Date: 02 May 2013 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope it is a little boy, just like Edward. Edward is being so sweet. He has been honest. I wish Bella would be honest and say she was lying about being on birth control. He asked and she lied. She is not innocent in this situation. Edward flipped out, but has explained his behavior. She has not told everyone that she did lie to Edward about being on birth control. She is not a victim. The family needs to know the whole truth, so they can all heal and become a solid family. Edward deserves not to be seen as a bod guy.
Date: 02 May 2013 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wonder how Esme will react to what Sandy said. I think it makes sense to slowly build trust and a relationship especially after the horrible way Edward treated Bella. He is the baby's father so, she does need to let Edward participate in all things baby related. I like the fact that they are neighbors now. Good chapter. I hope it's a boy ... and a girl, twins.
Date: 01 May 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
That's a great place to have a cliffy, I don't have a preference on the sex, it's your story. Honestly I'm the type of person I'd rather wait till the birth to find out what the baby is, that's one of the best surprises.
Next chapter please.
Date: 01 May 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, Edward is definitely going to encounter a lot of roadblocks...he already has. He is going to have to be honest with BBella, even if he thinks it's going to hurt her. I am surprised Carlisle didn't not inform Edward of Emily and the relationship they have with her mother. The sick demented plans that were made and the ideas in those sick heads...to many players, not enough direct or any rules. I hope there are twins...I'd also love one of each, please?! Can't wait for the next chapter...love it so far.
Date: 21 Apr 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Right away what Carmen was saying to Esme didn't make sense. Why would she have the abortion if it was his baby, a simple DNA test would of proven it. The. To hear the while story I don't doubt Edwards side at all.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well I'm an old softy so I think Bella should give him a chance. How on earth did Emily hope to get away with trying to pass the baby off as Edward's? Fifteen weeks pregnant! Imagine if he'd fell for it and then the baby came early, say be two weeks (my daughter was nine days early), which would actually make the baby around six weeks early in Edwardland, it would be the biggest premature baby ever. Emily's story fell down when she said that Edward told her if she could prove the baby was his then he'd stand by her and if she couldn't she should have an abortion. If Edward had truly been the father then she would have been sitting crying to Carmen still pregnant. It was awful what happened to Carmen, being a victim of domestic abuse and then Emily being taken away by James whilst she was in hospital. I don't understand why she never told Eleazar, I'm sure he would have been understanding and would have probably helped her trace Emily. Carmen has either been played by her daughter or they cooked Emily's story up together. After a comment Jacob made at the party, I think they cooked it up together.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella should definately give him a chance. He is the babies father. The second reason is that she may be mad at him, but she still loves him. Edward was very hurt at a young age and he never really got over it ,so he lashed out. He has told her the truth and wants a chance to prove his love again. They all deserve to be a whole happy family. Bella was just as responsible for getting pregnant. She can't blame that on him. She did lie to him about being on birth control. That is not something you lie about.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Women are a evil sort...oh yes we are! What's the saying...about a scorned woman? All true. Anyway, I believe Bella should of course let him in slowly. She can't just forget what happened, she may forgive...but that's a big step. Carmen is in for a shock, apparently. I can't wait to read what happens with Jacob too. Seems he is in the mix with carme and Kate...what a sour soup they make. What's going to happen when Esme gets involved? Can you imagine what Eleazar is going to think...and then keeping it a secret? When will Emily come out of her hole? So many questions...thanks for the update.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
NATURALLY I'D LIKE TO SEE BELLA'S FORGIVING NATURE OVER RIDE ALL OTHER NEGATIVE FEELINGS BUT... THAT!!! WILL BE UP TO YOU. AS FAR AS CARMEN'S TRIP I'D LIKE TO SEE BELLA AND EDWARD UNITE AGAINST HER AND ANYONE ELSE CAUSING TROUBLE FOR THEM. BUT..... AGAIN IT'S ALL UP TO YOU. IT BE NICE TO SEE THEM RIDE THIS OUT IN TRUE EDWARD AND BELLA STYLE.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't hate Edward as much as I did. He still has to do more though. I think Bella will let him be a part of their lives, but I don't think she will let him be her boyfriend yet. I can't imagine what plan B Carmen has in store. I am sure it won't work though. Thanks for writing. I would love a teaser for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
"He had told her, if she could prove that the baby was his then he would support her, but if she couldn't then the only way he would remain with her was if she had an abortion"
Sounds to me like Emily wasn't sure about the daddy herself. Carmen needs to place the blame on Emily too. E said he would support it if it were his. Carmen's plan A was a pussy move to begin with.
