Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think some down time with E on the farm would be funny .....and time with her brother if they wed he will take on the role of father ....cznt wai to see his idea of romancing her after she is not in mourning some time with his kids and her brother to see how she does with all the children
Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
So glad your daughter is better. I would be happy to have you extend this story through their married life with an
epi about their adult children and later yrs.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
sweet sweet bella
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
i truly do hope you have written children into their future and maybe a future take with charles falling for charlotte
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
That was amazing! I really loved it! I want them to have kids together :D I think they would be great! I also want some lemons ;)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well the queen seems cool, and down to earth. Can't wait to see whats next.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
Would love to see them travel and have kids!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
OH SNAP! That was amazing! I will be praying for your daughter, that has to be hard, but I am so happy she is better :)
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
How to extend this amazing story? I would like to see more interaction/as much conversation as convention allows, between Isabella and Edward. Alot of the story seems to be from the POV of Esme, Carlisle. When it is from Bella's POV it is more about how she feels about the farm and Charles. What if she were to explore her feelings more? Go deeper and be more present in her feelings. I realize she is young and naive, and has alot to deal with, but I would love more conviction with her feelings, allow herself to feel all the love that is coming to her. (I am a total sap for romance, the more the better) But, then again, what do I know? I just love to read this story!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
He's got her blessing!!!! Now it seems weird but then it was as important as the girl saying yes. The thing is Bella has no idea as to what, maybe she'll realize soon enough.
What would I like to see, maybe Albert visiting the farm, he was very interested in nature so it would be understandable for him to want to see that, or Bella visiting some of his proyects. Also Charles meeting the queen would be interesting too.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
There adventures as a married couple and subsequent pregnancies would be a good place to start.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
This couple is very sweet... Incan see why you wouldn't want to let them go just yet.
Hmmm, some ideas.... Edward with the kids (or more with Charles), them with kids, Edward getting more hands on at the farm ;) it's hard to say since there's still some sorry left. Bella grown and more comfy in her body and with Edward mos def!! Anyway, I'm sure I'll love it!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
Alexandrina is very sweet, I'm so happy that she liked Bella!!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
I need to see some lovin
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
No need to extend this, you are going well. I'm loving each chapter and I cannot wait for Edward and Bella to be finally together.
xoxox
Mina
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
Pauvre Bella!
Il y a de quoi être intimidé.
Merci.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
cant wait for later. She is amazed that the queen is just a person.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
:-) I hope your daughter is well!!
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 27
thanks for the chapter. i really love this story. I'm sorry to hear about yoru daughter adn am glad that she's ok:-)
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Hell, I would be as nervous too! In fact, I think I would have thrown up by that point. LOL
Can't wait to read what comes next!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad to know your girl is doing better, take care of her!!!!
I thought Bella could have fainted, I'm sure her body wants to. She's in a situation few people are and it has to be overwhelming. It's onenthing to manage her farm,another to meet the queen for her approval. But it had to be done and I'm glad it's going well so far.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
Alexandrina doesn't look like a bad person, so I think Bella can calm down!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
:) I'm sorry to hear about your daughter and wish her a speedy recovery x
Date: 25 Nov 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my I hate all the waiting. Poor Edward is so sweet. I'm sure he could use some sweet luvin', though.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update! Glad to hear your daughter is doing better.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am so happy for Isabella for dealing with her reticence in such a mature manner. She's much more accepting which in turn makes her stay in town less stressful. I'm enjoying how sweet-natured, demure (without coming off as coy or coquettish), and unaffected she has remained by the Cullen's daily doting on her. Especially how she feels so well-cared for and loved.
I think "The Cousin" is going to love her. --At least that is my fond wish!
That was a cute letter from Charles and came a the perfect time when she was missing him so. This story is beautifully written and just warms my heart.
I'm very much looking forward to your update. Thank you. ~RoseE. xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella's false indignation at Edward's gift was very much a grown up woman's response. Make him sweat just a little. Hehe.
Charles' letter has a huge awe factor.
