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Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 40

Ha, Bella had to take matters in her on hands!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 40

I wondering if Edward's imagination is running wild with thoughts of Isabella's boldness in the bedroom. This week without the family could lead to many fantasies playing out if Edward wishes. His bride is young and eager to move past the repetitive. Haha
Does Isabella feel ashamed of their hurried wedding or upset that they are not out publicly as husband and wife?
Alice and Jasper's wedding cannot arrive soon enough. Isabella needs a confidant her age.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 32

Catching up on updates today! Loved this chapter, Esme is such an amazing character. Love her! 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 40

That was amazing :D  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I would give suggestions for outtakes, but I don't know what will be in the story after this.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 40

I love how she took the reigns and surprised him now if she went down on him it would for sure give him palpitations.  A little spice in the bedroom never hurt anyone. 

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 40

Thank you

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 40

I loved it but them letting Emmett and Rose live in the house hopefully willnlet Bella go of all the bad memories and let the new ones over take them and will the have a good honeymoon hmmm update soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 40

Love it!!!!!!! I like that Bella took the lead in the bedroom. I am sure Edward did too. lol.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 40

Bella wants to try new things that is good Edward will learn some stuff I love it.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 40

Bella is adventerous in the bedroom!!! Who would have thought, not Edward, but he's over his shock and will probably enjoy this side of his wife next week. ;)
An idea for an out-take if it's not in the story, is how Bella decided to be so brave and what her thoughts were.
See you son!!!

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thanks for writing more! I hope you at least get to feeling better.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 39

I loved it now everyone is happy and where they should be now will the still have a wedding when its time update soon 

And I am happy to hear you know the problem with your health so now you can get better 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 39

Oh I loved it so much.  Edward is just adorable wanting Bella but knowing she is still sore so will just hold her.  I am glad to she the children so happy.  Emmett is funny unsure of being given the house.  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 39

I'm sure it's a relief to finally have a name for what has been ailing you.
Sending prayers up on your behalf for comfort and impending relief.

Dies the move for Emmett and Rose also elevate their social status?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 39

It's good to hear from you, even if it's not as often as we all would like. Hope ings keep fetting better just as they are for Edward and Bella. Emmett and Rose were very surprised but seem happy for Bella and Charles, and I'm sure they'll be able to keep the secret until needed too.

Take care!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 39

Wonderful chapter. Everyone definitely enjoyed their first Christmas together. I'm glad that you have found out what was causing your health issues. I know that everything else will work out. I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers. 

Missy

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 39

love it

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 36

awwwwwww

Reviewer: Gennell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 39

A nice surprise update.  I really enjoyed it.  And I hope things go really well for you. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 31

I think he is writing to her brother maybe ? Or the Queen

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 30

I am amazed at the knowledge you have did you use google and you are forgiven for now

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 29

how could you, small pox. hush with you woman

Reviewer: julie_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 39

Great story trully love it

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 39

I was very happy to see a post of this story today, and I love the way Edward and Bella are with each other!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 39

That was amazing :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :D

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved this chapter. Glad that you have found out what was wrong. Now it is time for you to get better. Sorry about the problems you have at home.  Hope that gets better soon. Love this whole story. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 38

Ah yes, the whole "Look, I broke her virginity" preen. *snicker* Men!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 38

good chapter. You can almost see in your mind the way their home would look during Christmas. Decoration and children playing with toys of that day. A beautiful picture it makes.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 36

Just reading this now and yes Christmas time was so blessed with our children and grandchildren.

 

It is March and I am reading this. Why did I miss you? I don't know.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 34

beautiful and so was the dress.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 38

She is the perfect wife for him and the rest of the family love it.  So glad to hear from you.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 38

loving it all

awesome christmas.

 

so glad the kids have acceped bella, it is hard not to love her

 

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 33

beautiful dress

love that they are both happy ad are moving forward

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 38

Charlotte's so going to marry Charles, kkkkkk...

 

Yay, I love the baby making stage!!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

love it

 

glad they are getting along so well and minding the rules it seems very hard to do

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 38

Glad you are back!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved this update!!!!! Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to get more of this story. You are doing a fabulous job writing it. 

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am so happy to see another chapter OMG, I couldn't believe it and as always what a wonderful chapter it is.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 38

I love it!

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 37

Love these lines:

“Do not be afraid to touch me, Isabella. Everything I have is yours, including my body,”

“I want to love you, as a man loves a woman, complete and whole,”

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 36

This is so sweet!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

it was tough back then it seems. she is so strong and does not lean on anyone i can see how easy it is that someone passes

 

i am glad that esme went to her

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it :)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:32 PM Title: October 7th 1843

how funny their traditions. i know full well my brother is way more hysterical at funerals than i am.

