Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bravo Rose! And Alice...without visions but still with "vision". Jasper is so solid in this story. He truly can make the differance in how Seth overcomes this. Nice!
Hello there :) Your review made me smile soooo big :D Thanks for being awesome.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I have just started reading and I am just confused. Where are the rest of the Cullens? why we don't see or hear of them, Esme apart? If Alice exists in this story, how cannot she have interaction with Jasper, who evidently ignores her.How is this possible?
And time wise, when is the story happening? Before or after the newborn army?
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jasper in this fiction is marvelous. He is a man who knows what it's like to be hurt badly and won't let that happen to a friend. That many copies still has me scratching my head though! A have to say this one has my curiousity and fascinations peaked! Nicely done.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank heaven Seth finally got that off his chest! And bravo Jasper for coming through big time since all this started. Sam and Jacob's reactions should be interesting. Seth should talk to Rosalie. Nice work here!