter with Esme's death. Edward was so destroyed it was heartbreaking. I hope Bella doesn't think his admission was due to grief and alcohol. I think it was geniuine.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9, Forks, Birthdays, & More Songs
Edward's birthday gifts were awesome. Of course a night of drinking and suggestive songs will end with at least a kiss. I just love it when Bella blurs the lines because Edward will obviously jump an any chance he can get.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8, Wishes & Surprises
I kept praying it was a dream and not Mike the douche showing up on her darkened doorstep and her not being able to see him thinking it was Edward. Yeah, hot dreams like that tend to haunt you for days after.
I really liked the playful Edward in this chapter. I hope he doesn't let Bella's feelings about love and relationships stop him. I hope he sees it as a challenge and works harder to prove her wrong.
The circus was a great idea.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 14, Thoughts
wow canot wait for more loved it!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 12, Lyrical Flowers
what an accident!!!???
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast
poor bella!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words
i still can't believe she died!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9, Forks, Birthdays, & More Songs
one of my favorites!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8, Wishes & Surprises
i loved their little family time!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches
trust me this has emotion and it really brings things in perspective and makes me think!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme
wow i loved esme!! and i loved their talk it made me think!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 4, Duckies
so cute!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 3, Friends
aw i love these characters!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 2, Edward & Ethan
aw poor edward!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1, Bella
i love it!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches
You've got me wondering if Jazz had a talk with Edward about keeping the relationship professional too. Edward obviously likes Bella as much as she likes him.
Yeah, you've got me all flustered and going crazy from the UST. I feel as wound up as Bella.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6, More Forks, Some Roses, & Dancing
Why do I have a feeling that Edward is just as scared and nervous as Bella is. I figured Rose and Em met when he dropped her off at home.
The dancing between B&E was so good. I like that you have her not being clumsy and afriad to dance. It's nice for a change.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme
LOL, Jasper was too funny. Keep it professional, but you and Edward will get together.
Why am I not surprised that even though Esme is the one dying she is comforting everyone else around her. That is a very Esme-like trait. Yes, you definitely had me in tears.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4, Duckies
So sad that Bella had to go through all of that. It's bad enough to have a cheating husband, but to lose a baby 5 months into a pregnancy is horrible.
I couldn't help but laugh when Edward asked her if she liked to ride Mr.Vanquish. No double entendre there, huh. Yeah, us dirty minded old women thought it even if B&E didn't.
The carnival was great. Edward stopping at Walgreens and buying her cheap crocs, socks and ducks to pretty them us was total win.
I have a feeling the weekend in Forks is gonna be the tear jerker.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 3, Friends
Edward and Bella are both so adorable with Ethan. I just knew she would end up falling asleep with him.
I love Emmett. Of course he wants his brother to get laid.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 2, Edward & Ethan
Edward is so sweet. It broke my heart that his mom is dying.
Very interesting that Ethan doesn't talk to many people but he did talk to Bella.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1, Bella
I'm dying to know who this little boy and and how Edward knows him.
You've definitely got me hooked with this first chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 14, Thoughts
Great chapter and another one to leave me with tears!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 14, Thoughts
OMG OMG OMG
I'm crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Sooooooooooooo goood.
Can't wait till the next one
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 13, Cause & Effect
Hi not sure if your going to be updating this story on fanfiction cos of all the bs they are pulling with fics so thought I would add you to fav's on here too cos I don't want to miss an update on this fab fic. Really loving it so far. XX
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8, Wishes & Surprises
Here Here!!! (Your authors note) Lol. X
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 1, Bella
You already know how I feel about this story. So I apologize in advance for all the pressure I may send your way on Twitter!
Love you and the story!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches
Hey Stacy! Don't doubt yourself hun you are a fantastic writer :-) And I have read alot of stories on here and FF! So hun don't be so hard on yourself! Just keep on doing what your doing and everything will be ok! I feel alot of people have been reading your stories but its harder to leave a review on here than FF I think thats why many don't leave any :-( But anyway I am enjoying this story immensley so keep it up :-) ~Cilla
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 6, More Forks, Some Roses, & Dancing
No it should be like this nice and slow for them if they start off to fast it may end so they should be slow and steady :-)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 13, Cause & Effect
im soo happy that he appointed her guardian of him but iim very sad about it .... but im enjoying this story and i agree with you about the fan fiction bull .. im getting anoyed! but keep them comming !
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast
shes jumping to conclusions again ... its horrible but i love it !
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme
Such a shame that a Soulful person's life has to end :-(
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words
aww hes loved her for a while now ! great chapter by the way !
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches
im glad he was sober enought to stop! great chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6, More Forks, Some Roses, & Dancing
shes soo falling for for him and fast ! cant wait to read the next chatpter !
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 4, Duckies
This is a great story :-) Its so captivating :-) Keep up the great writing and looking forward to reading more :-)