[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
LA here we come. I'm glad that they're going to have someone to stay with who are still related to Alice. I can't believe Bella's parents were so cruel to her, they've made everything much worse than it needed to be. I still think Edward's reaction is over the top. Everyone gets their heart broken at some point in their life, yes he was young but is he really going to let that one experience dictate the rest of his life? By his own admittance he had to make Bella his, he's denying everything he feels for Bella because of one experience and the possibility it might happen again. He's going to be sad and lonely if he doesn't change.
Jane x
Date: 19 Dec 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
when is edward gonna start bein nice... geeze
Date: 18 Dec 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Eeekkk Edward u jerk
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this so far and cant wait to read more. I cant believe that Edward is being suck a dick, Cant wait to see him get whats coming to him! Hope you can update again soon.
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU TOO. I HOPE BELLA CHANGES HER LAST NAME AND MAKES SOMETHING OF HERSELF BIGGER FAME THAN EDWARD.AND HER AND BABIES ARE FINE,SHOW HIM.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it can't wait for more:)
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter loved it hope you update soon
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
can't wait for more
Date: 18 Dec 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Incredible chapter. I cannot hardly wait until the jerk to his senses and realizes what a mess he has made for Bella. I am very happy
Date: 18 Dec 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
He keeps getting worse and worse. I hope things start to turn around soon for Bella. The poor girl has already suffered so much.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Poor Bella! I've never hated an Edward as much as I do this one. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope this fresh start works for Bella and the baby needs. I am glad that Alice will be there too. I hope Irina and Kate don't make a lot of trouble for Bella and Alice. I see Edward is still being a jerk. He is going to have so much to make up for and I don't know if he can after the things he has done. I can't wait to see what is next for the girls. Great job....thanks so much!!!
Date: 18 Dec 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait till Esme and Carlise let Edward have it! Is this a HEA for Edward and Bella? Please update soon.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
I have been reading this on FF and love it.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think se into Edward.
edward is a real prick. he needs sone sence knocked into him. He has an inflated ego.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love Bella in this story but I really hate her parents and Edward right now I hope. Ella gets her happy ending some time !
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love the story. I hope jasper and Emmett kick Edwards ass. Hurry back with more. Keep up the great work.
Date: 18 Dec 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
pretty sure that would be libel
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I just hope that Carlile and Esme put him in his place when he shows up I think I would tape his conversation then send that to the tabloids ..him coming to take her and make her get an abortion ...shame she doesnt have a big brother that could kick his ass ...let Alice at him we need emmett on our side for this
Date: 18 Dec 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
I want the boy's head on a platter. Can't wait till his lies come back to haunt him......and I hope they do. Serve him right if Jasper rats him out and disowns him.
MORE!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
The lying SOB, urrrrrrrrr!
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter I can't wait for the next one !
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
having a 16 year old and having a baby..be there done that ..i am appaled at her parents actions ....but her new famly is a stong bondd for her and the baby ....ick this edward really sucks
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
It's official I hate Charlie & Renee worse than Edward. Thank heavens for Esme, Carlisle & Alice. Edward's heart was broken Emily but Bella's not her and he needs to straighten up. I think he really likes Bella but what happened is standing in his way.
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it! Poor Bella!
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
So if they r in la wont they b closer to e and j?
Hate ur swans.....so cruel
la la land here we come
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[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
ok E is an arse.....he got his heart broken in HS and now he's that jaded???? there has to be more to it than that
Hope Charlie and Renee get run over by a logging truck. What arseholes.
So glad Esme and Carlisle are there for them.
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
How awful of Bella's parents to treat her that way. It will be interesting to see how it progresses through her pregnancy. Also, her being in LA, where Edward is. I can't wait to see how he ends up finding out.
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to mroe
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ok so Edward got his heart broken. That is sad, but what he is doing to Bella is just wrong. I am shocked at the stance Charlie and Renee are taking. This is their loss. Thank god Bella has the Cullen's to stand by her. I think the move is going to be good for Bella. I hope Edward pulls his head out if his butt soon. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it :)
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Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
I still don't like Edward. Did Emily have a baby too? Bella's parents are the worst parents ever!!!! I'm glad she has someone to be on her side. Can't wait for the update. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
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Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I could kill Charlie and Renee I hope Bella gets to keep her baby.
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[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward needs to wake up. Hurry back with more. I feel for Bella.
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[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
The sad answer to Bella's question is yes, the day could get worse. Will her parents think he same as Edward, that she should get rid of the baby or will they have another plan? The news would have been better coming from Bella but life's a bitch some times. Edward's being such a dick about all this. He has all these thoughts in his head and it almost seems like he might be able to have a rational conversation and actually find out the truth and reveal something of his true self as well. But no, he just has to revert back to being a teenaged dickhead who has his head so far up his own arse he can't see what's right in front of him.
