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Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter!!! So glad that Bella has Esme there to explain things to her.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 25

Wow!  I would hate to be transported back to that time. I hate having to use what we have today, but I'll take it over leaves or feathers anyway. They are so breaking all the rules, but somehow I don't think they really care. See ya soon I hope. 

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 2:38 AM Title: September 1st 1843

So sweet and romantic.

 

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

totally greatfull

Reviewer: taynemmsmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 25

Ooooh Please, more tomorrow - I adore period fiction - and yours is truly wonderful.

Thank you!

 

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh sweet Edward just wants to shower her with affection and things she'll enjoy. To be so close yet so far- very frustrating for them. He wants her to like Town, but they are on such a short allowance of propriety with her mourning. That impulsive kiss so sweet! 

Great chapter. Will be looking for more tomorrow if we're lucky :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 25

Some of us with issues are Extremely grateful! !

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter, thank you.

Luv

XOXO

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25

Please,pretty please.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

very interesting makes me happy that I get to go to the story and by a box of pads.  They are so cute together and Esme is over the moon happy for them.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 25

Still not comfortable with the whole period thing. Hate it. I still haven't had the talk with my daughter and she is 12. Terrible mom. Lucky she has close friends that have great moms.

Reviewer: Bliq Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

I LOVE this story and cannot get updates fast enough!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 25

I loved this chapter... can't wait for more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

J'aime ce chapitre !

Merci.

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

And don't forget Willow Bark Tea for cramps. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 25

Yes, that part of modern life is highly appreciated. 

Oh! To discover chocolate and enjoy it, that's one of the best things in life. Then the guy you like gives you more... Of course propriety will be overlooked ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  Gah, I would be a horrible woman in the past...my period is not fun, I cannot imagine using leaves...or even sheets (I hate pads)!  EWWWWWW!!

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

I just found this story and I loves it!!  It is so sweet.  So glad they wont have to wait a full year to court!!!

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 24

sorry i meant to add in the last review, this TexasBella being published is such wonderful news and I can't wait to read. 

It must be awful to suddenly have to wear corsets when you aren't used to wearing them. Edward was very excited to see Isabella then!. 

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

No I missed it! 

Edward is going to be beside himself at Isabella staying with him and her being out of mourining by Christmas!

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am so happy that Bella did go to town with Esme. I KNEW that Esme had something to do with the vicar coming and talking with Bella. Love me some Esme!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Yes, they have to keep it proper, but doors close and keep things behind them. And I guess they. Ight be given certain allowences ;)

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 24

thanks again

Reviewer: anncarol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great, thank you

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

SO amazing :)  I am so happy :D  I think they will keep talking, finding out more about each other :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

OH WOW, that was amazing :D  I really loved it!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 24

This two are so cute together, gotta find a Edward for me... *dream*

Reviewer: cecye Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

please

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

sweet sweet man

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

It has to be so hard for him to have her so close but so far away.

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

Another gteat chapter. Oh not to proper I hope!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it :)

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

I'm certainly glad that they were not set upon by brigands or the like! Thanks for the update!!!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 24

Esme is a meddling mom. Love her.

Reviewer: Gennell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 24

Edward was so excited!  He was like a young boy, with all his words running together from his excitement.  He seems so much younger and more alive now than he did in the beginning when he was so burdened with life.  Young love is sweet.  :)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

Merci pour ce bon chapitre !

Edward est heureux de sa surprise.

A demain !!!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Maybe a little kiss?I can only hope.Amazing story.And,yes, pretty please,another update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 24

How often will Esme just excuse herself from the room leaving Isabella un-chaparoned with Edward? Hopefully only long enough for Edward to re-affirm his intentions. Propriety is still if the utmost importance. Hehe
Esme's meddling handy-work is written all over this trip to town.
Will Isabella's fears of society be lessened by the time they return home?

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter. They have to keep things proper when in the presence of others but she is staying in his home. There are bound to be times they will run into each other without a chaperone. ;)

An update tomorrow would be great. 

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

He was so surprised and so sweet! Loving this. Thank you!

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

Love Edward's excitement and Esme, lol, she is so funny manipulating everything to her family's benefit.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

love it

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

Bella est en demi-deuil ! Oui je pense qu'Edward va être content !!!

Merci.

Reviewer: cecye Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

I want more . . . is she visiting Edward's house?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love me some Carlisle and Esme. I am just wondering if one of them talked to the vicar before the vicar went to talk to Bella. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter and I can't believe I didn't make the connection about mourning earlier. Looks like Bella and Edward will be able to see where their attraction will lead sooner than they thought. See ya tomorrow. 

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks so much for the update. I can't wait for more. It always makes my day to see an update from you 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Edward will be so pleased

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ohhh, o/ Edward will be so happy that Bella doesn't have to be in mourning for so long, and so am I!!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for the update! Loved Esme telling Bella she better get used to corsts, LOL!

