Date: 04 Nov 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
LOVED IT! I'm so happy Bella opened up, Edward is so perfect for her.
Can't wait to read the next chapter, thanks for the update!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 04 Nov 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
YES, first name and he now knows. She's nervous and that's understandable with no experience or advice of her mom to have prepared her for handling a man coming into her life.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved the Esme talked to Bella and help explain something. Also love the where Edward ask Bella to call him "Edward". So Sweet!!!!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
I can only imagine the nervousness Isabella was experiencing while she waded through her thoughts and feelings as Lady Cullen explained her sons intentions. She was correct in describing herself as young in age but not in the ways of her heart and the years of family duty.
I'm surprised though that Master Edward would request the formality of addressing him be more personal so soon into their understanding.
Esme must be ecstatic.
I'm all smiles.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
Awe so sweet. Great chapter
Date: 03 Nov 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
love love edward
Date: 03 Nov 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aw, that was amazing :D YAY!!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wonderfully sweet chapter and very well written. I love your tidbits of information about 19th century England.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
So sweet and they are finally starting to admit their feelings, and ever so proper ;)
Would love to hear EPOV riding to Town after their conversation... .
I know love letters were not allowed until officially courting, but maybe some innocent flirting? Such a great story. Thank you!
Date: 03 Nov 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
Lady Cullen is a very smart lady who has a plan and her heart set on it. She will work very hard helping out, especially with Bella. Sadly the mourning is long....
Date: 03 Nov 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well, I'm certainly glad their illness did not linger. What a sweet chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
The doll! What a sweetheart he is, and not turned off by her station or poverty. Bella's more of a softie around him, which i love. Maybe he cant court, but he could tutor her in business, right? I'd love to hear his reaction when he heard of her exhaustion. Set a record from Town, I'm sure ;). Esme and Carlise are hilarious and so crafty with their well-timed actions and comments to help push E&B along or make Bella more comfortable. .
Loving this story. Looking forward to your next chapter?
Amy
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Was the purpose for all the gifts from Edward a sign if his intent to court her after the period of mourning is over?
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward est arrivé pour s'occuper de Bella !
Ils lui ont fait plein de cadeaux !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Mon Dieu, ils sont malade !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Mon Dieu Bella en petite tenue !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Le repas se passe bien !
Pauvre Bella, ils veulent encore qu'elle aille en ville.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
J'aime ce chapitre, l'accueil à été chaleureux !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
J'aime beaucoup cette fiction, elle est très bien !
Merci.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:49 PM Title: October 7th 1843
Edward invite Bella et son frère !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bon en tout cas Edward est prêt à rendre service à Bella !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:29 PM Title: September 30th 1843
Triste pour Bella et son frère.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:21 PM Title: September 28th 1843
En fin de compte Edward a trouvé Bella tout seul, il n'a pas eu besoin de sa maman !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:49 PM Title: September 28th 1843
J'ai hâte de lire la rencontre de nos deux héros.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:33 PM Title: September 29th 1843
Isabella a accepté les changements, c'est un bon début.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:19 PM Title: September 24th 1843
Bon chapitre !
Les Cullen sont vraiment des gens charmants.
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:05 PM Title: September 22nd 1843
Donc elle va finalement aller au bal !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:22 PM Title: September 13th 1843
Lady Cullen est maline, elle offre des livres et va essayer d'aider son fils à trouver une nouvelle épouse !!!
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:05 PM Title: September 11th 1843
Bon chapitre !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:48 PM Title: September 1st 1843
J'aime beaucoup ce premier chapitre !
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ahh, I knew he would buy her a doll! *claps happily*
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aw, Edward's so sweet. Always wanting to showering her in gifts.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh master Edward is such a devilish guy, he's working his way into her heart little by little and with the help of his mom as we all know.
Storm is hitting us, wind is picking up and I'm worried about trees coming down.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter love the doll he gave her
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved the doll, I could just imagine it :)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awww Yay! They are getting closer! I can't wait for more. :)
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Aw, SO amazing :) I really loved it!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
So glad that Bella is not really putting up a fight with staying at the Cullens. Loved that Edward and Esme are showering her with gifts. I just knew that at some point in the story that Edward would give her a doll!!!!!! Love it.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love to read historical romance it's my very favorite thing to read ..then add my 2 favorite fictional characters that makes it perfect
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
She's opening without noticing and he called her love!!! I wonder if she will realize that? Or him? ;)
It has to be very hard for her to follow the doctors orders, but I'm sure the whole family will be keeping close eye that she does.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella's having to many emotional moments, Edward's being so adorable to her that will be difficult for her to resist.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Didn't think Edward would be able to stay away for long! He brought Isabella so many thoughtful presents especially the doll. Great chapter x
Date: 29 Oct 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Isabella has worked herself into exhaustion. Well that was certainly one way to get them to move in. I presume Edward will be riding right back. Great chapter x
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sweet chapter. I figured Master Edward would come rushing to her side. I had not figured in all the gifts he would bring but that doesn't surprise me either. Isabella is opening herself up to him and her emotional response to him being there is proof. She is a smart girl, she'll figure it out eventually. And Master Edward calling her Love when he addressed her that one time was definitely an indication to how he already feels for her. See ya next time.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
Neat and sweet interactions! I like that. :)
Thanks for writing!
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
just looooooooove edward
Date: 29 Oct 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Were the gifts only for Isabella, if so Charles was indeed a sweet child as many would be jealous not to receive any for themselves?
But then again even at a young age he probably knows how his sister strives and is glad for her.