Dinner with the Queen..........I'm nervous for Bella.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
I had a feeling that is where they were going. Oh my gosh charles is just the cutest thing and that letter was just so adorable.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh yeah I am happy with what we have today. Men never could handle that. Edward is so sweet buying her chocolate.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 24
Proper is very seldom fun. I can just imagine his face when he saw her like a little kid at Christmas.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
I think edward will be beyond please. I like how Bella just goes along now it is just easier.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yes don't want to linger on ungentlemenly thoughts. What a pitty. I love the letters.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome. I love that they are going further in the relationship.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow what a perfect time to spoil her when she is too weak to fight back.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no they are not well I think Edward will rush once he learns the news.
Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my Edwards thoughts of walking in on Bella. Yes I am a naughty girl.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Going to a ladies bed chambers in quite scandalous and then to see her in such a state of undress probably gave him heart palpitation it not aroused in his neather regions.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Charles not used to eating so much. I think eventually she will toto town. Lady Cullen is rather persuasive.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think they get along quite well. I love hear about Jasper and nervously not prepared to ask to court Alice yet.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
This story is so good!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward is just to cute thinking about her then waiting impatiently for her. I think the kids will get along great.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
They can slowly get to know each other under the guise of his teaching her finances and buisness things.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:12 PM Title: October 7th 1843
I can just imagine him trying to milk a cow for the first time. He is just adorable.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yes Edward comforting young Charles brought a tear to my eye. He is so sweet. Wanting to take care of them.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:53 PM Title: September 30th 1843
She was so happy and then her mother passing left her happiness short lived. It is for the best she was suffering and she is at peace. I think she may lean on lady Cullen at first then think she has so much to do and push her self to much.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:42 PM Title: September 28th 1843
That is funny that he already felt a possession over Bella hoping it was not her Jasper was wanting to talk to. Lady cullen's plan is already working.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 4:27 PM Title: September 28th 1843
I thought he might run into her on his ride. Jasper has changed he tried to tell Edward that but he did not listen
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:29 AM Title: September 29th 1843
Wonderful chapter. I think Bella was to shocked to say anything.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:16 AM Title: September 24th 1843
I think he can explain it just so that she will find it helpful. Edward is funny spoiling his daughter.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:58 AM Title: September 22nd 1843
They look like baby watermelons. Charles is a cutie. Lady Cullen seems to always get her way.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:45 AM Title: September 17th 1843
He is within his right to mourn but he does have his kids to think about he should still be a father to them.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: September 13th 1843
It is sad to hear he lost a wife. So I bet he is sad as well. She will be sneaky in her spoiling of Bella I feel.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:43 AM Title: September 11th 1843
Edward can court her then she will had a daughter by marriage. I love her independent spirit.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:32 AM Title: September 1st 1843
I am finally getting a chance to read this. Quite enjoyable so far :).
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am so loving this story.. and the pictures are so much fun to look at... thank you so much.. cant wait for the next... Bella and the Queen.. how exciting... lol... if she dosent vomit in her lap that is...
Date: 20 Nov 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the letter from Charles. I guess I am missing something. I do not know where Bella is going.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my. I love this story. It is my favorite of all my WIP's. I really can't wait for them to court. They are so very sweet together.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Saw BD 2 --- it was funny, sweet, suspenseful, and--- of course, romantic.
Plan to see it several more times, like the other Twilight movies.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:43 AM Title: October 7th 1843
So funny about teaching the future Lord to milk a cow!
And yes, I do believe he is smitten. Thanks for writing.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
I haven't seen BD 2 yet either! I will be going sometime next weekend. Maybe I will on Turkey day.
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Omg... I would have passed out by now.. Lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great reading love the letter.
Date: 18 Nov 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
Holy crap! Stay strong, Isabella!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
sweetward again :) love him
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
I'm pretty sure I'd be crapping my pants knowing I was about to meet the Queen. Lol
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
oh no - i had forgotten about him!
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think that dating in the Victorian era was a pain in the ass! So many rules
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
HOLY SHIT! HIS COUSIN? HOLY SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!
And Charles is so freaking cute! I want to smother him with kisses!