For all Bella's naivety and the rose coloured glasses she sees the world through, she doesn't deserve to be treated like this. She's going to need to be a strong girl to get through this.
Jane x
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Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
poor B going to get to get it from Ma and Pa now too. Eddie is such a pussy right now.
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Date: 07 Dec 2012 1:04 AM Title: Prologue
So glad you are back!! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
can't wait for more
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it...Can't wait to find out more.
Thanks for update and post next one soon :)
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[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
:)
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[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a sh*tstorm! Edward is an ASSHOLE!
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more :)
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, man!! That really sucks. I think I hate this Edward. Poor Bella. I can't wait for the next update. Thank you for writing. I am so glad you updated today!! Love it.
Lisa
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope Bella gets some sort of break from some where and all I can say is that I really hate Edward right now.
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Jesus...this is so bad...why the hell did she go screaming in a diner of a small town...the paps will be there in a few days at the most...
Still lovin it...waitin on more!
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
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[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Excellent chapter. Please update soon because this one is a huge cliffhanger. You really did well with tnis chapter.
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[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter, keep them coming..
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Date: 05 Dec 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh No! Please let that jackass Edward get his act together I don't like this Edward much hoping he will change thanks.
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[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear! Bella has already got to Edward, he can't sleep with any other girl that's a brunette. He's in denial about how much he's actually fallen for her, by his own admittance she is his dream girl. I just hope that when he sees Bella he's not going to be a total dick. I can understand his reaction to the news of the baby and why he would feel tricked, I mean it that age of 16 if you asked someone if they were taking contraception you would expect them to know what you were talking about. Edward can't be held responsible for Bella's naivety.
Jane x
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Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Edward is a jerk! Poor Bella!
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Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
loved it! Emmett is hilarious!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella pregnant at 16 :(
Edward should take responsibility of the baby how can he even think about killing a baby.Too bad.But I don't think he would do the right thing.
I hope she could be strong and take care of herself and her baby.I know too young but something should be done.
I love this story.I wish u a happy and safe trip.Please update as soon as you are back.Can't wait here:)
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[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
:)
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yes....Bella is too young to have this baby. She was too young to sleep with Edward, too. But the baby is on it's way now. It shouldn't be punished because of it's parent's mistake. Edward needs to man-up and take responsibility for this baby and Bella. And I don't mean abortion.
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward needs an attitude adjustment and I can't wait to see who gives it to him. They are both young, but Bella didn't do this on her own. He better not demand she get an abortion, but I am guessing that is what he will do. Great job...thanks!!!
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
edward is so very young has to grow up he is being an ass
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it :)
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a question we all know our Bella and that she will keep her baby because she loves it (and that is the right thing to do) and Eddie has to suffer untill he gets to his right mind/sense ! So please go on with your story, I love it!!!
Tiina
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[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Please ypdate sooner rather than later. This story really has me on edge. I sincerely hope he not going to be a complete idiot. Great job with the premise and the suspense. Thanks for writing.
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
comme d'habitude elle va le garder et l'élever et ils vont se rencontrer des années plus tard
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter!! Ugh stupid Edward, Can't wait to read more when you get back! Have a great vacation!
-Kate
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[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Eddiw...you are such a delusional moron. Someone should have hit him more adn harder.
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to more
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Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well we knew this was coming. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Edward better change his tune real fast. It is not all Bella's problem to deal with. I hope Edward has had a horrible month!!! I am glad that Jasper is there for Bella. I am sure Esme is going to be a big help too. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story.
Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia.
I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was.
She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes.
"Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice.
I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do.
"Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face.
Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said.
I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back.
"Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok...I am guessing that is Tanya and she is not his fiancé. She just wants to get rid of Bella. Now did Bella sleep with him too quick...twice....yes, but now she will just have to pick herself up and go on with life. I love that she snubbed Jessica...she deserved it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow...that was awesome, but I am so worried about Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
He is finally there. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. I love Emmett. I am so glad he got Angela into the party. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Charlie was so sweet to Bella. I love that he has been saving to buy her a dress. I am glad the girls have gotten to be so close with Angela. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! The girls were so funny. I can just see them doing their happy dance and Esme smiling at them. I can't wait for Lauren's kiss, but I feel bad for Riley. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 3:41 PM Title: Prologue
Sounds interesting. I can't wait to catch up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
I do wish that Bella would have confronted Edward or at the very least that Edward would have told Jasper the truth but then it wouldn't be much of a story if everything was happy-happy. I love this story and even though the thought of such a long wait for the next update I hope you have fun in Australia:-)
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter... and yeah Alice really should have told her right away. Can't wait to read more when you get back from vacation!