 

wow love the story, thank you

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow edward melted my heart with how well he listened and was there for charles

i look forward to more with this story

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved their very happy first Christmas together as one big family x

Reviewer: Julia-S77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

I hope that RL is a bit better for you now. It must have been so exciting to have a Christmas tree for the first time. Great chapter x

Reviewer: ceceprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 38

can't wait for the baby making stage

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh wow, that was amazing :D

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:44 PM Title: September 30th 1843

tears in my eyes

 

how sad

she is a strong girl and i know she is blessed and her parents raised her well

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:36 PM Title: September 28th 1843

love it

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 38

I loved it so so so good so sweet they are all happy now update soon

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:57 PM Title: September 29th 1843

love the dress

i am so happy the cullens are able to keep their word to charlie in helping the family out

 

seems bella will exceed at what she knows she just needs a nudge

 

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:31 PM Title: September 24th 1843

oh i love eme and her wickedness

 

i think she will invte the over for a meeting with the kids

love it

Reviewer: erin81swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 38

Oh I am so glad to see you around again.  Thanks for the update and I do hope more are coming. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:41 PM Title: September 22nd 1843

i have heard of gooseberry pie

seems bella has a dance to get ready for. i wonder if that was hard to push bella like that for esme

 

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:32 PM Title: September 17th 1843

edward wow i see where he is just trying to be who he was raised. i see how he would be angry he could not have a childhood like jasper

 

so much to come to terms. family needs to be put back together look forward to it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:23 PM Title: September 13th 1843

bella is so strong i love her character

 

i feel so bad for esme but love her as well. how sad to lose 4 children and girls. love my one and only girl

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:11 PM Title: September 11th 1843

love the story

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 3:55 PM Title: September 1st 1843

loved it

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

hank you for this new chapter.

The story was missing.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 38

It's great to have you back! Hope things keep getting better.

I wonder what's Bella's surprise, or was it Jasper and Alice?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) loved this

 

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 38

Awwwww this story is so sweet

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 38

Glad to see you back.  And you are making your way back thru to us as long as you can see the light you know you on the right path.  Love the chapter just adorable and baby making will be fun.  

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

Esme's perspective of her happy family was delightful to read.
Carlisle is too cute in the way he tenses his wife.

Reviewer: maggiejmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 38

Yay! So glad you're back and things are a bit better! Great update! 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

oh goody!  i love that stage!

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 38

Another sweet family chapter.  Thanks for writing.  In case you're not aware, the date of update on this story is not changing.  I did not catch the last chapter for a while, 'cause I checked the update date only.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 38

Wonderful chapter. They all deserve happiness, none more than Bella and Charles. I love the research that you put into this story to make it so authentic. Thank you so much for writing and I hope and pray that everything will begin to work out better for you soon. 

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 37

What a sweet chapter.  They'll make a lovely family.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 37

OMG, I missed this chapter.  It was so tastefully done.  Update soon!

Reviewer: Flora Mile Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 37

LOVE IT!!!

What more can I say, I love this chapter and this story so much. I hang for more every time i read it.

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:31 AM Title: September 29th 1843

The drees is perfect for Bella--- just love how Esme takes care of Bella !

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:29 AM Title: September 24th 1843

You also have to love Lord Cullen as well!

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:28 AM Title: September 22nd 1843

I love the pics that go with the chapters!

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:25 AM Title: September 17th 1843

You can tell that Edward is still hurting from the loss of his wife.

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:24 AM Title: September 13th 1843

I loved what she told Bella about the books that she brought her!

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:22 AM Title: September 11th 1843

You have to love and admire this ESME! Well done!

Reviewer: 0328dmsc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2013 3:21 AM Title: September 1st 1843

Finally figured out how to use TWCS !!! All because I had to see the pics you were talking about in ff.net! Love this story by the way!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 37

That was nice. It will be fun to see what Christmas is like.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 33

What a beautiful dress.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 30

That was great I love some angst!!!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

I was very moved by how Edward helped with Charles.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 9:43 PM Title: September 30th 1843

I don't think she will lean on the Cullen's I think she will want to earn her own way.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 9:28 PM Title: September 28th 1843

That was a fun meeting. I'm glad he didn't know who Bella was. That dress was so pretty!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 8:26 PM Title: September 28th 1843

I hope it is Alice Jasper is sitting with;) I just reread You've Kept Me Waiting by Mandi1 It is a fun story!
I like Edward to be stubborn it makes things interesting.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 8:10 PM Title: September 29th 1843

The dress is so beautiful!

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Date: 17 Feb 2013 7:11 PM Title: September 24th 1843

I hope they meet with out Esme knowing it before the dance;)  Do they know each other from growing up there?  Was that a picture of the Cullen house?

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:00 PM Title: September 22nd 1843

That is so neat the you matched the days!!! I often wonder when I read a story when it was originally posted. Now people will know.
I don't think Renee will pull through though if she does she needs to find her "Phil" and get remarried.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:56 PM Title: September 17th 1843

Really enjoyed the pictures of the children.  Edward seem to be a good person even though he wasn't totally in love with his wife.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:53 PM Title: September 13th 1843

So she took her animals into town to be killed?   I like Esme.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:51 PM Title: September 11th 1843

Great chapter.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 5:49 PM Title: September 1st 1843

Oh my I love the pictures!!!

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