Esme POV: Wow carmen still hasnt told Eleazar or the girls about Emily?
BPOV: Gotta love Alice.
EPOV: Poor stuttering B. glad Jazz laid down some rules. Good friend he is. Ah so B is going to learn some Jake info. oooh That explains why he thought the kid wouldn't be his. Wow I kinda understand his reaction a little to B, but his lies were overboard. He still has a lot to make up for. I like the present and his speech though.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
That's a lot to take in. I believe Edward's story though, not Carmen's. So question, is what Carmen said the story Emily told her or did Carmen make that story herself? I'm gonna guess Emily spun that story since. I'm not surprised that happened or that turned out the way she did. James sounded like a horrible man & to raise basically on his own like that, yeah not surprised she turned out like that. Still though, Carmen don't exactly smell like roses herself, she's a real piece of work & doesn't care who she has to hurt to get what she wants. I still hope Elizar wises up & leaves her ass & cuts his kids off to teach them to behave.
Next chapter please.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Would love a teaser for the next. I think Bella is going to be a mix of emotions. First hurt then anger and then she will tell him that they have to go slow and can start as friends. But she has to tell him about meeting jake at Carmen's party. So he knows jake is up to something. Hurry back
Author's Response: I stood up and looked him straight in the eyes. "I do not trust you after everything that you have put me through but I do believe that you are genuine, which is the only reason that I am giving you this chance to prove yourself. Do you accept these conditions," I asked as i put my hand out to shake his. He took my hand and held it while he looked into my eyes. "I wish that it could be different but I accept these conditions. I will prove to you that the love that I have for you and our baby are true and I promise you that I will not let you down," he said sadly. He continued to hold my hand as if he was afraid that i would dissapear if he left go. He looked at me with so much sorrow, sadness and love that it made me breathless. We continued to look at each other without speaking any words when I heard a throat clearing behind us.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
She wanted the baby and Emily is her daughter! I take it that as Esme doesn't know about Emily that Carmen had her before meeting Esme's brother and marrying him. Does he know about Emily? I bet Carmen was also after a shed load of child maintenance as well, nice easy life bringing up a child with all that money. That baby would have been a massive cash cow for her, thank God her plans have been thwarted. I thought the interview went well but I felt that Edward couldn't really say much because his reasons for behaving the way he did are all wrapped up with Emily. I can't wait for him and Bella to talk so we can have the story there.
Date: 29 Mar 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
How could Esme not know of a daughter names Emily. Edward is not that much older than Bella. If he was Carlisle and or Charlie , would probably have him up on charges of statutory rape. No one makes you choose abortion. It is a personal choice. I can't wait to hear from Edward. Carmen is crazy and wants one of her children to have his baby. The other two are whoring after him. He needs to change his number asap.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
So that's what all this is about with her, she wants the baby. But exactly why is my question. Does she really feel like Edward owes her a grandchild or does she just want the baby for braging rights, "Edward Masen fathered my grand baby." So good, I'm glad the story on Emily will finally be known.
Im not big on the cliffy but I didn't think you'd give everything away this chapter. Plus it gives me some knowledge on what the next chapter will contain.
Date: 27 Mar 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
So how does she have a daughter that Esme doesn't know about? I Emily a lot older than the other girls? I can't wait to see what Edward has to say to Bella.
I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing. Lisa
Author's Response: hi. thanks for the review. chapter 17 is almost finished but here is a teaser to keep u going fiona xo “If you have another child then how come Eleazer never told us and how come we never even met her?” She paused as she thought. I knew that she was trying to think of a right answer. “I never told him. I had an abusive boyfriend before we ever met and I had a daughter out of that relationship. He disappeared when she was on six months with her and we were only reunited five and a half years ago,” she said sadly. I shook my head knowing that I had enough. Carlisle took my hand and told me with his eyes that he has also had enough and that it was time to leave. I turned to leave this house but not before saying my parting piece. “You better leave my daughters alone otherwise things will not look good for you,” I spat and left the house with Carlisle. We got into the car and drove back to Jasper’s home with only one thought in mind. Should I tell Bella or let Edward explain his side of everything.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad that Alec's turned up to support Bella, family is just what she needs at the moment. I'm also glad that Jasper is recognising his friendship with Edward and that he's not all bad. Whatever Emily did has had a major effect on Edward and unfortunately Bella has paid the price so far. Bella has her head screwed on a bit more now and realises that she needs to listen to why Edward did what he did, so now it's up to her to decide on how hard she's going to make Edward work for her forgiveness.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was hoping that Esme & Carlisle would move out there & glad that they were able to bring Alec with them. I wonder if Carmen is going to be honest & truthful with Esme, probably not. I really hope that Elizar walks in on his "wife" showing her true colors & leaves her. Hope there was prenup.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Heyyy....I guessed first:( guess it got lost in the rest comments.
