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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

intigingly written thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is very interesting that she thinks in sentences when she is asleep.  There is so very much she was never taught....back now to the main story.

Reviewer: blb1000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I lIke thIs more than the shorter WPOV In the story. Makes a lot of sense when she relates everythIng to Peter's story. 

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. It's nice to get a look inside her mind. Another good story with a POV like this is Feral by Opal..something. It's about Bella finding Edward living in a cave. He was lost ala Tarzan very young and doesn't speak but has memories of speech like Wisp. She did really well conveying what his throughts were with one or two words as well as images. If you are looking for some inspiration for WPOV I certainly recommend it. If you can't find it with the title and a partial author name I can find the story for you if you want it.

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awww I loved her POV 

Reviewer: FinnMac2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was...beautiful, just beautiful.

Reviewer: masochistic lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

I would love to report the jerk who is trying to claim this story as their own. It really irritates me that someone would do that.  Please don't give up on this story! I just had my wife start reading this on fan fiction this past week.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

Un petit peu difficile à comprendre avec...Google Translate, lol

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

God!  I hope you change your mind and write more from Wisp's POV!!  It is thoroughly enthralling.  What we have seen and read to date are from Edward's POV.  It is educated, it is articulate and it is cohesive.  From Wisp's POV, everything is instinctual, everything is from a sixth sense.  I also find it stunningly perfect that in sleep she is articulate.  She can not be truly harmed there and knows it.  So words are not to be feared.  I found this to be indescribably beautiful and enlightening.  Thank you!

Reviewer: screamingSOUL Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sad to hear about all this drama that caused you to step away from this story for a while :( but I will definitely stick around and patiently wait for your return. Thank you for this Wisp POV it was very interesting to get inside her head. 

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

 of course we are still here - this is a fabulous story.

Keep the faith

Reviewer: Chanelvamp Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this outtake! I always wondered what it was like in Wisp's head. It's interesting to read. I feel sorry for how she thinks in simple terms, like a little child. Those men must have done a real number on her...

What's the deal about the plagiarism? Must have miss that ordeal?

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great inside to in Wisps mind and how she sees the world. It is interesting, that she can somehow form sentences or thoughts and has a mind of her own. I guess the years in captivity (which she probably was) has limited her a little bit, but she is still very bright. 

Another interesting point is, that next to James and Dr. Gerandy there are at least 2 more people involved in her previous misstreatment (daddy and father). The question is now, is it the real daddy and father or some different people. perhaps her real father, who sold her for money or something. But where is her mother (dead?). 

The excerpts of Peter Pan were also great, and that Wisp sees Edwards home as her sanctuary or Neverland is nice. Hopefully it stays this way and she is not taken away from Edward.

Reviewer: beausoir Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not much of a reviewer, but I wanted to let you know that I'm still here, I loved this outtake, and I will wait as long as necessary for your mojo to return for writing! Love your story, sorry for the drama you have had to endure!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

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