Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Jane as a Mistress...yeah I totally see that happening! Did you write this for the mash up contest...the pairing made me think so. I really liked Harry with Jane...I'm not sure why, but yeah it worked.
I love that you made him love pain...and the perfect mate for Jane. Plus her not caring about the age difference put a diffferent spin on it...not so focused on the body itself. It was about his need for pain and the pleasure it brought. I really liked it.
I wouldn't normally have read something that included different pairings but since you wrote it I was intrigued. You have a amazing way with words and it draws you in. Thanks!!!!
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have come over from Midnight Caller. This is a really good story. I love how you have had them connect to each other. I have read and re-read the end here. I just have to ask.......Where did she bite him at????? Please let me know if you are going to continue this.
no, im not going to continue. I wrote it in line at Disney. She bit his ass of course. :)~~