Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 14
Alec came with them didn't he. She would not be excited to see Edward. Not at this point hopefully soon though.
I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is one big clusterfuck. Edward has finally come around and there is nothing he can do. There are so many people interfering.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wonder if Seth planted him there to help Bella.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
No fuckinh way. Elizabeth better not of told him. If she did Bella better sue her.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is right about one thing it is her body and no one can make her do something with it that she doesn't want to. I don't know about Washington. But in some states when a girl becomes pregnant she becomes emancipated. She is a legal adult and can not be forced to have a abortion or keep a baby she doesn't want.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad she is getting out of there. That is not a good place for her or the baby. Hopefully she will be able to get lost in LA.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Bella. She really is in a horrible situation.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
It has to be a shock. Bella did tell him she was on the pill so I have a hard time blaming him 100% for thinking she tricked him. But really he chose not to use protection. Even if she was on the pill it's not 100% effective.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
While Edward should always use protection Bella should of made sure he did. If she is old enough to have sex then she is old enough to be responsible. I just feel sorry that she is all alone right now.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Okay. I don't believe Edward is engaged for one second.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
They had list goggles on so of course they were not thinking rationally. If Edward really thought about it he would realize that a virgin would most likely not be on the pill. Even if she was on the pill to help with her periods it wouldn't be a strong enough dose to prevent a pregnancy. Silly children.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
great chap. the person that came with Carlisle and Esme is probably Bella`s brother.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I JUST STARTED READING AND SO FAR IT'S REALLY GREAT. I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE NEXT 10 CHAPTERS AND I'LL LET YOU KNOW HOW IT'S GOING WHEN I REACH CHAPTER 14..... SEE YOU THEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Aww. The big movie star was star struck. Lol
Emmett is great by the way.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I feel bad for Riley. The guy seems okay, someone just needs to pull him aside and tell him the facts of personal hygine.
Date: 12 Mar 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
God that is every teenage girls dream. Okay and maybe their moms too. Lol
Date: 12 Mar 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, he really needs to grovel and prove over time that he is for real.
Date: 11 Mar 2013 10:30 PM Title: Prologue
Oh this seems really interesting.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
I would guess her brother maybe. Alec? I hope it's a family so she doesn't feel like she doesn't have blood family with her.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well first very good chapter, keep up the good work. Second everyone is going tto say Edward, but I say it is her brother. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
ALEC, EDWARD, I DON'T KNOW!
Date: 11 Mar 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hhhmmmmm......I think it's Edward talking to Jasper. Am I right?
Date: 11 Mar 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
I still think our boy is still a little bit of a man whore ,and oh hell no he has not even suffered a half of what I think he should ...but we have to think of whats best for Bella baby ....a daddy woullnd be nice
Date: 11 Mar 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
I think the person that showed up is Emmett. I don't think she should forgive him very quickly. He has done some really rotten things to her. Especially by denying that the baby was his and letting the whole town know her business. That was terrible. Edward has so much to make up for, and that should take time. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well it must be Edward, who else would make her pass out! No, she can't forgive quickly, but hope she does! Yes, I think he's honestly sorry!
Date: 10 Mar 2013 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it is Elizabeth on the couch. I don't think that Jasper would let Edward into his house.
I think Edward feels some remorse, but certainly not enough. Him f*cking other women(even when Bella was there for her OB/GYN appt!) when Bella is pregnant with his child would be unforgiveable for most people in real life. But this is fiction, and we ALWAYS want E&B together, so if Bella does forgive him, he is going to have to work very, very, very, very hard to earn her trust.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Her brother is my first guess. Second guess would be Emmett maybe but I don't that would be faint worthy.
I do believe that Edward is sorry & that he really wants to be with Bella & the baby; sometimes you have to lose something to realize what you had & what it really ment to you. However, I'm glad that he's having a hard time finding her. He should have to publicly apologize to Bella in front of everyone for her to for to even want to talk to him, not forgive him or even find her just talk, on the phone. Maybe a press conference or something.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
I say it is her brother. Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
ah so it was Irina who called. What a skank. Glad Sam and Seth protected Bella from him.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Was it Edward!!! I hope it was I'm really glad he got his head out of his ASS
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
My guess is alec..
Date: 10 Mar 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Think i gonna say her dad,can't see esme and carlisle letting on to edward jasper either for that matter. Xx
Date: 10 Mar 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to more
Date: 10 Mar 2013 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm going to say either Edward or her Dad.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2013 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think it's her dad
Date: 06 Mar 2013 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
This story should come with a warning - Read at your own risk!! It is so wonderful and addictive. I could not stop reading until I had read it all.