Very sweet chapter.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
I almost started to cry when he gave her the doll that was just so sweet
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella. I knew she could not keep going the way she was going. I think Edward will come straight home as soon as he hears what has happened to Bella, to be by her side.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm quite certain that he'll want to head back home to attend to Bella
Date: 28 Oct 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is going to be relieved but upset that Bella is so stubborn
Date: 28 Oct 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is going to rearrange his business dealings and head home immediately.
Stubborn is one thing but not asking for help with her brothers illness seems unlike Isabella.
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Charles and Isabella but also Esme and Carlisle having to see them like that and worry if would be all right
As soon as Edward finds out from his mother how Isabella and Charles are doing he will come right away espasally if it has to do with Isabella
Date: 28 Oct 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad you caved. I really quite enjoy this story.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow- that was unexpected! And so very kind of them.
What a shock it will be for her to wake up to! :)
Thanks for writing!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward will rush home
Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:32 PM Title: September 1st 1843
When Edward finds out he will be already heading back to his home so he see for himself that Bella is ok. Love the story, can't wait for the chapter. Hopefully some lemons are coming? Maybe some more pictures too?
Jad
Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward will go insane, and Bella probably didn't respond to his letters because she didn't had paper!!! Bella is lucky to have Esme wanting to take care of her!!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update. Edward is not gonna be happy about this. He'll probably return without delay.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh dear, Charles is ill and Isabella has worked herself into a fine state. Lady Cullen had better find a polite way to ask Edward to come home without telling him why. The poor man will rush to be at Isabella's side.
btw - I am glad you couldn't wait to post. *grins*
Date: 27 Oct 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really cannot wait to see what happens next!!!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
:) Looking forward to seeing if Edward comes running home once he hears of Bella. Please update again soon.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh, please update later today! I cannot wait to see what Edward's reaction is going to be. Thanks for the update. I have been so upset. It seems like none of my favorite stories have been updating this week. So needless to say I was excited to see your update. Thank you!
Date: 27 Oct 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter, can't wait for more..
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Its strange that a mature man (Emmett) plus fully grown farm hands have no say in anything but a small young inexperienced girl is, one that is showing herself to be quite incapable of being in charge. And we are not talking about something she owns but something she leases.
I glad you decided to post outside of matching your dates.
Luv
XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
poor isabella her little body couldn't take no more.. thank u for the update
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks so much for caving!!! And Texasbella and kids school brakes ;)
It had to happen and it finally did. Bella will be shocked when she wakes up but I'm sure Esme won't let her do anything about it.
As for Edward, he will be back as soon as he can.
I do hope for more later today :)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness! Poor Isabella. They have to get Charles better and makemsure she is recovered because I don't think she can handle loosing him. Edward is going to freak out. He will come running, business be damned. So glad you posted early. I've missed this story. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's going to gut Edward he will panick I'm sure. I hate they are not well but something had to happen before Esme stepped in and took over...I heart her so much.
Xoxo
Date: 27 Oct 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no I hope she doesn't lose Charles too. I am assuming Edward would come rushing back if he can.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 19
I long for a chapter and you cut it off so soon. Bad, Bad, Bad writer! Please, please I'm begging please more.
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
There will be no way he can stay in town you know he will be coming home!!!! Loved it :)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward will be coming home to take care of her. Bella's pride is not alway good for them ;( I need more PLEASE
Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
Were your ears burning this evening? Because I was just thinking about this story, so I was thrilled to see the update. I think that after Master Edward "freaks" out and pulls out half his hair he will come to hover over her and make sure she is well...business in the city be damned! Looking forward to it!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love this story so much! And the historical aspect is amazing. I'm a bit of a Victorian history nut, and I actually discovered this story while part of a group that rode penny farthings and vintage safety cycles across the South Island of NZ, as authentically Victorian as possible (right down to replica, steel-boned corsets, which are actually more comfortable than a bra). But I love how authentic you've kept this story, including the part with the Queen. Perhaps as an outtake, you could do Esme talking with the Queen about Isabella, and then some sort of whistful statement that lets the Queen know Esme is playing Cupid? :) or you could do the letters (or attempts, I can see Edward throwing away a lot because he doesn't know what to say) between E and I while he's away....just a thought.
PS, I live in a town called Oamaru in New Zealand, which has a living history town from the Vict Era, which I have a lot to do with. So if you want any assistance with the facts or whatever, don't be afraid to ask...I'm not sure how TWCS works in terms of private messages like Fanfiction.net, but if you want help just ask in an authors note and I could post a review with my email address or something? Not sure...but keep writing because I'm itching to read the rest of this!! :)
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great update, and I definitely wanna hear from Edward when he walked in on Bella!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am so glad that we do not have the same annoying mourning issues. Seriously - mourn someone for a year? Talk about a depressing 12 months.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
You need a glossary LOL I think you told us, but what is a a tear away child again?
Oh boy. Poor Bella and Edward
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
lol poor Isabella. She might not want to go to town, but she is going to end up there sooner or later.
I bet Edward is going to get her a doll!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
The 1823 law does not shock me. It actually makes sense. We see 14 and 12 year olds as children. They had severe responsibilities back then, even the gentry, though their responsibilities tended more toward school while the lower classes worked their tails off.
I have to laugh at Carlisle and Esme being so amused at Edward's predicament.
Don't you wish you could meet someone and just know they were the one for you? *sigh*
Date: 19 Oct 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward must write this letter letting her know his felling and not trying to be a friend!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG, don't think that Bella, Edward's probably blaming himself!! At least I hope.
Date: 18 Oct 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter.. I would love to see Edwards reaction to walking in on her