Please, update again soon! I'm dying to know what comes next!
xoxox
Mina
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think the chocalate and kiss made up for the leaves... *gags* nope, I'm still a little nauseated... Thank God I was born in the 20th century! LOL
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Damn, how cute was Edward when he saw Bella? I swoon to the moon and back... I swear!
Still loving it, off to to read the next one.
xoxo
Mina
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have never worn a corset and I thank the heavens I will never need to... unless is lingerie LOL ;)
Off to read the next chapter.
xoxo
Mina
Date: 18 Nov 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
I liked this chapter. I also love when you posted the pictures of the clothes.....I love that time period. Can't wait till the next chapter.
I saw part 2 today....No one in my family likes Twilight either, so I did what a few other people did today.....went by myself to the movies.......It is so worth it.......Anne-Marie
Date: 18 Nov 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
She is freaking out now going to meet the queen if she could say oh shit she would lol
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
That was amazing :) Loved it! Charles' letter was darling :) I don't like the use of fur, but that is my own opinion. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
poor kid, she doesn't realise that she has him on the run!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
awesome chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Little Charles' letter was so sweet. Isabella looks beautiful and will definitely turn heads when he meets their "family". So are they going to the palace or somewhere else to meet the queen? Hope your daughter gets better soon.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh my dear, I'm sorry that I have not had a chance to read, but lucky me, look at how many chapters I can guzzle up before I have to wait! I loved this chapter because Edward is even more nervous than Bella is I think
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
Isabella certainly seems to be tolerating town more now. Who wold want to refuse a necklace like that. I have some gorgeous amethyst earring which are very similar.
Great chapter x
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Awwww, Charles is such a cute little boy!!!
O.o We will finally see that talk between Edward and the cousin!!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok, so is the Queen going to allow them to court right away when she sees how in love Edward is?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for sharing!! It was great!!
Date: 17 Nov 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yikes!!!! She is meeting the lady of the land!!!! The queen!!! Who. Hope doesn't know she's still in mourning. She might not agree to the color. Dward wants her OK ASAP it seems and Carlisle and Esme seem to agree. We'll see how it goes.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
J'espère qu'elle ne va pas rencontrer des pestes !
Date: 17 Nov 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
not seen BD 2 ...huh ...we are working on our 4th time ...come see me I will take you ...with 13 grandaughters we may be there all weekend ...lol
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it as always :)
Date: 17 Nov 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
That was a very awww letter. Love the story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
So they will dine with Queen Victoria or Alexandria as the call her.
I can imagine Bella is feeling thankful that she has been prissied up and as she has natural decorum.
It seems the top of the royalty chain have the good sense to judge a person on their merits so I think Bella will be okay. Let’s hope so.
Luv
XOXO
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
I went to see BD this morning and it is so good the ending is so different and so suprising. I hope you will get the chance to see it soon. Keep the chapters coming I am really enjoying you story.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Leaves and skin? *shudders* Pads are bad enough.
Love the chocolate thing. hee hee. Every woman needs chocolate.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Woo hoo! So her mourning will be over soon and Edward and She can officially court!
Date: 15 Nov 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Periods are horrible doesn't matter the time, but chocolate always make things better!!!
Edward is so sweet!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Native American women would use moss or sea weed wrapped in cloth and strips of leather. Or they just let it flow. They believed it was the right of way to life. They also would on occasion use herbals to decrease flow or impede it's flow completely.
Edward's pouting was adorable yet made him sound like a petulant child having had his favorite toy removed from his grasp. Esme is playing with his patience.
I guess I thought Renee would have already explained to Bella what was happening to her body as she matured. Good thing Esme picked up on her physical discomfort.
I can only imagine how awkward Bella felt as she confided in Esme regarding Edward and the new sensations she is experiencing.
Esme is a giddy little match-maker and Carlisle is taking delight in his sons new found feelings. What a pair his parents are. Haha.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
such a naughty pair, kissing in public! I did laugh at edward being jealous of every man who even glanced at Bella.
Eww its bad enough now, let alone using leaves!
Great chapter x
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
More tomorrow? Heck, is it tomorrow yet? Pleasepleaseplease!! :) Leaves....*shudders* hahaha, sucks if you used a stinging nettle or something itchy!!! :P