Author's Response: im sorry. i must of getting the reviews mixed up. thank you anyway for following this story and hold on tight. the next few chapters are going to be a bumpy ride. fiona (robsessed73)
Date: 21 Mar 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love it!!! I knew Edward wasn't a bad guy...it just took him a long time to figure out what he was really feeling. I hope Esme rips Carmen a new one. She is just as bad as her daughter!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Hurry
Date: 21 Mar 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
I still don't like Edward too much yet. I'm glad he is finally going to set the record straight, but he still ruined her life in Forks. He needs to answer why he thought it was a good idea to trash her to the media. He had to know no good could come of it.
I can't wait to see Esme confront Carmen. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: Hi. thank you for the review. i love reading them all. the only thing that i can tell you about the rest of the story is that it is going to be a bumpy ride for both Bella and Edward but i promise you a HEA. Here is a teaser for the chapter 16 There was one sentence that Jasper said which was repeatedly going over in my head but I could not figure out why. “I know for a fact that she wishes that you could be here with her but you will have your work cut out for you if you want her to forgive and trust her again.” I wish I knew why that I kept repeating that particular sentence in my head until if finally dawned on me. “I know for a fact that she wishes that you could be HERE with her but you will have your work cut out for you if you want her to forgive and trust her again.” “SHIT” I yelled, jumping up off my chair. HERE, means that she was staying with Jasper. She is only fifteen minutes away from me. I could be there with her while we both watch the interview together,” I thought, but just as quickly, as my excitement came it just as quickly evaporated. I sat back down in my seat in defeat and thought, how can I earn back her trust back if I go rushing to her before she is ready. She needs to see the interview first and then decided whether she wants to see me. “From this moment on, everything is going to be on her terms and I’ll just have to be patient if I was ever to have the chance to win her back. “The ball is in her court and I will be happy to take whatever she gives me,” I thought.
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am glad Edward us going to set things straight. He needs to do this. Alec coming to see Bella was a great surprise and Carlie and Esme moving to be with the girls is the best decision. I can't wait for Esme to confront Carmen. Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2013 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is selfless it is amazing! I can't wait to hear her thoughts on his upcoming interview. The angst is killing me. I'm so glad that Esme and Carlisle are moving down to Malibu with the girls. They make such great parents. But I'm looking forward to anEdward and Bella moment. I hope it is soon.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Is Edward there? Surely Jasper and Alice wouldn't let that happen. Alice is way too protective of Bella and I get why, I really do, but she's forever telling her what to do and wear so I can't see her letting Edward get, knowingly, within a mile of Bella. I'm thinking it's either Charlie or Bella's twin. Edward had a bit of a melt down didn't he. At least his mum knows how he really feels about Bella now. The question is, will Bella listen to anyone that tries to tell her Edward's changed? I hope she does but she when she finally talks to Edward she really needs to make him work for her forgiveness.
Date: 19 Mar 2013 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
I knew Carmen was up to something. Now what about Jake? I know I was giving him the benefit of the doubt but now he's turned creepy, I don't like him. What does Edward have that Carmen wants? What are her plans that Esme and Carlisle could spoil them? Is she planning on some sort of bizarre kidnapping plot of Bella and Edward's baby? My mind is running wild. I believe that Edward does truly love Bella. He's thought about her constantly since he first met her and he's been slowly changing the way he thinks and that's affected how he lives his life. He can't do a one night stand anymore or any sort of casual hook up. Bella and the baby have completely taken over his life. I can't wait to find out what happened with Emily.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Bella is right about one thing it is her body and no one can make her do something with it that she doesn't want to. I don't know about Washington. But in some states when a girl becomes pregnant she becomes emancipated. She is a legal adult and can not be forced to have a abortion or keep a baby she doesn't want.