Reviewer: allrain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Great,great story.thanks for sharing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

I think Edward will be over the moon that she is there but I think she will be lost.  Is candlemas the new year??

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

Circumstances are always adjusted to suit the individual embroiled in it.
I was very obvious that one way or another Isabella would be the surprise visitor to Edward's home in town.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

I was one of those who didn't get and who also guessed wrong aout who's going to town. Edward is going to be more than thrilled.

Esme made her plans clear in the carriage, but I don't think Bella truly understood them. Thinking with a corset on ca't be easy.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

More, please!!  MUCH more!!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved the chapter. Sorry for the delay in r&r but RL has picked up the pace and I'm not getting to read as much. As for another chapter soon?  Please!  I love this story. It's one of my favorites and I always look forward to the updates. 

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, I so love this story! Can't wait for an update.

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 22

Life was very formal back then. How boring. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I am glad that Isabella is taking the time to write back to Edward. Also glad that she is not being to stubborn with Lord Cullen on the plan for the farm. 

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

Lets hope that Lady Cullen's surprise guest is Isabella! the Cullens are such a kind family to provide a new home for Emmett and Rosalie and to look after Isabella and Charlies like they do. Great chapter x 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 22

SO amazing :)

Reviewer: Candyluvsu Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love this so much! Please please please update again tomorrow. I can't wait until they get even closer. It is taking forever, but I know that it means that when they do get together it will be the right time. :) 

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:12 AM Title: September 13th 1843

I really love period stories, and this one is so well written! Well done.

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:48 AM Title: September 1st 1843

I'm really liking this story!

Reviewer: MissMartha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for sharing, it was just too sweet. I do love me some fluffiness, I do. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 21

love that they talked and that she knows his intentions.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

I can't wait for them to be together, Isabella is so strong, confident and that was possibly what made Edward fill atracted to her after the ball. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

Magnifique!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

Very curious as to Esme's surprise. Could Bella be headed into London for the shopping of Charlie's new clothes?
Sounds as though Emmett and Rosalie are also being surreptitiously adopted by Esme and Carlisle.
Hope Alice will be around for Isabella to visit with during this hunting party season. She will need all the encouragement she can get

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Yes please!!!

they're getting closer in writing, we'll see how they do face to face. 

I'm sure we all would love for Bella to go to town with Esme, but I do't think it will be in this trip, but maybe, the children along with Charles will be the ones going ;)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yes please

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

This one was a little longer!

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 22

love this story. keep updating it.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

More More More!!! Did I say More!  The letters were so sweet, so nice to see them communicating as they would in that day in age.

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, I love their letters, so sweet and full of news and longing through the words. I worry about the snobbery of the society girls that would prefer Edwards attention over Isabella. I hope her strength hold out! Masterful storytelling and writing-. 

Looking forward to next chapter, as always :)

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

Okay you had me at hog roast.....mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Okay this chapter.  Very good can't wait for the next one....Anne-Marie

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 22

How sweet I hope she goes to town with Esme??

Reviewer: Angie8776 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Thank you for another update so quickly! I am looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

J'aime cette lettre de Isabella à Edward et le fait qu'elle l'appelle : Mon doux Edward, c'est trés mignon.

Oui oui encore, encore.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ah,elle a accepté !

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.

Reviewer: hply Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yes please more tomorrow. I love this story!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22

sweetward love him

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh, he's completely smitten! Love it!

And yes! Please give us MORE!!!!

xoxox

Mina

Reviewer: taynemmsmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

I  adore period fictions - and I am enjoying this one so much - Thank you.

Reviewer: Laddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 22

love this sweet story

Reviewer: ddhayes30 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

such a sweet chapter. I love this story.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

This chapter was so sweet. Now that they have admitted to themselves and each other that feelings are blossoming and they want to explore that, will they still be able to hold out until the end of her mourning period?  She still has around 10-11 months left, right?  As always I look forward to reading more.  

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 21

This story so deserves to be on the TWCS featured list. 

This chapter was so swoony! I presume that Lady Cullen came from a similar position in life to Isabella from her comment.

How is Edward going to manage to wait the period of mourning now that he knows Isabella feels the same. 

Great chapter x 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 21

Yes loved it they both know that they feel more than just a freind .

Reviewer: Candyluvsu Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 21

Awww loved it! Yay their relationship is moving along nicely. I think they are so sweet together and Bella is so cute not even knowing about her feelings for Edward until Esme pointed them out. So typical Bella. Can't wait for the next one. :) 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ohhhh, this Edward doesn't look like the one in the beggining, so sweet!!! Finally Isabella admited that she likes him!!!

Reviewer: Gennell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

So sweet!

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