Please update as soon as you can!!!!!!
I really hope that Edward’s intentions are good but think, that Bella should not forgive him very easily. And that Alice and Bella are safe.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2013 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Idk what Carmen has up her sleeves, honestly I'm wondering what she wants from him. Edward, I do believe is trying to do the right thing & I do believe that he cares for her (I'm going to call it love yet) but I'm also thinking that once Bella rejects him & calls him a lier he's going to turn into a jerk again.
Jasper's place is honestly the safest place right now, he'll protect Alice & Bella. I'm also glad that Carlisle & Esme are going to LA. Hopefully they are moving there, they should've done that from the beginning but then again most people don't think that family is going to betray them. I hope Elizar devorces Carmen kicks her out & cuts off Kate. Heidi is possibly innocent of this plot, though she may choose to go with her mother. Sure hope there's was a prenup.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter thank you. ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope Edwards intentions are good but we will wait and see.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hope that Esme beats the crap out of Carmen and Kate for this. Wonder if Elizar knows?
Lemme guess, Jake is the mystery caller? or Heidi? hmmmm Evil Cliffy Monsters
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Don't know what Carmenis up to, but it's a good little mystery.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
MORE!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
A great chapter and good to know someone else remembers Atlantic 252! :)
Date: 02 Mar 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE IT Give me more!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
I REALLY LIKED THE CHAPTER BUT WHAT THE HELL GOT UP CARMEN'S ASS WHAT IS IT SHE IS TRYING TO DO TO BELLA? IF BELLA WOULD JUST TALK TO EDWARD AGAIN MAYBE SHE WOULD SEE HE LOVE HER AND WANTS THERE BABY SHE NEEDS TO GIVE HIM A CHANCE.
Date: 02 Mar 2013 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Die Carmen, die!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Carmen is a snake...as for what she is doing..no clue! She sure bred some fine upstanding young ladies! Hmmm...
I so love Alice. She and her family are my heros. Jacob kind of scared me tho, not sure his deal yet...if any. Can't wait for more. I know her hormones are about to start shooting through the roof soon, so I hope something positive can come from the next step that is taken. So far, nothing but let down. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter!!! Please update soon..Please..PLEASE
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wtf carmen??? How did he change his mind so quick? Whatever...help from jazz and maybe an ultrasound soon? I feel like liz is gettin played too.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love this story, I hope Edward can get his stuff together and hope Bella is safe. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Pleas please update again soon ! And please please let Bella and Edward get together !
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
A bit of wishful dreaming from Bella whilst Edward is still whoring himself around and ignoring all those little thoughts he keeps having about Bella. I'm really glad that he actually wants to talk to Bella properly and explain why he's been the way he has and that he wants to discuss where they go from here. I'm not sure who is the bigger bitch Kate or Irina and what's going on with Carmen? I don't trust her, there's something not right about her. She acts all nicey nice but there's something else underlying and then there's the way she takes every opportunity to point out Bella's pregnancy. I think she's very two faced but I just can't work out what she's up to. I'll have to reserve judgement on Jake, at the moment he seems nice but then in that type of LA lifestyle it could all be an act.
Jane x
Date: 17 Feb 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love Alice in this story.
Date: 17 Feb 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
No, I don't want him anywhere near her, he is a dog. thinking about bella and the electricity and taking the bimbo in the copy room is just wrong.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
love it
Date: 15 Feb 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so worried for Bella. She doesn't really have the support in LA. I hate they have to be around Carmen and the girls. School is not going to be good. I was glad Bella didn't see what Edward was doing with the secretary. He needs to change his ways and fast. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2013 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait for the next chapter , please update soon
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
I truly hope that Bella develop a tight friendship with Jacob so Edward learn his lesson on how to treat a lady.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
I HATE Edward! Bella is there at the clinic and he is in the copy room f*cking some whore!.
Glad Bella will be getting a new OB/GYN.
I want to kill Carmen and that bitch, Kate
Date: 14 Feb 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait for more
Date: 14 Feb 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
I wish Edward had seen her then she runs away.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad he didn't see Bella at the clinic but I think they really need to get out of that house. Carmen is not to be trusted. I'm wondering if she wants the baby so she can try to pass it off as her daughter Kate's baby & be a huge publicity thing for her family. If so what will happen to Bella? I hope Carlisle & Esme come to LA & save Bella from the 3 witches before their evil plan can come into play.