-Kate
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I definitely like the story, but too bad you can't update daily! I know with RL it's hard to get that done though. Poor Bella, she just keeps getting the wrong info and running with it. And Edward...what to say about him? I love him of course, who wouldn't jump into bed with him if given the chance, but damn, he needs a beating. I can't wait til he finds out about the baby!
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Surely hope Lisa gets fired...at least not allowed to work with Eddie anymore. Glad Jazz and Alice both punched him in the face. What a prick. Glad she has Esme and Alice.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hi I really love this story.This is so cool...
Please send me a teaser of next chapter...
And update soon...please:)
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think she should not have ran away again. She should have confronted Edward. He really acted like an ass though with Jasper and Alice. I'm usually on his side, but I was glad that he got beat up a little. Bella did lead him to believe that she was on the pill.
Thank you for writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm loving this story. Please send me a teaser of the next chapter.
Lisa
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story.
Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia.
I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was.
She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes.
"Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice.
I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do.
"Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face.
Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said.
I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back.
"Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it :)
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jesus what a mess! Love it, waitin for more!
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story.
Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia.
I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was.
She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes.
"Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice.
I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do.
"Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face.
Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said.
I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back.
"Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I've been looking for an update of this story everyday when I log into TWCS. It is awesome and intriguing and so so sweet and loyal in others. Plesse update often.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story.
Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia.
I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was.
She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes.
"Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice.
I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do.
"Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face.
Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said.
I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back.
"Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
*throws hands up in the air* They are all to blame for this situation. I can't believe that none of them actually talk to each other, it's almost like they're 14, not older. I'm beginning to feel sorry for Edward, he's getting all the blame for this and, although he's been a dick and up himself, it's not all his fault. He needs to shout a bit louder to be heard instead of making throw away remarks about Bella dealing with the pregnancy herself.
Alice! What can I say? A best friend should never be afraid of saying the hard things. Bella may have been upset with her, angry even but like she said she could have gone to get the morning after pill. Then again, Bella has no excuse for being so clueless about contraception at her age and knowing Edward's a player she should have insisted he used a condom. Oh my God, I can't believe how stupid all of them have been.
Of course we all know how Edward truly feels about Bella but she just thinks she's been used. She should really try contacting him to tell him she's pregnant but I guess she's going to do what teenagers do best, run and hide. *shakes head and sighs*
I'm looking forward to see what happens next. Oh, and I'm so happy she threw up on Lauren and Jessica, lol.
Jane x
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
His behind needs to feel the same wraths that she will be filling when this gets out. He is a douch bag with all his immature comments. Who's the adult here, really! BTW I Love the story. UPDATE SOONNNN!
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh god nooooooooo. what is she going to do edward is a bastard and doesn't really care
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would want to kill Edward. For his attitude alone. I liked it! Thanks!
Author's Response: thank you for the review. I really enjoy reading them all and I love writing this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 7 of All Alone. If all goes well then I should have it up before I leave for australia. I suddenly felt tears come to my eyes. I don't know what to do. I know that Edward has a right to know that he is going to be a father but I also think that what he doesn't know won't hurt him. I was about to say this to Alice when I heard someone coming in the front door. Alice put her finger to her lips telling us to be quiet and then left the room to see who it was. She came back a few minutes later with Esme. Esme looked at us with a worried look in her eyes. "Is someone going to tell me what is going on or do I have to contact both Angela and Bella's parents and tell them they are ditching school," she said with a worried tone in her voice. I looked at Alice silently asking her what I should do. "Bella, I think that we should tell my mother what is going on. She will know what to do," she whispered with a weak smile on her face. Big fat tears started falling from my eyes. Esme came over to me and pulled me in for a hug. "Whatever you have to say Bella, it can't be all bad," she said. I nodded against her shoulder and pulled back. "Esme, I'm pregnant and I don't know what to do. Please help me," I cried as she pulled me in for another hug.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Guessing it was skankya lying on the phone. She did actually let E off the hook kinda easy.
Author's Response: Hi thanks for the review. I really enjoy reading them and I'm happy that you are enjoying the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 which is with the beta at the moment I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well Alice tried to warn her. Ugh B....the Pill is an important question. And I can't belive a manwhore doesnt keep condoms handy.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
awww glad Em got to get Nagela in. Good for Riley dumping the slut
Date: 23 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
ROFL for making Lauren keep the bet.