Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
cute chapter. ROFL for the bet
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:20 PM Title: Prologue
interesting start
Date: 22 Sep 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward to more
Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review. I really enjoy reading them and I'm happy that you are enjoying the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 which is with the beta at the moment I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow! Great story so far!!! Can't wait to read more!!!
-Kate
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[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow I wonder if it is a ploy to say she is his finace's. I wonder now how he will get himself out of this hole now. Should of talked first then screwed. I hope you update soon and yes teaser plz.
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
WTH! Instead of running, why doesn't Bella just confront him. If she's old enough to sleep with him, she's old enough to ask him what is really going on.
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
OOOhhhh a fiance... Great chapter!
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
I AM AMAZED HOW WELL THIS STORY CAPTIVATES ME. I AM NOT ONE TO EASILY GIVE IN TO EMOTIONS. I CRIED, WAS OVER JOYED, AT HOW HAPPY BELLA WAS. THEN I WAS SADDEN BY HIS THOUGHTS OF LEAVING HER.I WAS THRILLED WHEN IT WAS A MISUNDERSTANDING. I THEN WAS HAPPY AGAIN .BUT AFTER THE 6 A.M. CALL . IS HE USING HER? IF HE IS I HOPE EMMITT STUMPS HIS SORRY ASS.WHO IS THE GIRL THAT CALLED HIM?
I LOVED HER NOT LETTER JESSICA TAKE ADVANTAGE OF HER.
A TEASER WOULD BE GREAT ...PLEASE
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Prologue
heartbreaking for bella
so sad to know you disappointed your parents and how do you fix it
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon
Author's Response: hi
thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story.
enjoy the rest of the story
here is a teaser for chapter 6
I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging.
"Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly.
He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her.
"What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think the person on the phone was telling the truth. I love the story. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response: hi
thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story.
enjoy the rest of the story
here is a teaser for chapter 6
I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging.
"Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly.
He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her.
"What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
More please!!!1
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it but feel so sorry for poor bella looking forward to the bxt chap xx
Author's Response: hi
thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story.
enjoy the rest of the story
here is a teaser for chapter 6
I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging.
"Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly.
He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her.
"What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's star struck and really shouldn't have jumped back into Edward's bed a second time without talking first, she should have insisted but then she wouldn't would she.
Was that Lisa on the phone pretending to be Edward's fiancee? I don't believe he's engaged for a second. I think Jasper would have told her that Edward's engaged or he would have told Alice. Either way Bella would have known before she jumped into bed with him the first time that he was unavailable. So now, rather than confront him like she should, she's going to run away......again. *sigh*
Jane x
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG, he has a fiance' . Priceless!!!!
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it :)
Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
I know Bella is 16, but how old is Edward and now we find out he has a fiance, Is he just using Bella as a quick fuck.. great chapter as always can not wait to read more
Author's Response: hi
thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story.
enjoy the rest of the story
here is a teaser for chapter 6
I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging.
"Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly.
He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her.
"What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
So good - I do have a question though, in the first chapter you stated that Bella had always dreamed that Edward Masen would come into her school and carry her out like "The Officer and Gentlement", so will this be happening?
Can't wait to find out where this will be going.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. To answer your question. no that won't be happening even though I would love for it to happen. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love it, If you send out teasers how will that work. OOO edward parents are there. That was sweet of em to invite angela as his guest. Update soon.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
hi, robsessed, i love how bella puts mike and lauren in their places... can't wait for the next chapter...
pls update soon,xo.lavanya.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
love it, can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to more
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am loving this story. I can't wait for the next update. I am glad Angela got to come along. The other kids at school are so mean. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all.
here is a teaser for chapter 4
"I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things.
"I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed.
He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me.
"Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?"
I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth.
My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if its this exciting when it happens in real life ...meetting your favorite movie star ...so excited to see what he does to make her dreams come true
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad that everything went well for Riley, it could have all gone badly wrong. Now he seems to have found his feet and his voice, Lauren's so stupid she can't see that, or doesn't want to, that everything that happens to her is of her own doing.
So it looks as though Bella is going to manage to stay upright and not faint, well so far anyway. Will Alice be squealing when she meets Jasper? Lol. How lucky is Angela getting to go to the party, just wait until Lauren hears about this.
BTW, I think it's weird that there are different ages of consent in the states, surely they should just all be able to agree on one age and stick to it.