Esme as Bella's dr? I don't know. I see that as being the first red flag. They need to disappear somewhere else. But for the sake of the story I know that won't happen. I hope Elizar sees what his wife & daughters are doing & kicks them out & cuts them off before the end of the story. He seems like a good guy.
Date: 14 Feb 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to more
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad Edward didn't see Bella. I still don't like him at all. I am not usually a fan of Jacob, but in this story I hope he is a good guy. Bella needs someone good. Thanks for the update.
Lisa
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
grrr I usually like Kate. What a skank. They need to tell Carmen about this. hmmm now Why is Carmen afraid for Esme to come out? That sounds like a story. Edwhore appears again. ugh. If Kate knows E, then B is just as in danger as before cause you know K will go tell him just to spite B. Ah Jake. Dunno what to think about that.
Date: 13 Feb 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the chapter. Too bad Edward still doesn't seem to have redeemable qualities yet. Hurry back with more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
FIRST I DIDN'T DO SO GOOD ON REVIEWING I'M SORRY I DO NEED TO SAY I LOVE THE STORY HOPE YOU ARE POSTING MORE CHAPTERS SOON
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
THEY SHOULD LET EDWARD KNOW ABOUT THE BABY.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
bella is a fool for running she should have waited and told him of the phone call and let him explan thats the child in her still. and no this chapter i feel better about edward i don't think he is a jurk at all bella should have had there talk before falling back into bed and sex with edward, i bet if she had she would have found out that woman is just an easy fuck to him. i'm still loving your story
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
for your first lemon it was good. the way edward talked to bella he did sound like a player so he just fucks them and leaves them right? she is going to be having his baby isn't she, damn bella said yes to his question of being on the pill and she isn't is she? fuck what is she going to do? she's running away not going to tell him about the baby right? i'm betting alice tells jasper and it gets back to edward some how.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
it was very nice of emmett to give a pass to angela for the party and meeting edward well i do believe i'd be speachless even meeting rob wow would send me over the edge he's so young and i'm so old but hell i'm not dead i know a good looking man when i see one i can only dream.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
well they have there dresses thats great and charlie was so nice to hand over his card like that i was thinking that the ticket would get stolen but i guess not.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
so bella won thats great but your esme isn't like the one in the twlight movies she would never do the things your esme is doing she is not being a good protector of the girls helping them lie the bella's mom and dad. not good at all
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2013 9:22 AM Title: Prologue
your first chapter is so small but small or not i'm hooked i like it already
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Please write more a can not wait for it to be finished. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my God! I can't believe he's there. It's bad enough that his mum is Bella's doctor but at least she's bound by confidentiality. She didn't engineer this did she? I hope Bella can hold it together, it should be clear to Edward by now that Bella isn't going to be told what to do. Irina ia a complete bitch and from what Alice has said she should be sat there thinking 'but for the grace of God there go I' because she could so easily be in Bella's situation.
I can't wait for the next update.
Jane x
Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:31 PM Title: Prologue
Sounds very interesting!!!!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good story. I really want her to keep Edward at a distance. He can be a part of the baby life. But Bella shouldn't let him be a part of her life til he get some proffesional help. And start paying child support. She needs to keep her option open.
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really love this story - sorry i haven't reviewed before now but I had started reading your story a few hours ago and couldn't stop. It is nearly 3am here is Australia so I need to hit the hay but I can't wait to read more
Date: 30 Jan 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit...idk if I can handle anymore I'll will towards bella...
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder if Carmen knows Edward, and she is the one who told him? I think Carmen is hoping to gain something by having Edward's baby mama living with her.
Irina - I would love to see her head shaved! What a bitch!
Eleazer is a sweetheart!
So worried about Bella - school is going to be hell, and she has to deal with f*cking Edward, too!
Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
It was worth the wait I can't stand Irina shes just jealous I'm sure Alice will put her in her place.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG, Bella just walked into the pits of hell! She doesn't stand a chance coming out of any of this unscathed. I already hate Carmen and irena. She just can't catch a break but since you say there is a HEA, then I definitely don't mind the bumpy ride. Good story. I can't wait til the next update and what Edward will do.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter thank you.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter. hopefully bella gets out of there before edward sees her. Apparently Dr. Masen can't keep dr. patient confidentiality. send a review please
Date: 29 Jan 2013 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella. Stuck in a house with a bitch that is Irina, being cared for my E's mom??? and now running into or possibly running into E? Poor kid