Jane x
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whoooo loved it
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all.
here is a teaser for chapter 4
"I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things.
"I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed.
He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me.
"Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?"
I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth.
My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it :)
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
i really like this story so far, but you might want to consider formatting your chapters a little more. It can get difficult to read.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving your story...can't wait for more.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Gotta love emmie he is great. Keep up the fan work.
Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
God to be 16 again... If I could turn back time
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
It's an enchanting story so far. It is well written and I'm looking forward to reading morchapters.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2.
until then here is a teaser to keep you going.
was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life.
Somebody tapped me on the shoulder.
"Miss Swan?"
I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company.
Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered.
"My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic."
As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen.
"I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
hey robsessed, i like the story ,pls update soon, xo,lavanya.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really love this story! I just came across it and read it straight through. I really would love a teaser for the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2.
until then here is a teaser to keep you going.
was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life.
Somebody tapped me on the shoulder.
"Miss Swan?"
I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company.
Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered.
"My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic."
As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen.
"I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I hope the bet with Lauren doesn't have a bad effect on Riley, knowing that he has a massive crush on her and then her kissing him, out of the blue, like that, well this could seriously mess with his head. He might be the smelly kid at school but he still has feelings. I didn't think that Lauren would actually go through with it.
All of a sudden Bella has a hundred new best friends, God kids are shallow and I'm so glad that she recognises them for what they are. Lol, Mike was a bit desperate wasn't he. At least Bella and Alice are now friends with Angela, I get the impression she was a bit of a loner.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hearing from Edward and his family.
Jane x
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter - I can't wait to meet Edward family, also, what he wil think of our Bella. Really two-weeks, that will kill me.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2.my other story will be up in 2 weeks. All alone will be up every week. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. I was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
Date: 01 Sep 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
looking forard to more
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
Date: 01 Sep 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is there any possibility of an HEA for Edward and Bella?
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. and of course there will be an happily ever after for edward and bella. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
Date: 01 Sep 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
awesome chapter
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start so far :-)))
It's bad that both girls would have to move away because of her becoming pregnant or is she trying to hide that from the people who live in their town? Is there the possibility while they move to LA she will run into Edward?
Till next time!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am so happy that you are enjoying the story so far.
there is a lot of drama to come
here is a teaser for chapter 2
Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face.
"I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed.
Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion.
"Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?"
Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital.
"Yes dear" Esme replied.
Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand.
What is the little pixie up to now?
She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter.
"Ali, what is all this?"
"Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself.
I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant.
"OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lol, I remember that feeling as a teenager having a crush on an actor or pop star, mine was on Simon Le Bon from Duran Duran, hahaha, now I'm showing my age.
I love this, I totally got swept up in their excitement. I can't wait to find out how Lauren gets on with Riley, lol. I bet she was like a screaming banshee at that studio door.
Jane x
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:17 PM Title: Prologue
Cant wait x
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope that you enjoy this story.
I really enjoy reading all reviews and there is a lot of drama to come.
here's a teaser to chapter 2
Teaser for chapter 2 of All Alone.
Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face.
"I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed.
Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion.
"Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?"
Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital.
"Yes dear" Esme replied.
Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand.
What is the little pixie up to now?
She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter.
"Ali, what is all this?"
"Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself.
I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant.
"OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:16 PM Title: Prologue
Is it really hurt and disappointment that she thinks she sees in her family's eyes or is she mistaken? Do Esme and Carlisle actually know she's running away or has she lied to them? I wouldn't really expect them to be condoning this behaviour or helping Bella like this, unless there are other things we don't know about Bella's family, but she said she has the greatest parents.
Great start, intriguing.
Jane x
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope that you enjoy this story. I really enjoy reading all reviews and there is a lot of drama to come. here's a teaser to chapter 2 Teaser for chapter 2 of All Alone. Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it cant wait for the nxt update x
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story.
Here is a teaser for chapter 2
Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face.
"I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed.
Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion.
"Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?"
Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital.
"Yes dear" Esme replied.
Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand.
What is the little pixie up to now?
She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter.
"Ali, what is all this?"
"Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself.
I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant.
"OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story the look on lauren's face will be priceless
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 2 Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 2 Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
So good - I am excited to see where and why she has to leave Forks. What really happens at the party. Until next week.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 2 Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.